摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 1“You and Me”写作主题,通过“高分词句储备-经典范文模版-实战演练”分层设计,构建从话题词汇积累(如“grade”“make friends”)、佳句仿写(如教材原句“My name is...”仿写应用)到范文结构分析的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握自我介绍及朋友介绍类写作要点。
其亮点在于紧扣新课标核心素养,通过“佳句仿写”强化语言能力(如仿写“live in”句型提升表达准确性),“范文赏析与结构梳理”培养思维品质(如分析“总-分-总”写作框架),“实战演练”(如介绍朋友的外貌、喜好及原因的题目)提升学习能力。分层递进的教学方法让学生系统积累写作素材,教师可直接沿用分层训练步骤,高效开展写作教学。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 RJ
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Unit 1 You and Me
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do we need to know
about a new friend?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.年级;等级 _______
2.业余爱好 _______
3.交朋友 ______________
4.姓氏 ___________
5.名字 ____________
6.弹吉他 _________________
grade
hobby
make friends
last name
first name
play the guitar
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】My name is Peter Brown.(sb’s name is…)
→仿写:她的名字叫海伦·格林。
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Her name is Helen Green.
8.【教材原句】I’m 13 years old.(… years old)
→仿写:我有个弟弟,他八岁了。
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I have a brother and he is eight years old.
9.【教材原句】Now, I live in Beijing with my parents.(live in)
→仿写:约翰现在和他姐姐住在伦敦。
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John lives in London with his sister now.
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10.【教材原句】My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite
place is the Great Wall.(sb’s favourite… is)
→仿写:我最喜欢的运动是网球。
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My favourite sport is tennis.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to introduce myself to you.
My name is Liu Yi (介绍姓名).I am 13 years old (介绍年龄).I am
from Liaoning (介绍家乡).I’m in No.34 Middle School (介绍学校).And I’m
in Class 1, Grade 7 (介绍年级和班级).My favourite sport is football
(介绍最喜欢的运动).I often play it with my friends after school.My favourite
place is the library because I like reading (介绍最喜欢的地方及原因).I also
like Beijing roast duck very much (介绍其他喜好).It’s great!
Would you like to be my friend (表达期待)?
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2024河南郑州期末]英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子,他想结
交一位中国朋友,请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封回信。
Hi, I am Richard. I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How
old are you? Can you tell me something about you and your favourite things?
Do you want to be my friend?
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写作要求:
(1)文中须包括帖子中提到的问题,可适当发挥;
(2)词数 60左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Richard,
I’d like to be your friend.____________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Mei
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第一步 审
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据所给帖子中提到的问题进行回复
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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__________________________________ __________________________________
Dear Richard,
I’d like to be your friend.
My name is Li Mei. I’m 13 years old
too. Now I live in Zhengzhou with my
parents.I’m in Zhengzhou Foreign
Language Middle School.I’m in Class 2,
Grade 7. ①开头引入:文章开头直接点题,
用“I’d like to be your friend.”简
洁明了地表达了自己愿意与对方成
为朋友的想法,这是一个很好的开
头方式。
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I’m friendly to my classmates. We often
help each other.My favourite colour is
green. I have many green things.My
favourite animals are monkeys because I
think they are cute.My favourite sport is
tennis. I often play it with my father at
weekends. ②自我介绍:以多个“I’m…”和
“My favourite…”句型阐述“我”的
个人信息和爱好,具体回答对方的
问题“Can you tell me something
about you and your favourite
things?”。
续表
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What about you? What are your
favourite things?
Yours,
Li Mei ③互动性:文章中以“What about
you?”这一部分收尾,通过提问的
方式增加了文章的互动性,同时也
表达了期待对方回信的心情,紧扣
“交朋友”这一核心内容。
本文作者在介绍个人情况时,使用了I’m、I think、“My favourite…”等内容,使
得句子结构丰富多样,避免了重复。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025辽宁抚顺期末]初中生活的第一个学期刚刚开始,你一定结识了很多
新朋友吧!请用英文写一篇短文介绍你最好的朋友。内容包括:
(1)介绍你朋友的基本信息(姓名、年龄、外貌特征、喜欢的穿着等);
(2)介绍你朋友的喜好;
(3)说明你喜欢他/她的原因。
注意:(1)词数60—80;
(2)可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
(3)文章中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【参考范文】
My best friend is Lily.She is 13 years old.She is tall with big
eyes.She likes wearing a red skirt and she looks nice.
She loves doing sports and her favourite sport is tennis.She always
plays it with me after school.She is good at playing the guitar.In the
school art festival, we can often enjoy her beautiful music.
She likes to help others.She often helps classmates with their
homework.She also helps her mother a lot at home.I like to be friends
with her because she is kind and always helps me a lot.
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Value statement: Getting to know each other is the first step in making new
friends.
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