基础（词句文）03 如何表达兴奋情感（读后续写讲义）英语高一通用版

基础（词句文）03如何表达兴奋情感（读后续写讲义） ( 读后续写微技能定位 ) 一、兴奋情绪情感基本概念 1.定位 读后续写中，兴奋情感的表达是人物内在非常快乐、高兴甚至狂喜情绪的外在投射，是推动情节升温、强化场景感染力的关键手段。它通过具象化的动作、神情及感官联动，让读者直观感知角色的亢奋状态（如狂喜时的雀跃），避免直白表述（如 "He was excited"），使续写情节与前文人设保持一致，同时借助生动的细节让情感传递更具穿透力，增强故事的沉浸感。 2.区分 兴奋情感的基础描写：以简洁直白的动作或神情直述情绪，修饰成分较少（例：She jumped. His eyes lit up.）。 兴奋情感的进阶描写：通过连贯动作链、多感官融合、修辞强化（比喻、夸张等）及环境呼应，展现情感的层次与爆发力（例：He jumped over the fence, boots thudding against the grass, while his whoops（欢呼声，呐喊声） sliced through the air—sunlight glinting off his raised fist, as if even the sky leaned in to share his joy.）。 3.技巧讲解： 让兴奋情绪更具穿透力 技巧维度 例句 Translation 1. 动作爆发（瞬间张力） 他猛地跳起来，双手握拳举过头顶，笑着转圈。 He jumped up suddenly, fists clenched over his head, spinning with a smile. 2.神情绽放（面部细节流转变化） 她眼睛瞪得圆圆的，嘴角翘得老高，突然拍手笑起来。 Her eyes widened, lips curled high, and she suddenly clapped and laughed. 3. 感官交织（多维度共振） 指尖触到奖杯的冰凉时，他喉咙发紧，耳边是模糊的欢呼，眼前却炸开一片金星，仿佛有无数烟花在视网膜上绽放。 As his fingertips touched the cold trophy, his throat tightened. Vague cheers buzzed in his ears, while stars burst before his eyes, as if countless fireworks were exploding across his retina. 4.环境共振（情绪外溢） 她扑进花海，裙摆扫起漫天蒲公英，白色绒毛粘在她扬起的发梢。 She dove into the flower field, her skirt sending dandelion fluff swirling. White down stuck to her lifted hair. 二、晨读素材-必背单词 1.enjoy v.喜爱 2.cheerful adj. 快乐的 3.excited adj. 兴奋的 4.joyful adj.欢乐的 5.delight n.快乐、高兴；v.使愉快、使高兴 6.pleasure n.愉快 7.be fond of music 爱好音乐 8.a satisfied look 满意的表情 9.be wild with delight 欣喜若狂 10.be in high spirits 情绪高涨 11.be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜 12.be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福 13.thrilled adj.极为激动的 14.ecstatic adj. 狂喜的 15.elated adj. 兴高采烈的 16.overjoyed adj. 万分高兴的 17.jubilant adj. 喜气洋洋的 18.exuberant adj. 热情洋溢、兴高采烈的 19.gleeful adj. 欢快的 20.rapturous adj.欢天喜地的 三、晨读素材-佳句赏析（选自各版本课本内容） 1.Her eyes lit up with excitement when she heard the good news.（听到这个好消息时，她的眼睛因兴奋而发亮。） 2.He jumped to his feet, cheering with joy at the victory.（他跳起身，为胜利欢呼雀跃。） 3.A wide, excited smile spread across her face instantly.（一个灿烂又兴奋的笑容立刻在她脸上绽开。） 4.Overcome with excitement, she couldn't help clapping her hands repeatedly.（她激动得忍不住反复拍手。） 5.His heart raced with excitement as he opened the mysterious gift.（当他打开神秘礼物时，心因兴奋而狂跳。） 6.She was so excited that words failed her, just standing there with a thrilled look.（她激动得说不出话，只是带着兴奋的神情站在那里。） 7.The children were wild with excitement, rushing to the playground for the game.（孩子们欣喜若狂，冲向操场去参加游戏。） 8.A feeling of excitement welled up inside him, making his hands tremble slightly.（一种兴奋感在他内心涌起，让他的手微微颤抖。） 9.He let out a cry of excitement, unable to hide his joy any longer.（他发出一声兴奋的叫喊，再也掩饰不住自己的喜悦。） 10.Seeing her long-lost friend, she felt a surge of excitement and ran over at once.（看到失散多年的朋友，她心中涌起一阵兴奋，立刻跑了过去。） 11.The news filled her with such excitement that she danced around the room.（这个消息让她兴奋不已，她在房间里跳起舞来。） 12.With excitement written all over his face, he shared the good news with everyone.（他满脸都是兴奋的神情，把这个好消息分享给了每个人。） 13.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.（她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。） 14.She wore a shining smile on her face.（她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。） 15.Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class.（她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。） ( 测试反馈：分级测试 步步为赢 ) 一、晚练-高频语块汉译英 1. v.喜爱 2. adj. 快乐的 3. adj. 兴奋的 4. adj.欢乐的 5. n.快乐、高兴；v.使愉快、使高兴 6. n.愉快 7. 爱好音乐 8. 满意的表情 9. 欣喜若狂 10. 情绪高涨 11. 为成功而欣喜 12. 心满意足，非常幸福 13. adj.极为激动的 14. adj. 狂喜的 15. adj. 兴高采烈的 16. adj. 万分高兴的 17. adj. 喜气洋洋的 18. adj. 热情洋溢、兴高采烈的 19. adj. 欢快的 20. adj.欢天喜地的 二、晚练-佳句赏析汉译英 1. 她激动得跳了起来，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。（leap; sparkle） 2.听到获奖的消息，他兴奋地大喊起来。（shout; excitement） 3.一种强烈的兴奋感涌上她的心头，让她笑个不停。（surge; giggle） 4.他兴奋地挥舞着手臂，向人群展示那份荣誉证书。（wave; certificate） 5.看到自己的作品被展示，她兴奋得脸颊通红。（exhibit; flush） 6.小明兴奋地搓着手，迫不及待地想要开始新的冒险。（rub; adventure） 7.兴奋的欢呼声响彻整个礼堂，每个人都在为胜利喝彩。（cheer; auditorium） 8.她兴奋地蹦蹦跳跳，像个孩子一样冲向那扇神秘的门。（hop; mysterious） 9.拿到心仪的礼物，妹妹兴奋地在原地转起了圈。（spin; gift） 10.知道要去游乐园，孩子们兴奋得几乎睡不着觉。（amusement park; barely） ( 仿写实战：模仿借鉴 学以致用 ) 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 1.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。 ______ poured down Susan’s cheeks. 2.那位妇人为找回被盗的珠宝感到高兴。 The woman ______ the recovery of her stolen jewels. 3.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 Her smile ______. 4.听到好消息时，他兴奋的笑声在走廊里回荡。 His ______ echoed in the hallway when hearing the good news. 5.孩子们因即将到来的假期而兴奋得跳起来。 The children ______ the coming holiday. 二、读后续写情景运用—小情景小段落 阅读所给首句，在了解首句所设定的情境后，用一句话进行与动作与神情描写相关的主题续写。 1.[校园赛事・激动欢呼] When the final whistle blew and their class won the basketball championship, Jack stood there for a moment. 2.[家庭惊喜・雀跃不已] As Lily opened the gift box and saw the concert tickets she had longed for, her eyes widened. 3.[旅行启程・兴奋难抑] With the suitcase packed and the train tickets in hand, Tom stepped onto the platform, his heart pounding. 4.[久别重逢・狂喜瞬间] When she spotted her best friend from childhood at the airport arrival gate, Sarah froze for a second. 5.[生日惊喜・欢呼雀跃] As the blindfold was removed and she saw the decorated room full of friends, Emma’s mouth dropped open. 6.[获奖时刻・激动万分] When the principal announced her name as the winner of the science competition, Lucy stared at the stage in disbelief. 三、读后续写情景运用—语篇 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Sunday, Mike and his mother Rose went to Grandma Alondra's house for lunch. Alondra had prepared Mike’s favorite meal. “Mike’s school prom（舞会）is approaching, Mum,” Rose told Alondra. “Do you still have that tailor’s contact who owned that old shop in town? I want to get a suit tailored for Mike.” “Oh! I do!” Alondra laughed. “So, Mike, who’s going to be your date?” she asked. “Nobody. I haven’t found anyone. So, I might not go,” Mike said, his eyes fixed on his phone. Alondra said, “You kids are so lucky to have the prom and everything. I’ve never gone to one!” “Really, Mum?” Rose asked with a surprised look. “Well, yes. But that’s an old, old story! Let’s not go there,” Alondra said. “The thing is, Mike, you should definitely go and have a good time.” It was then that Rose had an idea. She asked Mike to take Alondra as his date to the prom. Mike disliked the idea. As a teenager, and as the most popular boy at school, he didn’t want to take his grandmother to the prom. He was afraid the other students would laugh at him. However, he couldn’t find a reason to turn this down. Not a single one. Most importantly, he loved Alondra. So, on the afternoon of prom day, Mike and Rose drove to Alondra’s house. When the older woman opened her door to Mike in a suit, she smiled. “Oh! Look how beautiful you look, darling!” she said. Rose nudged （用肘轻推）Mike. “Thank-thanks, Gran,” he said with a sigh（叹气）. “Will you, um, be my date tonight? I want to make your dream come true... I want to take you to the prom.” Alondra was both surprised and excited. While she didn’t want to go, Rose had persuaded her that it would be a great bonding（联络感情的）time for her and Mike. So， Alondra put on her finest dress and went to the prom with Mike. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the whole place fell silent __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon the party got started.   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【考查目标】 主题语境为“人与社会”，涉及“高中生自尊自信”、“祖孙关系”等内涵意义。要求考生在阅读的基础上，发挥合理想象，续写两段文字，以使故事完整、情节合理、衔接有序和语言生动。 【文本主旨】 故事通过 Mike 克服自己的顾虑，带奶奶参加舞会，实现奶奶的愿望，展现了祖孙之间深厚的爱。这种爱让 Mike 能够放下自己的担忧，也让奶奶度过了非常愉快的一天。 【词汇积累】 行为类 ①走进：walk into ②锁定（目光）：lock onto ③面露喜色：beam with joy ④带领：lead ⑤实现：make...come true 情绪类 ①难以置信：in disbelief ②吃惊的：taken aback ③如释重负的：relieved ④（眼神）闪着喜悦：sparkling with joy ⑤兴奋的：excited 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型 1] Seeing her bright smile, Mike realized taking his grandmother to the prom was actually the best decision he had ever made.（现在分词 Seeing 作状语） [高分句型 2] Mike realized taking his grandmother to the prom was actually the best decision he had ever made.（省略 that 的宾语从句） [高分句型 3] It was not only making Alondra's dream come true but also created a memory they would both cherish forever.（not only...but also... 结构连接并列动作）​ 【续写分析】​ 1　 核心矛盾：Mike 起初因担心被同学嘲笑，不情愿带祖母 Alondra 参加舞会，但出于对祖母的爱答应了；Alondra 对参加舞会既惊讶又兴奋，内心带着对圆梦的期待。​ 2　 人物情绪：Alondra 的 “兴奋” 是核心情感线索，需通过动作、神情等细节体现；Mike 的情绪从 “顾虑” 向 “释然”“愉悦” 转变。 3　 Para1 围绕 “全场安静” 展开，需体现众人对祖孙俩的反应；Para2 以 “祖母受欢迎、Mike 释然” 为起点，聚焦舞会中的互动与情绪升温。 【续写线索】 Para1 众人反应：先描写全场沉默后的细节（如有人小声议论、有人露出惊讶表情），随后转向善意回应（如鼓掌、微笑），体现对 Alondra 的接纳——Alondra 的兴奋表现：通过 “眼睛发亮、嘴角上扬、不自觉整理裙摆” 等动作，或 “轻声惊呼‘真热闹呀’” 等语言，外化其激动心情——Mike 的心理变化：从紧张地攥紧拳头，到看到众人善意后肩膀微松，内心顾虑稍减。 Para2 舞会互动：Alondra 被同学邀请跳舞，她虽有些羞涩但难掩兴奋，舞步轻快；Mike 在旁观看时，被祖母的笑容感染，主动加入——情绪升华：Alondra 向 Mike 分享自己的快乐，提及 “这是最棒的夜晚”；Mike 坦言 “带您来是正确的决定”，两人在欢快氛围中加深情感联结——细节烘托：通过 “闪烁的灯光、欢快的音乐、Alondra 眼角的笑纹” 等场景，强化兴奋情绪的感染力。 8 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 基础（词句文）03如何表达兴奋情感（读后续写讲义） ( 读后续写微技能定位 ) 一、兴奋情绪情感基本概念 1.定位 读后续写中，兴奋情感的表达是人物内在非常快乐、高兴甚至狂喜情绪的外在投射，是推动情节升温、强化场景感染力的关键手段。它通过具象化的动作、神情及感官联动，让读者直观感知角色的亢奋状态（如狂喜时的雀跃），避免直白表述（如 "He was excited"），使续写情节与前文人设保持一致，同时借助生动的细节让情感传递更具穿透力，增强故事的沉浸感。 2.区分 兴奋情感的基础描写：以简洁直白的动作或神情直述情绪，修饰成分较少（例：She jumped. His eyes lit up.）。 兴奋情感的进阶描写：通过连贯动作链、多感官融合、修辞强化（比喻、夸张等）及环境呼应，展现情感的层次与爆发力（例：He jumped over the fence, boots thudding against the grass, while his whoops（欢呼声，呐喊声） sliced through the air—sunlight glinting off his raised fist, as if even the sky leaned in to share his joy.）。 3.技巧讲解： 让兴奋情绪更具穿透力 技巧维度 例句 Translation 1. 动作爆发（瞬间张力） 他猛地跳起来，双手握拳举过头顶，笑着转圈。 He jumped up suddenly, fists clenched over his head, spinning with a smile. 2.神情绽放（面部细节流转变化） 她眼睛瞪得圆圆的，嘴角翘得老高，突然拍手笑起来。 Her eyes widened, lips curled high, and she suddenly clapped and laughed. 3. 感官交织（多维度共振） 指尖触到奖杯的冰凉时，他喉咙发紧，耳边是模糊的欢呼，眼前却炸开一片金星，仿佛有无数烟花在视网膜上绽放。 As his fingertips touched the cold trophy, his throat tightened. Vague cheers buzzed in his ears, while stars burst before his eyes, as if countless fireworks were exploding across his retina. 4.环境共振（情绪外溢） 她扑进花海，裙摆扫起漫天蒲公英，白色绒毛粘在她扬起的发梢。 She dove into the flower field, her skirt sending dandelion fluff swirling. White down stuck to her lifted hair. 二、晨读素材-必背单词 1.enjoy v.喜爱 2.cheerful adj. 快乐的 3.excited adj. 兴奋的 4.joyful adj.欢乐的 5.delight n.快乐、高兴；v.使愉快、使高兴 6.pleasure n.愉快 7.be fond of music 爱好音乐 8.a satisfied look 满意的表情 9.be wild with delight 欣喜若狂 10.be in high spirits 情绪高涨 11.be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜 12.be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福 13.thrilled adj.极为激动的 14.ecstatic adj. 狂喜的 15.elated adj. 兴高采烈的 16.overjoyed adj. 万分高兴的 17.jubilant adj. 喜气洋洋的 18.exuberant adj. 热情洋溢、兴高采烈的 19.gleeful adj. 欢快的 20.rapturous adj.欢天喜地的 三、晨读素材-佳句赏析（选自各版本课本内容） 1.Her eyes lit up with excitement when she heard the good news.（听到这个好消息时，她的眼睛因兴奋而发亮。） 2.He jumped to his feet, cheering with joy at the victory.（他跳起身，为胜利欢呼雀跃。） 3.A wide, excited smile spread across her face instantly.（一个灿烂又兴奋的笑容立刻在她脸上绽开。） 4.Overcome with excitement, she couldn't help clapping her hands repeatedly.（她激动得忍不住反复拍手。） 5.His heart raced with excitement as he opened the mysterious gift.（当他打开神秘礼物时，心因兴奋而狂跳。） 6.She was so excited that words failed her, just standing there with a thrilled look.（她激动得说不出话，只是带着兴奋的神情站在那里。） 7.The children were wild with excitement, rushing to the playground for the game.（孩子们欣喜若狂，冲向操场去参加游戏。） 8.A feeling of excitement welled up inside him, making his hands tremble slightly.（一种兴奋感在他内心涌起，让他的手微微颤抖。） 9.He let out a cry of excitement, unable to hide his joy any longer.（他发出一声兴奋的叫喊，再也掩饰不住自己的喜悦。） 10.Seeing her long-lost friend, she felt a surge of excitement and ran over at once.（看到失散多年的朋友，她心中涌起一阵兴奋，立刻跑了过去。） 11.The news filled her with such excitement that she danced around the room.（这个消息让她兴奋不已，她在房间里跳起舞来。） 12.With excitement written all over his face, he shared the good news with everyone.（他满脸都是兴奋的神情，把这个好消息分享给了每个人。） 13.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.（她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。） 14.She wore a shining smile on her face.（她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。） 15.Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class.（她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。） ( 测试反馈：分级测试 步步为赢 ) 一、晚练-高频语块汉译英 1. v.喜爱 2. adj. 快乐的 3. adj. 兴奋的 4. adj.欢乐的 5. n.快乐、高兴；v.使愉快、使高兴 6. n.愉快 7. 爱好音乐 8. 满意的表情 9. 欣喜若狂 10. 情绪高涨 11. 为成功而欣喜 12. 心满意足，非常幸福 13. adj.极为激动的 14. adj. 狂喜的 15. adj. 兴高采烈的 16. adj. 万分高兴的 17. adj. 喜气洋洋的 18. adj. 热情洋溢、兴高采烈的 19. adj. 欢快的 20. adj.欢天喜地的 【参考答案】 1.enjoy v.喜爱 2.cheerful adj. 快乐的 3.excited adj. 兴奋的 4.joyful adj.欢乐的 5.delight n.快乐、高兴；v.使愉快、使高兴 6.pleasure n.愉快 7.be fond of music 爱好音乐 8.a satisfied look 满意的表情 9.be wild with delight 欣喜若狂 10.be in high spirits 情绪高涨 11.be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜 12.be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福 13.thrilled adj.极为激动的 14.ecstatic adj. 狂喜的 15.elated adj. 兴高采烈的 16.overjoyed adj. 万分高兴的 17.jubilant adj. 喜气洋洋的 18.exuberant adj. 热情洋溢、兴高采烈的 19.gleeful adj. 欢快的 20.rapturous adj.欢天喜地的 二、晚练-佳句赏析汉译英 1. 她激动得跳了起来，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。（leap; sparkle） 2.听到获奖的消息，他兴奋地大喊起来。（shout; excitement） 3.一种强烈的兴奋感涌上她的心头，让她笑个不停。（surge; giggle） 4.他兴奋地挥舞着手臂，向人群展示那份荣誉证书。（wave; certificate） 5.看到自己的作品被展示，她兴奋得脸颊通红。（exhibit; flush） 6.小明兴奋地搓着手，迫不及待地想要开始新的冒险。（rub; adventure） 7.兴奋的欢呼声响彻整个礼堂，每个人都在为胜利喝彩。（cheer; auditorium） 8.她兴奋地蹦蹦跳跳，像个孩子一样冲向那扇神秘的门。（hop; mysterious） 9.拿到心仪的礼物，妹妹兴奋地在原地转起了圈。（spin; gift） 10.知道要去游乐园，孩子们兴奋得几乎睡不着觉。（amusement park; barely） 【参考答案】 1. 她激动得跳了起来，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。（leap; sparkle） She leaped with excitement, her eyes sparkling with excitement. 2.听到获奖的消息，他兴奋地大喊起来。（shout; excitement） Hearing the news of winning the award, he shouted with excitement. 3.一种强烈的兴奋感涌上她的心头，让她笑个不停。（surge; giggle） A strong sense of excitement surged through her heart, making her giggle continuously. 4.他兴奋地挥舞着手臂，向人群展示那份荣誉证书。（wave; certificate） He waved his arms with excitement, showing the honorary certificate to the crowd. 5.看到自己的作品被展示，她兴奋得脸颊通红。（exhibit; flush） Seeing her work exhibited, her cheeks flushed with excitement. 6.小明兴奋地搓着手，迫不及待地想要开始新的冒险。（rub; adventure） Xiao Ming rubbed his hands with excitement and couldn't wait to start a new adventure. 7.兴奋的欢呼声响彻整个礼堂，每个人都在为胜利喝彩。（cheer; auditorium） Cheers of excitement rang through the auditorium, and everyone was cheering for the victory. 8.她兴奋地蹦蹦跳跳，像个孩子一样冲向那扇神秘的门。（hop; mysterious） She hopped with excitement, rushing towards the mysterious door like a child. 9.拿到心仪的礼物，妹妹兴奋地在原地转起了圈。（spin; gift） After receiving the desired gift, my sister spun around on the spot with excitement. 10.知道要去游乐园，孩子们兴奋得几乎睡不着觉。（amusement park; barely） Knowing that they were going to the amusement park, the children could barely sleep with excitement. ( 仿写实战：模仿借鉴 学以致用 ) 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 1.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。 ______ poured down Susan’s cheeks. 2.那位妇人为找回被盗的珠宝感到高兴。 The woman ______ the recovery of her stolen jewels. 3.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 Her smile ______. 4.听到好消息时，他兴奋的笑声在走廊里回荡。 His ______ echoed in the hallway when hearing the good news. 5.孩子们因即将到来的假期而兴奋得跳起来。 The children ______ the coming holiday. 【参考答案】 1.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. 2.那位妇人为找回被盗的珠宝感到高兴。The woman was delighted at the recovery of her stolen jewels. 3.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。Her smile lit up the whole room . 4.听到好消息时，他兴奋的笑声在走廊里回荡。His excited laughter echoed in the hallway when hearing the good news. 5.孩子们因即将到来的假期而兴奋得跳起来。The children jumped with excitement for the coming holiday. 二、读后续写情景运用—小情景小段落 阅读所给首句，在了解首句所设定的情境后，用一句话进行与动作与神情描写相关的主题续写。 1.[校园赛事・激动欢呼] When the final whistle blew and their class won the basketball championship, Jack stood there for a moment. 2.[家庭惊喜・雀跃不已] As Lily opened the gift box and saw the concert tickets she had longed for, her eyes widened. 3.[旅行启程・兴奋难抑] With the suitcase packed and the train tickets in hand, Tom stepped onto the platform, his heart pounding. 4.[久别重逢・狂喜瞬间] When she spotted her best friend from childhood at the airport arrival gate, Sarah froze for a second. 5.[生日惊喜・欢呼雀跃] As the blindfold was removed and she saw the decorated room full of friends, Emma’s mouth dropped open. 6.[获奖时刻・激动万分] When the principal announced her name as the winner of the science competition, Lucy stared at the stage in disbelief. 【参考答案】 1.[校园赛事・激动欢呼] When the final whistle blew and their class won the basketball championship, Jack stood there for a moment.Then he jumped up and down, cheering wildly with his face glowing with excitement. 2.[家庭惊喜・雀跃不已] As Lily opened the gift box and saw the concert tickets she had longed for, her eyes widened. she let out a scream of joy and clapped her hands excitedly, unable to hide her thrill. 3.[旅行启程・兴奋难抑] With the suitcase packed and the train tickets in hand, Tom stepped onto the platform, his heart pounding.he broke into a wide smile, waving his ticket in the air and bouncing on his toes with excitement. 4.[久别重逢・狂喜瞬间] When she spotted her best friend from childhood at the airport arrival gate, Sarah froze for a second.Then she rushed over and hugged her friend tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes and a bright smile spreading across her face. 5.[生日惊喜・欢呼雀跃] As the blindfold was removed and she saw the decorated room full of friends, Emma’s mouth dropped open.Then she let out a joyful laugh, covering her mouth with her hands for a moment before joining the cheers with her friends. 6.[获奖时刻・激动万分] When the principal announced her name as the winner of the science competition, Lucy stared at the stage in disbelief.she stood up shakily, her eyes brimming with tears of excitement as she walked toward the stage, her hands trembling slightly. 三、读后续写情景运用—语篇 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Sunday, Mike and his mother Rose went to Grandma Alondra's house for lunch. Alondra had prepared Mike’s favorite meal. “Mike’s school prom（舞会）is approaching, Mum,” Rose told Alondra. “Do you still have that tailor’s contact who owned that old shop in town? I want to get a suit tailored for Mike.” “Oh! I do!” Alondra laughed. “So, Mike, who’s going to be your date?” she asked. “Nobody. I haven’t found anyone. So, I might not go,” Mike said, his eyes fixed on his phone. Alondra said, “You kids are so lucky to have the prom and everything. I’ve never gone to one!” “Really, Mum?” Rose asked with a surprised look. “Well, yes. But that’s an old, old story! Let’s not go there,” Alondra said. “The thing is, Mike, you should definitely go and have a good time.” It was then that Rose had an idea. She asked Mike to take Alondra as his date to the prom. Mike disliked the idea. As a teenager, and as the most popular boy at school, he didn’t want to take his grandmother to the prom. He was afraid the other students would laugh at him. However, he couldn’t find a reason to turn this down. Not a single one. Most importantly, he loved Alondra. So, on the afternoon of prom day, Mike and Rose drove to Alondra’s house. When the older woman opened her door to Mike in a suit, she smiled. “Oh! Look how beautiful you look, darling!” she said. Rose nudged （用肘轻推）Mike. “Thank-thanks, Gran,” he said with a sigh（叹气）. “Will you, um, be my date tonight? I want to make your dream come true... I want to take you to the prom.” Alondra was both surprised and excited. While she didn’t want to go, Rose had persuaded her that it would be a great bonding（联络感情的）time for her and Mike. So， Alondra put on her finest dress and went to the prom with Mike. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the whole place fell silent __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon the party got started.   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【考查目标】 主题语境为“人与社会”，涉及“高中生自尊自信”、“祖孙关系”等内涵意义。要求考生在阅读的基础上，发挥合理想象，续写两段文字，以使故事完整、情节合理、衔接有序和语言生动。 【文本主旨】 故事通过 Mike 克服自己的顾虑，带奶奶参加舞会，实现奶奶的愿望，展现了祖孙之间深厚的爱。这种爱让 Mike 能够放下自己的担忧，也让奶奶度过了非常愉快的一天。 【词汇积累】 行为类 ①走进：walk into ②锁定（目光）：lock onto ③面露喜色：beam with joy ④带领：lead ⑤实现：make...come true 情绪类 ①难以置信：in disbelief ②吃惊的：taken aback ③如释重负的：relieved ④（眼神）闪着喜悦：sparkling with joy ⑤兴奋的：excited 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型 1] Seeing her bright smile, Mike realized taking his grandmother to the prom was actually the best decision he had ever made.（现在分词 Seeing 作状语） [高分句型 2] Mike realized taking his grandmother to the prom was actually the best decision he had ever made.（省略 that 的宾语从句） [高分句型 3] It was not only making Alondra's dream come true but also created a memory they would both cherish forever.（not only...but also... 结构连接并列动作）​ 【续写分析】​ 1　 核心矛盾：Mike 起初因担心被同学嘲笑，不情愿带祖母 Alondra 参加舞会，但出于对祖母的爱答应了；Alondra 对参加舞会既惊讶又兴奋，内心带着对圆梦的期待。​ 2　 人物情绪：Alondra 的 “兴奋” 是核心情感线索，需通过动作、神情等细节体现；Mike 的情绪从 “顾虑” 向 “释然”“愉悦” 转变。 3　 Para1 围绕 “全场安静” 展开，需体现众人对祖孙俩的反应；Para2 以 “祖母受欢迎、Mike 释然” 为起点，聚焦舞会中的互动与情绪升温。 【续写线索】 Para1 众人反应：先描写全场沉默后的细节（如有人小声议论、有人露出惊讶表情），随后转向善意回应（如鼓掌、微笑），体现对 Alondra 的接纳——Alondra 的兴奋表现：通过 “眼睛发亮、嘴角上扬、不自觉整理裙摆” 等动作，或 “轻声惊呼‘真热闹呀’” 等语言，外化其激动心情——Mike 的心理变化：从紧张地攥紧拳头，到看到众人善意后肩膀微松，内心顾虑稍减。 Para2 舞会互动：Alondra 被同学邀请跳舞，她虽有些羞涩但难掩兴奋，舞步轻快；Mike 在旁观看时，被祖母的笑容感染，主动加入——情绪升华：Alondra 向 Mike 分享自己的快乐，提及 “这是最棒的夜晚”；Mike 坦言 “带您来是正确的决定”，两人在欢快氛围中加深情感联结——细节烘托：通过 “闪烁的灯光、欢快的音乐、Alondra 眼角的笑纹” 等场景，强化兴奋情绪的感染力。 【参考答案】 As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the whole place fell silent. As all eyes locked onto him in disbelief, Mike could practically feel the weight of their stares. There was laughter in the air, but he did his best to brush it off.Then, something unexpected happened.His classmates walked up to them, smiling. “Your grandmother looks so elegant!” one girl exclaimed. Mike was taken aback. He had been so worried about being mocked, but instead, everyone seemed to admire his gesture. Alondra, meanwhile, was beaming with joy. She held Mike’s arm tightly, her face lighting up as she surveyed the scene. Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon the party got started. Mike led Alondra to the dance floor. They danced slowly, with Alondra's eyes sparkling with joy. Other students joined them, and the hall was filled with laughter and music. As they headed home, Alondra couldn’t contain her excitement, “This is so much fun, Mike! Thanks for bringing me. It’s the best, best day of my life!” Seeing her bright smile, Mike realized taking his grandmother to the prom was actually the best decision he had ever made. It was not only making Alondra's dream come true but also created a memory they would both cherish forever.   8 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$