Unit 1 Happy Holiday 单元写作专项练习 2025-2026学年人教版（2024）八年级英语上册

Unit 1 Happy Holiday 单元写作专项练习 【写作能力拓展导练】 一、单元主题词汇·高频词汇梳理 二、语言素材积累·名句活学活用 The journey is half the fun. 旅行的一半乐趣在于过程。 Travel is the best education. 旅行是最好的教育。 Better to travel hopefully than to arrive. 怀着希望出发,胜过到达目的地。 All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也会变傻。 Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles. 读万卷书, 行万里路。 三、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练 1 教材原句：We were so happy that we didn't notice the time. 【仿写】: 那里太美了, 我们在那里待了很长时间。 __________________________________________________________. 2 教材原句：Everything tasted good,especially the steamed chicken soup. 【仿写】:户外运动变得非常受欢迎，尤其是远足和骑行。 __________________________________________________________. 3 教材原句：I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick. 【仿写】每当我打开书，我好像进入了一个多彩的世界。 __________________________________________________________. 4 教材原句：There are lots of ways to relax and4have fun. 【仿写】那里有很多种海洋动物，我们还拍了很多照片。 __________________________________________________________. 5教材原句：What a wonderful experience I had! 【仿写】多么惊奇的故事呀! _____________________________________________________________.语篇类型：记叙文 时态：一般过去时 四、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析 假设你是李华，暑假期间，你和家人进行了一次愉快的旅行。现在请你写一 篇英语短文，介绍你们本次旅行的活动和感受。（主题:人与社会 人称:第一人称） 【要求】: 1、 语言通顺、准确，省略部分须适当发挥； 2、 词数 80 左右。 —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Step 1谋篇布局指导 开头：引出话题 1. I travelled to... with... during... 2. I was on vacation in... with... during.. 3. I paid a visit to... with... during.... 主体：旅游经历 1. On the first day.. . 2. On the second day... 3. On the last day.... 结尾：个人感受 1. All in all, the three-day trip was enjoyable. 2. What an enjoyable trip it was! / How enjoyable the trip was ! 3. In a word , my family and I had a good/great/wonderful time there. Step 2高阶表达应用 1. It was beautiful and we stayed there for a longtime. (用“so...that...”升格) __________________________________________________. 2. The food there tasted delicious. (用感叹句升格) __________________________________________________. 3 We went shopping there and had a good time.(用“have fun doing sth.”升格) __________________________________________________. 4 I want to visit Zhuhai again.(“can't wait to do sth.”升格) __________________________________________________. Step 3佳作展示评析 I travelled to Zhuhai with my family during the summer holiday. The weather was hot there but we had a wonderful time. On the first day,we visited the Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge（港珠澳大桥）. We were all excited to see so long a bridge. Then, we went to Jingshan Park. It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time. The next day，we decided to visit Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. There were many kinds of sea animals and we took lots of photos. On the last day，We took the subway to Wanzai Seafood Street. How delicious the food there tasted ! After that, we had fun shopping. All in all the three-day trip was enjoyable. I can't wait to visit Zhuhai again. 1. 使用on the first day、the next day、on the last day，以时间为序，使文章条理清晰。 2. 运用“so...that...”句型，既表达了旅行时的喜悦心情，又丰富了文章的句式结构。 3. 使用感叹句表达了对食物的喜爱之情，提升了文章的档次。 4. all in all 引出对珠海三日行的总结，过渡自然，言简意赅。 5. can't wait to的使用恰当地表达了作者旅行后的感受。 本篇范文文笔流畅，既有事实描述又恰当地表达了自己的感受，让读者也体会到了本次旅行的愉快。 五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练 旅行中值得我们关注的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的经历和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。 【要点提示】: 1. When and where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 【要求】: 1.涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确; 2.可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理; 3.不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息; 4.词数 80 左右。 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 【参考答案】 三、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练 1 It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time. 2 Outdoor sports become very popular, especially hiking and cycling. 3 Every time I open a book, I feel like that I enter a colourful world. 4 There were many kinds of sea animals and we took lots of photos. 5 What an amazing story! 四、Step2 高阶表达应用 1 It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time. 2 How delicious the food there tasted ! 3 We had fun shopping there. 4 I can't wait to visit Zhuhai again. 5、 学以致用·主题写作实战演练 Beihai Park is one of the most popular places to visit in Beijing. I went there with my classmates in May and we had a great time. We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercise. We also took many pictures. Then we climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we went on a boat tour on the lake. It was a wonderful trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I'm looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in Beijing. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$