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英 语
八年级上册 YL
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Unit 1 Friendship
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.友谊 ____________
friendship
2.幽默的 __________
humorous
3.不开心的 _________
unhappy
4.值得信赖的 _____________
trustworthy
5.厌倦的;烦闷的 _______
bored
6.相信 _________
believe
7.保密 ______________
keep secrets
8.与某人和睦相处 __________________
get along with sb
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Kind and helpful, Betty is ready to help anyone any time.
(be ready to)
→仿写:当朋友们在学习上遇到困难时,汤姆总是乐于帮助他们。
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When his friends have problems in study, Tom is always ready to help
them.
10.【教材原句】Betty, my best friend, is a slim girl with big bright eyes.
(with表示伴随)
→仿写:简是一个有着长发和大眼睛的漂亮女孩。
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Jane is a pretty girl with long hair and big eyes.
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11.【教材原句】When something worries me, I always go to her.(go to sb)
→仿写:当我感到担心或不高兴时,我总是可以去找他。
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When I feel worried or unhappy, I can always go to him.
12.【教材原句】Max has a great sense of humour.(a sense of humour)
→仿写:我最好的朋友有很好的幽默感。
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My best friend has a good sense of humour.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
I have a new English friend now. She is called Jane (介绍姓名).And she
is one of my good friends (好友范围) now.
Jane is a pretty girl with long hair and big eyes (介绍外貌).She wears
glasses (介绍配饰) and the glasses make her look clever (表达情感).Jane
likes reading and singing (介绍爱好).She is a helpful and friendly (介绍个性)
girl. Jane is good at drawing (介绍特长).Jane says she wants to be a good
teacher (个人愿望) and make friends with us.
Do you want to be (表达意愿) one of her friends? I am sure
(提出希望) you will like her when you see her.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是刘英,请根据表格中提供的信息写一篇短文,介绍你和你的好朋友
琳达的相同之处和不同之处。80词左右。
不同点 相同点
琳达 (1)比我高,比我文静;
(2)英语比我学得好;
(3)喜欢看电视。 (1)黑眼睛,黑头发;
(2)喜欢运动;
(3)喜欢阅读,通常周末一
起去图书馆。
我 (1)性格外向;
(2)语文学得好;
(3)喜欢上网。
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:外貌、性格、爱好等方面的异同
写作框架:
My friend
and me 总述 greetings &names
分述 appearances (similarities and differences)
characters (similarities and differences)
hobbies (similarities and differences)
总结 wishes
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第二步 列
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My friend and me
Hello, everyone! My name is Liu Ying. I
want to tell you something about my best friend
Linda and me.
In some ways we are the same. We both
have black eyes and black hair. We both like
sports and reading. At weekends we usually go
to the library together. __________________________________
①In some ways作为段落主
题句的核心短语,有效统领
内容的逻辑层次;
②“both… and…”结构精准
呈现两人的共性特征,增强
表达的对称性;
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But in some ways we are different. She is
taller and quieter than me. She is better at English
than me. She likes watching TV.But I’m a little
more outgoing than her. I like going online in
my free time. And I’m good at Chinese.
We often help each other and I hope we
can be friends forever. ③连续运用taller、quieter、
better、more outgoing构建多
维对比框架,突出人物差
异;
④用连词 and连接动作与愿
望,深化主题立意。
续表
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这篇习作运用了“总——分——总”的写作结构,首段点明写作对象,中间两个段
落从外貌、性格、爱好等多角度展开对比,末段升华友谊主题,逻辑清晰完整。
语言上灵活运用比较级及生活化短语,如go to the library、help each other等,
充分展现了基础的语法应用能力,较好地完成了对比描述任务,展现了清晰的思
维脉络与扎实的语言功底。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025江苏南京调研]学校英语广播站正在开展以“The Story Between My
Best Friend and Me”为题的征文活动。请你根据参考信息,简单描述你最好的朋
友的一些显著特质(适当运用比较级或最高级),并说说你们之间的故事,尤其
是难忘的或者触动你内心的故事。
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥;文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。
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参考信息:
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【参考范文】
The Story Between My Best Friend and Me
My best friend is Lily.She has bigger eyes and longer hair than
me.She is also more outgoing.We both like game shows and sports.We
often play badminton together.And neither of us likes watching TV.
We have a lot of warm stories.Once, I failed an important exam.I
was so sad that I didn’t want to talk to anyone.But Lily was there to
listen.She cared about my feelings and helped me with my study.She told
me that failure is the mother of success.
That’s the story between my best friend and me.It’s full of love
and warmth.
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知识拓展
“neither+助动词/be动词/情态动词+sb/sth”表示“某人/某物也不……”。
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