摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Happy Holiday”主题写作,从话题词汇(如vacation, travel)和佳句仿写(如“somewhere special”“so…that…”句型)切入,通过经典范文模板搭建框架,经高分范文赏析深化结构理解,最终以实战演练巩固,形成从词句积累到篇章写作的学习支架。
其亮点在于分层递进训练,融合语言能力(词句储备与句型运用)、思维品质(范文赏析中的审题与结构分析)和学习能力(实战演练的任务驱动)。例如通过“thousands of”链接拓展词汇深度,用“总-分-总”框架引导逻辑构建,结合真题演练提升应用能力。学生能系统掌握写作技巧,教师可借助结构化资源高效教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 RJ
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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.假期;度假 __________
2.旅行 _____________
3.厌倦的;烦闷的 _______
4.忘记;遗忘 ________
5.数以千计的;成千上万的 ______________
vacation
travel/trip
bored
forget
thousands of
链接狂K
thousands of 的详细讲解见狂K重点P5。
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6.在阳光下 ____________
7.转身;翻转 _____________
8.寻找 __________
in the sun
turn around
look for
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting? (不定代词+形容词)
→仿写:孩子们总是期待去一个特别的地方。
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The children always look forward to going somewhere special.
10.【教材原句】… I was ready to go on a holiday somewhere.(ready to do sth)
→仿写:我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
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I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
11.【教材原句】We were so happy that we didn’t notice the time.(so… that…)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于孩子们都不想离开了。
_______________________________________________________________________
________________
The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids didn’t
want to leave.
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12.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn’t feel like eating because I felt sick.
(feel like doing sth)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
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On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big meal
for my family to celebrate the vacation.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Tom (介绍姓名).I am very excited to (表达情绪)
share my vacation experiences with you. Now I will tell you all about my last
holiday.
I went to Hainan during the summer vacation (介绍假期时间和度假地
点).The weather (介绍天气) there was sunny and warm.The beaches
(介绍当地环境) were beautiful with clear blue water. I tried many water
sports like surfing and diving (介绍游玩项目). I also visited some local
villages and learnt a lot about their traditional culture (介绍其他活动).
It was really an unforgettable vacation (总结感受).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
请根据下表提供的信息,以“My Winter Vacation”为题,用英语写一篇介绍自
己寒假经历的短文。80 词左右。
时间 去年寒假
地点 北京
活动 参观故宫博物院,爬长城,品尝北京烤鸭
感受 学到很多历史知识,玩得很开心
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My Winter Vacation
第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:一般过去时
人 称:第一人称
内容要点:假期时间、地点、活动、感受
写作框架:总——分——总
My Winter Vacation 开头 引出寒假经历
中间 详细描述在北京的活动
结尾 总结感受
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第二步 列
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高分范文 名师点评
My Winter Vacation
Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my
family. It was an amazing trip.
First, we visited the Palace Museum. The ancient
buildings there were so beautiful that I was deeply
attracted by their long history. Then we climbed the Great
Wall. Standing on it, I could see the beautiful scenery
around. ①“so… that…”结构
生动地描绘出故宫建
筑的精美,增强了语
言表现力;
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高分范文 名师点评
It was really a wonderful experience.Besides , we also
tasted the famous Beijing Roast Duck. It was so
delicious!
I really had a great time during this winter vacation.I
not only had fun but also learnt a lot about Chinese
history. ②Besides使句子过渡
自然,丰富了文章内
容;
③结尾总结全面,体
现了旅行的收获。
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高分范文 名师点评
这篇习作结构清晰,按照时间和活动顺序,完整地讲述了作者寒假在北京的经
历。文中运用了 went to、visited、climbed、tasted等一般过去时的动词
(短语),准确体现时态。be attracted by、wonderful等词语的运用提升了文章
档次,使描述更加生动形象。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025云南玉溪期末]读万卷书不如行万里路。不少人利用假期去旅行,丰
富自己的假期生活,轻松愉悦的假期旅行总是能给我们留下美好的回忆。现你校
校刊正在开展主题征文活动,请以“My ____ Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向
专栏投稿,分享你的一次旅行经历,并谈谈你的感受,或说说旅行给你带来的积
极影响。
要求: (1)请先将题目补充完整,全文词数不少于80;
(2)语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My ____ Trip
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【参考范文】
My Exciting Trip
Last summer vacation, my family and I went on a trip to the
mountains.It was a wonderful experience for all of us.We climbed along
the mountain paths, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery.At the
top, we saw a breathtaking view of the valley below.We also picked wild
flowers and took lots of photos.
This trip made me realize the importance of family time and the
beauty of nature.I felt relaxed and happy during the trip.It also gave
me courage to face challenges in life.I’ll never forget this family
trip!
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Value statement:A holiday is a time to relax, enjoy life, and make memories.
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