Unit 2 Section Ⅵ Writing（Word教参）-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（人教版）

本讲义聚焦“给朋友写旅行计划”写作，以课文为依托构建学习支架，先解析写作架构（邮件+宣传页结构）、逻辑组材（目的、景观、安排）、亮点表达（如amazing、can't wait to do sth.及it作形式主语句式）和比喻修辞，再通过技法指导明确谋篇三部分（计划概述、活动安排、出行方式与感想），结合词块佳句储备，最终通过练笔与检测巩固应用。 资料特色在于“以读促写”融合语言能力、文化意识与思维品质，课中“学课文亮点-仿练笔句式-创完整习作”步骤提升教学效率，课后分层检测（完成句子、应用文、读后续写）助学生查漏补缺，阅读拓展训练兼顾综合能力，助力学生在实践中提升跨文化沟通与逻辑表达能力。

Section Ⅵ　Writing 写作项目——Write to a friend about a travel plan 本课时的写作任务是写信告诉朋友旅行计划。写作此类文体时应注意写作目的明确、内容逻辑清晰、语言简洁明快，并恰当融入情感。学生通过写作活动，探索、思考国内外有价值的旅游资源及其文化内涵。 由课文学写作 一、学写作架构 二、学逻辑组材 本文第一部分以电子邮件的形式介绍了作者的西安旅行计划，内容包括旅行的主要目的、重点景观、其他景点和旅行安排(出发时间、出行方式等)。第二部分以宣传页的形式重点介绍了兵马俑的基本情况，以此为学生提供有关这个旅行计划的背景知识。本文内容丰富，主次得当，层次分明地呈现了本次的旅行计划。 三、学亮点表达 1．亮点词汇 (1)本文第一段中使用了amazing和unbelievable，说明兵马俑栩栩如生，作者对此景点充满赞美与惊叹，同时激发了读者的向往之情。 (2)第一段中短语can't wait to do sth.(迫不及待做某事)的运用，突出了作者对这次旅行的渴望和迫切的心情。 针对练笔/完成句子 ①That's an_amazing_thing and how it happened is pretty _unbelievable too. 那是令人惊奇的事，而它是怎样发生的也让人难以置信。 ②When I heard this exciting news, I couldn't_wait_to_run_to_tell my parents. 当我听到这个令人兴奋的消息时，我迫不及待地跑去告诉我的父母。 2．亮点句式 第一段最后一句“It's amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.”是and连接的并列复合句，前一分句使用了it作形式主语，that从句作真正主语；后一分句使用了“no one ...until ...”(直到……才……)的句式结构。这些高级句式的运用描绘了兵马俑的宏大规模，神秘之处，引发读者心之向往。 针对练笔/单句语法填空 It is a pity that no one knows the value of health until he loses it. 四、学修辞手法 第二段第二句中“this museum is known as a ‘Chinese treasure house’”把陕西历史博物馆比作中国宝库，给人以深刻的印象。在写作中恰当地运用比喻修辞手法，能够突出事物的特点，并能丰富读者的联想和想象。 针对练笔/翻译句子 ①The scenery before us is as beautiful as a picture. 我们面前的风景就像一幅画一样美丽。 ②The childhood shows the man, as morning shows the day. 一个人的童年就好比一天的早晨。 写作技法指导 Write to a friend about a travel plan ——写信或电子邮件告诉朋友旅行计划 第一步：构思谋篇 Part 1 (第一段) 表明旅行计划，包括目的地、时间、是否有人陪伴，以及旅行计划的缘由或目的 Part 2 (第二段) 到达目的地之后的食宿和活动开展情况，包括但不限于欣赏自然风光，探访名人故居，参观名胜古迹，了解当地风土人情、饮食文化及地方节日等 Part 3 (第三段) 表明出行方式(乘车、乘船还是坐飞机等)，计划出发和到达的时间以及所想所感。 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　点明旅行计划 1．如何引出旅行计划 ①I'm thrilled to share with you my travel plan.I've_been_dreaming_of_... (我一直梦想着……) ②I have exciting news to share！I'm_planning_a_trip_to_... (我正计划去……) ③Guess what？I've_got_a_trip_to_... (我要去一次……旅行) 2．旅行计划的缘由或目的是什么 ①放松身心 relax_one's_body_and_mind ②开阔视野 broaden_one's_horizons ③探索地方历史文化 explore_the_local_history_and_culture ④我一直梦想着去……旅行 I_have_been_dreaming_of_traveling_to_... ⑤这次旅行是我们与……共度美好时光的机会 This_trip_is_a_chance_for_us_to_spend_good_time_with_... 第二部分　具体的活动开展 ①欣赏自然美景 enjoy_the_natural_beauty ②参观名胜古迹 visit_places_of_interest ③期待着参观地方博物馆 look_forward_to_visiting_the_local_museum ④领略当地的风土人情 appreciate_the_local_customs_and_traditions ⑤享用当地的名菜 enjoy_the_local_famous_dishes 第三部分　期待此次旅行 ①我迫不及待地想把自己置身于……的文化和美丽之中。(put oneself in) I_can't_wait_to_put_myself_in_the_culture_and_beauty_of_... ②我正在数着日子，直到我终于能够踏上……(set foot in) I'm_counting_the_days_until_I_can_finally_set_foot_in_... ③一想到(the thought of)这次旅行，我就充满兴奋和期待(anticipation)。 The_thought_of_this_trip_fills_me_with_excitement_and_anticipation. 写作素材储备 一、“旅行”词块速记 1．take a tour　　　　　　 游览 2．make plans 做计划 3．set out/off 出发 4．leave for 动身去(某地) 5．a seven－day trip 七日游 6．take a bus 乘公共汽车 7．together with 和……一起 8．around the corner 即将来临 9．take advantage of 利用 10．enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景 二、“旅行”佳句快背 1．I'm planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划去被称为“东方威尼斯”的苏州旅游。 2．We are going to climb the hill, have a picnic and go camping in the canyon. 我们将登山、野餐并且在峡谷中宿营。 3．This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven－day trip. 这个月，我要和两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。 4．Appreciating many famous scenic spots along the way, we were deeply impressed with the breathtaking scenery from Sichuan to Gansu. 沿途我们欣赏了许多著名的景点，从四川到甘肃的壮丽景色给我们留下了深刻的印象。 [随堂针对练笔] 根据提示完成下面习作。 Dear David， ①Hearing (hear) that you're planning a trip to China, I ②feel_very_excited_to_recommend (感到很激动推荐) a city that you can't miss. ③Beijing_is_not_only_the_capital_of_China,_but_also_a_world－famous_tourist_destination (北京不仅是中国的首都，而且是世界闻名的旅游胜地). The city is a perfect combination of old and new. You can see thousands of historical sites as well as modern buildings. ④Rich_and_colorful_culture_will_also_leave_a_deep_impression_on_you (丰富多彩的文化也会给你留下深刻的印象)． Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua [课时跟踪检测] 一、写作专项训练 Ⅰ.完成句子(共10空，20分) (1)听说你要来我的城市济南观光，我感到非常开心。(delighted, sightseeing) I'm_more_than_delighted_to hear that you're coming to my city, Jinan for_sightseeing. (2)因此，我很高兴为你安排住宿和旅行路线。(arrangement, route) Thus, it's my pleasure to_make_arrangements_for_your_accommodation and travel_routes. (3)有很多景点供你选择，其中我强烈推荐的就是大明湖。(mass, recommend) There're a_mass_of places of interest for you to choose from, among which the Daming Lake is_strongly_recommended. (4)这是一个由许多泉形成的天然湖泊，漫步在湖边，你可以欣赏令人惊叹的风景。(admire, wonder ) It is a natural lake forming from many springs, where you could admire_the_amazing_view while wandering around the lake. (5)谈到住宿，你可以选择住在我家或者入住酒店。(check in) When_it_comes_to your accommodation, you have the option of either living at my home or_checking_in_a_hotel. Ⅱ.应用文写作(15分) 假定你是李华，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人下周去北京游览长城。请你给你的英国好友 Peter写一封电子邮件，分享你的旅行计划，内容包括： 1．对长城的认识； 2．其他旅游目的地(故宫和颐和园)及交通方式； 3．表达期望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：故宫the Imperial Palace； 颐和园the Summer Palace 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： Dear Peter， I'm glad to tell you my parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall next week. As far as I know, the Great Wall has a long history and it is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people. We can't wait to visit it! Besides, we're also planning to visit other places in Beijing, such as the Imperial Palace and the Summer Palace. We're going there by train. Do you have any plans for the coming winter holiday? Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Ⅲ.读后续写(15分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 During June, I was filled with joy planning my trip across Europe. I had taken some lessons in French, bought all of the essentials I thought I would need, and conducted heavy research of the places I planned to visit. At the time, several friends said they were interested in joining me. It was going to be such an adventure! As the days drew near to my summer vacation, I slowly realized that no one was as serious as me about going. I felt discouraged.“Should I just cancel my whole trip？” I thought to myself. But no! A slight hiccup (小问题) like this wasn't going to stop me. So I went to the ticket office by myself, and bought a one－way ticket to France, which was where I would start my journey. I wanted to leave the return date open, as I didn't know how long my journey would take me, or where it would end. The following day, I started on the journey of a lifetime. Little did I know that I would get far more than what I had paid for. The first day I landed in Paris, my bag was stolen. Inside the bag was my cell phone and all of my money. The only thing I had was the clothing on my back, and the guidebook in my pocket. How stupid I was! I would have to get money somehow. I sat and cried on the steps of the sidewalk. Then suddenly, an idea came to me. I had played the guitar for several years. Surely there was a way to go busking (街头卖艺). But how to get a guitar? As I walked through the streets trying to think of what to do, I heard music coming from a nearby store. I went closer, and found it was a store that sold musical instruments. I couldn't think of any way other than borrowing a guitar from the store, so I went in and explained what had happened to me. Luckily, the store owner was very kind to lend me a guitar to use near the store. Now it was time to go playing in the streets! (根据前文和段落开头语，续写“我”从紧张不安到渐入佳境→收获颇丰→警察出现询问是否有许可证→店主解围→永远铭记这次旅行。要求逻辑通顺，情节合理。词数80左右。) All I had to do was find a suitable place to busk.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： All I had to do was find a suitable place to busk. Although I got everything ready for busking soon, I felt so nervous. Out of my expectation, it wasn't long before I got the first dollar. Then I earned enough money to buy a ticket to go back home.Suddenly, a police officer came to see if I had a permit to busk. Luckily, the store owner who had been witnessing all, explained what had happened to the police officer. I thought it was the strangers' kindness and help that made this trip the most unforgettable one in my lifetime. 二、阅读拓展训练 阅读七选五 Plan a Budget－Friendly (省钱的) Summer Vacation It's never too early to start thinking about your summer vacation. Deciding where to go and what attractions to see can actually be a fun and exciting part of the experience — particularly when you find ways to save your travel dollar. __1__ Rethink your “summer vacation”． If your summer vacation window is wide open, why not skip July and August? The flights and accommodations are about 25% cheaper in the spring or early fall. If you must travel during the busy season, you can still save by being flexible.__2__ Flying out on a Tuesday instead of a Friday could save you a bit of money, and flying in the afternoon will likely be cheaper than a morning flight. __3__ It's always in your best interest to book your summer vacation early. If you plan on flying to your destination, for example, it will be much easier to find seats on your preferred flights if you book in March than if you were to wait until the last minute. The same applies to hotels, where prices are based on supply and demand. Use the right websites. There are a lot of websites competing for your travel dollar. __4__ For example, when you make five reservations with booking.com, you can have access to their “Genius Program” which gives you 10% off as well as early check－in and late check－out. Consider a tour. With so many places to see and things to do, planning a trip can wear you out quickly. __5__ Seasoned tour operators, such as Trafalgar, take the stress out of travel so all you have to do is show up and enjoy yourself. More importantly, a guided vacation represents a significant saving. A．Plan your flights. B．Book in advance. C．In that case, a tour is a fantastic choice. D．Choose the one that offers the best service. E．That competition has led to many benefits for travelers. F．When booking flights, choose the least popular travel times. G．Here are tips to plan a summer vacation within your budget. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了计划一个省钱的暑假的一些方法。 1．选G　根据前文“Deciding where ... dollar.”可知当你找到节省旅行费用的方法时，度假就会变得有趣并令人兴奋。同时根据下文提到了省钱的技巧可知，空处应承接前文，引起下文，介绍一些省钱的方法。选项G切题。 2．选F　根据前文“If you must travel ... flexible.”及下文“Flying out ... morning flight.”可知，选择非周末时间出行可以为你节省钱，同样乘坐下午飞机比上午的飞机更便宜。即我们选择乘坐飞机出行要选择人们不愿选择的时间可以省钱。选项F是对后文列举事例的总述，符合题意。 3．选B　根据下文“It's always ... minute.”举例说明提前预订航班的好处是可以让你更容易找到你喜欢的航班座位。因而，作为段落的标题句，应概括本段主旨，讲述要提前预订。选项B符合题意。 4．选E　根据上文“There are a lot of ... dollar.”可知多家网站通过竞争想要争取到作为消费者的你。下文举例说明多家网站的竞争可以给消费者带来很多好处。选项E起到了承上启下的作用，且选项中“That competition”指代前文的多家网站之间的竞争，“benefits for travelers”和下文提到的省钱、提前登记和延迟退房语义相符。 5．选C　根据本段标题“Consider a tour.”可知本段讲述的内容应和旅行有关。选项C中的关键词“tour”和段落标题的关键词一致，同时也为下文“Seasoned tour ...enjoy yourself.”讲述要享受旅行提供了依据。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$