摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 3“Same or Different?”主题写作,围绕比较类话题,通过教材原句仿写(如as...as...、thanks to...句型)衔接compare、outgoing等话题词汇,搭建从词句储备(第1阶)到范文模版(第2阶“观点-实例-异同-总结”结构)再到实战演练(第4阶邮件写作)的学习支架,形成连贯的写作能力培养脉络。
其亮点在于以语言能力为核心,整合话题词汇、核心句型(如by doing sth)与篇章训练,实现输入到输出转化;结合思维品质,通过“相同-不同”对比分析(如范文中外貌、性格等异同描述)培养逻辑思维;依托学习能力,提供“高分范文赏析”(名师点评“as...as...、both like”等亮点)和写作框架表格,指导方法。学生能逐步掌握比较类写作技巧,教师可直接用结构化资源提升教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 RJ
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Unit 3 Same or Different?
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.比较 _________
2.外向的 __________
3.外貌 ____________
4.相似之处 ____________
5.有共同之处 ____________________
6.伸手触碰 ___________
compare
outgoing
appearance
similarity
have sth in common
reach for
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I work as hard as her!(as… as…)
→仿写:我的朋友和我一样严肃。
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My friend is as serious as me.
8.【教材原句】What do Emma and Ella have in common? (have… in common)
→仿写:我最好的朋友和我有许多共同之处。
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My best friend and I have a lot in common.
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9.【教材原句】Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.(thanks to…)
→仿写: 多亏了我朋友的帮助,我才最终解决了这个难题。
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Thanks to my friend’s help, I solved the problem at last.
链接狂K
thanks to 的详细讲解见狂K重点P20。
10.【教材原句】You can understand people by knowing their friends.(by doing
sth)
→仿写:她通过帮助我学英语提升了我们的友谊。
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She improved our friendship by helping me with English.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
I don’t mind if my friends are similar to me or different.(表明观点)
I have several friends, and Linda is my best friend.(实例支撑)In some
ways, we look the same.We both have blue eyes and blond hair.We have
the same hobbies.Both of us like reading and playing sports.(相同之处)But
in some ways, we are different.She is taller than me and she is quieter.She is
more hard-working than me and she often gets better grades.But I am more
outgoing than her, and I am funnier.I am better than her at tennis.(不同之处)
Our similarities and differences help us grow together.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Kelly 想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况,请
你根据下面的表格,给Kelly 回一封电子邮件,告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和
不同之处。
你和你最好的朋友的异同 外貌
性格
爱好
学习
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要求: (1)灵活运用所学的形容词、副词的原级和比较级(至少6句);
(2)词数80左右,使用电子邮件的格式,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and
me.__
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:介绍自己与朋友在外貌、性格、爱好、学习方面的异同
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写作框架:
My friend and me 总述 My friend
分述 Appearance
Personality
Hobby
Study
总述 I will value our friendship.
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第二步 列
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高分范文 名师点评
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something about
my best friend and me.
Li Sisi is my best friend. She’s as tall as me, but she’s
thinner than I am. We both have long straight hair, but
mine is longer than hers. We both like dancing, but I dance
better than her. She’s more outgoing than I am. That’s why
she has more friends than me. ①用“as… as…”
结构来介绍两人
的相同点;
②连词so表示因
果关系,丰富了
文章的句式;
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高分范文 名师点评
She’s talented in language, so she’s better at English than
me. She often helps me with English.
A friend is easier lost than found. I will value our
friendship.
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua ③这两句表达了
作者对于交朋友
的看法,表明了
自己与好朋友之
间的深厚情感。
续表
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高分范文 名师点评
这篇短文运用了“总分总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍
了自己与好朋友的相关情况。文中的“as… as…”、than、both like、be talented
in、be better at、“help sb with…”等结构是亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025湖北武汉期中]假如你是Fu Xing,最近你认识了一位新朋友Dave,你
觉得他符合你的择友标准,你准备发邮件和你的笔友Teng Fei分享此事。请你根
据以下内容提示,用英语介绍你的新朋友以及你们之间的异同。
(1)What is your new friend like?
(2)Are you the same or different?How?
(3)What do you think a true friend should be like?
(4)Say more about both of you.
注意: 文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;已给出的部分不计入总词数。
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Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going?____
Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
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【参考范文】
Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going? I can’t wait to tell you that I make a
new friend, Dave.We are the same age.He is of medium build.He is funny
and always makes me laugh.
He is similar to me in some ways.We both like basketball, but he
plays it better than me.He is really kind and often helps me in
basketball.So I’m getting better at basketball.Also, we like reading
in our free time.However, we are a little different.I always get better
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grades than he does.Maybe I should give him more help with his
schoolwork.
In my opinion, a true friend should reach for your hand and touch
your heart.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
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Value statement:We are different, but we can be stronger together.
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