内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 人教版
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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.假期__________________
2.旅行_____________
3.厌倦的;烦闷的_______
4.忘记;遗忘________
vacation/holiday
travel/trip
bored
forget
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5.数以千计的______________
6.在阳光下____________
7.转身;翻转_____________
8.寻找__________
thousands of
in the sun
turn around
look for
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting? (不定代词+形容词)
→仿写:孩子们总是期待着去特别的地方。
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The children always look forward to going to somewhere special.
10.【教材原句】Everyone was ready to find somewhere to go.(be ready to do
sth)
→仿写:我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
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I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
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11.【教材原句】I was so bored that I decided to find something to read.
(so… that…)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于结束时孩子们都不想离开了。
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______________________________
The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids didn’t
want to leave when it ended.
12.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn’t feel like eating because I felt sick.
(feel like doing sth)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
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On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big meal
for my family to celebrate the vacation.
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第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Tom. I am very excited to (表达情绪) share my
vacation experiences with you. Now I will tell you all about my last holiday.
I went to Hainan during the summer vacation (介绍假期时间和地点).The
weather there was sunny and warm.The beaches were beautiful with clear blue
water.(介绍当地情况) I tried many water sports like surfing and diving
(介绍游玩项目).I also visited some local villages and learnt a lot about their
traditional culture (介绍其他活动).
It was really an unforgettable vacation (总结感受).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
寒假已过,不少同学开始讨论寒假期间的活动。请你根据下表的提示信息,
以“My Winter Vacation”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的寒假经历。
时 间 上个寒假
地 点 北京
活 动 参观故宫、爬长城、品尝北京烤鸭
感 受 学到很多历史知识,玩得很开心
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要求:(1)语句通顺,表述连贯,书写工整;
(2)包含表格内所给提示,可适当发挥;
(3)词数:80词左右(短文标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
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第一步 审
体裁:记叙文
时态:一般过去时
人称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:假期时间、地点、活动、感受
写作框架:
My Winter Vacation 开头 引出寒假经历
中间 详细描述在北京的活动
结尾 总结感受
My Winter Vacation
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第二步 列
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My Winter Vacation
Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my family.
It was an amazing trip.
First, we visited the Palace Museum. The ancient
buildings there were so beautiful that I was deeply
attracted by their long history. __________________________________
①“so… that…”结
构生动地描绘出故
宫建筑的美丽,增
强了语言表现力;
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Then we climbed the Great Wall. Standing on it, I could
see the beautiful scenery around. It was really a wonderful
experience.Besides we also tasted famous Beijing roast
duck. It was so delicious!
I really had a great time during this winter vacation.I
not only had fun but also learnt a lot about Chinese
history. ②Besides使文章过
渡自然,丰富了内
容;
③结尾总结全面,
体现了旅行的收
获。
这篇习作结构清晰,按照活动顺序,完整地讲述了作者寒假在北京的经历。
文中运用了 went、visited、climbed、tasted 等动词过去式,准确体现时态。像
attracted by、wonderful等词汇使描述更加生动形象。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
[2025浙江湖州调研]在新学期开始之际,校英语报发起了题为“A
Wonderful Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点提示,用英语
写一篇短文,介绍你暑假中一次难忘的经历,向校报投稿。
内容提示:(1)Where did you go?
(2)How was the weather?
(3)What did you do there?
(4)How did you feel about it?
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要求:80词左右;内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥。
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【参考范文】
A Wonderful Vacation
This summer vacation, I went to the countryside with my family.It
was a place far away from the noise of the city.The weather there was
perfect, sunny and cool.
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We spent most of our time hiking in the mountains.The air was so
fresh and the scenery was wonderful.We saw many beautiful flowers.In
the evening, we sat by the river, watching the sunset and listening to
the gentle flow of the water.We even helped the local farmers pick
fruit.It was hard work, but I was so happy.
I felt truly relaxed and happy during this vacation.It was a great
opportunity to get away from my studies and enjoy the simple joy of
life.I learnt a lot about nature and the importance of hard work.
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Value statement:A holiday is a time to relax, enjoy life, and make
memories.
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