UNIT 2 Section 8 Writing Workshop(Word教参)-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（北师大版）

Section 8　 Writing Workshop 课时目标 1.阅读文章，了解郎平的重要经历和突出成就。 2.分析文章结构，能够写出自己敬佩的人物的故事与事迹。 3.能够用不同的表达方式来描述人物不同的方面，如总体评价、影响力、经历等。 1．Lang Ping is one of China's most recognised athletes. 郎平是中国最受认可的运动员之一。 ★recognised adj.公认的；经过检验的 |用|法|感|知| ·(“人物介绍”佳句)Yang Zhenning is recognised to be one of the greatest scientists in China. 杨振宁被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一。 ·(主旨升华句)Don't wait for a smile to be nice, and don't wait to be lonely to recognise the value of a friend. 不要等到别人对你微笑你才对人友善，不要等到孤独才明白朋友的价值。 [归纳点拨] (1)be recognised as/to be ...　 被公认为…… It is generally recognised that ... 人们公认…… (2)recognise vt. 认出；承认，认可 recognise ... by ... 凭借……认出 recognise ... as/to be ... 认为……是…… recognise that ... 认识到…… (3)recognition n. 认出，认可 out of/beyond recognition 认不出 |应|用|融|会| (1)单句语法填空 ①A sudden smile of recognition (recognise) flashed across his face. ②Food safety is a recognised (recognise) problem. ③Cellphones, which are now universally recognised as a must, have a great effect on us. ④I haven't seen Sara since she was a little girl, and she has changed beyond recognition. (2)同义句转换 ⑤Environmental pollution is recognised to have become one of the most serious problems that people face. →It is recognised that environmental pollution has become one of the most serious problems that people face. (it作形式主语) 2．She has been a volleyball star for more than thirty-five years and has contributed greatly to the sport, which has made her the most popular figure in China's volleyball history. 她已经成为排球明星超过三十五年，并为这项运动做出了巨大的贡献，这使她成为中国排球史上最受欢迎的人物。 ★contribute vi.& vt.增进；捐献；促成；贡献；投稿；有助于 |用|法|感|知| ·(哲理性结尾)Every single act of kindness will finally contribute to a better world as well as generosity, gratitude, and trust. 每一个善良的举动，以及慷慨、感激和信任，最终都将有助于一个更美好的世界。 ·(“活动感悟”佳句)The community service was a job worthwhile to do, something positive we could make contributions to the world.　社区服务很值得做，是一件我们能为世界做出积极贡献的工作。 归纳点拨 (1)contribute ... to ... 把……捐献给……； 为(报纸等)撰稿 contribute to 贡献；有助于；投稿给；导致；捐款 (2)contribution n. 贡献；捐款；投稿 make a contribution/contributions to (doing) sth. 为(做)某事做出贡献 (3)contributor n. 捐赠者；投稿者 名师点津 contribute to和make a contribution/contributions to中的to都为介词，后要接名词、代词或动名词。 |应|用|融|会| (单句语法填空/完成句子) ①Failure can make a positive contribution (contribute) to your life once you learn to use it. ②It is more meaningful to contribute books and sports goods to children in need. ③We hope your suggestion will contribute to solving (solve) the problem. ④It's our duty to make contributions/a contribution to the environmental protection cause. 为环保事业做出贡献是我们的责任。 ■写作项目——Write a life story　 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物介绍类文章，属于记叙文的范畴。此类文章主要概括介绍人物的生平经历、精神品格、典型事迹等。写作时要抓住人物的典型事例和行为来刻画人物特征，并把握好时间、地点、人物、事件等记叙文的要素。 |由教材学写作| 一、学文体架构 阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下： 二、学写作手法 在介绍人物的主要事迹时一般会有明显的时间线索，如本文第二、三段按时间顺序客观陈述了郎平的人生关键经历。阅读时，应抓住这些表示时间的关键信息，如第二段中“during 1980s, when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics, the 1982 World Championship and the 1981 and 1985 World Cups”以及第三段中“After retiring as an athlete in 1986, In 1995, winning the 2015 World Cup”等。通过这些时间线索，梳理人物的故事脉络，了解郎平的重要经历和突出成就。 三、学亮点表达 在描述人物的某些特点或成就时，作者可能会使用适当的情感词汇，如使用形容词、副词等来表达对人物的尊重、钦佩或其他情感，增强描述的生动性和形象性。如课文中使用“contributed greatly”和“most popular”，表达了郎平在排球方面的影响力和地位；使用“strong and powerful playing style”等词，阐明了郎平的特质、成就和成功的原因。 [提能训练]　(完成句子) ①Your advice will contribute to the success of the class meeting, which is sure to be popular with us students. 你的建议将有助于班会的成功，它一定会受到学生们的欢迎。 ②Under the leadership of the powerful scientist, the team carried out a series of experiments and finally achieved success. 在这位强有力的科学家的领导下，这个团队进行了一系列的实验，最终取得了成功。　　　　 四、赏语言特色 本文语言质朴平实，较少使用修辞手法，体现出该类文章真实、客观的特点。如课文中使用了“was given, was also named, is loved”等词介绍了郎平获得的荣誉以及人们对她的喜爱。 [提能训练]　(完成句子) He was given the name David by his parents and is loved by everyone for his kindness.,他的父母给他取名为大卫，他的善良深受大家的喜爱。 |具体写作指导| Write a life story of a person you like or admire ——写一个你喜欢或钦佩的人的事迹 第一步：构思谋篇 Tense Simple present/past tense Person Third person Main points Part 1: General description of the character, including age, place of birth, family, education background, personality traits, and hobbies. Part 2: Detailed introduction to the major achievements of the character. Part 3: Evaluation or reflection on the character. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　开头引出人物 ①The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, a famous scientist known as “the Father of China's Space Program”．(用同位语) 我最敬佩的人是钱学森，一位被誉为“中国航天之父”的著名科学家。 ②Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria.(用定语从句) 在所有杰出的人物中，我最钦佩的是屠呦呦。她是2015年第一位因在治疗疟疾方面取得的巨大成就而获得诺贝尔医学奖的中国科学家。 第二部分　详细介绍人物生平及成就 1．介绍人物的生平 ①Born in Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China. 姚明1980年9月12日出生于上海，是中国最好的篮球运动员之一。 ②Yuan Longping, who was born in 1930, had a passion for swimming at an early age. 出生于1930年，袁隆平从小就对游泳感兴趣。 2．介绍人物的主要经历及贡献 ①Graduating from Beijing University in 1993, he later worked as a teacher in Wuhan University. 他于1993年毕业于北京大学，后在武汉大学任教。 ②Fan Zhongyan，who was considered as a great Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, was highly appreciated for his great contributions to society. 范仲淹被认为是中国宋代的杰出作家和政治家，因为他对社会做出的巨大贡献而受到高度赞扬。 ③Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”， devoted all his life to researching on rice.In countless days and nights, he worked in the fields, striving to feed more people. 袁隆平，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”，他毕生致力于水稻研究。在无数个日日夜夜，他在田间劳作，力求养活更多人。 第三部分　结尾表达对作者的影响及人物评价 ①Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.(分词短语作状语) 他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个优秀的人，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊重。 ②What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life, which inspires me to be a man of integrity.(主语从句，定语从句) 令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲学，这激励我做一个正直的人。 [针对练笔] 请你写一个英语片段，简要介绍一下著名科学家Madame Curie的生平及事迹。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher's family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934. Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a student.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having devoted herself to scientific research，she was awarded the Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and the Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911. She has made great contributions to science, for which she is honoured as one of the greatest scientists and women. |写作素材储备| 一、人物介绍类写作佳句 1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征： (1)He had fair hair and blue eyes. (2)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. (3)She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. (4)Sue was a young woman who was studying art. (5)He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 2．介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩： (1)During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships. (2)When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. (3)His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings. (4)He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： (1)He became famous for his new theory. (2)The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. (3)We regard him as our model. (4)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. (5)Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 二、人物介绍精彩语段 1．肖像描写 To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man.He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.Although he was a genius, he sometimes forgot things, like his friends' birthdays. 在公众眼里，他是一个长相略显古怪，但善良风趣的人。他留着浓密的小胡子，长长的白头发，有时长长的白头发竖起来，好像刚被电击过一样。虽然他是个天才，但他有时也会忘记一些事情，比如朋友的生日。 2．性格描写 My mother is a kind and loving person who dedicates her life to taking care of her family.She always puts the needs and wants of others before her own.What I admire most about my mother is her determination and perseverance.She has faced many obstacles in her life but has always managed to come out on top. 我的母亲是一个善良而充满爱心的人，她一生都在照顾家人。她总是把别人的需求放在自己的需求之前。我最钦佩母亲的是她的决心和毅力。她一生中遇到了许多障碍，但总是能取得成功。 3．成就介绍 I admire Thomas Edison because of his contributions to the world.In his life, he was always trying out new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, many of which still have a great influence on our life today.He was also very diligent and believed that genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.All these explained why he had so many great inventions and what he did inspires me to be creative in my work. 我因他对世界的贡献而钦佩托马斯·爱迪生。在他的一生中，他一直在尝试新的想法，有1 000多项发明，其中许多至今仍对我们的生活产生着巨大的影响。他也很勤奋，相信天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。所有这些都解释了他为什么有这么多伟大的发明，他的事迹激发了我在工作中的创造力。 [课时检测]　　　　　　　　　(标题目配有教师讲评课件)　 Ⅰ.靓表达升级(14分) 1．In addition, your teaching is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons.The teaching about the cultural differences between China and foreign countries can broaden my horizons.(用such as合并两个句子) →In addition, your teaching, such as the cultural differences between China and foreign countries, is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons. 2．When it comes to the famous figures in Chinese history, I admire Zhang Qian very much.(用admiration的相关短语升级) →When it comes to the famous figures in Chinese history, I have great admiration for Zhang Qian. 3．He felt so ashamed of cheating in the exam that he determined never to do such things again.(用形容词短语作状语升级) →Ashamed of cheating in the exam, he determined never to do such things again. 4．I'll try my best to prepare well for the coming final exam.(用同义短语升级) →I'll do all/everything in my power to prepare well for the coming final exam. 5．Besides, I am so good at English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.(用command的相关短语升级) →Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. 6．She stood there as if she was waiting for someone.(用省略句升级) →She stood there as if waiting for someone. 7．To understand the meaning of success is very important to the students' growth. (用“be of＋名词”结构升级) →To understand the meaning of success is of great importance to the students' growth. Ⅱ.应用文写作(15分)() 假定你是李华，你班正在组织英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，介绍一位你喜欢的为祖国做出过突出贡献的人物。内容包括： 1．该人物是谁； 2．该人物的主要贡献； 3．该人物对你的影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Good morning, everyone! 　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Good morning, everyone! I'm honored to introduce a person who made outstanding contributions to our motherland — Tu Youyou. Tu Youyou is a famous Chinese scientist and pharmaceutical chemist. She is best known for her discovery of artemisinin which has saved millions of lives from malaria. Her research was based on traditional Chinese medicine. She has taught me the importance of persistence, hard work, and the value of traditional Chinese medicine. I also learned from her that every bit of research can lead to amazing discoveries if we are willing to put in the effort. Thank you for listening. Ⅲ.读后续写(25分)() 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sometimes things don't go as planned, but that doesn't mean they can't still be wonderful in their own way.My parents and I had spent forever researching summer camps online.Finally, we picked out one where I could design games, animate (制作动画) characters, and learn other cool coding (编程) stuff. My mom said, “I like the idea of you exercising that clever brain of yours.But I also want you to get plenty of fresh air.” “Campers can choose to hike or swim every afternoon！” I said, as I clicked on the registration form. My dad filled out the form, and weeks later, my parents dropped me off for what I thought would be a week of nonstop computer-coding fun. I arrived at the check-in table at the same time as a camper of my age named Halley, who was wearing an adorable sunhat.Halley greeted, “We are in the same group — number 7.” Led by an advisor, we followed the green arrows to the campsite. I surprisedly found that it was so cool and woodsy along the path.I exchanged ideas with Halley about what might come out of the camp.Halley excitedly mentioned the little animals he loved to observe and something about night sky watching. “You gave me the best idea，” I said.“I'll base my characters on the animals you mentioned！” Halley laughed.“I might be missing something here.Who are these mysterious characters？” “You know, the characters we'll be designing and animating on computers this week！” I said.“Uh, sorry.Still lost，” said Halley.“Why would we be doing computer stuff at Nature Camp？” It was then that I realised some errors must have been made.I must have accidentally clicked on the wrong online form! We immediately raced back to the welcome table to see if I could switch over to Tech Camp, but of course it was completely full. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 I forced a smile as we headed for our campsite._____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “OK, I'll have a try，” I looked at Halley thankfully.______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　 参考范文： I forced a smile as we headed for our campsite.As I stepped forward, I just felt so disappointed that I had to sit down.Seeing that, Halley sat next to me.For the next few minutes, regret immersed me as my treasured Tech Camp slipped away due to my inattention.Then Halley broke the silence, whispering kindly, “I guess it was the call of the wild.” I responded with a bitter smile.He presented the stuff I could enjoy from nature, suggesting we hike and experience it.“You can discover unexpected excitement，” he encouraged me. “OK, I'll have a try，” I looked at Halley thankfully.We reached the campsite and started to explore the nature.Nature Camp turned out amazing! We turned over stones to be amazed by the creatures beneath and hiked through woods to be greeted by the mountains behind.My favorite time came when we slept out under the stars, talking about ancient Greek stories.Even though I didn't choose the program on purpose, Halley was right.Try not to stay stuck in the negative, for a whole bunch of amazingness really is just waiting to jump out and surprise you！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$