摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 6 Seasons的写作训练,核心知识点为季节话题写作。课堂导入从话题词汇(如temperature, snowman)和教材原句仿写(如be full of句型)入手,通过“高分词句储备—范文模版—赏析—实战演练”的脉络,搭建从词句到篇章的学习支架。
其亮点在于分层训练提升语言能力与思维品质,如高分范文用“Not only...but also...”增强句式节奏感,with短语描述秋叶颜色画面感强,互动提问结尾拉近读者距离。采用“词句—模版—赏析—实战”教学方法,学生能系统提升写作能力,教师可直接使用分层资源提高教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 6 Seasons
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment &
Further study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.温度 _____________
2.雪人 _________
3.发光;照耀 _______
4.湿的;潮的 _____
5.结冰的;冷冻的 ________
temperature
snowman
shine
wet
frozen
【解析】链接狂K
frozen的详细讲解见狂K重点P34。
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二、佳句仿写
6.【教材原句】Winter days are full of snow… (be full of)
→仿写:夏天大自然充满了鲜艳的色彩。
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Nature in summer is full of bright colours.
7.【教材原句】Some of them are connected with traditional festivals.
(be connected with)
→仿写:收获季与秋季紧密相连。
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The harvest season is closely connected with autumn.
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8.【教材原句】Everything is covered in deep white snow.(be covered in)
→仿写:春天,田野被野花覆盖。
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The fields are covered in wildflowers in spring.
9.【教材原句】We throw snowballs at each other, running and laughing.
(running and laughing)
→仿写:春天,孩子们在草地上奔跑欢笑。
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In spring, children are running and laughing on the grass.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Spring(介绍喜欢的季节) is my favourite season. When it comes,
everything comes back to life. Trees turn green and flowers come out as the
temperature rises. . (对该季节的描述).The weather gets warmer and days get
longer (介绍该季节的天气).People feel more comfortable (表明人们感受).
During this season, people begin to climb mountains and have a picnic near
rivers. They also fly kites (介绍人们的活动) in the parks, trying their best to
be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it.
To me, spring is full of life (介绍对该季节的印象), and it gives us
energy and hope. I love it very much.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
一年四季,天气多变,景色多姿多彩。你最喜欢哪个季节呢?请以“My
favourite season”为题目写一篇文章,介绍你最喜欢的季节。
要点:(1)What’s your favourite season?
(2)How is the weather in the season?
(3)What can you do in the season?
要求:(1)必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)词数:不少于80词。
My favourite season
Hi, everybody. Among the four seasons, I like____
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第一步审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:首先指出最喜爱的是哪一个季节,然后介绍天气和人们的相关活动,
最后可以表达一下自己的感受。
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写作框架:
My favourite season 总述 Favourite season
分述 Colour description
Weather
Activities
结尾 What is yours?
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第二步列
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高分范文
My favourite season
Hi, everybody. Among the four seasons, I
like autumn most.Not only is it beautiful, but
also it’s an enjoyable time when people enjoy
their fruits of labour.
When autumn comes, the beauty of nature is
amazing with leaves turning red, orange and
purple The weather is cool and the sky is blue. 名师点评
①用“Not only… but
also…”说明季节特征,又增
强句式节奏感。
②with短语描述秋叶颜色,
画面感十足。
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So you don’t need to bring more clothes
with you.Bring your camera with you,
because you can take photos of many
things, such as the falling leaves and the
places of interest. Autumn provides us with a
chance to feel the sweetness of labour
together with farmers.
So autumn is my favourite season.What
is yours? ③运用“祈使句+原因状语从句”,
自然引出秋日活动的建议。
④用provides us with a chance与
首段的fruits of labour形成呼应。
⑤用互动式提问结尾,拉近与读
者距离,增强文章感染力。
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本文采用“总述观点——分层论证——互动收尾”的结构,层次分明。文中运用
take photos of、places of interest 等短语,通过when引导的时间状语从句和“not
only… but also…”展现了语言运用能力。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观,他向你询问中国的天气
情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件,介绍
一下中国的气候特点,并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示:(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China?
(2)What’s your advice?
写作要求:(1)不少于80词;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息,可作适当发挥。
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Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
_________
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China.There are four seasons—
spring, summer, autumn and winter.Summer is the hottest season of the
year.It often rains heavily.And winter is the coldest.Sometimes it
snows, especially in the north of China.If you like snow, you can come
at this time of a year.But I think the best time to visit China is
spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot.It’s very
pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great
Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
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I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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