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英 语
七年级上册 LJ
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Unit 2 Rain or Shine
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we feel about
the weather?
Period 4 2a—2b(大单元话题与写作)
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.有暴风雨(或暴风雪)的 ________
2.大量地;沉重地 _________
3.下雪的;雪白的 _______
4.极冷的;冰冻的 __________
5.不论是雨或是晴 _______________
6.因为 ____________
stormy
heavily
snowy
freezing
rain or shine
because of
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Climbing is hard, but we’re making good progress.(动名词作主
语)
→仿写:看着雪花(snowflake)飘落非常有趣。
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Watching the snowflakes falling is very interesting.
8.【教材原句】Hey, come and visit us some day!(祈使句)
→仿写:因为大雪,今晚待在家看电视吧。
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Stay in and watch TV tonight because of the heavy snow.
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9.【教材原句】There are many other tourists at this rest area, but they don’t
seem tired at all.(not… at all)
→仿写:今天的天气一点也不冷。
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The weather today is not cold at all.
10.【教材原句】Although the weather is bad, many people here are still in high
spirits.(although引导让步状语从句)
→仿写:虽然正在下雪,但天气并不极其寒冷。
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Although it’s snowing, the weather isn’t freezing.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Dear Tony (朋友的名字),
How’s it going? I’m having a great (形容心情的词语) time visiting
Beijing.
It’s 10 o’clock (具体时间) now. The weather is sunny (天气状况), just
right for travelling (活动).My family and I are in the Summer Palace
(地点).Look! My sister. .(人物) is dancing (活动) under the tree.My
parents (人物) are taking photos (活动) near the lake.I’m sitting on a chair
and drinking orange juice (活动).I can see some people boating on the lake
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(景象).I can hear birds singing in the park. I am feeling relaxed (感受)
now.
See you soon.
Yours,
Tom (你的名字)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
根据图片内容,写一篇关于“雪天活动”的短文。
内容要求:
(1)描述图片中的场景,包括天气、环境和人物活动;
(2)重点描写一家人在雪中的活动,比如父母在做什
么,孩子们在玩什么;
(3)简单描述背景中其他人的活动;
(4)词数80—120左右。
参考词汇:
snowflake雪花;snowball 雪球;sledge 雪橇
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以现在进行时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:根据所给图片描述相关内容
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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Look at the picture. It’s a snowy day. The ground
is covered with white snow, and snowflakes are
fallingfrom the sky .Some people are outside, enjoying
the winter weather. ①开篇简洁明了地将
读者带入了一个雪天
的情境之中。
②全文主要采用了现
在进行时,生动地描
绘了雪天中的动态场
景,使读者仿佛身临
其境。
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The parents and the child are walking carefully,
holding hands. They are wearing warm coats, scarves,
and gloves. The two kids are playing in the
snow.One is playing with a sledge excitedly, and the
other is building a small snowman .Some people are
walking their dogs . ①开篇简洁明了地将
读者带入了一个雪天
的情境之中。
②全文主要采用了现
在进行时,生动地描
绘了雪天中的动态场
景,使读者仿佛身临
其境。
续表
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The snow makes everything look
beautiful. The family and other people
are enjoying the snowy weather together.
Everyone looks happy and is having fun. ③from the sky和in the snow等介词
短语的运用使得画面感更加强烈。
④孩子们在雪中玩耍的动作生动地展
现了孩子们对雪天的热爱和他们的喜
悦心情。
作文中选用了与雪天场景紧密相关的词语,如snowy day、white snow、
snowflakes、warm coats、scarves、gloves等,这些词语的准确使用使得文章的主
题更加鲜明,画面感更加突出。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025山东济南期末]Mike一家和他的朋友们正在不同的地方度假。现在请
你以Mike 的身份陈述他们分别正在做什么事情。
要求:
(1)内容必须包括以下表格提示的信息,可适当发挥;
(2)表格中有省略号的地方,内容自拟;
(3)不要出现真实姓名、班级或者校名;
(4)词数80左右。
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Who Where Feelings Weather Activities
Mike’s family Harbin great cold;
snowy skating;making a snowman
Mike’s friend Hainan good sunny;
warm lying (躺) on the beach;
playing beach volleyball…
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone. I’m Mike. I am having a holiday with my family in
Harbin. Although it is cold and snowy, we have fun. There are so many
interesting things here. You see, my parents are skating, and I am
making a snowman. We feel very great.But my friend John spends his
holiday in Hainan. Unlike Harbin, it is sunny and warm. His mother is
lying on the beach. John and his father are playing beach volleyball.
His sister is listening to music. They also have a good time there.
They feel very good.
Dear friends, can you tell me what you are doing now?
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Value statement:Enjoy your day, come rain or shine.
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