摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册“朋友异同”主题写作,从话题词汇(如compare, outgoing)和佳句仿写(as…as…等结构)切入,搭建“词句储备—范文模板—实战演练”的学习支架,引导学生逐步掌握写作脉络。
其亮点在于通过思维导图梳理“外貌、性格等异同”写作结构,结合佳句仿写(如thanks to…句式)和“总—分—总”范文模板,培养学生语言能力与思维品质。实战演练设置演讲比赛情境,提升学习能力。学生能系统提升写作表达,教师可直接用于教学,提高备课效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 人教版
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Unit 3 Same or Different?
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.比较_________
2.外向的 __________
3.外貌 ____________
4.相似之处 ____________
5.有共同之处 ____________________
6.伸手触碰___________
compare
outgoing
appearance
similarity
have sth in common
reach for
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I work as hard as her!(as… as…)
→仿写:我的朋友和我一样严肃。
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My friend is as serious as me.
8.【教材原句】What do Ella and Emma have in common? (have… in common)
→仿写:我最好的朋友和我有许多共同之处。
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My best friend and I have a lot in common.
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9.【教材原句】Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.(thanks to…)
→仿写:多亏了我朋友的帮助,我最终解决了这个难题。
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Thanks to my friend’s help, I solved the problem at last/finally.
10.【教材原句】You can understand people by knowing their friends.(by doing
sth)
→仿写:她通过帮助我学英语提升了我们的友谊。
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She improved our friendship by helping me with English.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
I don’t mind if my friends are similar to me or different from me.
(表明观点)
I have several friends,and Linda is my best friend.(实例支撑) In some
ways, we look the same. We both have blue eyes and blonde hair. We have
the same hobbies.Both of us like reading and playing sports.(相同之处)But in
some ways,we are different. She is taller than me and she is quieter.She is
more hard-working than me and she often gets better grades.But I am more
outgoing than her, and I am funnier.I am better than her at tennis.(不同之处)
Our similarities and differences help us grow together.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Kelly 想了解你和你最好朋友的一些情况。请你
根据下面的思维导图和实际情况,给Kelly 回一封电子邮件,告诉她你和你最好朋
友的相同和不同之处。
你和你最好朋友的异同 外貌
性格
爱好
学习
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要求:(1)灵活运用所学的形容词、副词的原级和比较级(至少6句);
(2)词数80左右,电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and
me.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:外貌、性格、爱好、学习
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写作框架:
My friend and me 总述 My friend
分述 Appearance
Personality
Hobby
Study
总述 I will value our friendship.
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第二步 列
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Dear Kelly,
How’s it going?I’m writing to tell you something
about my best friend and me.
Li Sisi is my best friend. She’s as tall as me, but
she’s thinner than I am. We both have long straight
hair,but mine is longer than hers. We both like
dancing, but I dance better than her. She’s more
outgoing than I am. __________________________________
①用“as… as…”同级
比较来介绍两人的相
同点;
②连词so表示因果关
系,丰富了文章的句
式;
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That’s why she has more friends than me. She’s talented
in language, so she’s better at English than me. She
often helps me with English.
A friend is easier lost than found. I will value our
friendship.
Yours,
Li Hua ③文章最后两句表达
了作者对于交朋友的
看法,表明了自己与
好朋友之间的深厚情
感。
这篇习作运用了“总——分——总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流
畅,全面介绍了自己与好朋友的相关情况。文中的“as… as…”、than、both
like、be talented in、be better at、help sb with sth等的使用是亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025浙江金华期末]友谊就像花朵,在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像风帆,
在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契,是一种温暖,是迷茫时的明灯,
是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。
假如你是李华,你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊(Value Our Friendship)”为主
题的英语演讲比赛。请用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍谁是你最好的朋友、你们之间
的相似点(similarity)和不同点,以及应该怎样珍惜朋友。
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参考信息:(1)Who is your best friend?
(2)What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have?
(3)What should you do to value your friendship?
要求:1.80—120词;2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【参考范文】
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.My best friend is
Tom.He is tall and outgoing.He has black eyes and black hair.He is very
thin.He is more hard-working than me.I am good at English, but he does
well in maths.We like playing basketball.Both he and I like sports
shows.Differences are not important in a friendship.We can respect and
learn from each other.I cherish our friendship a lot.When we are in
trouble, we care about each other.We always encourage each other too.I
think we can be friends forever.
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Value statement:We are different, but we can be stronger together.
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