UNIT 1 Section Ⅵ Writing(Word教参)-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（外研版）

Section Ⅵ　Writing 写作项目——Writing about a comedian 本单元的写作任务是介绍一位喜剧演员，属于人物介绍类写作。人物介绍一般是先简单介绍人物生平，包括人物的基本信息，如：生卒年月、出生地、国籍、职业等；主体部分重点叙述其重要事迹，涵盖其对社会的贡献或影响；最后，可结合人物事迹对人物进行评价或谈谈对自己的启发。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 (一)析教材课文 Para.1：General introduction to Charlie Chaplin. Para.2：The reasons why the author likes Charlie Chaplin. Para.3：Charlie Chaplin's funniest works. Para.4：Comments on Charlie Chaplin's works. (二)根据教材课文总结出该类文体的写作框架： 二、学行文逻辑 本文是“总—分—总”结构，文章首段开门见山，直接点明了要介绍的人物——卓别林，并对其进行了简要介绍；第二、三段具体介绍了卓别林的表演技巧，他塑造的经典人物形象以及他的代表作品等；最后一段总结全文，对卓别林的成就作出了评价。文章首尾呼应，过渡自然，整篇文章浑然一体。 三、学靓丽表达 1．第一段第二句中用became famous引出卓别林的成名年代，并用when引导的定语从句介绍了当时的背景信息。 2．第二、三段介绍卓别林的具体成就时先是连用了三次最高级 the funniest thing about Charlie Chaplin, his most famous character, the funniest scenes，接着使用了两次favourite：My favourite Charlie Chaplin film 以及 my favourite scene，由衷地表达了作者对卓别林的作品的喜爱之情。 3．第四段中运用了经典的not only ...but also句式对卓别林的成就作出评价。同时，用a symbol of这一短语定义了其塑造的角色的荧屏地位。 [提能训练|完成句子] ①We all see him as a symbol of resilience and perseverance in the face of adversity. 我们都认为他是逆境中坚韧和毅力的象征。 ②Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”， is one of China's most famous scientists. 被誉为“杂交水稻之父”的袁隆平是中国最著名的科学家之一。 ③Above all else, he is not only responsible but also patient, and he always devotes himself to arousing our learning interest. 最重要的是，他不仅有责任心，而且有耐心，还一直致力于激发我们的学习兴趣。 四、学写作手法 本文在介绍卓别林的个人成就的同时，还以In my opinion, My favourite ...is ..., I think穿插了作者的观点，叙述与评论相结合，更易于给读者留下深刻的印象；同时，这些语句在文中也起到了衔接过渡的作用，自然推动了文章内容的展开。 具体写作指导 How to write about a comedian ——如何描写一位喜剧演员 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 General introduction. Part 2 His/Her experiences and achievements. Part 3 Comments on him or her. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　概述人物的基本信息 ①Born in Tianjin in 1914，he is a representative of the traditional performance art of crosstalk. 1914年出生于天津，他是相声传统表演艺术的代表人物。 ②Mark Twain, one of the best known American writers in the 19th century, is famous for his wit and humour. 马克·吐温是19世纪美国最著名的作家之一，以其机智和幽默而闻名。 第二部分　描述人物经历、成就 1．有过什么经历？付出了哪些努力？ ①While studying for a master's degree, he fell in love with acting and comedy. 在攻读硕士学位时，他爱上了表演和喜剧。 ②By his teens，Charlie had，through his humour，become one of the most popular child actors in England. 在十多岁的时候，查理凭借自己的幽默已经在英国成为最受欢迎的童星之一。 ③He focused on the performance of small people and expressed the feelings of the characters through humorous body language. 他专注于小人物的表演，并通过幽默的肢体语言来表达角色的情感。 2．取得了哪些成就？ ①He grew more and more popular as his charming character，the Little Tramp，became known throughout the world. 随着他塑造的有魅力的“小流浪汉”的角色闻名于世，他也越来越受欢迎。 ②He was a talented master of creating vivid and rich descriptions of the characters and produced many works in his much-loved stand-up comedy talks. 他是才华横溢的大师，塑造了生动而丰富的人物形象，留下了许多脍炙人口的单口相声作品。 ③His performance, which made people laugh in an unusual way, was enjoyed by people from all walks of life. 他的表演，常以一种不同寻常的方式逗得人们大笑，受到了社会各界人士的喜爱。 ④The characters he created are greatly loved by the audiences for their optimism and determination to overcome all difficulties. 他塑造的人物因其乐观精神和战胜所有困难的决心而深受观众的喜爱。 第三部分　评价其成就或影响 ①Devoting his entire life to the comedy art, he won the admiration of the audience. 他将一生奉献给了喜剧艺术，赢得了观众的赞赏。 ②His performance is not only entertaining but also thought-provoking，leaving a deep impression on the audience. 他的表演不但引人发笑而且发人深省，给观众留下了深刻的印象。 ③I think he is one of the greatest comedians in the world and the funny stories and characters he created bring a lot of laughter to people. 我认为他是世界上最伟大的喜剧演员之一， 他创作的有趣的故事和塑造的人物给人们带来了无数欢笑。 [针对练笔] 请根据下面信息，简要介绍一下相声大师马三立： 1．He created more than 200 traditional cross-talk performances. 2．He trained lots of top-class cross-talkers in China. 3．His performances are full of the feelings of ordinary people. 4．He underlined profound meanings through small stories. 5．He enjoys the reputation of being an artist of the ordinary people. 6．He dedicated his life to the cross-talk career. 参考范文： Ma Sanli created more than 200 traditional cross-talk performances. In addition to being an excellent cross-talker himself, he also trained lots of top-class cross-talkers in China. Ma Sanli's performances are full of the feelings of ordinary people. Nearly all his solo comic dialogues underline profound meanings through small stories. Although he displays a style of cool-headed humour, he is very warm-hearted. He enjoys the reputation of being an artist of the ordinary people. He dedicated his life to the cross-talk career and is really a great cross-talk performer. 写作素材储备 (一)常用词汇 1．comic adj.　 　　　　 滑稽的 2．talented adj. 有才能的 3．creative adj. 有创造力的 4．attractive adj.　 有吸引力的 5．easy-going adj.　 随和的 6．quick-witted adj.　 机智的，反应快的 7．aggressive adj. 有进取心的 8．be honoured as　 被誉为…… 9．be regarded as　 被认为是…… 10．devote oneself to 致力于/献身于 …… 11．have an impact on 对……有影响 12．make contributions to 为……作出贡献 (二)写作佳句 1．开头部分：引出所要介绍的人物并简要描述 ①He became famous for the role of ... ②As to ..., I think nobody can compare with ... ③...is an internationally recognized comedy character on TV and in films. 2．主体部分：详细介绍人物事迹、经历、贡献等 ①What impressed me most was his particular style of acting, which ... ②Among his works, my favorite is ..., of which my favorite scene is ... ③He is such a humorous person that the audience are crazy about his works, especially ... ④After so many years, his works are still ... 3．结尾部分：简要评价人物品质或其成就 ①It goes without saying that ... have a great effect on ... ②In conclusion, the power of his works not only ...but also ... [课时跟踪检测]　　　(标题目配有教师讲评课件) 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.完成句子 1．Born in 1954 in France, he is among the world's outstanding mime masters.(among) 他1954年出生于法国，是世界上杰出的哑剧大师之一。 2．Although famous, he rarely regards acting as just a way to make money.(状语从句的省略) 虽然他很出名，但他很少把演戏仅仅当成赚钱的手段。 3．In Britain, Mr Atkinson impressed the audience with many wonderful characters and among them is Mr Bean.(impress) 在英国，艾金森先生以许多精彩的角色给观众留下了深刻的印象，其中就有“憨豆先生”。 4．I think his witty humour not only makes us laugh, but also makes us think.(not only ... but also) 我认为他的诙谐幽默不仅使我们发笑，而且也引发我们思考。 5．He has a passion for Chinese culture, and Peking Opera is one of his favourites.(passion) 他热爱中国文化，而京剧正是他的最爱之一。 Ⅱ.完成语段 One day, Mr Smith drove his car to meet his friends at the station.When he found there was still quite some time before the train arrived, ①he decided to sleep for a while (他决定睡一会儿)． ②He was about to fall asleep when a young lady came and asked him the time (他正要睡着，这时一位年轻的女士走过来问他时间)．Mr Smith opened his eyes and answered “Half past eight”．With a “Thank you”， the lady left.After a short while this happened again, so Mr Smith wrote “③I don't know the time (我不知道时间)！” on a piece of paper and ④put it on the window of his car (把它放在他的车窗上)． But only a few minutes later, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man. ⑤I can tell you the time (我可以告诉你时间)．It's nine o'clock now.” Ⅲ.读后续写() 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Long ago, in a remote village, there was a place known as the House of 1,000 Mirrors, which a great number of people visited every day.Nobody knew why the house had been built with so many mirrors. A happy little dog heard of this place and decided to pay a visit himself. He ran all of his way with a happy heart. So long was the way that he spent many days on his way. When he arrived, although tired, he jumped happily up the stairs to the doorway of the house. There was a hole in the door. He looked through the hole with his ears lifting high and his tail shaking as fast as it could. To his great surprise, he found himself looking at 1,000 other happy little dogs with their tails shaking just as fast as his. He laughed a lot, and was answered with 1,000 great smiles just as warm and kind as his. As he left the house, he said to himself, “This is a wonderful place. I will come back and visit it often. And I will tell all my friends to come here to enjoy the wonderful sight.” In the same village, another little dog, which was sad and blue all day, also decided to visit the house. After running on the way for so long a time, he felt tired as well as depressed. He slowly climbed the stairs and hung his head low as he looked into the hole in the door. To his great surprise, he saw the 1,000 unfriendly dogs looking at him, so he barked at them right away. Then he was terrified to see 1,000 little dogs barking back at him. He felt depressed and frightened，and decided to leave. As he left, he thought that place was a really terrible place, and that there were so many unfriendly dogs which barked at him. He decided that he would never come back and visit it again and that he would advise all his friends not to come here to see the horrible dogs.Thus he left the house and never returned. 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写故事引发的感悟。 Instead，the happy little dog came back together with lots of good friends. 参考范文： Instead，the happy little dog came back together with lots of good friends. They jumped and laughed around the house of mirrors. Therefore, they saw thousands of laughing dogs in the mirrors. They felt happy. In fact, all the faces in the world are mirrors. What kind of reflections you see on the faces of the people you meet depends on what expression they find on your face. Thus, to live in a wonderful place full of kindness and love, you have to be a kind person with love in your heart first. 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 A good laugh is like a mild workout. It exercises the muscles, gets the blood flowing, decreases blood pressure and improves sleep patterns and the immune system. 1 Don't take life too seriously. We all have obstacles in life and we all make mistakes. 2 In fact, if you can laugh light-heartedly at your own fault, you'll find that you give yourself the extra happiness and confidence that can help you overcome any obstacle. Find the humour in a bad situation. Sure, there are some situations where you are really sad. 3 The next time you feel the stress levels rising, take a minute to think about the funny side of the situation and laugh over the things you cannot control. This will lower your blood pressure, blood sugar levels and heart rate. Remind yourself of funny moments from the past. Perhaps a friend told you a great joke the other day or your children or pets did something amusing. 4 Sometimes just reliving a funny moment can cause the endorphins (内啡肽), natural painkillers, to kick in. 5 As the saying goes, laughter is contagious (会传染的). So make a point of seeking out positive people who aren't afraid to laugh at themselves and are good at finding humour in life's situations. Young children are especially skilled at finding laughter and joy in everyday moments. A．Take control over your emotions. B．There is no reason to blame yourself for them. C．However, most situations in life have funny sides. D．Surround yourself with fun people who like to laugh a lot. E．The following are some ways to enjoy more laughter and pleasure in your life. F．Studies show that people with pets have lower levels of depression and stress. G．Call on these memories frequently, especially when feeling sad, angry or stressed. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文，讲述了大笑对健康很有好处，并给出一些让我们更快乐、有更多笑声的建议。 1．选E　根据上文可知，大笑对我们的健康有好处，那么在生活中我们应该更多地大笑。另外从下文各段主题句可知，这些都是让我们有更多笑声的方法。所以E项“以下是让你在生活中拥有更多欢笑和快乐的一些方法”符合语境。 2．选B　根据前句可知，在生活中我们都会遇见障碍，也都会犯错。犯错是生活中很正常的一件事情，所以我们不要因此而责备自己。故B项承接上文，符合语境。 3．选C　本段的主题句“Find the humour in a bad situation.”告诉我们，当我们遇见困难时，要学会从中找到有趣的一面，让自己开心快乐。再根据上下文可知，当遇到有压力的情况时，我们要从中找到有趣的东西。故C项符合语境。 4．选G　根据本段的主题句“Remind yourself of funny moments from the past.”可知，让自己回想过去那些有趣的时刻，因为那些时刻对我们的情绪有积极的影响。所以我们要经常回想这些时刻，尤其是在我们悲伤难过的时候。选项中只有G项内容与本段中心思想一致。 5．选D　根据后文可知，笑是会传染的，要让一些快乐的人围绕在我们身边，让快乐的人来感染我们，从而让我们一起快乐起来。所以D项与本段中心思想一致。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$