摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦“Home Sweet Home”话题写作,通过话题词汇(如decorate, scissors)和教材原句仿写(如can’t wait to do sth)导入,搭建从词句储备到范文模板再到实战演练的学习支架,帮助学生衔接知识点,逐步掌握写作技能。
其亮点在于分层进阶训练,通过第1阶高分词句积累(如剪纸paper-cut)、第2阶范文模板(家庭DIY活动分工)到第4阶实战演练(Family Cleaning写作),培养学生语言能力(词句运用)和思维品质(写作框架分析)。采用“审、列”步骤解析范文(如萨姆邮件回复的体裁、时态分析),结合可编辑课件设计,学生能系统提升写作能力,教师可灵活调整内容,提高教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 RJ
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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.装饰;装潢 __________
2.剪刀 __________
3.打包 _________
4.挂起;挂断电话 _________
5.清扫 __________
6.剪纸 ___________
decorate
scissors
pack up
hang up
clean up
paper-cut
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I can’t wait to show them our new house! (can’t wait to do sth)
→仿写:我迫不及待地想装饰我的新家。
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I can’t wait to decorate my new home.
8.【教材原句】Yes, but now we need to get ready for their arrival.(get ready
for)
→仿写:妈妈正在为姥爷的到来做准备。
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Mum is getting ready for Grandpa’s arrival.
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9.【教材原句】… I saw Grandpa and my little cousin standing in the cold wind
waiting for us.(see sb doing sth)
→仿写:当我起床时,我看见我妈妈正在像往常一样为全家人做早饭。
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When I got up, I saw my mum cooking breakfast for the whole family as
usual.
10.【教材原句】I shared the snacks with my cousin and told Grandpa about
school.(share sth with sb)
→仿写:我喜欢在晚餐时和我的家人分享有趣的故事。
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I like to share funny stories with my family during dinner time.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone.I am so excited to share our wonderful family activity with you.
(表达情绪)
Last weekend, we decided to have a DIY project at home.(介绍活动及地点)
My father prepared all the materials we needed, like wood boards, glue and
paint.My mother designed the pattern. .we were going to make.I helped my little
brother cut. .the small pieces of wood carefully.(介绍家庭成员分工)
We worked together and finally made a beautiful wooden bookshelf.
(介绍活动成果) It was not only a useful item but also a symbol of our
family’s teamwork.
We all felt a great sense of achievement.(表达感受) I hope we can have
more such activities in the future.(表达希望)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏常州期中]假如你是吉米,你的好朋友萨姆要搬进新居,他想向
你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识回复邮
件,表达你的建议。
Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re
decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I
often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall?
What can make me feel energetic (精力旺盛的)? Could you please offer me
some advice?
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
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写作要求: (1)要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数不少于100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
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Yours,
Jimmy
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第二人称为主
内容要点:根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议,适当增加细节。
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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高考范文 名师点评
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a
new flat with your own bedroom.
A bedroom should make you
feel relaxed , so I think it might be a good
idea to paint the wall light blue. ①文章开篇引出话题——萨姆
搬到了一个有自己卧室的新住
房,让读者迅速了解信件的核
心内容。这种开门见山的方式
使文章结构清晰,便于读者跟
随作者的思路。
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高考范文 名师点评
Blue can bring peace to your mind and
body. As a middle school student, you always
have much pressure and feel stressed easily. So
blue is the best colour.As too much schoolwork
makes you feel tired easily, you need
energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d
better put some green plants in your bedroom.
You can also hang some pictures of nature
on the wall. ②文章使用了relaxed、peace、
energetic、nature、full of life等
词语,生动地描述了卧室应具
备的氛围,同时也传递出一种
积极的生活态度。
③文章运用了简单句、复合句
等多种句式,读起来富有节奏
感。
续表
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高考范文 名师点评
It’s also a good idea to put some flowers by
the window. They can make the room full of
life and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will be helpful and
that you will enjoy your new life !
Yours,
Jimmy ④结尾处的you will enjoy your
new life表达了作者对萨姆的美
好祝愿,使整封邮件充满了温
暖和正能量。
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高考范文 名师点评
作文结构清晰,情感真挚,从颜色选择到自然装饰均给出具体建议。语法规范,
句式多样,如As引出原因,建议部分通过“You’d better…”和“You can also…”提
供多样的方案。全文衔接流畅,既展现出对收信人生活状态的理解,又给出具体
可行的建议,语言简洁实用。
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第4阶 实战演练
请根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文,以“Family Cleaning”为题,描述一次家
庭大扫除活动。要点如下:
(1)时间:周六上午;地点:家里;人物:全家人。
(2)具体分工:爸爸负责打扫地板和清理窗户,妈妈整理房间和洗衣服,我
和弟弟收拾玩具和书籍。
(3)感受:我们都很有成就感,希望以后多进行这样的活动。
(4)80词左右。
Family Cleaning
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【参考范文】
Family Cleaning
Last Saturday morning, my family had a big cleanup at home.Everyone
took part in it.
First, we divided the tasks.My father was in charge of sweeping the
floor and cleaning the windows.My mother tidied up the rooms and did
the laundry.My little brother and I were responsible for putting away
toys and books.During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there
was laughter all the time.
Finally, our home became clean and tidy.We all felt a strong sense
of achievement.I hope we. .can have more such meaningful activities in
the future.
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链接狂K
情态动词can表示请求的详细讲解见狂K重点P15。
Value statement:East or west, home is the best.
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