摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册“Same or Different?”比较类话题写作,核心涵盖形容词副词原级/比较级及话题词汇(如compare, outgoing)。通过话题词汇积累、教材原句佳句仿写导入,衔接经典范文模板(总-分-总结构)和写作框架(分述外貌、性格等),搭建从词句到篇章的学习支架,助力学生逐步掌握写作方法。
其亮点在于分层进阶设计与核心素养融合,通过佳句仿写提升语言表达准确性(语言能力),范文赏析中“相同-不同”对比分析培养逻辑思维(思维品质),提供模板、框架及名师点评帮助学生掌握学习策略(学习能力)。学生能系统提升写作能力,教师可直接用于分层教学,高效推进课堂。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 RJ
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Unit 3 Same or Different?
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.比较 _________
2.外向的 __________
3.外貌 ____________
4.相似之处 ____________
5.有共同之处 ____________________
6.伸手触碰 ___________
compare
outgoing
appearance
similarity
have sth in common
reach for
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I work as hard as her!(as… as…)
→仿写:我的朋友和我一样严肃。
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My friend is as serious as me.
8.【教材原句】What do Emma and Ella have in common? (have… in common)
→仿写:我最好的朋友和我有许多共同之处。
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My best friend and I have a lot in common.
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9.【教材原句】Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.(thanks to…)
→仿写: 多亏了我朋友的帮助,我才最终解决了这个难题。
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Thanks to my friend’s help, I solved the problem at last.
链接狂K
thanks to 的详细讲解见狂K重点P20。
10.【教材原句】You can understand people by knowing their friends.(by doing
sth)
→仿写:她通过帮助我学英语提升了我们的友谊。
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She improved our friendship by helping me with English.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
I don’t mind if my friends are similar to me or different.(表明观点)
I have several friends, and Linda is my best friend(实例支撑).In some
ways, we look the same.We both have blue eyes and blonde hair.We have
the same hobbies.Both of us like (相同之处) reading and playing sports.But
in some ways, we are different.She is taller than me and she is quieter.She is
more hard-working than me and she often gets better grades.But I am more
outgoing than her, and I am funnier.I am better than her at tennis(不同之处).
Our similarities and differences help us grow together.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Kelly 想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况,请
你根据下面的表格,给Kelly 回一封电子邮件,告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和
不同之处。
你和你最好的朋友的异同 外貌
性格
爱好
学习
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要求: (1)灵活运用所学的形容词、副词的原级和比较级(至少6句);
(2)词数80左右,使用电子邮件的格式,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and
me.____
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:介绍自己与朋友在外貌、性格、爱好、学习方面的异同
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写作框架:
My friend and me 总述 My friend
分述 Appearance
Personality
Hobby
Study
总述 I will value our friendship.
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第二步 列
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__________________________________ __________________________________
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something about
my best friend and me.
Li Sisi is my best friend. She’s as tall as me, but she’s
thinner than I am. We both have long straight hair, but
mine is longer than hers. We both like dancing, but I dance
better than her. She’s more outgoing than I am. That’s why
she has more friends than me. She’s talented in language, ①用“as… as…”
结构来介绍两人
的相同点;
②连词so表示因
果关系,丰富了
文章的句式;
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so she’s better at English than me. She often helps me with
English.
A friend is easier lost than found. I will value our
friendship.
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua ③这两句表达了
作者对于交朋友
的看法,表明了
自己与好朋友之
间的深厚情感。
这篇短文运用了“总——分——总”的写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍
了自己与好朋友的相关情况。文中的“as… as…”、than、both like、be talented
in、be better at、“help sb with…”等结构是亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025湖北武汉期中]假如你是Fu Xing,最近你认识了一位新朋友Dave,你
觉得他符合你的择友标准,你准备发邮件和你的笔友Teng Fei分享此事。请你根
据以下内容提示,用英语介绍你的新朋友以及你们之间的异同。
(1)What is your new friend like?
(2)Are you the same or different?How?
(3)What do you think a true friend should be like?
(4)Say more about both of you.
注意: 文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;已给出的部分不计入总词数。
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Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going?____
Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
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【参考范文】
Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going? I can’t wait to tell you that I make a
new friend, Dave.We are the same age.He is of medium build.He is funny
and always makes me laugh.
He is similar to me in some ways.We both like basketball, but he
plays it better than me.He is really kind and often helps me in
basketball.So I’m getting better at basketball.Also, we like reading
in our free time.However, we are a little different.I always get better
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grades than he does.Maybe I should give him more help with his
schoolwork.
In my opinion, a true friend should reach for your hand and touch
your heart.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
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知识拓展
be similar in意为“在……方面相似”。
Value statement:We are different, but we can be stronger together.
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