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英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 3 To be a good learner
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) & Assessment &
Further study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.学习者 _________
2.好奇的 _________
3.交谈;谈话 ______________
4.发音 ___________
5.正确地 ___________
6.为了 _____________
7.尽可能 ___________________
learner
curious
conversation
pronounce
correctly
in order to
as... as possible
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二、佳句仿写
8.【教材原句】I’ll learn more new words through reading.(through doing sth)
→仿写:我通过读故事更好地了解不同文化。
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I learn about different cultures better through reading stories.
9.【教材原句】To reach a goal, big or small, it is important to take the first
step.(it is+adj.+to do sth)
→仿写:事实上,学好英语并不难。
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In fact, it isn’t difficult to learn English well.
10.【教材原句】… I can express myself in English very well.(express oneself)
→仿写:加入英语俱乐部,更轻松地用英语表达自己。
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Join the English club and express yourself in English more easily.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
To be good learners(表示目的), we should have good habits and ways
(强调习惯和方法) of learning.
We need to get ready for (强调准备) our lessons before class and always
listen carefully in class (课堂行为).After class, we must go over the lessons
and finish our homework (课后行为) on time (强调时效性).It’s good to
study in groups (学习方式) and we can help each other (互助行为).As a
student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sport and keep healthy
(健康习惯).We should do more reading (强调阅读) in our free time. If we
have any problems, we’d better ask others for help (寻求帮助).
I hope all these will be helpful to (带来帮助) you.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
学习英语不是一件容易的事情,不
过万事都有规律可循,请根据思维导图
的提示,结合自己的学习经验,以“How
to Learn English Well”为题,写一篇英
语短文。
要求:(1)应包含思维导图提示中的所有要点,可适当进行拓展;
(2)词数不少于80。
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How to Learn English Well
As English is widely used throughout the world, it becomes more and more
important. Here are some suggestions about how to learn English well.
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称
内容要点:介绍学好英语的建议,即课前、课中以及课后的具体做法。最后明确
努力学习很重要,但是别忘了做运动,保持健康。
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写作框架:
How to Learn
English Well 总述 universality (广泛性)
importance
分述 before class, in class, after class
in free time
as much as possible
总结 work hard, do sport and keep healthy
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第二步 列
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How to Learn English Well
As English is widely used throughout the
world,it becomes more and more
important .Here are some suggestions about
how to learn English well. __________________________________
①is widely used精准描述了英
语的广泛使用,more and
more important则突出英语的
地位,为建议部分做铺垫;
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As a good learner, we should have good
habits and ways in learning. We should
preview before class We need to listen
carefully and take notes in class.After class
we must review what we have learnt. We should
read English newspapers in our free time. We
should speak out as much as possible. It’s good
to study in groups and help each other . ②before class、in class、
After class形成完整的学习闭
环,展示清晰的学习方法;
③study in groups and help
each other体现合作学习的理
念,ask others for help彰显主
动学习的态度;
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If we have any problems, we’d better ask others
for help .We should watch more English
moviesand join an English club .We
should listen to English songs .
As a student, working hard is important,
but don’t forget to do sport and keep healthy . ④watch more English
movies、join an English
club、listen to English songs
三组短语进一步丰富了文章的
内容;
⑤working hard与do sport and
keep healthy互补,强调健康
与学习同等重要。
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这篇文章采用“现状分析——具体策略——综合建议”的结构,层次分明,逻辑严
谨。文章使用“As a good learner…”“As a student…”等短语,过渡自然,衔接流
畅。特别值得肯定的是结尾段将勤奋学习与保持健康相结合,体现了全面发展
观。
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第4阶 实战演练
假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查,并征求
同学们对英语教学的建议。请按照下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语
学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
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项 目 内 容
你对英语的认识 1.英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言;2.学英语有助于了解世
界上不同的文化。
你目前的英语水平 1.能用英语与同学进行交流;2.喜欢演讲,去年在演讲比赛
中获奖;……
你在英语学习中存在
的问题 1.不能正确地遵循语法规则;2.写作中有时不能清楚地表达
自己;……
你对英语教学的建议 …… (学生自己发挥,至少一点)
要求:(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
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(2)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English.
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I hope our school will consider my advice.
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【参考范文】
I am Li Hua.Here are some of my thoughts about English.
I think English is the most widely used language in the
world.Learning English helps us understand different cultures in the
world.At present I can communicate with my classmates in English.I also
like speeches.I won a prize in the speech contest last year.I believe
English can help me improve my communication skills.However, I have
some problems with learning English.I can’t follow the grammar rules
correctly.Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing.I often
find it hard to remember more new words.At last, I think teachers
should communicate with us in English more in class.
I hope our school will consider my advice.
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