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英 语
七年级上册 人教版
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Unit 7 Happy Birthday!
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do you make your
birthday meaningful?
Period5 2a—3d(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.庆祝;庆贺___________
2.惊奇;惊讶__________
3.享受……的乐趣_______
4.有意义的____________
5.许愿_____________
6.吹灭__________
celebrate
surprise
enjoy
meaningful
make a wish
blow out
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】How about a surprise party for them? (how about)
→ 仿写:给她买一盒巧克力糖怎么样?
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How about buying a box of chocolates for her?
8.【教材原句】How much are those oranges? (how much)
→ 仿写:这个生日蛋糕和蜡烛要多少钱?
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How much are the birthday cake and candles?
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9.【教材原句】It’s a great idea to plant a tree for your birthday! (It’s a great
idea to do sth)
→ 仿写:为你的猫拍照是个好主意!
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It’s a great idea to take photos for your cat!
10.【教材原句】It’s fun to look at the marks later.(It’s +adj.+ to do sth)
→ 仿写:举办一个大型生日聚会真令人惊喜。
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It’s really surprising to have a big birthday party.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
The birthday is very important for people.It is also a good time to show our
love to our family and friends (介绍生日的意义).
Every year, we celebrate my grandfather’s birthday together. His birthday is
on 15th January (介绍生日的具体日期).On that day, we usually have a big
meal together (介绍生日活动).My mother always makes long noodles for my
grandfather. It means a long life.
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My grandfather’s sixtieth birthday is coming this year. We plan to have a
birthday party (介绍生日计划) for him. At the party, we can eat the birthday
cake and different kinds of fruits (介绍生日当天的饮食安排).We can also sing,
dance and play games together (介绍生日当天的活动安排).I will sing a lovely
song in the party on his birthday.
I hope we can have a good time (书写结语,表达期待).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
对于我们来说,生日是一个特殊的
日子,有着重要的意义。周二是学校英
语俱乐部活动日,这周大家讨论的话题
是“How do you celebrate your
birthday?”。假如你是俱乐部成员李明,
要求:1.包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.60词左右。
请你根据提示内容写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己是如何过生日的。
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称
内容要点:根据问题提示中提到的信息进行构思,可适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I’m 13, and my
birthday is on 26th October.
I usually celebrate my birthday with my
parents and my sister. On this day, my parents
often take me to a nice restaurant. We have a big
dinner and there is always a bowl of long noodles
for me. Then they will sing me a birthday song
and give me gifts.After that, we will enjoy a
delicious cake together.
I love celebrating my birthday. ①开头引入:文章开头直
接点题,简洁明了地介绍
自己的生日的时间。
②具体介绍生日活动:围
绕图中提示内容,以第一
人称详细介绍自己和谁一
起过生日,生日当天吃的
食物以及生日当天会做的
事情,紧扣写作要求。
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Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I’m 13, and my
birthday is on 26th October.
I usually celebrate my birthday with my
parents and my sister. On this day, my parents
often take me to a nice restaurant. We have a big
dinner and there is always a bowl of long noodles
for me. Then they will sing me a birthday song
and give me gifts.After that, we will enjoy a
delicious cake together.
I love celebrating my birthday. ③简洁总结:收尾简洁明
了,照应了文章开头“过生
日”的主题,同时表达了个
人感受。
续表
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本文作者在介绍生日活动时,使用了have a big dinner、a bowl of long
noodles、enjoy a delicious cake等短语,使得生日活动的表达丰富多样,避免
重复。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是李华,你校英文报现面向全校同学征文,主题为“My Birthday”。请
你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向大家介绍一下你通常是如何过生日的。
My Birthday
When With whom Activities Feelings
on… family, friends 1.play games
2.eat the birthday cake
3.blow out the candles
4.make a wish
5.… …
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要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
My Birthday
I’m Li Hua. I love to celebrate my birthday!____
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【参考范文】
My Birthday
I’m Li Hua.I love to celebrate my birthday! My birthday is on 5th
January.I usually have a birthday party with my family and friends.We
buy lots of things for the party, such as fruits, drinks and card
games.We can play some games first.Then we can eat and talk.In the
evening, everyone sings the Happy Birthday song, and then I make a wish
and blow out the candles in one go.We enjoy the birthday cake and have
a good time together.I’m very happy to be with my family and friends.
【解析】链接狂K
blow out的详细讲解见狂K重点P51。
Value statement:Every birthday is a gift of life.
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