UNIT 2 Section Ⅵ Writing(Word教参)-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（外研版）

Section Ⅵ　Writing 写作项目——Writing about an experience 本单元的写作任务是描写一段经历。该类写作通常以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在感受故事情节发展的同时获得深刻体悟。写作时需在交代清楚六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果)的基础上，详写事件的经过，借助各种写作手法着重塑造生动的情节。最后，介绍事件的结果或谈谈自己的感想。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 (一)析教材课文 Para.1：The setting of the event. Para.2：The course of the event: what difficulties the author met. Para.3：The course of the event: how the author dealt with the difficulties. Para.4：The outcome of the event. (二)根据教材课文总结出该类文体的写作框架： 二、学行文逻辑 1．第一段作者开门见山，直接点明了这段经历的时间(Recently)、地点(a “dark restaurant”)和目的(to understand the experience of being blind)等背景信息。 2．第二段第一句为主题句，后面的内容为支撑句，是围绕主题句所做的进一步的阐释和展开叙述。这种段落组织形式更有利于做到层次清晰、主题突出。 3．尾段的最后一句是对全文的总结，同时照应文章首段提到的to understand the experience of being blind，首尾呼应，表达了作者的感悟。 三、学写作手法 1．细节描写 第一段第一句中在交代事件发生的地点时，作者使用了where引导的定语从句，具体解释了“dark restaurant”的含义。这种细节描写让事件发生的场景更具体、更准确，为下文内容的展开做了很好的铺垫。 2．动作描写 第二段第二句中作者使用了knocked over和dropped，生动地再现了作者和朋友就餐时遇到的困难；第三段第二句中reached down, stuck ...into与描述心理状态的现在分词短语expecting ...及表示转折关系的but instead连用，动态化地呈现了作者当时手忙脚乱、尴尬窘迫的场景。 3．心理描写 课文中多处运用现在分词短语作伴随状语及“feel＋adj.”结构来刻画作者的心理活动，如trying to guess ..., expecting ..., felt embarrassed等。 [提能训练|完成句子] ①You should involve yourself in more community activities where you can gain experience for growth. 你应该多参加社区活动，从中能获得成长经验。 ②I knocked over a glass on the stone surface by accident and the broken pieces flied everywhere. 我不小心打翻了石质台面上的一个玻璃杯，玻璃碎片飞得到处都是。　　 ③Feeling embarrassed for having misunderstood Mary, she apologized genuinely, “I'm so sorry, Mary.” 她为误解了玛丽而感到尴尬，真诚地向她道歉：“对不起，玛丽。” 具体写作指导 How to write about an experience ——如何描写一段经历 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 What kind of experience did you have？ Part 2 What's the biggest challenge you faced and how did you overcome it？ Part 3 What did you learn from the experience？ 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　引出事件或交代背景 ①Under the guidance of our teacher, we paid a visit to the Care Centre for the disabled and experienced their life last week. 上周在老师的带领下，我们去了残疾人护理中心，体验了他们的生活。 ②There are many meaningful collective activities in my mind, among which the most unforgettable one is the volunteer activity I attended last year. 在我的记忆里，有很多有意义的集体活动，其中最难忘的是我去年参加的志愿者活动。 第二部分　描述事件经过 1．动作描写 ①At the beginning of the activity, we were asked to wear a blindfold and hold a blind walking stick when walking through some barriers. 在活动开始时，我们被要求戴上眼罩、手持盲杖越过一些障碍物。 ②Besides, we found it really hard to move and control the wheelchairs and some of us even fell over. 此外，我们发现很难移动和控制轮椅，我们中的一些人甚至摔倒了。 ③Although I was moving at an extremely slow speed, I kept knocking the barriers in the room or falling over them. 虽然我以极其缓慢的速度移动，但我不断地撞到房间里的障碍物或被障碍物绊倒。 2．心理描写 ①I felt very depressed about this whole situation when I fell to the floor again. 当我再次跌倒在地时，我对整个境况感到非常沮丧。 ②It was at that very moment that I was so overwhelmed by the feeling of excitement that I could not hold back the tears. 就在那一刻，我激动万分，忍不住流下了眼泪。 ③Nervousness filled my heart and my mind went blank so that I couldn't think of anything. 我心里非常紧张，大脑一片空白，什么也想不起来。 第三部分　介绍事件结果或表达个人感悟 ①That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆里。 ②It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, we mustn't give up hope. 正是这次独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不能放弃希望。 [针对练笔] 假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的消防安全演习(fire safety drill)，请你按照下面线索具体描写一下事情的经过。 Clue: the fire alarm rang→left the classroom→ ran downstairs→landed on the playground 参考范文： Last week our school organised a fire safety drill.We were having a math class when suddenly the fire alarm rang. Under the guidance of our teacher, we immediately left the classroom. With my hands covering my mouth, I bent down a bit and ran downstairs quickly on our escape route. At last, we landed on the playground successfully.The drill not only raised our fire safety awareness but also offered me a lot of safety information.What an unforgettable experience I had! 写作素材储备 (一)写作佳句 1．开头部分：引出事件或交代背景 ①Early in the morning we arrived at .../Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by ... ② ... was significant to me as I had the opportunity to ... ③When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to ... 2．主体部分：描述事件经过 ①At first, I found it challenging to ... However ... ②In the beginning, it was quite difficult to ... However, it did not upset me. ③During the whole ..., what troubled us most was ..., which was really difficult. 3．结尾部分：介绍事件结果或表达个人感悟 ①This experience made me become more ... ②I got an important lesson from this experience ... ③Through this activity, we not only ..., but also ... (二)优美语段 1．动作描写(遇险脱困，勇敢自救) Despite the chaos and danger, he managed to climb out of the broken car.He knew he couldn't give in to fear. His parents were counting on him. He stumbled through the mud and rain, desperately searching for help. Finally, he reached his neighbors' house and knocked on the door violently. 2．心理描写(面对挑战，紧张不安) Facing the crowd, I found myself suffering from stage fright. I spoke nervously and even stuttered (结结巴巴地说) a few times as I forgot parts of the story. My legs trembled and so did my voice. 3．主旨升华(经历带来的感悟与启示) I always remembered the lessons I learned during those challenging times — when one door closes, another opens. Sometimes, the greatest victory comes from the most difficult battle. Your perseverance and determination would lead you to a path you could never imagine. [课时跟踪检测]　　　(标题目配有教师讲评课件) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.完成句子 1．This experience taught me the importance of showing love and warmth to those with disabilities. 这段经历教会了我向残疾人表达爱和温暖的重要性。 2．It is through this experience that I start to realize how inconvenient life could be for a blind person. 正是通过这次经历，我开始意识到一个盲人的生活是多么不方便。 3．Helping others is a form of self-care that fills our hearts with joy. 帮助他人是一种自我关怀，让我们的心灵充满喜悦。 4. By reaching out to others, we not only touch their lives, but also enrich our own.通过向他人伸出援手，我们不仅触及了他们的生活，也丰富了自己的生活。 5．No act of kindness is too small to make a difference in someone's life. 善举虽小，也能对一个人的生活产生影响。 Ⅱ.完成语段 I cannot forget the incident that happened when I was about six years old. One day, I was playing alone outdoors ①when it began to rain heavily (这时天开始下大雨). I got lost in the heavy rain, which made me very nervous.It was the most dreadful thing ②that I had ever encountered (我曾遇到的)．I stood there, ③not knowing what to do (不知道做什么). Just then a woman walked past.④Seeing me standing in the rain crying (看到我站在雨中哭泣), she took me to my home.When arriving home, we were both all wet.My parents ⑤were very appreciative of her help (非常感谢她的帮助) and asked her to change her clothes and stay to have dinner, but she didn't want to stay and said it was her pleasure to help others. Ⅲ.读后续写() 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 John was crazy about playing basketball. Every day after school, he would spend much time practicing basketball skills. Sometimes, he didn't go back home until sunset, which made his mother extremely angry. One day, as he was given a chance to watch a basketball game, he dreamed about being a member of the college basketball team the next year. On the way home, he was delighted secretly. He thought no one in the world was luckier than him. Suddenly, a car went out of control and hit him. What a terrible experience! It felt like being trapped in a nightmare. John woke up in a hospital room.Scared, he realized that he couldn't move both of his legs. At that time, the doctor came in. When the doctor told him that both his legs were broken and that he had to sit in the wheelchair for the time being, he knew his college basketball dream was over. He was really depressed. John followed what the doctors had told him, but it did not work entirely. After he left hospital, John's family arranged for him to go to a health recovery center. He had never heard of this center before, but it was not far away from his home. Although he felt unwilling to go there, he had no choice but to accept the fact. Two days later, he arrived there unhappily. The first person he met was Sunny Chen, who was so kind and friendly that he warmly welcomed John to go there. Sunny's legs were badly hurt in a skating accident. He told John that he would help him recover soon. Though Sunny couldn't move his legs, he became the coach of a basketball team called the Suns. After a period of recovery training, John felt his legs were all right. So Sunny invited him to join the game. Sunny guided the team on his wheelchair. John played badly, but for the first time since the accident, he stopped feeling sorry for himself. John was glad that his dream of being a member of the basketball team came true. Basketball was like medicine for him. He was much better and more confident than before. He practiced hard to improve himself. He was always the first to come to the court, and the last to go back home. Although it was not easy for him to play and did badly at first, he never thought about giving up hope. He was a boy with a strong mind. 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写故事引发的感悟。 Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought. 参考范文： Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought. He could not help praising John for his courage and love for basketball. There were many ups and downs in life. No one knew what would happen. However, as long as there was love and hope in our hearts, nothing could stop us from achieving what we desired. As a matter of fact, what we should do is hold fast to our dreams and fight to the last. 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 Life is full of hard choices. And what should you do when all alternatives seem equally good? Here are some tips on making decisions. Relax. If you're stressed, you're more likely to overlook something important. However, when you're relaxed, you can think clearly, weigh your options and make a better choice. 1 Focus on the present. You can become stressed out with the big picture, trying to see how your decisions will affect your future. 2 But no one can be sure of the future until it comes. So just focus on the present and make the best possible decision now. Accept failure. Your biggest fear probably is that your decision may lead to bad results. 3 And whatever the decision is, it will enrich your life, in one way or another. So do not worry about making wrong decisions. Seek good advice. Don't ask every one of your friends or family! 4 Don't be afraid to ask for advice, and be willing to listen. Sometimes others' advice can make a new way for you. 5 No matter how you come to your decision, claim the ownership of your decision. Take full responsibility for your choices. Even if you meet with failure, you at least know you have tried your best and gained some valuable experience. A．Make your own decision. B．Therefore, slow down and keep calm. C．But we can recover and learn from bad decisions. D．Being kind to yourself lessens your need for approval. E．Not every problem can be solved by making a decision. F．Only consult those who have faced similar circumstances. G．This process is tiring as you're trying to see your future clearly. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。人生充满了各种艰难的选择，那么到底应该如何做出决定呢？本文从放松自己、关注现状、接受失败、寻求建议以及自己做决定这几个方面提出了相关良策。 1．选B　根据段首的“Relax.”可知，本段主要围绕放松心态进行论述。空处位于段末，应是对本段内容的总结，B项“因此，放慢速度，平心静气”符合语境，B项中的keep calm与上文中的Relax相呼应。 2．选G　本段的主题是“关注现状”。空前一句提到，探索未来会令你焦虑不安，讲的是探索未来的负面影响。G项承接空前内容，继续讨论探索未来的弊端，选项中的tiring与上文中的 stressed out相呼应。 3．选C　空前提及“你可能最担心你的决定会带来坏结果”，空后提及“不管决定是什么，它都会以某种方式丰富你的生活”。由此可推知，空处内容应表转折，说明即便是坏的决定也会带来好处，故C项符合语境。 4．选F　根据上下文的内容可知，此处讲我们应该向谁征求建议，再结合空前的“Don't ask every one of your friends or family！”可知，F项“只咨询那些遇到过类似情况的人”符合语境。 5．选A　空处考查段落主旨。根据下文中的“claim the ownership of your decision. Take full responsibility for your choices”可知，本段讨论的是“要自己做决定”，故A项符合语境。 93 / 93 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$