Unit 1 Look it up! Section 3 Writing课件+嵌入音频—2025-2026学年沪教版英语八年级上册

该初中英语课件以“写百科条目介绍杰出人物”为核心，涵盖基本信息、主要成就、奖项荣誉等内容。课堂导入通过恐龙知识复习填空激活旧知，衔接人物要素Brainstorm，借助思维导图支架（如分基本信息、成就、奖项）帮助学生梳理写作框架。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过屠呦呦范文、重点词汇句式（如“毕生致力于做某事”）引导学生用第三人称、过去时态严谨叙述事实，符合百科文体要求。融入文化意识（传递杰出人物精神），指导查在线百科培养学习能力。学生通过“规划-写作-修改”流程提升写作能力，教师可借助完整任务链高效实施教学。

Unit 1 Look it up! 主题范畴：人与社会 主题群：历史、社会与文化 子主题： 对世界、国家、人民和社会进步有突出贡献的人物；科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新 Key question What can we learn from encyclopaedias? (1) use key words to look up information through online encyclopaedia. (2) know how to write an encyclopaedia entry. (3) learn writing format and some writing skills. Learning objectives 学习目标 After learning, I will be able to: death /deθ/ n. 死；死亡 whole /həʊl/ adj. 全部的；所有的 New words Review something we have learnt about dinosaurs then fill in the blanks. Pre-writing Brainstorm Some were _______ chickens. Others were ______ ten elephants. They all died out ________. Nobody knows _____. People can learn about dinosaurs from their ______. Many of them ate ______. Some ate ____. when where appearance food extinction current situation ___________ on Earth. Over ________ years before human beings. 60 million Everywhere as small as as big as plants meat suddenly why fossils Now fill in the blanks. achievements basic information personal quality ? awards & title ? What will you write about a admirable person? Writing an encyclopaedia entry Online Encyclopaedia for Teens We are calling for articles about famous people around the world. Write an encyclopaedia entry and send it to us. While writing 1 Wang Yao drew a mind map before she wrote an encyclopaedia entry about a scientist she admires. Look at the mind map and label the parts of the entry. (1)________________ (2)________________ (3)________________ Basic information Main achievements Awards and titles ① be born in ... 出生在…… ② spend one’s whole life doing sth. 一生都致力于做某事 ③ develop different kinds of ... 研发不同种类的…… ④ produce much more ... than ... 比……生产更多…… ⑤ receive honours 获得荣誉 ⑥ People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. 人们称他为“杂交水稻之父”。 重点词汇和核心句式 2 Now write a post about your friend. Who do you admire? Find information about this person and write an encyclopaedia entry. 【话题分析】 本单元是以写百科条目为主线，主要内容是介绍自己钦佩仰慕的人物等。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——如何介绍（历史/杰出）人物。在写作过程中要明确以下几点： 1. 要谈及人物基本信息、主要成就和奖项荣誉等。 2. 结合话题内容，我们在写作过程中要学会运用本单元的目标语言。第三人称、过去时态为主、重点是用严谨的语言叙述事实而非表达个人观点。 Step 1 Plan Draw your own mind map. 第一步 规划 画思维导图。 Basic information The Person Main achievements Awards and titles Guidance on writing Step 2 Write Write an encyclopaedia entry about the person you admire. Finda photo of the person you are writing about and add it to the article. 第二步 写作 写一条关于你敬佩的人的百科全书条目。找到你正在写的人物的照片，并将其添加到文章中。 Step 3 Check and revise Tick (✔) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 第三步 检查和修改 根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。 Tu Youyou Tu Youyou was born on December 30, 1930, in Ningbo, China. She is a famous pharmaceutical chemist. Her greatest achievement is discovering artemisinin, a medicine that effectively treats malaria and has saved countless lives. For her groundbreaking work, she won the 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine, becoming the first Chinese Nobel laureate in this field. She also received the Lasker Award and was honored as a “People’s Scientist” by China. EXAMPLE 小试牛刀 请你根据下面表格所给的内容提示，以百科条目的语言风格，写一篇题为“The ostrich”，80词左右的英语小短文。 名称 鸵鸟 身高 2.7米（地球上最大的鸟类） 体重 多达135公斤 栖息地 非洲沙漠的洞里 其他特征 翅膀小，不能飞；腿长而壮，擅长跑步，一小时跑60公里；以草、叶子和昆虫为食，能长时间不喝水 Post writing The ostrich Many animals are very special. The ostrich is one of them. It’s the largest of all birds on Earth. It is about 2.7 metres tall and can be up to 135 kilograms in weight. Ostriches’ wings are so small that they can not fly. However, they are good at running because their legs are long and strong. They can even run 60 kilometres an hour. Ostriches feed on grass, leaves and insects. They live in great holes in the desert of Africa, so they show ability to live without drinking water for a long time. One possible version 1. death n. 死；死亡 cause of death 死因 词性转换 die v. 死；死亡 die of 死于（通常为疾病等内因） die from 死于（通常为意外等外因） 例如：他死于一场车祸。 His cause of death was a car accident. = He died from a car accident. 2. whole adj. 全部的；所有的 固定短语 one’s whole life 毕生；某人的一生；终生 例如：不快乐的童年会给一个人的一生蒙上阴影。 相关拓展 whole也常用作名词意为“整体；全部”。作名词时常用短语有：总的来说 An unhappy childhood would cast a shadow on one’s whole life. as a whole 写作： 假设你是Su Wen，今天, 老师带你们班同学参观了历史博物馆，你们了解到许多杰出的历史人物相关信息，请根据参观心得写一篇百科条目风格的短文介绍你最钦佩的XX的生平。 要求：1. 语句通顺、语法正确、信息准确； 2. 可上网搜索更多有关写作目标人物的信息； 3. 80词左右。 $$