Unit 5 单元话题与写作-【初中必刷题】2025-2026学年新教材八年级上册英语同步课件（冀教版2024）

英 语 八年级上册 JJ 1 2 Unit 5 Work education 3 单元话题与写作 4 刷写作 5 写作 第1阶 高分词句储备 一、话题词汇 1.有耐心的 _________ 2.支持 _________ 3.鼓励 ___________ 4.对……有益的 __________________ 5.不仅……而且…… _______________________ patient support encourage be beneficial to not only… but also… 【解析】链接狂K “not only… but also…”结构的详细讲解见狂K重点P33。 刷写作 返回目录 6 二、佳句仿写 6.【教材原句】I’m going to help my parents prepare dinner.（help sb do） →仿写：他经常帮助我学英语。 __________________________________ He often helps me learn English. 7.【教材原句】First, physical work teaches us some important life skills. （teach sb sth） →仿写：我的同桌教我英语。 _________________________________ My deskmate teaches me English. 8.【教材原句】But we all tried our best.（try one’s best） →仿写：她尽全力来帮助我。 ________________________________ She tried her best to help me. 刷写作 返回目录 7 第2阶 经典范文模版 I’m Li Hua. Among all the people I know in my life, I think the greatest person is my mother.（引出人物） Since I was born, my mother has cared for me for 15 years. （引出事例一） She has taken good care of me every day. When I met difficulties in study or life, she always encouraged me and gave me useful advice. （引出事例二） She spent a lot of time helping me with my homework and patiently taught me how to be a kind and strong person. （引出事例三） 刷写作 返回目录 8 From her, I’ve learned the value of love and responsibility. （学到的东西） I will do my best to be a person like her and make her proud. （未来规划） There is no doubt that she is the greatest person in my eyes. （结尾点题） I love my mother. 刷写作 返回目录 9 第3阶 高分范文赏析 ［2025河北沧州调研］在成长过程中， 我们会遇到形形色色的人，经历许许多多 的事。可能是一个特别的人，可能是一本 有影响力的书，也可能是一次难忘的经历，甚至只是一句引人深省的话……他们/ 它们助力着我们的成长，使我们成为更好的自己。请以“____ helped me grow”为 题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 刷写作 返回目录 10 要求： 1.补全标题； 2.包含思维导图所有要点； 3.重点谈谈你的改变。 注意：词数100左右。文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 ___helped me grow ___ 刷写作 返回目录 11 第一步 审 体 裁：记叙文 时 态：一般现在时和一般过去时 人 称：第一人称和第三人称 内容要点：上小学的情况、父亲的帮助、认识到学习的重要性 刷写作 返回目录 12 写作框架： My father helped me grow 总述 按题目要求补充短文标题“My father helped me grow”并 总述 分述 首先描述自己开始上小学时的情况 接着讲述父亲在上学路上讲故事以及帮忙合理安排时间的 事情 阐述在这个过程中自己逐渐认识到学习的重要性并且对阅 读产生兴趣 总结 强调无论遇到什么困难父亲都会在身边，自己在父亲的陪 伴下会快乐成长 刷写作 返回目录 13 第二步 列 刷写作 返回目录 14 __________________________________ __________________________________ My father helped me grow My father always loves me and tries to help me grow. I still remember the experience of him helping me grow. Now let me tell you something about it. When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and do homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time properly. Day by day , I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books. No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. With my father’s help , I am sure I will grow up happily. ①开门见山，表明父亲是帮助“我”成长的那个人。 ②运用了When引导的时间状语从句、“so… that”引导的结果状语从句、No matter what引导的让步状语从句，使文章句型丰富。 ③Day by day、the importance of、With my father’s help等短语的使 用使文章更加顺畅。 刷写作 返回目录 15 这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的“三段式”写作结构，要点齐全，语言流畅，文中 When、“so… that”、No matter what、I am sure、Day by day、the importance of、With my father’s help等知识点的运用都表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能 力，这些短语和句型也是文章的亮点。 续表 刷写作 返回目录 16 第4阶 实战演练 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob发来电子邮件，想了解你心目中的榜样。请 你用英文写一封电子邮件告诉Bob你的榜样的性格、能力及给你的启发。 提示词语：popular, friendly, help, come up with, come true, learn from 提示问题： 1.What personality does he/she have? 2.What abilities does he/she have? 3.What have you learned from him/her? 刷写作 返回目录 17 要求：70词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数。 Dear Bob, I’m happy that I can tell you something about my role model. _________ Who is your role model? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 刷写作 返回目录 18 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I’m happy that I can tell you something about my role model. My role model is my classmate Jack. Since he is very humorous, he is popular in my class. He is friendly and always ready to help others. He always comes up with good ideas for our class activities and he hopes our class can become the top class in our school. Because of that, he becomes my role model. From him, I know that I should think actively and always be optimistic. Who is your role model? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 刷写作 返回目录 19 $$