摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 4 "Hands-on fun"的DIY主题写作,从话题词汇(如DIY、instructions)、佳句仿写(如"fill…with…""a good way to")到范文模板、中考真题演练,构建递进式学习支架,帮助学生系统掌握写作要素。
其特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养,通过词汇详解(如"dangerous"链接重点)、句型仿写及范文逻辑词(First, Then)提升表达与逻辑思维,结合2024连云港中考真题实战。教师可直接使用分层模板与真题,学生能高效积累表达并应用,提升写作能力。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 4 Hands-on fun
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment &Further
study
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.自己动手 _____
2.课程 ________
3.用法说明 [pl.] ______________
4.危险的 ___________
DIY
course
instructions
dangerous
【解析】链接狂K
dangerous的详细讲解见狂K重点P22。
5.不但……而且…… _________________________
not only... but also...
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二、佳句仿写
6.【教材原句】Another time, he wanted to put up a picture on the wall, but he
hit a pipe and filled the room with water.(fill… with…)
→仿写:他们在瓶子里装满了玻璃和水。
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They filled the bottle with glass and water.
7.【教材原句】You’d better have a shelf for them… (had better)
→仿写:在开始 DIY 项目前,你最好把所有工具都准备好。
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________
You had better/You’d better prepare all the tools before starting your DIY project.
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8.【教材原句】He thinks DIY is a good way to have fun and save money.
(a good way to)
→仿写:自制蜡烛是省钱的好方法。
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Making your own candles is a good way to save money.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
I would like to tell you something about DIY (直接点题).DIY stands for
“do-it-yourself”.It’s an active way of living.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they
can get fun from it (交代原因).Also, DIY can help people. .save money
(存在的优势).
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DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may
hurt themselves if they are careless.Besides, it usually takes more time
(存在弊端).
People can learn to do DIY from teachers, parents or friends.They can also
buy books about DIY and learn by themselves (学习途径).
I think people should be careful when they do things themselves
(安全提示).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
为丰富学校的课后延时服务内容,真正把立德树人的根本任务落到实处,阳
光中学面向八年级学生增设了DIY社团。假如你是张华,你也想加入DIY 社团,
请根据以下提示信息写一封申请信。
注意:(1)词数:90左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包括所有提示要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯、语句通顺。
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Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8.____
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:首先介绍自己想加入DIY俱乐部的原因,然后分享一个DIY的故事,具
体介绍DIY的过程和感受。
写作框架:
总述 Personal information
Reasons
分述 Share the DIY story
总结 My idea of DIY
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第二步 列
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Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8.I’m
tall and I have observant eyes. I’m friendly
and helpful. I like making things by myself in
my free time. I’d like to join the DIY Club
because I’m crazy about DIY and I hope to
make more friends. __________________________________
①应用固定搭配be crazy about,
情感强烈,表达了对DIY的热
爱;
②应用“First… Then… At
last…”表示时间顺序,使文章条
理清晰,增强了叙事的逻辑性;
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I made a sandwich for my mum on her
birthday.First, I picked a piece of bread.Then I put
some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it.At last ,
I put another piece of bread on it. Mum liked the
sandwich very much and. .I felt happy .
I think using brain and hands more often is a
good way to help us be more creative.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua ③应用I felt happy表达
了自己的情感,强化了
DIY活动的意义;
④巧妙运用using brain
and hands,凸显思考
与实践相结合的理念。
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这篇习作结构严谨,叙事生动,语言简练规范,既符合申请信的写作要求,又通
过具体事例和细节描写有效地展示了个人特质。文中使用because引导原因状语从
句、应用First、Then及At last等表示顺序的词,体现了较强的语言运用能力。
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第4阶 实战演练
[2024江苏连云港中考]假如你是李华,你的交换生朋友
Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物,他来信询问制作过程,请你给他
回信,内容包括:
(1)你送的礼物是什么;
(2)你送此礼物的原因;
(3)制作的方法或过程。
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注意:(1)词数90左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.____
Yours,
Li Hua
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【参考范文】
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
It’s an unusual picture of us.I hope it can remind you of the
happy time we were together.
Here is how to make it.First, choose a picture you like.It should
be large and clear.Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and
draw along the lines.Then stick colourful beans and rice on the paper
according to the drawing.Make sure you choose the proper colour for
each part so that your picture may look natural.
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Hope you enjoy it.Looking forward to your work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】知识拓展
cover… with… 用……覆盖……
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