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英 语
七年级上册 RJ
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Unit2 We’re Family!
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do you like about
your family?
Period5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.成员________
2.英俊的__________
3.在左/右边___________________
4.在中间 _______________
member
handsome
on the left/right
in the middle
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5.在……近旁_________
【解析】链接狂K
next to的详细讲解见狂K重点P17。
6.玩得高兴 __________
next to
have fun
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Here’s a photo of us.(倒装句)
→仿写:这是史密斯先生的全家福。
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Here is Mr Smith’s family photo.
8.【教材原句】He’s handsome and funny.(be+adj.)
→仿写:我的妈妈美丽又聪明。
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My mother is beautiful and smart.
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9.【教材原句】… he likes reading a lot.(like doing sth)
→仿写:汤姆真的喜欢打网球。
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Tom really likes playing tennis.
10.【教材原句】She always reads me a story at night.(一般现在时)
→仿写:我姐姐每天都会花很多时间拉小提琴。
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My sister spends a lot of time playing the violin every day.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
My Family
I have a happy family.There are four people in my family (介绍家里有几
口人).Now let me tell you about my family.
My father is 40 years old (介绍父亲的年龄) and he is a doctor
(介绍职业).He is tall and handsome (介绍外貌).He likes playing basketball
(介绍爱好).My mother is a teacher (介绍母亲的职业).She is 38 years old
(介绍年龄).She is kind and beautiful (介绍性格与外貌).She likes watching
TV (介绍爱好).My brother’s name is Nick (介绍弟弟的姓名).He is four
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years old (介绍年龄).He likes playing soccer (介绍爱好).I’m Mary. I am
12 and I study in a middle school (自我介绍).I like reading (介绍自己的爱
好).
I want to tell my family that I love them very much (书写结语,表达对家
人的爱).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025河南郑州质检]假如你是Jane,你们学校的英语校刊最近新增了“我爱
我家”的栏目,并号召大家积极投稿。你对此很感兴趣,想介绍一下你的家人。下
面这张照片是你的全家福。请你根据所给的信息,以“My Family”为题写一篇英文
短文,向大家介绍一下你的家庭成员。
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爷爷(Ben) 奶奶(Lisa)
爸爸(Alan) 妈妈(Mary)
妹妹(Cindy) 弟弟(Eric)
写作要求:
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
I’m Jane.____
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第一步 审
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:根据所给图片介绍家庭成员
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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My Family
I’m Jane. I’m glad to introduce my
family to you all. Here is a photo of
my family. __________________________________
①开头引入:文章开头直接点题,用
“I’m Jane. I’m glad to introduce my
family to you all.”简洁明了地介绍了
自己的身份和写作目的。
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There are seven people in my
family. These two old people are my
grandfather Ben and grandmother Lisa.
The man is my father Alan. He is tall
and thin. The woman is my mother
Mary. She is beautiful and kind. ②照片描述:通过“Here is a photo of
my family.”自然过渡到对家庭照片的
描述,为下文介绍家庭成员做了铺
垫,非常直接且吸引读者。
续表
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The two children on the right are my
brother and sister. The boy is Eric and
he is eight years old. The girl is Cindy.
She is ten years old.Who is the girl on
the left? Ha-ha, it’s me.
I have a happy family. I love my
family. ③互动与趣味性:文章中“Who is the
girl on the left? Ha-ha, it’s me.”这一
部分通过设问的方式增加了文章的互
动性,同时也让读者在阅读过程中感
到有趣。
④文章结尾处“I have a happy family.
I love my family.”简洁明了地表达了
作者对家庭的热爱。
作者在介绍家庭成员时,巧妙地使用了These、The man、The woman等,这样不
仅丰富了表达方式,还避免了重复,使得文章更加流畅、生动且易于理解。
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第4阶 实战演练
为宣传世界家庭日,你校英语报刊正在开展以“My Family”为题的征稿活动。
假如你是张亮,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文稿参赛。
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要求: (1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现任何真实信息;
(4)词数不少于60(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.____
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
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【参考范文】
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.Here is a photo of three people in my family—my
parents and me.My father is tall and handsome.He is a maths teacher.My
mother has long hair.She is a nurse.She works in a hospital.I am a
student.I’m in Grade 7 and I am 13 years old.Our favourite foods are
chicken and vegetables.On Sundays, we often play sports together
because it is good for us.
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
Value statement: Family is where life begins and love never ends.
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