摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“家庭活动与装修”主题写作展开,涵盖话题词汇(如decorate, scissors)、佳句仿写(教材原句到仿写句子)、范文模版及实战演练,通过词汇句型积累到篇章写作的支架设计,帮助学生逐步掌握写作要点。
其亮点在于分阶递进训练,结合语言能力(词句储备与仿写应用)和思维品质(范文赏析中审题、列结构培养逻辑),如“佳句仿写”链接教材与表达,“实战演练”融入期末真题。教师可借助可编辑课件和超链接优化教学,学生能提升写作能力与逻辑思维。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 人教版
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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.装饰__________
2.剪刀__________
3.打包_________
4.挂起_________
5.清扫__________
6.剪纸___________
decorate
scissors
pack up
hang up
clean up
paper-cut
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I can’t wait to show them our new house! (can’t wait to do sth)
→仿写:我迫不及待地想装饰我的新家。
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I can’t wait to decorate my new home.
8.【教材原句】Yes, but now we need to get ready for their arrival.(get ready
for)
→仿写:妈妈正在为我外公的到来做准备。
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Mum is getting ready for my grandpa’s arrival.
【解析】链接狂K
ready的详细讲解见狂K重点P3。
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9.【教材原句】I shared the snacks with my cousin and told Grandpa about
school.(share sth with sb)
→仿写:我喜欢在晚餐时和我的家人分享一些有趣的故事。
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I like to share some funny stories with my family during the dinner.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone.I am so excited to (表达情绪) share our wonderful family
activity with you.
Last weekend, we decided to have a DIY project at home.(介绍活动及地点)
My father prepared all the materials we needed, like wooden boards, glue and
paint.My mother designed the pattern we were going to make.I helped my little
brother cut the wood carefully.(介绍家庭成员分工)
We worked together and finally made a beautiful wooden bookshelf.
(介绍活动成果) It was not only a useful item but also a symbol of our
family’s teamwork.
We all felt a great sense of achievement.(表达感受) I hope we can have
more such activities in the future.(提出希望)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是Jimmy,你的好朋友Sam要搬进新居,他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的
建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识,回复邮件以表达你的建议。
Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re
decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I
often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall?
What can make me feel energetic (精力旺盛的)? Could you please offer me
some advice?
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
写作要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
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Yours,
Jimmy
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第一步 审
体裁:应用文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第二人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:根据邮件中的内容提出一些关于卧室装修的建议,适当增加细节。
写作框架:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat
with your own bedroom.
A bedroom should make you feel relaxed so I
think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light
blue. ①文章使用了relaxed、
peace、energetic、
nature、full of life等词
汇,生动地描述了卧室
应具备的氛围。
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Blue can bring peace① to your mind and
body. As a middle school student, you always have
much homework to do and feel stressed easily. So
blue is the best colour.As too much homework makes
you feel tired easilyyou need energetic colours in the
bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your
bedroom. You can also hang some pictures
of nature on the wall. ②文章运用了简单句、
复合句等多种句式,如
“Blue can bring peace
to your mind and body.”
和“As too much
homework makes you
feel tired easily…”,使
文章句式更加丰富。
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It’s also a good idea to put some flowers by the
window. They can make the room full of life and
make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will be helpful and that you
will enjoy your new life!
Yours,
Jimmy ③结尾处的“I hope+宾
语从句”表达了作者对
Sam新生活的美好祝愿。
该文语法精准,句式灵活,逻辑清晰,细节建议生动具体,结尾情感真挚。
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025浙江嘉兴期末]请根据下面的信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文,以
“The Family Cleaning”为题,描述一次家庭大扫除活动。
要点:(1)时间、地点;(2)具体分工;(3)感受。
The Family Cleaning
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【参考范文】
The Family Cleaning
Last Saturday morning, my family had the big cleaning at
home.Everyone took part in it.
First, we divided the tasks.My father was in charge of sweeping the
floor and cleaning the windows.My mother tidied up the rooms and did
the laundry.My little brother and I were responsible for putting away
toys and books.During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there
was laughter all the time.
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Finally, our home became clean and tidy.We all felt a strong sense
of achievement.I know the importance of cooperation in families and
hope we can have more such meaningful activities in the future.
【解析】知识拓展
be tired of厌烦
Value statement:East or west, home is best.
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