内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 YL
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Unit 3 Welcome to our school!
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课时同步训练
Period6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.明亮的 ________
bright
2.完美的 _________
perfect
3.现代的 ________
modern
4.特别的 _________
special
5.体育场 ______________
sports field
6.食堂;餐厅 _____________
dining hall
7.确切地说;事实上 _________
in fact
8.关心 ____________
care about
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Lots of exciting sports matches take place on it.(take place)
→ 仿写:我们学校的运动会通常在九月份举行。
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Our school sports meeting usually takes place in September.
【解析】温馨提示
take place不用于被动语态。
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10.【教材原句】Our school is not large, but it is a special place for me.
(it is… for sb)
→ 仿写:我们的俱乐部不大,但它对我们来说是个有趣的地方。
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Our club is not large, but it is an interesting place for us.
11.【教材原句】There is a reading room with computers on the top floor.
(there be)
→ 仿写:我们学校有一个图书馆和两个电脑房。
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There is a library and two computer rooms in our school.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My New School
Welcome to (表示欢迎) our school on school days. Our school looks
beautiful.I’d like to tell you something about my school (引出话题).
My school is big and beautiful (介绍学校环境).There are two classroom
buildings, one office building and a library (介绍学校设施).The sports field is
across from the library (介绍操场位置).It’s big and clean. We can do sport on
it after class.There is a blackboard, some desks and chairs in each classroom
(介绍教室设施).The classrooms are clean and bright (介绍教室环境).The
teachers here are friendly and kind.The students here study very hard. And they
are cute and outgoing (介绍学校的老师与同学).
I like my school very much (书写结语,表达对学校的喜爱).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025重庆调研]假如你是李华,一名中学生。近期,你在一个学习网站上
认识了美国网友 Lisa。现在,请你写一封邮件,向她介绍你自己以及你的新学校。
写作要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的真实名称。
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写作要点:
Dear Lisa,
I’m your new friend, Li Hua.____
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:第一、三人称
内容要点:自己的外貌、个性和爱好;学校的布局、自己最喜欢的地方等
写作框架:
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第二步 列
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高分范文 名师点评
Dear Lisa,
I’m your new friend, Li Hua. I am tall and have big eyes.
I’m very outgoing. I often help people in need I often volunteer
in the park at weekends too. I like playing basketball.If I have
time , I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends
at weekends. ①短语in
need作后置定
语,修饰名
词people;
②连词If引导
条件状语从
句;
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高分范文 名师点评
My school is not big, but it is beautiful. There is a
teaching building, a library, a playground and a canteen. My
favourite place is the library, because I like reading books .After
class, I often go to the playground with my classmates. What
about your school?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua ③连词but连
接并列句。
④连词
because引导
原因状语从
句。
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高分范文 名师点评
这篇习作要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍了自己和学校的相关情况。文中help
people in need、at weekends、like doing sth、After class、look forward to等显
示了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文中的亮点。
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025江苏连云港期中]某英语报社正在开展题为“I love my school”的征文
活动。假如你是Li Hua,请根据以下图片和文字信息用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
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内容要点:
(1)What is your school like?
(2)Which is your favourite place in your school and why?
(3)What activities do you often do at school?
要求:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua.____
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【参考范文】
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua.I study in Sunshine Middle School.Our
school is big and nice.
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left.Noticeboards
on the right tell us about school events and clubs.There’s a sports
field next to the classroom building, where we play football and
basketball.I love playing basketball there! The library is next to the
classroom building too.It has many books, and we can borrow one for two
weeks.I like reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
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