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Unit 1 A New Start
单元写作专项练习
【写作能力拓展导练】
1、 单元主题词汇·高频词汇梳理
二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1.教材原:Learning without thinking is of no use
【仿写】:光说不做是没有用的。
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2.教材原句: It's important to think more in your learning.
【仿写】:按时完成我们的家庭作业是很重要的。
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3.教材原句: It takes one month to finish a book report.
【仿写】:打扫房间需要十分钟。
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4. 教材原句: Are your descriptions similar to those in the letter?
【仿写】:她在许多方面和她母亲相似。
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三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
假如你是学校外联部主席李华,美国学生Peter即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件,想要了解你们学校的情况。
(时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称)
请根据邮件内容和你校的实际情况用英语回复,词数 60 左右。
(语篇类型:应用文)
Dear Li Hua ,
I am an exchange student from the US. Next month I will go to your school for study. I want to know about your school life.
· What subjects do you study at school?
· What are your daily activities at school?
· How do you feel about your school life?
Drop a few lines if you have time.
Best wishes
Peter
【注意】:
1. 开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter ,
I'm glad to get your email. Let me tell you about my school life.———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Yours
Li Hua
Step 1谋篇布局指导
第一部分:开门见山,引出话题
1. I'm glad to get your email.
2. Let me tell you about my school life.
第二部分:具体介绍自己的学校生活
1. I start my school at...and I usually finish my classes at...
2. I have many subjects such as...
3. Among all the subjects , I like. . . best.
4. There are different kinds of activities in our school.
5. We always have a big sports meet twice a year.
6. To my delight, our teachers are...and my classmates are...
7. There are many rules to follow. For example ,. ..
第三部分:总结,表达对学校生活的喜爱
1. I am very happy to study in our school.
2. My school life is. . . and I enjoy myself in my school.
Step 2高阶表达应用
1. Practising English at the English Corner is helpful for us.
(用 “It is + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.”句型升格)
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2. I enjoy my school life.(增加原因,扩写句子)
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Step 3佳作展示评析
Dear Peter ,
I'm glad to get your email. Let me tell you about my school life. I am a little busy this term. I start my school at 8 :00 a.m. and usually finish my classes at 5:00 p.m. My school subjects are very interesting. I have Chinese, English, maths, history and some others.English is my favourite subject. What's more,we always have a big sports meet twice a year. I often take part in the long jump. My teachers are great and helpful. They always help us in every possible way.
I enjoy my school life because it is meaningful and colourful.
Yours ,
Li Hua
1. What’s more 用于引出学校生活的其他方面,使文章内容丰富,语意连贯。
2. in every possible way体现了老师对学生无微不至的关怀。
3. because引导原因状语从句,说明作者喜爱学校生活的原因,丰富文章句式。
本文从课程安排、学校活动、学校人员、对学校生活的感受四方面介绍学校生活,语言流畅,要点齐全。
四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
学校是个大家庭,这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以"School Is a Big Family"为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据结构图写一篇英文演讲稿。不少于60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: be patient(有耐心的)(with), care about , help, understand.
Good afternoon , everyone !
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is " School Is a Big Family".
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【参考答案】
二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1. Saying without doing is of no use.
2. It's important to finish our homework on time.
3. It takes ten minutes to clean the room.
4. She is similar to her mother in many ways.
三、Step 2 高阶表达应用
1.It is helpful for us to practise English at the English Corner.
2.I enjoy my school life because it is meaningful and colourful.
四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
Good afternoon , everyone !
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is " School Is a Big Family".
My teachers are like kind-hearted parents. When I have difficulty in study, my math teacher always spends extra time helping me. My classmates are like close siblings. Once I was ill and absent from school, they came to my home, shared notes and cheered me up. I also try my best to care for others. When my deskmate forgot his lunch, I shared mine.
In this big family, we love and support each other. Let's make it even warmer!
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