Unit 4 写作过关-2025-2026学年初中英语八年级上册单元过关检测（人教版2024）

2024-2025学年初中英语八年级上册单元过关检测 Unit 4 写作过关 （人教版2024） 1．动物是人类的朋友。然而，很多动物处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹就是其中之一。 请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹 (snow leopard)。 Habitat the mountains of Central and South Asia Food sheep, rabbits, other small animals Reasons hunt for fur; cut down trees Actions help learn about them; set up national parks 要求：1.包含提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.不少于80词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them?__________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to make a difference! 【答案】参考范文 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them? Snow leopards live in the mountains of Central and South Asia and feed on sheep, rabbits, and other small animals. Unfortunately, they are in danger. People hunt them for their fur, cut down forests, and leave them with no place to live. We should do something to protect them. First, we can help people learn more about snow leopards. Second, we can set up more nature parks. Let’s do something to make a difference! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出雪豹这一主题； 第二步，中间阐述雪豹的生活习性、面临的危险； 第三步，结尾提出保护雪豹的具体措施。 [亮点词汇] ①unfortunately不幸地 ②hunt捕猎 ③ensure确保 ④set up建立 [高分句型] Let’s do something to make a difference! (祈使句) 2．假设你是Lingling，由于日本强行启动了核污水排海计划，该行为严重损害了全球海洋生态系统与海洋生物多样性。借此机会你的学校组织了保护海洋动物主题演讲活动。你选择了蓝鲸 (the blue whales)作为演讲对象，请你从以下几个方面进行阐述，完成一篇演讲稿： appearance large place oceans food little fish situation in danger reasons (why?) meat; water; weather things people can do stop people killing...; develop plans; do research; raise money; collect litter; ... 注意： (1 )短文必须包括表格中的所有要点， 并且适当发挥； (2 )文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； (3 )词数：80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech. Today my topic is “Let’s do something to protect the blue whales”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech. Today my topic is “Let’s do something to protect the blue whales”.     Blue whales are the world’s largest mammals and they live in the oceans. They feed on small fish.     Blue whales are in danger now. First, they have less meat to eat because the water is polluted. Second, they have fewer babies because of the bad weather. Third, people kill them for food so it’s hard for them to survive.     In my opinion, our government should stop people killing them and develop plans to protect them. We can do research about sewage management. We can raise money to make signs to tell people about the importance of protecting blue whales. We can also collect litter. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，对蓝鲸进行简单介绍，阐述它们处于危险的现状与原因； 第三步，介绍人们应该采取哪些措施来保护蓝鲸。 [亮点词汇] ①mammal哺乳动物 ②feed on…以……为食 ③in danger处于危险之中 ④survive生存 ⑤stop sb. doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ⑥raise money筹集资金 [高分句型] First, they have less meat to eat because the water is polluted. (because引导原因状语从句) 3．假如你是李瑞，最近阅读了网络上一篇有关保护濒危动物的文章而深受触动。请根据以下信息给美国好友 Mary写一封电子邮件，并说说作为一名中学生，你能为保护动物做些什么。 写作要点： 1. 告诉 Mary 许多动物正濒临灭绝的事实(例如：熊猫和鲸) 2. 介绍动物濒临灭绝的原因： (1)没有足够的食物和居住的空间； (2)树木被砍伐，河水被污染； (3)遭到捕杀。 3. 至少写出两件中学生能为保护濒危动物所做的事。 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 (4)至少80词 Dear Mary, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply. Yours, Li Rui 【答案】例文： Dear Mary,      How is everything going? I’m writing to share ideas from an online article about protecting endangered animals. It really moved me recently.      Many animals are in danger of dying out, such as pandas and whales. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, they don’t have enough food and living space. Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. Moreover, some animals are hunted for their fur, meat or other parts.      As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. For example, I can join volunteer groups to clean up the places where animals live. What’s more, I will tell people around me the importance of protecting animals and ask them not to buy things made from animals.      Let’s work together to make the world a better place for these lovely creatures.      Waiting for your reply. Yours,                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Rui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，引出“保护濒临动物”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger of处于……的危险中 ②cut down砍倒   ③what’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] ①Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. (非限定性定语从句) ②As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. (宾语从句) 4．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于“保护野生动物”的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 要点：1. 野生动物的生存现状； 2. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 保护野生动物的建议。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数80左右。 Save the wild animals __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Save the wild animals Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them. All in all, let’s take action to help wild animals together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍野生动物的现状； 第二步，介绍野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 第三步，提出保护野生动物的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②in danger濒临危险 ③set up建立 [高分句型] ①Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals.（并列结构） ②All in all, let’s take action to help wild animals together!（祈使句） 5．请根据以下思维导图为校刊英文版写一篇征文，说明动植物对人类的重要作用，呼吁大家保护、爱护它们。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括所给内容要点，并有适当拓展； 2. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，结构完整，书写规范； 3. 词数80个左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us in many ways. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us in many ways. Animals can help us do many things. They provide us with meat, eggs, milk and so on. Some animals can also be used as pets to keep lonely people company. Plants can cool our cities and clean our air. They also provide materials for houses, furniture and paper products which bring much convenience to our daily life. Plants can help the Earth from becoming too hot for us to live on. They also keep soil from being washed away. To protect animals and plants is to protect ourselves. We should stop hurting animals and plants, and start to protect and love them. Let’s put it into action. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图内容写一篇短文介绍动植物的重要性，呼吁大家保护、爱护它们。写作时要包含所有提示内容，并进行适当拓展。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。可分为四段式：第一段点题；第二段介绍动物对人类的帮助；第三段介绍植物对人类的帮助；最后一段收尾，呼吁保护动植物。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 6．学校英语社团要求你们写一篇主题为爱护动、植物的倡议性文章。根据提示，完成作文。 内容要点： （1）动、植物为人类做什么。 （2）动、植物对人类生活的重要性。 （3）如何爱护动、植物。 注意： （1）作文必须包含上述内容要点 （2）词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 （3）不可透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；否则不予评分 Protect man’s friends Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protect man’s friends Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. Plants give us food, clean air and beautiful places. Animals provide us with food, clothes and help in work. They are very important because they make our world lively and keep nature in balance. We must protect them. Don’t pick wild flowers or hurt small animals. Plant more trees and be kind to animals. Let’s take action to protect our friends together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，点题，说明动植物对我们的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍动植物能为人类做什么以及对人类生活重要性以及如何爱护动植物； 第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起保护动植物。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物 ②be kind to善待 ③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事 [高分句型] ①They are very important because they make our world lively and keep nature in balance.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Plant more trees and be kind to animals.（祈使句） 7．你的老师 Miss Lin 要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章，以下是你们小组成员的观点，请根据以下表格要点提示，适当发挥完成作文。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Jim 动物帮助我们做很多事，比如帮助盲人； Anna 植物清新空气，使生活更便利； 你的观点 动物（请补充至少一个点） 植物（请补充至少一个点） 你们的倡议 倡议 1：停止砍伐树木 倡议 2：请补充至少一个点 注意：作文必须包括表格所有信息；词数：70 词左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. Anna believes that plants can make the air clean and fresh. And they make our lives more convenient. As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well. It is important for us to protect our best friends. It’s time to take action. First, stop cutting down trees. Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere to keep the environment clean. Let’s work together to protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格要点提示”中的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明动植物是人类最好的朋友； 第二步，具体阐述各自关于保护动植物的观点； 第三步，提出呼吁行动，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②convenient方便的 ③provide...with...为……提供…… [高分句型] ①Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. (省略that的宾语从句) ②As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well. (so... that引导的结果状语从句) 8．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。 内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）； 2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat. We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it’s very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出关于濒危动物的话题； 第二步，具体阐述有哪些濒危动物，濒危的原因及采取的措施； 第三步，书写结语，呼吁人们一起保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①be in danger处于危险之中 ②such as例如 ③cut down砍倒 ④stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ⑤Thanks for为……而感谢 [高分句型] ①They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. (原因状语从句） ②If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.（条件状语从句) 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年初中英语八年级上册单元过关检测 Unit 4 写作过关 （人教版2024） 1．动物是人类的朋友。然而，很多动物处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹就是其中之一。 请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹 (snow leopard)。 Habitat the mountains of Central and South Asia Food sheep, rabbits, other small animals Reasons hunt for fur; cut down trees Actions help learn about them; set up national parks 要求：1.包含提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.不少于80词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them?__________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to make a difference! 2．假设你是Lingling，由于日本强行启动了核污水排海计划，该行为严重损害了全球海洋生态系统与海洋生物多样性。借此机会你的学校组织了保护海洋动物主题演讲活动。你选择了蓝鲸 (the blue whales)作为演讲对象，请你从以下几个方面进行阐述，完成一篇演讲稿： appearance large place oceans food little fish situation in danger reasons (why?) meat; water; weather things people can do stop people killing...; develop plans; do research; raise money; collect litter; ... 注意： (1 )短文必须包括表格中的所有要点， 并且适当发挥； (2 )文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； (3 )词数：80词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech. Today my topic is “Let’s do something to protect the blue whales”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李瑞，最近阅读了网络上一篇有关保护濒危动物的文章而深受触动。请根据以下信息给美国好友 Mary写一封电子邮件，并说说作为一名中学生，你能为保护动物做些什么。 写作要点： 1. 告诉 Mary 许多动物正濒临灭绝的事实(例如：熊猫和鲸) 2. 介绍动物濒临灭绝的原因： (1)没有足够的食物和居住的空间； (2)树木被砍伐，河水被污染； (3)遭到捕杀。 3. 至少写出两件中学生能为保护濒危动物所做的事。 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 (4)至少80词 Dear Mary, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply. Yours, Li Rui 4．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于“保护野生动物”的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 要点：1. 野生动物的生存现状； 2. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 保护野生动物的建议。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数80左右。 Save the wild animals __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请根据以下思维导图为校刊英文版写一篇征文，说明动植物对人类的重要作用，呼吁大家保护、爱护它们。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括所给内容要点，并有适当拓展； 2. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，结构完整，书写规范； 3. 词数80个左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us in many ways. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．学校英语社团要求你们写一篇主题为爱护动、植物的倡议性文章。根据提示，完成作文。 内容要点： （1）动、植物为人类做什么。 （2）动、植物对人类生活的重要性。 （3）如何爱护动、植物。 注意： （1）作文必须包含上述内容要点 （2）词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 （3）不可透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；否则不予评分 Protect man’s friends Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你的老师 Miss Lin 要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章，以下是你们小组成员的观点，请根据以下表格要点提示，适当发挥完成作文。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Jim 动物帮助我们做很多事，比如帮助盲人； Anna 植物清新空气，使生活更便利； 你的观点 动物（请补充至少一个点） 植物（请补充至少一个点） 你们的倡议 倡议 1：停止砍伐树木 倡议 2：请补充至少一个点 注意：作文必须包括表格所有信息；词数：70 词左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。 内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）； 2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$