Unit 3 Teenage problems 解决青少年问题建议信（单元写作精练）英语牛津译林版九年级上册

Unit3 Teenage problems 解决青少年问题建议信 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：颜色和情绪的关系 核心写作目标： 1.能准确运用本单元核心词汇与句型（如：be crazy/stressed about, have no choice but to..., doubt whether..., achieve a balance between... and..., offer sb. some suggestions/advice, manage your time better, communicate with..., deal with pressure 等）描述青少年常见问题。 2.能熟练使用表达感受的形容词（stressed, worried, lonely, angry, confused, tired, disappointed, frustrated, ashamed等）。 3.能清晰、有条理地组织文章结构（问题描述 -> 问题带来的困扰 -> 寻求建议/提出建议）。能运用恰当的连接词使行文流畅（Firstly... Secondly... Finally..., What's more..., However..., As a result..., Therefore..., For example...）。 能正确运用书信/邮件/论坛发帖等分析问题产生的原因或带来的具体影响，提出具体、可行、有建设性的建议。 写作方向： 核心任务 : 写一封信/一封邮件/一个论坛帖子 (Write a letter/an email/a forum post)。 ①假设你是Sigmund Friend（教材中的心理咨询师），给来信求助的青少年（如Millie, Simon）写一封回信，分析他/她的问题，并提供具体、实用的建议。 ②假设你是一名有困扰的青少年（可以是你自己，也可以是虚构角色），给Sigmund Friend、你的好朋友或一个青少年问题咨询网站写一封信/邮件/发帖，详细描述你面临的一个主要问题（学业压力、朋友矛盾、家庭关系、自我形象焦虑、时间管理、兴趣爱好冲突等），说明它如何影响你的生活和感受，并请求建议。 ③写一篇短文，描述你观察到的一个同学或朋友面临的问题，并提出你认为对他/她有帮助的建议。创作一个关于“如何成功解决一个青少年问题”的小故事。 写作框架： 建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。 真题示例： （2023·辽宁鞍山·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。 要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。 （2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。 （3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。 （4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 近视原因 长时间使用电子产品； 读书时间过长。 建议 控制使用电子产品时间； 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操） …… 希望 …… 参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device Dear Mike, How is it going with you? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, How is it going with you? I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause myopia. But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy. I hope you’ll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因； 第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议； 第三步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②be good for对……有好处 ③play an important role in在……中起重要作用 [高分句型] ①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句) ②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语) 1．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Alex即将面临期末考试，因压力过大给你发来了下面这封邮件。请阅读他的邮件内容，并写一封回信为他提供建议。 TO: LIHUA@mail.com SUBJECT: Exam Stress Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? I’m really stressed about my final exams. There’s too much to remember, but I always forget most things right away. I keep worrying about failing, even though I work hard. I can’t sleep well either. What should I do? Can you help me? Thank you! Alex 请你回复以上邮件，内容包括： 1.make a study plan; 2.relax and get enough sleep; 3. ... 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes.                                                              Li Hua 2．“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。 内容提示： What do you do to relax when you finish your homework? Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play? What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As I entered the third year of junior high, I realized it’s important to have a balanced lifestyle. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，戴眼镜的同学在你周围普遍存在，请你以“My suggestions on protecting our eyesight”为题写一篇80—100词左右的短文，从视力的重要性、保护视力的方法等方面给你周围的人提几点建议，并表达你的祝愿。 写作要求： 1. 内容必须包括所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯： 2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范： 3. 文中不得出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分： 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My suggestions on protecting our eyesight My name is Li Hua. As we all know, eyes are very important. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.如何减压让生活更美好？许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括： 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 2. 我的压力是什么； 3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 Less Pressure, Better Life Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．每个人在成长的过程中都可能会遇到各种各样的困难， Tony写信说他最近也遇到了一些困难，假如你是Amy，请你写一封回信给Tony给予帮助。内容要点： Tony的困难 你的建议 父母不理解，对父母的要求感到厌烦。 多与父母交流，互相理解⋯⋯ 在学习上有困难，课堂上感觉困倦 多向老师求助，课后进行体育锻炼…… 与好朋友吵架了 不用太担心，朋友间有不同看法是很正常的事情，向朋友诉说你的感受和想法 注意： 1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人信息； 4.词数80左右。 参考词汇： understand (理解), have a quarrel with…(与…吵架), feelings and thoughts (感受和想法) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．积极健康、乐观向上、开心愉快的生活是我们共同追求的目标。学校校刊英语专栏以“How to be a happy student”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求, 用英语写一篇短文, 向专栏投稿。                  写作要求: 1. 参考上图信息, 结合自身的体验介绍成为一个快乐学生的方法（至少3种）； 2. 结合自己的方法简单阐述理由或观点； 3. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数100左右。 How to be a happy student ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．年岁渐长临近毕业? 青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题用英语写一篇短文向校刊的School Life英文专栏投稿。要点如下： （ 1）学习生活技能； （ 2）遵守安全须知； （ 3）学会合理规划。 注意： （ 1）词数80～100； （ 2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； （ 3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名； （ 4）短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2023·四川达州·中考真题）曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。 内容提示：1.养成健康的生活习惯。 2.学习有计划、有行动。 3.友善待人。 4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。 写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。 2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。 4.不少于 90 词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies 志愿活动 volunteer activity How to be a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 9．随着智能手机的普及以及网络的快速发展，观看短视频成为人们的热门消遣方式。假如你是某中学九年级的一名学生，你班进行了主题为“Are short videos good for teenagers?”的英语辩论。请你根据正、反方的观点及提示写一篇总结报告。 写作提示： 1. 同学们对青少年观看短视频的看法； 2. 你的看法及建议。 注意事项： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Nowadays, short videos have become more and more popular in our daily life. Are they good or bad for teenagers? The students have different opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容要点，以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。 写作要点：1.表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常…… 2.建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少两条以上缓解考试压力的具体建议。 写作要求：1.词数90左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。 How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．青少年的健康问题越来越受到重视，你校英语校刊举办以“Healthy Life”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文参加活动。 注意： (1) 短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数80-100；首句已给出，仅供选用，不计入总次数。 Health is very important to everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit3 Teenage problems 解决青少年问题建议信 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：颜色和情绪的关系 核心写作目标： 1.能准确运用本单元核心词汇与句型（如：be crazy/stressed about, have no choice but to..., doubt whether..., achieve a balance between... and..., offer sb. some suggestions/advice, manage your time better, communicate with..., deal with pressure 等）描述青少年常见问题。 2.能熟练使用表达感受的形容词（stressed, worried, lonely, angry, confused, tired, disappointed, frustrated, ashamed等）。 3.能清晰、有条理地组织文章结构（问题描述 -> 问题带来的困扰 -> 寻求建议/提出建议）。能运用恰当的连接词使行文流畅（Firstly... Secondly... Finally..., What's more..., However..., As a result..., Therefore..., For example...）。 能正确运用书信/邮件/论坛发帖等分析问题产生的原因或带来的具体影响，提出具体、可行、有建设性的建议。 写作方向： 核心任务 : 写一封信/一封邮件/一个论坛帖子 (Write a letter/an email/a forum post)。 ①假设你是Sigmund Friend（教材中的心理咨询师），给来信求助的青少年（如Millie, Simon）写一封回信，分析他/她的问题，并提供具体、实用的建议。 ②假设你是一名有困扰的青少年（可以是你自己，也可以是虚构角色），给Sigmund Friend、你的好朋友或一个青少年问题咨询网站写一封信/邮件/发帖，详细描述你面临的一个主要问题（学业压力、朋友矛盾、家庭关系、自我形象焦虑、时间管理、兴趣爱好冲突等），说明它如何影响你的生活和感受，并请求建议。 ③写一篇短文，描述你观察到的一个同学或朋友面临的问题，并提出你认为对他/她有帮助的建议。创作一个关于“如何成功解决一个青少年问题”的小故事。 写作框架： 建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。 真题示例： （2023·辽宁鞍山·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。 要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。 （2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。 （3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。 （4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 近视原因 长时间使用电子产品； 读书时间过长。 建议 控制使用电子产品时间； 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操） …… 希望 …… 参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device Dear Mike, How is it going with you? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, How is it going with you? I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause myopia. But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy. I hope you’ll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因； 第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议； 第三步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②be good for对……有好处 ③play an important role in在……中起重要作用 [高分句型] ①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句) ②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语) 1．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Alex即将面临期末考试，因压力过大给你发来了下面这封邮件。请阅读他的邮件内容，并写一封回信为他提供建议。 TO: LIHUA@mail.com SUBJECT: Exam Stress Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? I’m really stressed about my final exams. There’s too much to remember, but I always forget most things right away. I keep worrying about failing, even though I work hard. I can’t sleep well either. What should I do? Can you help me? Thank you! Alex 请你回复以上邮件，内容包括： 1.make a study plan; 2.relax and get enough sleep; 3. ... 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes.                                                              Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. Don’t worry. It’s normal to feel this way before exams. Here are some suggestions that might help. First, make a study plan. Break down your subjects into smaller parts and study them one by one. This way, you will feel less stressed. Second, try to relax. You can listen to some soft music or take a short walk outside to feel calmer. Also, don’t forget to get enough sleep. A good night’s sleep can help your brain work better. Lastly, believe in yourself. You’ve already done a lot of preparation, so you can make it! If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. They may give you some useful advice. I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据邮件内容进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，给出建议； 第二步，从学习计划、放松、睡眠和相信自己方面给出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①one by one一个接一个地 ②believe in oneself相信某人自己 ③talk to sb和某人交流 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions that might help. (that引导的定语从句) ②If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. (if引导的条件状语从句) 2．“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”这句话表达了劳逸结合、张弛有度才能提升工作或学习的效率。请根据以下内容提示，用英文谈谈你如何在学习之余放松身心，做到劳逸结合，你还希望得到父母或老师怎样的理解与支持。 内容提示： What do you do to relax when you finish your homework? Do you think you have a balanced lifestyle between study and play? What do you think you should be allowed to do to have a meaningful relaxation? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As I entered the third year of junior high, I realized it’s important to have a balanced lifestyle. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As I entered the third year of junior high, I realized it’s important to have a balanced lifestyle. Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder, I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework. I love listening to music that I can sing along with. Also, doing sports like playing basketball can make me happier and healthier. On weekends I prefer to watch a comedy with my friends when I’m tired from hard work or sad for dropping scores. After meaningful relaxation, I can always feel less tired and focus more attention on my studies. So I try to balance my study and play, but sometimes I need to be understood by my parents and teachers. I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I’m not a child after all. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍完成作业后自己的放松方式是什么； 第二步，谈谈自己在学习和娱乐之间是否有一个平衡的生活方式； 第三步，谈谈是否需要得到父母或老师的理解，并说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ①focus on 专注于 ②balance ... and ... 平衡……和…… ③be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事 [高分句型] ①Although I have to spend more time on schoolwork as the subjects get harder, I still need to play and relax to keep active and energetic after I finish my homework.（although引导的让步状语从句） ②I love listening to music that I can sing along with.（that引导的定语从句） ③I think I should be allowed to manage my own life—I’m not a child after all.（宾语从句；含情态动词的被动语态） 3．假如你是李华，戴眼镜的同学在你周围普遍存在，请你以“My suggestions on protecting our eyesight”为题写一篇80—100词左右的短文，从视力的重要性、保护视力的方法等方面给你周围的人提几点建议，并表达你的祝愿。 写作要求： 1. 内容必须包括所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯： 2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范： 3. 文中不得出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分： 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My suggestions on protecting our eyesight My name is Li Hua. As we all know, eyes are very important. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My suggestions on protecting our eyesight My name is Li Hua. As we all know, eyes are very important. So it is necessary for us to pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our eyesight. First, go to the hospital and check our eyes every year. On one hand, it can prevent our eyesight from being worse. On the other hand, we can know our eyes better. Second, eat more fruits and vegetables. They are good for our eyes. Third, get enough sleep. We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. Last but not least, we must do eye exercises every day to relax our eyes. If we follow the suggestions above and do what we can to protect our eyes, I believe we can have good eyesight. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中视力的重要性、保护视力的方法等方面给周围的人提几点建议的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍视力的重要性； 第二步，介绍保护视力的方法，给周围的人提几点建议； 第三步，书写结语。希望大家都有好视力。 [亮点词汇] ① as we all know众所周知 ② on one hand…on the other hand…一方面……另一方面…… ③ last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ④ have good eyesight有好的视力 [高分句型] ① So it is necessary for us to pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our eyesight. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语) ② We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. (should用于提建议) ③ I believe we can have good eyesight. (宾语从句) 4.如何减压让生活更美好？许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括： 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 2. 我的压力是什么； 3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 Less Pressure, Better Life Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Less Pressure, Better Life Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes on weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍同学们普遍存在的压力是什么； 第二步，介绍自己的压力； 第三步，介绍自己是怎么缓解压力的。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with与……相处融洽 ②worry about担心 ③all kinds of各种各样的 ④have a talk with与……交谈 [高分句型] ①Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. (while表对比) ②So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. (宾语从句) 5．每个人在成长的过程中都可能会遇到各种各样的困难， Tony写信说他最近也遇到了一些困难，假如你是Amy，请你写一封回信给Tony给予帮助。内容要点： Tony的困难 你的建议 父母不理解，对父母的要求感到厌烦。 多与父母交流，互相理解⋯⋯ 在学习上有困难，课堂上感觉困倦 多向老师求助，课后进行体育锻炼…… 与好朋友吵架了 不用太担心，朋友间有不同看法是很正常的事情，向朋友诉说你的感受和想法 注意： 1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人信息； 4.词数80左右。 参考词汇： understand (理解), have a quarrel with…(与…吵架), feelings and thoughts (感受和想法) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Tony, I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said that your parents didn’t understand you and you felt bored with their orders. I think you should communicate more with your parents. You should understand each other. Maybe their orders are good for you. If you have trouble in your study, you can ask your teachers for help. You said that you felt very sleepy in class. I advise you to do some exercise after class, such as running and playing basketball. Doing exercise is good for your study and health. You also said that you had a quarrel with your friend. Don’t be too worried. It’s natural for friends to have different opinions from time to time. You can talk with your friend about your feelings and thoughts. It’s important for you to communicate with each other. Hope the above suggestions can help you. Yours, Amy 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头对朋友的问题表示同情，并表明要给出建议； 第二步，具体针对朋友提到的困难逐项提出建议； 第三步，书写结语。希望上述建议能帮助朋友。 ［亮点词汇］ ①feel sorry to对……感到遗憾 ②communicate with与……沟通 ③ask…for help向……求助 ④be good for对……有好处 ⑤have a quarrel with与……吵架 ⑥talk with与……谈话 ［高分句型］ If you have trouble in your study, you can ask your teachers for help.（条件状语从句） 6．积极健康、乐观向上、开心愉快的生活是我们共同追求的目标。学校校刊英语专栏以“How to be a happy student”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求, 用英语写一篇短文, 向专栏投稿。                  写作要求: 1. 参考上图信息, 结合自身的体验介绍成为一个快乐学生的方法（至少3种）； 2. 结合自己的方法简单阐述理由或观点； 3. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数100左右。 How to be a happy student ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to be a happy student As a student, I believe that the key to happiness lies in finding balance and positivity. Here are three ways that I have found to be particularly helpful in my journey towards a happy student life. Firstly, I believe in the myself. By believing in myself, I have learned to approach challenges with confidence and to persevere through difficulties. Secondly, having a positive attitude is crucial. It is easy to get caught up in the stresses of school. I try to see the humor in situations, stay grateful for the blessings in my life, and focus on solutions rather than problems. Lastly, having a healthy lifestyle is essential. For me, this could be playing a fun game with friends, taking a walk in nature, or simply curling up with a good book. By prioritizing these practices, we can create a joyful and fulfilling student life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，指出“如何作一名快乐的学生”； 第二步，根据提示材料，分别从三个方面具体介绍应该如何成为一名快乐的学生：首先要相信自己，其次要有积极的心态，最后要有健康的生活方式等，可以适当增加内容，使语意更连贯； 第三步，书写结语，鼓励大家创建一个快乐充实的学生生活。 [亮点词汇] ① the key to happiness快乐的关键 ② believe in the myself相信自己 ③ approach challenges with confidence 自信应对挑战 ④ focus on solutions rather than problems关注解决方案而不是问题 [高分句型] ① As a student, I believe that the key to happiness lies in finding balance and positivity. （that引导的宾语从句） ② Here are three ways that I have found to be particularly helpful in my journey towards a happy student life.（that引导的定语从句） 7．年岁渐长临近毕业? 青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题用英语写一篇短文向校刊的School Life英文专栏投稿。要点如下： （ 1）学习生活技能； （ 2）遵守安全须知； （ 3）学会合理规划。 注意： （ 1）词数80～100； （ 2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； （ 3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名； （ 4）短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives. First, it is necessary for teenagers to learn the life skills. It can not only improve our independence but also let us learn how to take care of ourselves. Second, we must follow safety instructions. In this way, we can do our best to make sure we are safe. Third, it is also useful to learn to plan your life properly. For example, we’d better make a schedule so that we can study better. In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——学会管理自己的生活对青少年来说很重要； 第二步，从学习生活技能、遵守安全须知以及学会合理规划等方面具体阐述应该怎么做； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①depend on依赖 ②deal with处理 ③in this way用这种方法 ④for example例如 [高分句型] ①First, it is necessary for teenagers to learn the life skills.(it固定句型) ②In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.(if引导的条件状语从句) 8．（2023·四川达州·中考真题）曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。 内容提示：1.养成健康的生活习惯。 2.学习有计划、有行动。 3.友善待人。 4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。 写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。 2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。 4.不少于 90 词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies 志愿活动 volunteer activity How to be a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文 How to be a better teenager? Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in voluntary activities, such as cleaning the city park. In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏自己的观点和看法，适当补充写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，我们需要通过一些方法提升自己； 第二步，具体阐述提升自我的方法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do sth.最好做某事 ②be friendly to sb.对某人友好 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级) ③When others need help, we should try our best to help them. (when引导的时间状语从句) 9．随着智能手机的普及以及网络的快速发展，观看短视频成为人们的热门消遣方式。假如你是某中学九年级的一名学生，你班进行了主题为“Are short videos good for teenagers?”的英语辩论。请你根据正、反方的观点及提示写一篇总结报告。 写作提示： 1. 同学们对青少年观看短视频的看法； 2. 你的看法及建议。 注意事项： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Nowadays, short videos have become more and more popular in our daily life. Are they good or bad for teenagers? The students have different opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Nowadays, short videos have become more and more popular in our daily life. Are they good or bad for teenagers? The students have different opinions. Some students think watching short videos is helpful to teenagers, as it’s a good way to get knowledge as well as relax. However, others disagree. In their eyes, watching short videos is a waste of time. What’s worse, spending too much time on screen may cause poor eyesight. In my opinion, we can watch short videos, but we had better make a good choice first. We should choose videos that can help improve ourselves. Besides, we need to control the time that we spend on them. Half an hour each day is enough. As long as we use short videos properly, we can not only have fun but also learn something useful from them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中关于正反方的观点的内容，需补充不同观点所对应的理由，以及个人看法与建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明主题，不同人对短视频的看法不同； 第二步，阐述正反两方对“短视频是否对青少年有益”的不同看法及理由； 第三步，表达个人看法及“看或不看短视频”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ① as well as 以及 ② in one’s eyes 在某人看来 ③ what’s worse 更糟糕的是 ④ in one’s opinion 在某人看来 ⑤ had better do sth. 最好做某事 ⑥ as long as 只要 [高分句型] ① Some students think watching short videos is helpful to teenagers, as it’s a good way to get knowledge as well as relax.（省略that的宾语从句） ② What’s worse, spending too much time on screen may cause poor eyesight.（动名词作主语） ③ We should choose videos that can help improve ourselves.（that引导定语从句） ④ As long as we use short videos properly, we can not only have fun but also learn something useful from them.（“not only...but also...”句型） 10．作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容要点，以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。 写作要点：1.表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常…… 2.建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少两条以上缓解考试压力的具体建议。 写作要求：1.词数90左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。 How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Everyone may have the exam stress. A little stress can be good for us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. So we can pass the exam easily. However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel tired or sleepy in class. We may be afraid of exams too much and fail in the end. In my opinion, we’d better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress. We should also have some good habits. For example, we can exercise more and eat healthy food, especially fresh vegetables and milk. Also we must have enough sleep and listen to soft music. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in exams. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，根据题干提示，以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下该如何缓解考试压力。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，首先要承接短文开头，引出话题；其次介绍太大的压力的危害；最后详细地介绍你是如何缓解考试压力的。 11．青少年的健康问题越来越受到重视，你校英语校刊举办以“Healthy Life”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文参加活动。 注意： (1) 短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数80-100；首句已给出，仅供选用，不计入总次数。 Health is very important to everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Health is very important to everyone. Then how can we keep healthy? Firstly, I think eating habits are really important. We should eat more vegetables and fruits and keep away from junk food that is harmful to us. Secondly, it’s a good way to get some exercise. Life lies in sports. We can play basketball with our friends after school. Thirdly, learning how to relax also helps a lot. We can relax ourselves by listening to music and watching funny movies.   Last but not least, we’re supposed to get enough sleep. It’s good for both the mind and the body. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在”时态； ③提示：根据思维导图写一篇短文，要求包含所有要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：第一段开门见山，提出如何保持健康； 第二步：第二段至第四段从饮食习惯、锻炼、放松这三个方面阐述建议； 第三步：自由发挥补充最后一点，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①keep away from远离 ②be harmful to对……有害 ③lie in在于 ④by doing sth通过做某事 ⑤last but not least最后但同等重要 [高分句型] ①Thirdly, learning how to relax also helps a lot.（动名词做主语） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$