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英 语
八年级上册 JJ
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Unit 4 Being a good learner
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.最喜欢的 ___________
2.科目 _________
3.专注于 __________
4.帮助某人做某事 _______________________
5.擅长 ____________
6.和某人分享某事 ___________________
favourite
subject
focus on
help sb (to) do sth
be good at
share sth with sb
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】You are good at physics, Li Lin.(be good at)
→仿写:我擅长英语。
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I am good at English.
8.【教材原句】Can you help me study physics?(help sb do sth)
→仿写:这帮助我提高我的听力技巧。
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This helps me improve my listening skills.
9.【教材原句】They listen to songs, play games, or recite rhymes and poems.
(listen to)
→仿写:我经常听英语节目。
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I often listen to English programs.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
How to learn English well
Hello,everyone!My name is ____ (名字).It’s a great pleasure for me to
share my ways of learning English with you here.
First, I often listen to English programs.(学英语的第一种方式)This helps
me improve my listening skills and understand native speakers better. (好处1)
Then, I like to read English books or magazines. (学英语的第二种方式) It’s
a fun way to learn new vocabulary and understand different cultures.(好处2)
Another tip is to join a club to speak English.(学英语的第三种方式)This way,
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I can practice speaking English with other students.(好处3) Lastly, I keep a
diary in English.(学英语的第四种方式) It helps me remember important events
and use the language creatively.(好处4)
I hope these tips will help you improve your English. Thanks for listening!
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假设你叫李浩,你的英国朋友Tim来
信告知,他这个学期选修了汉语,但是
学习起来倍感吃力,如听不懂中文授课,
记不住汉语语法,口头表达时紧张,写
作时没有章法等。请你根据思维导图提
示,用英文给他写一封回信。
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要求:
(1)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Tim,
It’s great to learn that you have been learning Chinese and it’s normal for
you to have met some difficulties._______________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hao
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称和第二人称为主
内容要点:listening;grammar;speaking;writing
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写作框架:
How to learn Chinese
well 总述 列出问题
想要给出建议
分述 listening
grammar
speaking
writing
总结 表达希望
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第二步 列
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__________________________________
Dear Tim,
It’s great to learn that you have been learning
Chinese and it’s normal for you to have met some
difficulties.I’d like to give you some advice on how to
learn Chinese well.
About listening, you should listen to the tapes
and catch the key words.Watching Chinese movies and
listening to Chinese songs also help. About
grammar, I suggest you should discover grammar
rules yourself because it will impress you more. About
speaking, don’t be shy and nervous. __________________________________
①开门见山,指出很高
兴蒂姆在学习汉语,并
表示自己想要给对方一
些建议。
②should为情态动词,
它的运用加强了听的重
要性;在“Watching
Chinese movies and
listening to Chinese
songs also help.”
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Just relax and speak. About writing, you can write
an outline first to help you organise your ideas.
Keeping a diary is a good way to improve your
writing. You can make a Chinese penfriend too.
I hope my advice will be of some help.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hao 这个句子中,动名词短
语的应用丰富了文章的
句式。
③最后表达了作者的期
望。
续表
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这篇习作语言流畅。其中情态动词should的应用、动名词短语Watching Chinese
movies and listening to Chinese songs作主语的应用及“I hope+宾语从句”结构的
应用都展现了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语和句型也是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是李华,请根据下表中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文,介绍英语主题
班会上同学们分享的英语学习方法及理由。
Linda Way: Take notes (记笔记).
Reason: Use notes to go over again.
Li Lei Way: Listen to the radio.
Reason: Improve his listening and speaking skills.
Cindy Way: Join in group work.
Reason: Learn from each other.
You Way: …
Reason: …
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要求:
(1)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不得出现你的真实信息;
(3)不少于80词。
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【参考范文】
Our class talked about how to learn English well yesterday.Here are
some ways.Linda thinks taking notes is important to her because she can
use notes to go over again.She always tries taking notes when she reads
books or learns key points.Li Lei likes listening to the radio.He
thinks it can improve his listening and speaking skills.How about
Cindy?Cindy enjoys joining in group work because she can learn from
others.As for me, practicing more is a good way.I think practice makes
perfect.I hope these ways can help you too.
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