Unit 4 Section Ⅳ Integrated skills (写作项目——Write an argument essay)-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（译林版）

该高中英语课件围绕“整形手术”主题，整合词汇（如treatment, addition）、听力、写作三维训练，通过词汇用法感知、归纳点拨及应用练习夯实基础，结合听力语料库、题目及微写作搭建从语言输入到输出的学习支架，助力议论文写作能力提升。 其亮点在于聚焦语言能力与思维品质培养，写作指导采用PRE结构，通过正反案例（如Wilson修复烧伤/Edwards术后不适）及逻辑衔接词（However, In addition）训练分析论证能力，听力音频和素材储备（佳句、好段）丰富表达。课时检测含微语境写作与应用文，学生能系统提升议论文写作与逻辑思维，教师可直接利用完整教学链条高效教学。

Integrated skills 写作项目——Write an argument essay Section Ⅳ 新知深化学习 听力发掘训练 写作专项提能 课时检测 Contents 目录 01 02 03 04 2 01 新知深化学习 1．Mr Wilson is very happy with the treatment. 威尔逊先生对这一治疗很满意。 ★treatment n．治疗；对待，待遇；处理 |用|法|感|知| •(“情绪描写”佳句)I was moved to tears by their full treatment! 我被他们的盛情款待感动得流下了泪水！ •I'm going to treat myself to a new pair of shoes. 我打算给自己买双新鞋。 [归纳点拨] treat vt.& vi.　　　　　 治疗；对待；款待 n. 款待；招待 treat sb. well/badly 善待/虐待某人 treat sb. for ... (with ...) (用……)为某人治疗…… treat sb. as/like 把某人当作……对待 treat sb./oneself to sth. 用某物款待某人/自己 |应|用|融|会| (单句语法填空) ①I am now in my twenties， but my parents still treat me ________ a child. ②The doctor is treating him ____ his burns. ③I'll treat you ____ baked sweet potatoes. like/as for to 2．In addition， Miss Edwards says the surgery makes her look unnatural and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions. 此外，爱德华兹小姐说，手术使她看起来不自然，而且她无法做出某些面部表情。 ★addition n．增加，添加；加法 |用|法|感|知| •(“道谢”类写作佳句)In addition， I would like to express my gratitude to your family for their hospitality.　 此外，我还要对你的家人表示感谢，谢谢他们的热情款待。 •In addition to her interest in nature， Carson grew up with a love for reading and writing. 除了对大自然的兴趣，卡森从小就热爱阅读和写作。 [归纳点拨] in addition　　 此外，另外(副词，可单独作状语) in addition to 除……之外(还……)(介词短语，后接名词、 代词或动名词) |应|用|融|会| (选用上述短语填空) ①______________， when it comes to practising our musical instruments， I have to practise more time. ②The teacher， ________________ his students， was interested in the book. In addition in addition to 02 听力发掘训练 一、由听力厚积语料库 1．plastic surgery industry　　 ________________ 2．have plastic surgery ________________ 3．the average age of patients ________________ 4．improve their appearance ________________ 5．build their self-confidence ___________________ 整形外科行业 做整形手术 建立他们的自信心 改善他们的外表 患者的平均年龄 6．此外，另外 ______________ 7．严重的健康风险 _________________ 8．整形外科手术　　　 _________________________ 9．对青少年尤其如此 ____________________ 10．权衡所有的优点和缺点 _______________________________________________ weigh up all of the advantages and disadvantages be true for teenagers in addition serious health risks plastic surgery operations 二、教材录音材料的发掘训练 1．What is Alice？ A．A patient. B．A doctor.　 C．A reporter. √ √ √ 3．What's the author's attitude towards plastic surgery？ A．Favourable. B．Objective. C．Critical. 2．Who account for one third of all plastic surgery patients？ A．Men. B．Women. C．Teenagers. 三、依据教材听力完成句子 1．Plastic surgery is undoubtedly becoming ________________ ___________. 2．Many people ___________________________ to help improve their appearance. 3．______________________________， plastic surgery can help people in both groups build their self-confidence. more and more popular see it as the easiest way By improving their appearance 4．Finally， the results of plastic surgery might not be ______ ______________. 5．It is important to weigh up all of the advantages and disadvantages before _________________________________________. what people expect deciding whether or not to have plastic surgery 四、听力同类主题的微写作 假设你的好友对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术。请你结合听力材料的内容，给她提一下建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： I think it's not a good idea to have plastic surgery.To begin with， people don't always get satisfactory results from plastic surgery.What's worse， plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations， which may stop them from returning to a normal life.Personally， it is not the appearance but the inner beauty that matters.You should learn to see the good things about yourself and remember you are unique.Sincerely hope you can love and have confidence in yourself. 03 写作专项提能 写作项目——Write an argument essay　 本单元的写作任务是写一篇议论文。议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过列举事实材料和运用逻辑推理来阐述对事物的理解和认识，表明对问题的观点和态度。一篇议论文通常包含论点、论据、论证三大要素。 由教材学写作 一、学文体架构 本课时Part D介绍了PRE结构来完成议论文写作。PRE结构是一种常用的议论文写作框架，P代表Point(观点)，R代表Reason(理由)，E代表Example(案例)。 二、学行文逻辑 议论文侧重以严密的推理来揭示事物的本质和规律，表明作者的观点和态度，其上下文之间应有密切的逻辑关系。如Part B的听力文本中，在讨论整形手术的不利方面时，先用However与上文的有利方面形成转折关系，然后用In addition 及Finally将三个弊端衔接起来，并用 In some extreme cases及This is especially true for ...对其中两个弊端借助事例进行论证。 三、学写作手法 为使论证更具权威性，增加说服力，议论文的写作中常运用下列手法： 1．引用专家评论使论点更具权威性，如Part B听力文本中的“Doctors strongly advise against plastic surgery for people under eighteen ...”。 2．举出确凿典型的事实来证明论点，如Part A中提供的两个案例。 3．采用对比论证，借助正反两方面的事实和道理的鲜明对比，来增强论点的可信度，Part B听力文本中便使用了这一手法。 四、学要点构思 1．议论文的开头通常借助某一现象来引出中心论点，此类表达可模仿Part B听力文本首段中的“Plastic surgery is undoubtedly becoming more and more popular.”。 2．对比论证的表述可参考该听力文本的第二、三两段：第二段开头运用了句式“Many people see it as the easiest way to ...” 来引出有利方面，用句式“Some ...while others ...”举例说明。第三段开头使用句式“However， it's also important to consider the disadvantages.”引出不利方面。 3．举例论证时所需的典型案例可从Part A中的两则材料中提取： ·(赞成)Plastic surgery helps Mr Wilson repair his burnt skin， especially the skin on his face.He can go out like a normal guy now. ·(反对)Miss Edwards suffers from daily pain and is unable to make some facial expressions after her plastic surgery. 4．文章的总结部分可借用Part B听力文本尾段中的“It is important to weigh up all of the advantages and disadvantages before deciding ...”。 写作项目指导 Write an argument essay expressing your opinion about plastic surgery ——写一篇议论文表达你对“整形手术”的看法 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 How can you provide your main point for your readers？ Part 2 How can you support your main point with reasons and personal experiences or evidence？ Part 3 Give a short but powerful summary. 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　确立观点 1．借助现象：Plastic surgery __________________________ __________ in recent years.I think it's time for people to be aware of the risks it carries. 近年来，整形手术越来越流行。我认为是时候让人们意识到它所带来的风险了。 is becoming more and more popular 2．借助研究发现：_________________________ more and more people tend to have plastic surgery， ignoring its disadvantages.　 最近的研究表明，越来越多的人倾向于做整形手术，而忽视了它的缺点。 3．开门见山：When it comes to plastic surgery，________________ ________________________. I hold the belief that it has more advantages than disadvantages. 谈到整形手术，不同的人有不同的看法。我认为它的优点大过缺点。 Recent research shows that different people hold different opinions 第二部分　围绕论点展开论证，并结合事例加以说明 1．赞成的理由有哪些？ ①It helps ______________________________. 它有助于改善人们的外貌。 ②It contributes to ______________________________. 它有助于人们建立自信心。 improve people's appearance building people's self-confidence 2．反对的理由有哪些？ ①It is very ____________.　 价格非常昂贵。 ②It may carry ____________________. 可能会带来严重的健康风险。 ③The results of plastic surgery might not be __________________. 手术的结果可能不会达到人们的预期。 expensive serious health risks what people expect 3．怎样结合事例进行说明？ ①__________________________， a woman suffers from daily pain after plastic surgery. 根据新闻上的报道，一位女士在整容手术后每天都遭受疼痛的折磨。 ②_______________________many people have repaired their scars with the help of plastic surgery. 众所周知，许多人借助整容手术修复了自己的伤疤。 As reported in the news It's well-known that 第三部分　照应论点，得出结论 ①For the above reasons， _________________________________ _______ if they plan to have plastic surgery. 由于上述原因，如果人们打算做整形手术，应该三思而后行。 ②People should ________________________________， and use knowledge to build self-confidence. 人们应该远离整形手术，运用知识建立自信。 people should think twice before they act keep away from plastic surgery [针对练笔] 近几年社会上的整形医院如雨后春笋般涌现出来，很多人，尤其是年轻人，热衷于整形手术。请你就此现象谈谈自己的看法，注意运用PRE模式。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： I don't agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery， because it expands the bad influence of judging by appearance.According to the news about the death caused by plastic surgery in recent years， a large number of irregular plastic surgery hospitals in the society cannot guarantee the life safety of young people.In conclusion， I think true beauty comes from the heart.No beautiful appearance can make up for the lack of inner beauty. 写作素材储备 (一)积佳句 1．导入论点 (1)A recent study shows that ... (2)With the improvement of the living standards， more and more people ... (3)It is a common phenomenon nowadays that ... (4)Recently we had a discussion about ... Different people held different opinions. 2．展开论证 (1)There are several reasons for ...but in general， they come down to three major ones. (2)There are two opposite opinions about ...Some students say ...while others think that ... (3)Most of the students are in favor of it.Here are the reasons.First ...Second ...Finally ... (4)There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon.For one thing， ...; for another， ...What's more， ... 3．做出总结 (1)Taking ...into account， ...is of great importance for ... (2)In conclusion， nothing is more important than ... (3)Measures should be taken to prevent this kind of problem happening again. (二)背好段 1．对减肥的看法(引出论点) It is natural for young girls to hope to look beautiful.However， in my opinion， health is more important than beauty.As a student， we should put our study in the first place and not let others' opinions affect our normal life. 年轻女孩希望自己看起来漂亮，这是很自然的。然而，在我看来，健康比美丽更重要。作为一名学生，我们应该把学习放在首位，不要让别人的意见影响我们的正常生活。 2．对美的看法(正反对比) Some students hold the firm belief that physical appearance has a big influence on a person's life.Physical beauty is attractive to everybody.However， other students are firmly convinced that there is no fixed standards of physical beauty and some of the standards are simply impossible for us to live up to.It is the inner beauty that is more important. 一些学生坚信外表对一个人的生活有很大的影响。外表的美丽吸引着每个人。然而，其他学生坚信，外在美没有固定的标准，有些标准对我们来说根本不可能达到。内在美才更重要。 04 课时检测 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.微语境写作(共15空，30分) 1．______________________________ (经过数年的定期治疗)， she finally recovered from the disease.She _______________________ _______________________ (重视她的健康) these days than ever before.She begins to realize that ______________________________ __________________________ (良好的健康是一个人能拥有的最宝贵的财富)． After years of regular treatment attaches much more importance to her health good health is the most valuable possession a person can have 2．You should eat more vegetables and fruit because they ______ _______ (富含) vitamins and fiber.Eat less cheese and chocolate which/that ___________________________ (含有大量的糖与脂肪)．____________ (此外)， you should exercise regularly and have enough sleep. _________________________________________ (它和保持均衡饮食同样重要)． are rich in contain much sugar and fat In addition It is as important as keeping a balanced diet 3．________________ (很显然) most of their spare time is spent on homework， computer games and TV shows.In my opinion， ______________________________________________________ (学生们应该抽出更多业余时间来进行体育活动)， which are beneficial to their growth and health.Both the education departments and parents should ______________________________________________________ (鼓励学生留出更多的体育运动的时间)． It is obvious that students should spend more spare time on physical activities encourage students to set aside more time for physical activities 4．We should _________________________ (养成健康的生活方式)．First， go to bed earlier instead of staying up late.Second，_____ ________________ (保持均衡饮食) to build up our bodies.Only in this way can we _____________________________ (在学习上取得进步)． develop a healthy lifestyle keep a balanced diet make progress in our studies 5．As we know， if we often stay up late， we will ____________ ________ (感到疲劳和困倦) during the daytime and cannot concentrate in class.Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles will _______________________ (导致营养缺乏)． feel tired and sleepy cause a lack of nutrition Ⅱ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，你们学校正在就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文向校报投稿。 1．现在越来越多的人做整形手术，但你认为青少年不应该整容。 2．你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适…… 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： As is known to all， plastic surgery is becoming more and more popular because it can improve our appearance.But I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn't have plastic surgery. Plastic surgery has many negative effects on teenagers.Firstly，caring about appearance too much will affect their studies.As a result，they can't concentrate on their lessons.Secondly， teenagers are still growing and such surgery is likely to harm their health. Some teenagers once had plastic surgery， which stopped them from returning to a normal life.Therefore，they regret having the surgery. In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery， and use knowledge to build self-confidence. Ⅲ.读后续写(15分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落的开头、结尾续写一个60词左右的片段。 Kenny Matthews was just three when the flat he lived in went up in smoke in 1991.The accident left him with burns to 70% of his body.Despite being very young when he suffered his burns， Kenny can still remember the day of the accident. He was playing with his toys and watching TV on the floor in the living room while his grandfather was sleeping on the living room couch.All of a sudden， he heard a sudden noise from the window and that was when the window caught fire.He had no idea what caused the window to burst like that， but all he remembered was the apartment filling up with gas and smoke from the fire.He could do nothing but panic (恐慌)． His grandfather， who had been asleep， woke up because of the smoke.He tried to save Kenny's life， but he couldn't really do much because he was weak.Picking Kenny up under his arms， he carried him over the window — unfortunately， that's how Kenny got burnt by the fire. Kenny and his grandfather were rushed to the hospital.His grandfather， whose arms were badly burned， was hospitalized for a while and then discharged (出院)．Kenny went through numerous surgeries over the next few decades， which he described as a very painful journey. Now， after having been through so much over the years， Kenny's treatment is finally done.The 36-year-old man has shared online how his burns and scars (伤疤) have affected his life as an adult.“Some people don't really care about personality — they just want somebody to look good or attractive physically， and honestly， I don't fit that description，” Kenny says. Kenny understands it's not their fault.He's smart enough to know not every person is the same. Kenny now has 2.4 million followers on the Internet.　__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ For those who may be struggling with their appearance， Kenny also suggests that they should not always spend so much time on their appearance — they should spend time on their personality and mentality. 参考范文： Kenny now has 2.4 million followers on the Internet.He says sharing everything that happened to him on social media has helped him get his confidence back.He shares his story to encourage others to accept their physical differences.He admits his burns and scars affect his confidence in a way， because if he weren't like this， he would physically be stronger.However， what he does know is that all that matters is that he is a great human being on the inside.For those who may be struggling with their appearance， Kenny also suggests that they should not always spend so much time on their appearance — they should spend time on their personality and mentality. 二、阅读拓展训练 Do you think true beauty is found in looks？ Actually， what makes you attractive comes from within. _____ . Place your beauty in what you are but not what you are in your beauty.If you hold onto youthful beauty as a narrow definition of yourself， you won't enjoy your looks as you age. _____ .It is only a part of what we show to the outer world.Go past your reflection and see the real self! 1 2 _____ .Despite many anti-aging products， there is no magic solution to stopping the effects of aging.You should stop devaluing yourself just because you are getting older.Aim for a healthy life and keep yourself strong and fit.Eat healthy diet and be committed to a daily exercise routine.Lots of efforts are needed.You will feel better over a long term. 3 Beauty relates to physical and psychological aspects. _____ .For Serena Williams， it is quiet another issue.She never hides her unusual powerful physique.Instead， her showing her muscles enhances her appeal.Many fans think she is beautiful.This proves that looking beautiful and attractive means more than our looks. 4 Be less scared of aging and you will look more beautiful. _____ .However， to those who age beautifully， it matters neither too much nor too little.Do enjoy our lives to the fullest.True beauty is about accepting yourself.It is also about feeling good about yourself. A．Beauty matters to all of us B．It comes from the both sides C．The fountain of youth doesn't exist 5 D．Go beyond what you see in the mirror E．It's human nature to try to keep young and energetic F．People generally think beauty is only a skin-deep topic G．Changing the way you value beauty will give you life-long confidence 语篇解读：本文是一篇议论文。文章探讨了美的本质以及如何正确看待和追求美。 1．选G　上文提到真正的美不在外表而在内心，G项“改变你对美的看法会让你终生充满自信”承接上文，提出要改变对美的不正确看法，并指出其重要性。 2．选D　下文提到，镜中形象只是我们展示给外界的一部分，我们要超越它，看到真实的自己，这正是对D项“超越你在镜子中看到的”的进一步解释说明。 3．选C　下文提到，尽管有许多抗衰老的产品，但并没有神奇的解决方案能阻止衰老的影响，这是对C项“青春之泉并不存在”的进一步阐释。 4．选B　上文提到，美丽与身体和心理这两方面有关，故B项“它来自这两个方面”承接上文，符合语境。 5．选E　下文表示，然而，对于那些优雅老去的人来说，年龄虽然不容忽视但也没那么重要，我们应该尽情享受生活。E项“努力保持青春活动是人的天性”与下文构成转折关系。 本课结束 $$