内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 人教版
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Unit 2 We’re Family!
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do you like about
your family?
Period5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.成员________
2.英俊的__________
3.在左/右边___________________
member
handsome
on the left/right
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4.在中间 _______________
5.在……近旁_________
in the middle
next to
【解析】链接狂K
next to的详细讲解见狂K重点P17。
6.玩得高兴 __________
have fun
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Here is a photo of us.(Here be句型)
→仿写:这是史密斯先生的全家福照片。
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Here is Mr Smith’s family photo.
8.【教材原句】He’s very handsome and funny.(be+形容词)
→仿写:我的妈妈美丽又聪明。
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My mother is beautiful and smart.
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9.【教材原句】He likes reading a lot.(like doing sth)
→仿写:汤姆非常喜欢打网球。
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Tom likes playing tennis very much/a lot.
10.【教材原句】She always reads me a story at night.(一般现在时)
→仿写:我姐姐每天都会花很多时间拉小提琴。
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My sister spends a lot of time playing the violin every day.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My family
I have a happy family.There are four people in my family (介绍家里有几
口人).Now let me tell you about my family.
My father is 40 years old (介绍父亲的年龄) and he is a doctor
(介绍父亲的职业).He is tall and handsome (介绍父亲的外貌).He likes
playing basketball (介绍父亲的爱好).My mother is a teacher (介绍母亲的职
业).She is 38 years old (介绍母亲的年龄).She is kind and beautiful
(介绍母亲的性格与外貌).She likes watching TV (介绍母亲的爱好).My
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brother’s name is Nick (介绍弟弟的姓名).He is four years old (介绍弟弟的
年龄).He likes playing football (介绍弟弟的爱好).I’m Mary. I am 12 and I
study in a middle school (自我介绍).I like reading (介绍自己的爱好).
I want to tell my family that I love them very much (书写结语,表达对家
人的爱).
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第3阶 以读促写
假如你是Jane,你们学校的英语校刊最近新增了“我爱我家”的栏目,并号召大
家积极投稿。你对此很感兴趣,想介绍一下你的家人。下面这张照片是你的全家
福。请你根据所给信息,以“My Family”为题写一篇短文投稿,向大家介绍一下你
的家庭成员。
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爷爷(Ben) 奶奶(Lisa)
爸爸(Alan) 妈妈(Mary)
妹妹(Cindy) 弟弟(Eric)
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写作要求:
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
I’m Jane.____
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:根据所给图片介绍家庭成员
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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__________________________________ __________________________________
My Family
I’m Jane. I’m glad to introduce my family
to all.Here is a photo of my family.
There are seven people in my family. These
two old people are my grandfather Ben and
grandmother Lisa. The man is my father Alan.
He is tall and thin. The woman is my mother
Mary. ①开头引入:文章开头直接点
题,用“I’m Jane. I’m glad to
introduce my family to all.”简
洁明了地介绍了自己的身份和
写作目的。
②照片描述:通过“Here is a
photo of my family.”自然过渡
到对家庭照片的描述,为下文
介绍家庭成员做了铺垫,非常
直接且吸引读者。
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My Family
I’m Jane. I’m glad to introduce my family
to all.Here is a photo of my family.
There are seven people in my family. These
two old people are my grandfather Ben and
grandmother Lisa. The man is my father Alan.
He is tall and thin. The woman is my mother
Mary. ③互动性与趣味性:文章中
“Who is the girl on the left?
Haha, it’s me.”这一部分通过
提问和回答的方式增加了文章
的互动性,同时也让读者在阅
读过程中感到有趣。
④文章结尾处“I have a happy
family. I love my family.”简洁
明了地道出了作者对家庭的热
爱和其幸福感。
续表
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She is beautiful and kind. The two children
on the right are my brother and sister. The boy
is Eric and he is eight years old. The girl is
my sister Cindy. She is ten years old.Who is
the girl on the left? Haha, it’s me.
I have a happy family. I love my family. ①开头引入:文章开头直接点
题,用“I’m Jane. I’m glad to
introduce my family to all.”简
洁明了地介绍了自己的身份和
写作目的。
②照片描述:通过“Here is a
photo of my family.”自然过渡
到对家庭照片的描述,为下文
介绍家庭成员做了铺垫,非常
直接且吸引读者。
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She is beautiful and kind. The two children
on the right are my brother and sister. The boy
is Eric and he is eight years old. The girl is
my sister Cindy. She is ten years old.Who is
the girl on the left? Haha, it’s me.
I have a happy family. I love my family. ③互动性与趣味性:文章中
“Who is the girl on the left?
Haha, it’s me.”这一部分通过
提问和回答的方式增加了文章
的互动性,同时也让读者在阅
读过程中感到有趣。
④文章结尾处“I have a happy
family. I love my family.”简洁
明了地道出了作者对家庭的热
爱和其幸福感。
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作者在介绍家庭成员时,巧妙地使用了“introduce… to…”、There are等,这样的
用法不仅丰富了句子结构,还避免了重复,使得文章更加流畅、生动且易于
理解。
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第4阶 实战演练
为宣传世界家庭日,你校英语报刊正在
开展以“My Family”为题的征稿活动。假如你
是张亮,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文稿
参赛。
要求: 1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
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3.文中不得出现任何真实信息;
4.词数不少于60(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.____
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
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【参考范文】
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.There are three people in my family—my parents
and me.My father is tall and handsome.He is a maths teacher.My mother
has long hair.She is a nurse.She works in a hospital.I am a
student.I’m in Grade 7 and I am 13 years old.Our favourite foods are
chicken and vegetables.On Sundays, we often play sports together
because it is good for us.
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
Value statement:Family is where life begins and love never ends.
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