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英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 8 Safe and sound
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.紧急情况 ___________
2.事故 __________
3.(使)镇静 ______
4.安然无恙 ________________
5.扑灭 _________
emergency
accident
calm
safe and sound
put out
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二、佳句仿写
6.【教材原句】Outside, people were running in all directions while pieces of
glass and bricks were raining down.(in all directions)
→仿写:台风来袭时,人们四散奔逃寻找避难处。
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As the typhoon hit, people ran in all directions to find the shelter.
7.【教材原句】They were telling us to run away from the beach.(run away
from)
→仿写:父母告诉孩子们要迅速地逃离火灾。
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Parents told their children to run away from the fire quickly.
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8.【教材原句】“I’m trapped,” I said to myself.(be trapped)
→仿写:那位老人被困在洪水里等待帮助。
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The old man was trapped in the flood and waited for help.
9.【教材原句】We ran up the hill as fast as possible.(as fast as possible)
→仿写:车祸后,他们尽快把司机送到了医院。
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They sent the driver to the hospital as fast as possible after the car accident.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to
protect ourselves in the flood. .(引出主题).
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy
season (指出高危季节).We need to prepare water, food and medicine
(准备工作) before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we
must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue
(发生洪水时的行动).Remember not to (注意事项) try to swim through the
floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm
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(做法).We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of
the water. If we need help, we can also call the police (给出具体解决措施).
In a word, it’s very important for us to keep safe in the flood
(首尾呼应).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
在我们的身边时常会发生一些火灾,所以学会怎样在火灾中保护自己是非常
重要的。请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,
已给出部分不计入总词数。
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
Recently, the fire disaster has been frequently reported on TV.So, our school
thinks it is necessary to teach students how to protect ourselves in a fire. And
here come the methods.
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:首先引出主题,然后写具体的方法和建议,最后进行总结。
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写作框架:
How to Protect
Yourself in a Fire 总述 The facts of fire accidents
Importance of protecting
分述 keep calm
try our best to get out
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总结 The useful methods
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第二步 列
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How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
Recently, the fire disaster has been frequently reported
on TV.So, our school thinks it is necessary to teach
students how to protect ourselves in a fire. And here
come the methods.
First, we should keep calm .It is very important
to keep your head clear. Second , we should try our best
to get out there.Third , we should turn off the gas and
lights . __________________________________
①运用First、
Second、Third等,
使条理清晰;
②keep calm、turn
off the gas and
lights、cut off the
electricity等短语精准
描述了应采取的措
施;
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Fourth , we should cover our nose with a wet
cloth. Fifth, remember not to jump off a window or
take the lift.Sixth , we can also call 119 for
help.Finally, we should cut off the electricity in the
house in case we could get hurt by it.
These are our school’s methods. I think these
methods are very useful to us. ③remember not to
准确描述了禁止的行
为,语言简洁有力。
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文章采用“总分总”结构,紧扣主题,灵活运用知识点,体现作者对语言结构的熟
练掌控。第二部分采用祈使句与建议句式,兼具指导性与警示性,符合文本特
点。全文逻辑清晰,要点全面,兼具教育意义与可操作性,是一篇优秀的说明
文。
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第4阶 实战演练
地震是一种自然灾害,学会在不同的地方用不同的方法自救非常重要。请结
合下面的表格,写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍自救常识。
家 教室 户外 车内
★躲在床或桌子下★用手臂
遮住头和脖子 ★躲在课桌下
★…… ★逃到空地上
★…… ★停在路边★不要
停河边
你的建议 ……
An earthquake is a kind of natural disasters. It may lead to serious results
and make a lot of people lose their homes or even lives. So it is important for
us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.
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【参考范文】
An earthquake is a kind of natural disasters.It may lead to serious
results and make a lot of people lose their homes or even lives.So it
is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.
If you are at home, it is safe to hide under the bed or strong
tables.Cover your head and neck with your arms.If you are in a
classroom, stay under the desk.After the shake stops, you can run
outside as soon as possible.When you are outside, you should quickly
run to an open space.Stay away from buildings or trees.When you are
driving, stop it by the road at once.Don’t stop your car near a river.
Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an
earthquake starts.
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