Unit 4 Hands-on fun 写短文（单元同步写作讲义）英语译林版2024八年级上册

Unit 4 Hands-on fun 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 4 的主题围绕 “人与自我：动手体验活动” 展开，参加实践活动、在实践中学习等是这一主题的核心内容。通过参与这类活动，我们能够锻炼自己的动手能力，培养解决问题的思维，还能从中收获乐趣与成长。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 准确运用与 DIY 活动相关的词汇和短语，清晰描述活动过程。 合理使用正确的时态，一般过去时常用于叙述过去发生的 DIY 活动，而一般现在时可用于介绍普遍性的 DIY 步骤或表达个人观点。 学会组织文章结构，有逻辑地呈现 DIY 活动的起因、经过和结果，以及自己的感受。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关自己的 DIY 活动的短文。你需要详细描述一次自己亲身参与的 DIY 经历，包括活动的地点、过程、使用的工具、遇到的问题及解决方法，还有活动结束后的感受等，让读者能通过你的文字，清晰地了解整个 DIY 活动。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是亲身动手实践的过程中所获得的乐趣，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与生活中的常见手工制作、家居装饰、烹饪美食等相结合。命题内容以描述一次具体的 DIY 活动为主，根据提示记叙或描述自己在 DIY 活动中的情况。写作时应注意短文内容的完整性、格式的规范性以及时态的正确运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： Where did you do the DIY activity? （你在哪里进行的 DIY 活动？） How did you prepare for it? （你是如何准备的？） What steps did you follow to do it? （你按照什么步骤进行的？） How did you feel during the process? （在过程中你有怎样的感受？） How did you solve the problems you met? （你是如何解决遇到的问题的？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：仔细审题，明确写作要求，确定要描述的 DIY 活动。思考活动的各个关键信息，如时间、地点、参与人员等。 步骤二：列出写作提纲，按照内容要点的顺序，梳理好文章结构。可以先写活动背景引入，接着详细描述活动过程，再阐述遇到的问题及解决办法，最后表达自己的感受。 步骤三：根据提纲进行写作，注意运用正确的词汇、语法和句型，书写要工整，尽量减少涂改。完成初稿后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误以及语句通顺度，进行修改完善。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 可用一些日常话题或问题来引出 DIY 活动，如：“Last weekend, I had an amazing experience of DIY. Do you want to know what it was?” （上周末，我有一次奇妙的 DIY 经历。你想知道是什么吗？） 引入话题：直接点明要讲述的 DIY 活动，比如：“I decided to make a wooden photo frame by myself.” （我决定自己制作一个木质相框。） 2.主体部分 准备工作：“First, I bought some wooden boards, nails, and a small saw in the hardware store. Then, I measured the size of the photo I wanted to put in the frame to decide the size of the wooden boards.” （首先，我在五金店买了一些木板、钉子和一把小锯子。然后，我测量了我想放进相框的照片的尺寸，以确定木板的大小。） 制作过程：“Next, I used the saw to cut the wooden boards into the right length. After that, I nailed the four pieces of wooden boards together to form a frame. It was a bit difficult to keep the corners straight.” （接下来，我用锯子把木板锯成合适的长度。之后，我把四块木板钉在一起形成一个相框。要让角保持笔直有点困难。） 遇到的问题及解决方法：“I found that the frame was a little wobbly. So, I added some triangular wooden supports at the corners, and it became much stronger.” （我发现相框有点摇晃。于是，我在角上添加了一些三角形的木质支撑，它就变得牢固多了。） 表达情感：“I was so proud of myself when I finally finished the photo frame. It was not only a beautiful decoration but also a symbol of my hard work and creativity.” （当我最终完成这个相框时，我为自己感到无比骄傲。它不仅是一个漂亮的装饰品，也是我努力和创造力的象征。） 3.结尾部分 总结这次 DIY 活动的收获，并鼓励读者也去尝试，如：“Doing DIY activities is really interesting and rewarding. Why not have a try and create something amazing by yourself?” （做 DIY 活动真的很有趣且有意义。为什么不试试，自己创造出令人惊叹的东西呢？） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) DIY (do it yourself) 自己动手做 experience 经历 activity 活动 wooden board 木板 nail 钉子 saw 锯子 measure 测量 decorate 装饰 paint 颜料；绘画；涂漆 scissors 剪刀 glue 胶水 tape 胶带 frame 框架 model 模型 handicraft 手工艺品 process 过程 step 步骤 proud 自豪的 creative 有创造力的 fun 有趣的 successful 成功的 difficult 困难的 solve 解决 problem 问题 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 (1) I decided to do... 我决定做…… (2) First, I... 首先，我…… (3) Then, I... 然后，我…… (4) Next, I... 接下来，我…… (5) After that, I... 在那之后，我…… (6) Finally, I... 最后，我…… (7) It was + 形容词 + to do sth. 做某事是…… 的 (8) I used... to do... 我用…… 来做…… (9) I found it + 形容词 + to do sth. 我发现做某事…… (10) I am happy/sad/... that... 我很高兴 / 难过…… 某事 2. 升级句型 (1) Not only... but also... 不仅…… 而且…… (2) It took me + 时间 + to do sth. 做某事花费了我…… 时间 (3) While doing..., I... 当做…… 的时候，我…… (4) As soon as I..., I... 我一…… 就…… (5) With the help of..., I... 在…… 的帮助下，我…… (6) By doing..., I learned... 通过做……，我学到了…… (7) What's more,... 而且，…… (8) In addition,... 此外，…… (9) It seems that... 似乎…… (10) I can't wait to do sth. 我迫不及待地做某事 3. 高分句型 (1) It was a challenging but rewarding experience for me. 对我来说，这是一次具有挑战性但很有意义的经历。 (2) The most difficult part was that... 最困难的部分是…… (3) Through this DIY activity, I not only improved my practical skills but also enhanced my problem - solving ability. 通过这次 DIY 活动，我不仅提高了我的实践技能，还增强了我的解决问题的能力。 (4) What made it even more special was that... 让它更加特别的是…… (5) I was deeply impressed by... 我对…… 印象深刻 (6) Despite the difficulties I met, I managed to... 尽管我遇到了困难，我还是设法…… (7) It turned out that... 结果是…… (8) This DIY project taught me the importance of... 这个 DIY 项目教会了我…… 的重要性 (9) I realized that with patience and perseverance, I could achieve anything I set my mind to. 我意识到，有了耐心和毅力，我可以实现任何我下定决心要做的事情。 (10) Looking back on this experience, I feel a sense of accomplishment. 回顾这次经历，我有一种成就感。 ( 谚语名句 ) Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 Experience is the mother of wisdom. 经验是智慧之母。 The shortest answer is doing. 最简短的回答就是行动。 All things in their being are good for something. 天生我材必有用。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。 Creativity takes courage. 创造力需要勇气。 If at first you don't succeed, try, try again. 如果一开始你没有成功，尝试，再尝试。 Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety - nine percent perspiration. 天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。 There is no royal road to learning. 求知无坦途。 Learning by doing. 做中学。 The more you do, the more you can do. 你做得越多，你能做的就越多。 Do not, for one repulse, give up the purpose that you resolved to effect. 不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。 Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言语。 He who would climb the ladder must begin at the bottom. 千里之行始于足下。 To do is to be. 活着就是奋斗。 Labor is often the father of pleasure. 劳动常常是快乐之父。 By working faithfully eight hours a day you may eventually get to be boss and work twelve hours a day. 每天忠诚地工作八小时，最终你可能会成为每天工作十二小时的老板。 Without hard work, nothing grows but weeds. 不辛勤劳动，除了杂草长不出别的东西。 Work banishes those three great evils: boredom, vice, and poverty. 工作撵跑三个魔鬼：无聊、堕落和贫穷。 ( 写作模板 ) Last weekend/Someday, I decided to do a DIY activity. It was really an unforgettable experience. I did this DIY activity at home/in the garden/... （地点）. First, I prepared all the things I needed, such as... （列举准备的工具和材料）. Then, I started the process. First, I... （描述第一步）. Next, I... （描述第二步）. After that, I... （描述第三步）. During the process, I met some problems. For example, I found that... （说明遇到的问题）. But I didn't give up. I thought hard and finally came up with a solution. I... （描述解决问题的方法）. Finally, I finished my DIY work successfully. It looked... （描述成品的样子）. I was so proud of myself. Through this activity, I learned that... （总结自己从这次活动中学到的东西）. It was really a meaningful and interesting DIY experience. I hope I can have more chances to do DIY activities in the future. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） Last Sunday, I decided to make a DIY bookend. I did it in my study. First, I gathered materials like two wooden blocks, some glue, and colorful paint. I started by painting the wooden blocks with my favorite blue color. After the paint dried, I carefully glued some small decorative stickers on them. Then, I glued the two blocks together at a right - angle. It was a bit tricky to make them stay in place. But I held them firmly for a while until the glue took effect. When I finally finished my bookend, I was really happy. It looked so cute and was very useful. I put it on my bookshelf to hold my books. Through this DIY, I learned that patience is very important. It was a great experience! （范文二） I made a handmade card for my mother's birthday at home last month. I prepared some colored paper, scissors, glue, and a pen. First, I folded a piece of pink paper in half to form the card base. Then, I used scissors to cut out some flower shapes from different colored papers. I glued these flowers on the front of the card. Next, I wrote some sweet words to my mom inside the card with a pen. While making the card, I accidentally cut one of the flower shapes wrong. But I quickly thought of a way. I cut another shape to cover the mistake. In the end, my mom was very surprised and happy when she received the card. I felt proud that I could make her happy with my own hands. （范文三） Last summer vacation, I made a DIY pencil holder in my bedroom. I used an empty plastic bottle, some colored tapes, and a pair of scissors. I first cut the plastic bottle in half with the scissors. Then, I wrapped colorful tapes around the cut part to make it look nice. After that, I decorated the outside of the bottle with some small stickers. It was not easy to cut the plastic bottle evenly. But I tried several times and finally made it. Now, I use this pencil holder on my desk every day. It is a reminder of my DIY spirit. I learned that even simple things can be turned into something special through DIY. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 江苏苏州 介绍一把自制的手工扇 演讲稿 2023年 江苏扬州 介绍中国传统手工艺风筝的历史等 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．DIY在年轻人中很流行，我昨天完成了我的第一个DIY作品。根据下面的提示用英文写一篇短文，题目为“My First DIY Work”。 提示： 1. 准备工作； 2. 制作过程； 3.…… 要求： 1. 书写规范，要点齐全； 2. 至少补充一点内容； 3. 词数不少于70，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My First DIY Work DIY is very popular among young people. I finished my first DIY work yesterday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．“社”彩纷呈，团聚青春”。今年学校开办各种社团活动，丰富中学生课余生活，彰显校园不一样的精彩。假设你是张华，想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部，请根据下图给李老师写一封英语申请信。 注意事项： 1. 申请信须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在90个左右，申请信首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 申请信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 申请信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Mr. Li, I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Hua 3．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容： Introduce yourself. Introduce your DIY story. State your opinion (观点) on DIY. 注意：     1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear sir, Let me introduce myself and my DIY story.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like it. Best wishes. A DIY lover 4．近年流行DIY, DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为，渐渐的DIY的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My view on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文 要求： 1. 词数80左右, 书写工整，语句通顺，意思连贯。 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。 要点： *What do you think of DIY? *What DIY job did you once do? *What tools and materials did you use? *Was your work well done? *What do you learn from DIY? My view on DIY ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是Clair Wong，在感恩节到来之际，你为妈妈亲手制作了一张卡片。 ●上面有你用彩色纸折叠(fold)的小星星图形，还画了一棵大树，代表妈妈， 并在旁边写上“Mum, I love you!”的字样。 ●你还画了一些红色的玫瑰以及彩色的气球来装饰卡片。 ●制作这张卡片花了你两天的时间，但这是你为妈妈制作的第一张卡片，你很高兴。 请以“My DIY story”为题，写一篇英语短文来记述此事。字数在80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容： 注意： 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear sir, Let me introduce myself and my DIY story. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like it. Best wishes, A DIY lover 7．假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你送的礼物是什么； （2）你送此礼物的原因； （3）制作的方法或过程。 注意: （1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1． My First DIY Work 　　DIY is very popular among young people. I finished my first DIY work yesterday. Last week, I bought some paint and two brushes on the Internet. Before painting the walls, I read the instructions carefully. At first, I painted all the walls blue. But the room looked a little dull and boring. At last, I decided to draw some colorful fish and a boat on the wall. There was paint everywhere. I had to spend an hour cleaning the room. Now the room looks really beautiful. 　　I want to know more about DIY. Thus, I will take a course in DIY. I will also buy more books about it. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点围绕作者第一次DIY的经历给出，包括准备材料、过程、遇到的问题及结果等，考生需注意要点齐全，可适当补充细节使文章更丰富。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题。直接表明要讲述自己第一次DIY的经历。 第二步，具体阐述DIY过程。从准备材料、阅读说明、开始粉刷、发现问题、解决问题到最终结果等方面详细描述。 第三步，表达感受和打算。说明自己对DIY的兴趣，并表达想要进一步了解和学习DIY的意愿。 [亮点词汇] ①instructions说明书 ②dull单调的 ③colorful多彩的 [高分句型] ①At first, I painted all the walls blue. But the room looked a little dull and boring. At last, I decided to draw some colorful fish and a boat on the wall.（使用“At first...But...At last...”结构，按照时间顺序描述了DIY过程的先后顺序和转折变化） 2． Dear Mr Li, I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club. I’m friendly. I am also helpful and ready to help people any time. I like making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the DIY club because I’m crazy about DIY and hope to make more friends. Once I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday. First, I picked a piece of bread. Then I put some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it. At last, I put another piece of bread on it. Mum liked the sandwich very much and I felt happy. I’ m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己喜欢在空闲时间自己做东西； 第二步，介绍加入DIY俱乐部的原因； 第三步，最后介绍自己的DIY作品。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to do sth乐意做某事 ②want to do想要做某事 ③at last最后 [高分句型] I want to join the DIY club because I’m crazy about DIY and hope to make more friends（because引导的原因状语从句） 3． Dear sir, Let me introduce myself and my DIY story. I am a girl in Grade Eight. I am tall and slim. I like cooking and drawing. I also like doing DIY very much. I often do DIY jobs when I am free. DIY makes me happy. Last week, I put in a light by myself. At first, I didn’t know how to do it. Then I searched the Internet for instructions. When I finally made it, I couldn’t stop laughing and shouting. DIY makes our life more colourful. By doing DIY work, I find myself very useful in life. I hope you will like it. Best wishes. A DIY lover 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据要点提示介绍自己的DIY经历及看法，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，介绍自己的一次DIY经历； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be free有空 ②put in安装 ③couldn’t stop doing忍不住做某事 [高分句型] ①I often do DIY jobs when I am free. （when引导时间状语从句） ②I didn’t know how to do it.（疑问词+不定式作宾语） 4． DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities in doing something and it can make us use less money.(it can make us save money). My parents never let me do anything. But on Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make the card for her by myself. I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on… Although I didn’t do it well. My mother were still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more. Let’s DIY from now on to make us act better in the future. 【写作解析】 题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点进行写作，通过回答要点中的问题形成一篇完整的文章。第一段表达对DIY的看法，第二段详细描述DIY的经历，第三段描述通过DIY学到的东西，总结全文。 写作指导：本文应用第一人称进行写作，阐述看法时用一般现在时，而描述DIY的经历要用一般过去时。按照要点的顺序写作，使其条理清晰，行文流畅。 5． My DIY story My name is Clair Wong. Thanksgiving Day is coming. So I decided to make a card for my mother. I bought the materials online. The card had little stars that I folded with colored paper. It had a big tree representing mom. And I wrote the words “Mum, I love you!” on it. I also drew some red roses and colored balloons to decorate the cards. It took me two days to make this card, but it was the first card I ever made for my mom, and I was happy. 【写作解析】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以“My DIY story”为题，根据所给提示，描述自己为妈妈制作卡片的过程。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态主要采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 6． Dear sir, Let’s introduce myself and my DIY story. I am a girl in Grade Eight. I am tall and slim. I like cooking and drawing. I also like doing DIY very much. I often do DIY jobs when I am free. DIY makes me happy. Last week, I put in a light by myself. At first, I didn’t know how to do it. Then I searched the Internet for instructions. When I finally made it, I couldn’t stop laughing and shouting. DIY makes our life more colourful. By doing DIY work, I find myself very useful in life. I hope you will like it. Best wishes A DIY lover 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍自己和自己的DIY经历及看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍； 第二步，介绍自己的DIY经历； 第三步，讲述对DIY的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① like doing sth喜欢做某事 ② make sb…使某人…… ③ can’t stop doing sth忍不住做某事 [高分句型] ① At first, I didn’t know how to do it. （how+不定式作宾语） ② When I finally made it, I couldn’t stop laughing and shouting.（使用when引导时间状语从句） 7．参考范文一： Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck. To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string. Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文二： Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. It’s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together. Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural. Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么； 第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因； 第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事 ③so that以便 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导目的状语从句） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Hands-on fun 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 4 的主题围绕 “人与自我：动手体验活动” 展开，参加实践活动、在实践中学习等是这一主题的核心内容。通过参与这类活动，我们能够锻炼自己的动手能力，培养解决问题的思维，还能从中收获乐趣与成长。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 准确运用与 DIY 活动相关的词汇和短语，清晰描述活动过程。 合理使用正确的时态，一般过去时常用于叙述过去发生的 DIY 活动，而一般现在时可用于介绍普遍性的 DIY 步骤或表达个人观点。 学会组织文章结构，有逻辑地呈现 DIY 活动的起因、经过和结果，以及自己的感受。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关自己的 DIY 活动的短文。你需要详细描述一次自己亲身参与的 DIY 经历，包括活动的地点、过程、使用的工具、遇到的问题及解决方法，还有活动结束后的感受等，让读者能通过你的文字，清晰地了解整个 DIY 活动。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是亲身动手实践的过程中所获得的乐趣，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与生活中的常见手工制作、家居装饰、烹饪美食等相结合。命题内容以描述一次具体的 DIY 活动为主，根据提示记叙或描述自己在 DIY 活动中的情况。写作时应注意短文内容的完整性、格式的规范性以及时态的正确运用。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： Where did you do the DIY activity? （你在哪里进行的 DIY 活动？） How did you prepare for it? （你是如何准备的？） What steps did you follow to do it? （你按照什么步骤进行的？） How did you feel during the process? （在过程中你有怎样的感受？） How did you solve the problems you met? （你是如何解决遇到的问题的？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：仔细审题，明确写作要求，确定要描述的 DIY 活动。思考活动的各个关键信息，如时间、地点、参与人员等。 步骤二：列出写作提纲，按照内容要点的顺序，梳理好文章结构。可以先写活动背景引入，接着详细描述活动过程，再阐述遇到的问题及解决办法，最后表达自己的感受。 步骤三：根据提纲进行写作，注意运用正确的词汇、语法和句型，书写要工整，尽量减少涂改。完成初稿后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误以及语句通顺度，进行修改完善。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 可用一些日常话题或问题来引出 DIY 活动，如：“Last weekend, I had an amazing experience of DIY. Do you want to know what it was?” （上周末，我有一次奇妙的 DIY 经历。你想知道是什么吗？） 引入话题：直接点明要讲述的 DIY 活动，比如：“I decided to make a wooden photo frame by myself.” （我决定自己制作一个木质相框。） 2.主体部分 准备工作：“First, I bought some wooden boards, nails, and a small saw in the hardware store. Then, I measured the size of the photo I wanted to put in the frame to decide the size of the wooden boards.” （首先，我在五金店买了一些木板、钉子和一把小锯子。然后，我测量了我想放进相框的照片的尺寸，以确定木板的大小。） 制作过程：“Next, I used the saw to cut the wooden boards into the right length. After that, I nailed the four pieces of wooden boards together to form a frame. It was a bit difficult to keep the corners straight.” （接下来，我用锯子把木板锯成合适的长度。之后，我把四块木板钉在一起形成一个相框。要让角保持笔直有点困难。） 遇到的问题及解决方法：“I found that the frame was a little wobbly. So, I added some triangular wooden supports at the corners, and it became much stronger.” （我发现相框有点摇晃。于是，我在角上添加了一些三角形的木质支撑，它就变得牢固多了。） 表达情感：“I was so proud of myself when I finally finished the photo frame. It was not only a beautiful decoration but also a symbol of my hard work and creativity.” （当我最终完成这个相框时，我为自己感到无比骄傲。它不仅是一个漂亮的装饰品，也是我努力和创造力的象征。） 3.结尾部分 总结这次 DIY 活动的收获，并鼓励读者也去尝试，如：“Doing DIY activities is really interesting and rewarding. Why not have a try and create something amazing by yourself?” （做 DIY 活动真的很有趣且有意义。为什么不试试，自己创造出令人惊叹的东西呢？） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) DIY (do it yourself) 自己动手做 experience 经历 activity 活动 wooden board 木板 nail 钉子 saw 锯子 measure 测量 decorate 装饰 paint 颜料；绘画；涂漆 scissors 剪刀 glue 胶水 tape 胶带 frame 框架 model 模型 handicraft 手工艺品 process 过程 step 步骤 proud 自豪的 creative 有创造力的 fun 有趣的 successful 成功的 difficult 困难的 solve 解决 problem 问题 ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 (1) I decided to do... 我决定做…… (2) First, I... 首先，我…… (3) Then, I... 然后，我…… (4) Next, I... 接下来，我…… (5) After that, I... 在那之后，我…… (6) Finally, I... 最后，我…… (7) It was + 形容词 + to do sth. 做某事是…… 的 (8) I used... to do... 我用…… 来做…… (9) I found it + 形容词 + to do sth. 我发现做某事…… (10) I am happy/sad/... that... 我很高兴 / 难过…… 某事 2. 升级句型 (1) Not only... but also... 不仅…… 而且…… (2) It took me + 时间 + to do sth. 做某事花费了我…… 时间 (3) While doing..., I... 当做…… 的时候，我…… (4) As soon as I..., I... 我一…… 就…… (5) With the help of..., I... 在…… 的帮助下，我…… (6) By doing..., I learned... 通过做……，我学到了…… (7) What's more,... 而且，…… (8) In addition,... 此外，…… (9) It seems that... 似乎…… (10) I can't wait to do sth. 我迫不及待地做某事 3. 高分句型 (1) It was a challenging but rewarding experience for me. 对我来说，这是一次具有挑战性但很有意义的经历。 (2) The most difficult part was that... 最困难的部分是…… (3) Through this DIY activity, I not only improved my practical skills but also enhanced my problem - solving ability. 通过这次 DIY 活动，我不仅提高了我的实践技能，还增强了我的解决问题的能力。 (4) What made it even more special was that... 让它更加特别的是…… (5) I was deeply impressed by... 我对…… 印象深刻 (6) Despite the difficulties I met, I managed to... 尽管我遇到了困难，我还是设法…… (7) It turned out that... 结果是…… (8) This DIY project taught me the importance of... 这个 DIY 项目教会了我…… 的重要性 (9) I realized that with patience and perseverance, I could achieve anything I set my mind to. 我意识到，有了耐心和毅力，我可以实现任何我下定决心要做的事情。 (10) Looking back on this experience, I feel a sense of accomplishment. 回顾这次经历，我有一种成就感。 ( 谚语名句 ) Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 Experience is the mother of wisdom. 经验是智慧之母。 The shortest answer is doing. 最简短的回答就是行动。 All things in their being are good for something. 天生我材必有用。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。 Creativity takes courage. 创造力需要勇气。 If at first you don't succeed, try, try again. 如果一开始你没有成功，尝试，再尝试。 Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety - nine percent perspiration. 天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。 There is no royal road to learning. 求知无坦途。 Learning by doing. 做中学。 The more you do, the more you can do. 你做得越多，你能做的就越多。 Do not, for one repulse, give up the purpose that you resolved to effect. 不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。 Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言语。 He who would climb the ladder must begin at the bottom. 千里之行始于足下。 To do is to be. 活着就是奋斗。 Labor is often the father of pleasure. 劳动常常是快乐之父。 By working faithfully eight hours a day you may eventually get to be boss and work twelve hours a day. 每天忠诚地工作八小时，最终你可能会成为每天工作十二小时的老板。 Without hard work, nothing grows but weeds. 不辛勤劳动，除了杂草长不出别的东西。 Work banishes those three great evils: boredom, vice, and poverty. 工作撵跑三个魔鬼：无聊、堕落和贫穷。 ( 写作模板 ) Last weekend/Someday, I decided to do a DIY activity. It was really an unforgettable experience. I did this DIY activity at home/in the garden/... （地点）. First, I prepared all the things I needed, such as... （列举准备的工具和材料）. Then, I started the process. First, I... （描述第一步）. Next, I... （描述第二步）. After that, I... （描述第三步）. During the process, I met some problems. For example, I found that... （说明遇到的问题）. But I didn't give up. I thought hard and finally came up with a solution. I... （描述解决问题的方法）. Finally, I finished my DIY work successfully. It looked... （描述成品的样子）. I was so proud of myself. Through this activity, I learned that... （总结自己从这次活动中学到的东西）. It was really a meaningful and interesting DIY experience. I hope I can have more chances to do DIY activities in the future. ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） Last Sunday, I decided to make a DIY bookend. I did it in my study. First, I gathered materials like two wooden blocks, some glue, and colorful paint. I started by painting the wooden blocks with my favorite blue color. After the paint dried, I carefully glued some small decorative stickers on them. Then, I glued the two blocks together at a right - angle. It was a bit tricky to make them stay in place. But I held them firmly for a while until the glue took effect. When I finally finished my bookend, I was really happy. It looked so cute and was very useful. I put it on my bookshelf to hold my books. Through this DIY, I learned that patience is very important. It was a great experience! （范文二） I made a handmade card for my mother's birthday at home last month. I prepared some colored paper, scissors, glue, and a pen. First, I folded a piece of pink paper in half to form the card base. Then, I used scissors to cut out some flower shapes from different colored papers. I glued these flowers on the front of the card. Next, I wrote some sweet words to my mom inside the card with a pen. While making the card, I accidentally cut one of the flower shapes wrong. But I quickly thought of a way. I cut another shape to cover the mistake. In the end, my mom was very surprised and happy when she received the card. I felt proud that I could make her happy with my own hands. （范文三） Last summer vacation, I made a DIY pencil holder in my bedroom. I used an empty plastic bottle, some colored tapes, and a pair of scissors. I first cut the plastic bottle in half with the scissors. Then, I wrapped colorful tapes around the cut part to make it look nice. After that, I decorated the outside of the bottle with some small stickers. It was not easy to cut the plastic bottle evenly. But I tried several times and finally made it. Now, I use this pencil holder on my desk every day. It is a reminder of my DIY spirit. I learned that even simple things can be turned into something special through DIY. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 江苏苏州 介绍一把自制的手工扇 演讲稿 2023年 江苏扬州 介绍中国传统手工艺风筝的历史等 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．DIY在年轻人中很流行，我昨天完成了我的第一个DIY作品。根据下面的提示用英文写一篇短文，题目为“My First DIY Work”。 提示： 1. 准备工作； 2. 制作过程； 3.…… 要求： 1. 书写规范，要点齐全； 2. 至少补充一点内容； 3. 词数不少于70，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My First DIY Work DIY is very popular among young people. I finished my first DIY work yesterday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．“社”彩纷呈，团聚青春”。今年学校开办各种社团活动，丰富中学生课余生活，彰显校园不一样的精彩。假设你是张华，想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部，请根据下图给李老师写一封英语申请信。 注意事项： 1. 申请信须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在90个左右，申请信首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 申请信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5. 申请信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Mr. Li, I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Hua 3．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容： Introduce yourself. Introduce your DIY story. State your opinion (观点) on DIY. 注意：     1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear sir, Let me introduce myself and my DIY story.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like it. Best wishes. A DIY lover 4．近年流行DIY, DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为，渐渐的DIY的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My view on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文 要求： 1. 词数80左右, 书写工整，语句通顺，意思连贯。 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。 要点： *What do you think of DIY? *What DIY job did you once do? *What tools and materials did you use? *Was your work well done? *What do you learn from DIY? My view on DIY ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是Clair Wong，在感恩节到来之际，你为妈妈亲手制作了一张卡片。 ●上面有你用彩色纸折叠(fold)的小星星图形，还画了一棵大树，代表妈妈， 并在旁边写上“Mum, I love you!”的字样。 ●你还画了一些红色的玫瑰以及彩色的气球来装饰卡片。 ●制作这张卡片花了你两天的时间，但这是你为妈妈制作的第一张卡片，你很高兴。 请以“My DIY story”为题，写一篇英语短文来记述此事。字数在80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容： 注意： 1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear sir, Let me introduce myself and my DIY story. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like it. Best wishes, A DIY lover 7．假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你送的礼物是什么； （2）你送此礼物的原因； （3）制作的方法或过程。 注意: （1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Kevin, I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$