热点话题01 读后续写之助人为乐类（写作专练）英语高考复习通用版

热点话题01 读后续写之助人为乐类（写作专练） 目录 01写作框架（构思导图）------------------------------------------------------------------------1 02故事冲突构建---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 03冲突解决过程---------------------------------------------------------------------------------3 04主题升华技巧---------------------------------------------------------------------------------4 05素材积累---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------5 06真题演练---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------7 05模拟训练---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------9 1. 助人为乐故事模型 困境 某种挑战 互助主题升华 同学朋友、陌生人)或 自救(个人努力 ) 2. 助人为乐故事思维导图 第一部分 故事冲突构建 1．1 情绪渲染技巧（采用感官动词+抽象名词结构） 例句1 A wave of loneliness flooded over the little boy as he sat on the playground bench, watching other kids laugh while no one called him to join.（当小男孩坐在操场长椅上，看着其他孩子欢笑却没人叫他加入时，一阵孤独淹没了他。） 【分析】wave作量词增强画面感，flooded over强化情绪冲击力 例句2 Trembling with anxiety, the student bit her lip nervously as she waited for her exam results. （学生因焦虑而颤抖，在等待考试结果时紧张地咬着嘴唇。） 【分析】trembling作伴随状语，with短语精准定位情绪类型。 例句3 Her face flushed with embarrassment when remembering how she’d accidentally called the teacher “Mom” in class. （想起自己在课堂上不小心把老师叫成“妈妈”时，她的脸因尴尬而发烫。） 【分析】flushed展现情绪变化，with短语点明情感来源 例句4 A flush of shame crept up his neck as classmates laughed at his outdated shoes. 同学们嘲笑他过时的鞋子时，羞耻的红晕爬上他的脖颈。 【分析】crept up动态描绘情绪蔓延，视觉化身体反应 1．2 困境细节搭建 例句1 "Loneliness wrapped around him like a cold fog, making even familiar places feel strange." （孤独像冰冷的雾一样包裹着他，连熟悉的地方都变得陌生。） 【分析】明喻强化形象感 例句2 There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.有个男人卧病在床，他的妻子照顾他和他们的孩子，没法出去工作。 【分析】sick in bed表明状态，非限制性定语从句说明困境的原因 例句3 The wind kept howling with heavy sleet drumming against their jackets, and even worse,darkness started to creep into the park. 狂风呼啸, 雨夹雪拍打着他们的夹克, 更糟糕的是,黑暗开始潜入公园。 【分析】howling，drumming，creep into连续形象化动词，加剧了困境的程度 例句4 Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly, Margarito was certain he was going to die. shaking with fear, he was at a loss about what to do. 马加里托受伤后被困在里面, 泥水迅速上涨, 他确信自 己会死。他吓得发抖, 不知所措。 【分析】Injured and trapped表明困境状态，with the muddy water rising quickly展现危险的动态进程 第二部分 冲突解决过程 2．1 解决方案构思（运用认知动词的多样表达） 例句1 It dawned on Sarah that the abandoned church's bell tower could become a makeshift weather shelter. 莎拉突然想到废弃教堂的钟楼可以改造成临时避寒所。 【分析】dawned on体现渐悟过程，makeshift突出因地制宜 例句2 A cascade of possibilities flooded Jake's mind as he stared at the discarded bicycle parts. 杰克盯着废弃的自行车零件，无数可能性涌入脑海。 【分析】cascade比喻思维爆发，flooded强化思维强度 例句3 The librarian's words echoed in Maria's consciousness: "Every book holds a key." 图书管理员的话在玛丽亚脑海中回响："每本书都藏着钥匙"。 【分析】echoed构建伏笔呼应，隐喻手法深化主题 例句4 In a flash of insight, Mr. Thompson realized the community garden could double as a job training site. 灵光乍现间，汤普森先生意识到社区花园可兼作职业培训场所。 【分析】in a flash强调顿悟速度，double as展示资源整合 2．2 行动链描写（采用动词阶梯式推进） 例句1 With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man’s body slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier.由于两个人从下面推，人群从上面拉，他的身体慢慢地升起，直到有人把他拉到码头上。 【分析】pushing，pulling伴随状语，主句 rose和从句的pulled构成了一副联动的营救画面 例句2 Exhausted and bleeding from shellfish cuts, the two men managed to smile with relief as they watched the nearly drowned man being loaded into an ambulance. 因贝类划伤而流血不止，又早已筋疲力尽的两人，看着险些溺水的男子被抬进救护车时，终于如释重负地勉强挤出了笑容。 【分析】bleeding，smile，watched，loaded一连串的动作，构成了完整动画图景 例句3 She saw a glimmer of hope. she waved her hands wildly, yelling with all her remaining strength, "Help! Help!" 她看到了一线希望。 她疯狂地挥舞着双手, 用尽全力喊道: "救命! 救命!" 【分析】waved是主句动词，伴随动作yelling让表达更形象、更句画面感。 例句4 she looked up at her father, exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards the shore. 她抬头望着父亲，关切地交换了一下眼色，转身拼命地向岸边游去。 【分析】并列谓语和现在分词作伴随状语混合使用，提升表现力 第三部分 主题升华技巧 3．1 感恩互动（构建情感传递闭环） 例句1 I held her tight in my arms and breathed a sigh of relief. Tears of gratitude filled my eyes and I couldn't utter a single word. It took along time before I restored my power of speech.I turned around to say"thank you" to the middle-aged man, only to find he was nowhere to be found. 我把她紧紧地抱在怀里,松了一口气。 感激的泪水溢满了我的眼睛, 我一句话也说不出来。 过了很长时间 , 我才恢复了说话的能力。我转身对那个中年人说 "谢谢" , 却发现他不见了。 【分析】Tears of gratitude filled my eyes无灵主语增强表现力；I couldn't utter a single word否定句表达感恩至深 例句2 Though she still was cold in her body, she felt warmth, just like a warm current rushing through her heart. 虽然她的身体仍然很冷, 但她感觉到了温暖, 就像一股暖流流过她的心田。 【分析】cold ，warmth形成鲜明对比，提升表达效果，明喻增强动感 例句3 In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.刹那间我热泪盈眶，感动得说不出话来。我觉得很温暖，好像胸口有九个太阳。 【分析】as if的虚拟语气，增加了表达力度 例句4 Tucking the handwarmers into her parka, the homeless woman whispered, "This warmth will outlast the winter," her breath crystallizing in the frigid air. 将暖手包塞进派克大衣时，无家可归的女子低语："这份温暖会延续过整个冬天"，呼出的气息在寒空中结晶。 【分析】whispered与crystallizing形成声画对位，隐喻双关深化意境 3．2 主题升华运用（哲学思考） 例句1 On our ride back home, the lady’s grateful words were still ringing in my ears. 在我们回家的路上, 这位女士感激的话语仍在我耳边回响。 【分析】ringing in my ears形成持久的表现力 例句2 That day I not only got the blue ribbon I had looked forward to, but also learned an important lesson that hard work will pay off one day. 那天, 我不仅得到了我所期待的蓝丝带, 而且学到了一个重要的教训 , 那就是努力总会有 回报的。 【分析】not only...but also...通过递进关系，引出哲理性主题 例句3 It was at that time that I fully understood what my boss told me: respecting the students instead of ignoring them will make a difference. 就在那时, 我完全理解老板告诉我的话: 尊重学生而不是忽视他们会有所不同。 【分析】以强调句型引出文章主题，令人深思 例句4 Tom was happy that a small act of his own helped someone in need and inspired kindness in others. 汤姆很高兴自己的一个小举动帮助了需要帮助的人，并激发了别人的善良。 【分析】小中见大的哲理性结尾 背精彩句子，让表达出彩 1.At that moment, I suddenly realized what it meant to serve --- Get to know a person from the bottom of your heart and give what he needs.在那一刻，我突然明白了服务的含义——从心底了解一个人，给予他需要的东西。 2.At the end of the program, Jeremy hugged me tightly and thanked me again and again.在节目结束时，杰里米紧紧地拥抱了我，一遍又一遍地感谢我。 3.At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. I gently hugged him and patted him on the back. Then I walked him home and encouraged him to face life in a positive way. 那一刻，我为这个男孩和他的家庭生活感到心碎。我轻轻地拥抱了他，拍拍他的背。然后我送他回家，并鼓励他以积极的方式面对生活。 4.From what he said, I knew his mother was killed in a car accident three months before. Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, lost his job at the same time. After that, his father became bad-tempered and often shouted at him, ignoring all his requests.从他的话中，我知道他母亲三个月前死于一场车祸。更糟的是，他的父亲当时正沉浸在悲痛之中，同时失去了工作。从那以后，他的父亲变得脾气暴躁，经常对他大吼大叫，无视他的请求 5．From then on, I definitely believe that a far-off relative is not as helpful as a near neighbor. 从那时起，我绝对相信远亲不如近邻。 6．Surprised and moved, the mother stood rooted to the ground, and then bowed low to us, weeping tears of joy. 这位母亲惊讶而感动地站在原地，然后向我们深深地鞠了一躬，喜极而泣。 7．Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: life is meaningful when you help someone in trouble. 许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记亚瑟给我的教训：当你帮助有困难的人时，生活才是有意义的。 8．We wrote out a small card, wishing her a happy birthday and thanking her for the warmth and happiness she brought to us. 我们写了一张小卡片，祝她生日快乐，并感谢她给我们带来的温暖和快乐。 9.I made up my mind to pass the love to others．Just as a saying goes：“The rose's in her hand, the flavor in mine.” 我决定把爱传递给别人。就像谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。” 10.Hats off to him, the man who makes me realize that kindness still rules the world. 向他致敬，是这个人让我意识到善良仍然统治着世界。 11.“My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels．" she continued, exposing her blistered ankles. “我的车在高速公路上抛锚了，如果没有她的帮助，我就永远不可能穿着高跟鞋回家了。”她继续说道，露出了被水泡覆盖的脚踝。 12. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough and everyone involved in for what they did for her.  Molly和Shawn在星期二见面，她说她非常感谢他和所有参与其中的人为她所做的一切。 13. “It was nice to meet him and thank him, because I wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for him ” Molly said. “He and Adam are the ones that jumped in and saved me, and they deserve all the praise in the world as far as I’m concerned.” “很高兴见到他并感谢他，因为如果不是他，我就不会在这里了。”Molly说。“他和Adam是那些跳进来救我的人，我认为他们应该得到世界上所有的赞扬。” 14.Having spent a tough year littered with severe hardship, I cried my heart out in my Jeep on this deserted road for the kindness from some strangers. 经历了一年的艰辛和困难，在这条荒凉的路上，我独自坐在吉普车里，为一些陌生人的善良而痛哭流涕。 15.Words failed me to convey my thanks for his kindness and generosity.我无法用言语表达我对他的善良和慷慨的感激之情。 16.Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.我震惊而感动，盯着这张纸条，为我之前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到一阵内疚。 （2024年6月新高考卷） I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Paragraph1：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2：Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。 ②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。 2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友 【参考范文】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拒绝：reject/refuse ②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb. ③记下，写下：write down/set down 情绪类 ①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably ②开心地：happily/joyfully 【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句） 第一部分 基础训练 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 根据汉语意思完成相关句子。 1．The kind young man, ____________________________________, took him by the hand and led him safely to his parents. 这位善良的年轻人看到迷路的孩子在街上徘徊，他牵起孩子的手将他安全地带回到了父母身边。 2．A woman, ___________________________________, was grateful when a passerby stopped to offer her a ride to the nearest gas station. 一位女士的车在高速公路上抛锚了，当一位路人停下来提供她搭车到最近的加油站时，她感激不尽。 3．A teenage boy, ___________________________________, quickly jumped into the water to save him from drowning. 一名十几岁的男孩听到一名游泳者的求救声后，迅速跳入水中将他从溺水中救了出来。 4．Now, I was definitely __________________________________________. 现在，我非常感谢她伸出援手。 5．Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note_________________________________. 回到家后，我给他和他的妻子写了一封感谢信，感谢他们对我的帮助。 【参考答案】 1. seeing the lost child wandering aimlessly in the street 2. whose car broke down on the highway 3. hearing the cries for help from a distressed swimmer 4. grateful to her for extending a helpful hand 5. for doing me a favour 二、读后续写情景运用—段落 请运用相关单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。 The next morning the young woman ______________________________（帮助约翰规划了一次旅程） to Newport Beach. The young woman had arranged everything for John, _______________________________（这使他非常感激）. John was aware that how unusual that level of generosity was, _______________________________（远远超出他的预期）. He wanted to pay money for what they had done for him, ______________________________（但被拒绝了）. They just told John to ______________________________（把这份善意传递给需要帮助的人）. John made his way to Newport Beach, ______________________________（内心感到温暖） and he wouldn’t feel nervous because he knew there would always be someone who was willing to give a helping hand. 【参考答案】 The next morning the young woman helped John map out a ride to Newport Beach. The young woman had arranged everything for John, which made him really grateful. John was aware that how unusual that level of generosity was, far beyond his expectation. He wanted to pay money for what they had done for him, but was refused. They just told John to pass this kindness on to whoever needed help. John made his way to Newport Beach, feeling warm in his heart and he wouldn’t feel nervous because he knew there would always be someone who was willing to give a helping hand. 第二部分 模拟演练 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·山东模拟预测） It was a sunny Saturday morning. Tom, a passionate hiker, set out on a trail in the mountains. The path was narrow but well-marked, winding through thick forests and across bubbling brooks (小溪). As he walked deeper into the mountains, he noticed the sky gradually becoming cloudy. Suddenly, a strong gust of wind blew through the trees, making them sway violently. Tom realized a storm was approaching. He quickened his pace, looking for shelter. Just then, he saw a small, abandoned cabin (小木屋) by the side of the trail. Its roof was partially damaged, but it was better than nothing. Tom rushed inside and started to look around. It was dirty and filled with spider webs, but in a corner, he found an old flashlight. He hoped it still worked. As the storm hit, the rain poured down in sheets and thunder roared. Lightning flashed, lighting up the dark interior of the cabin. Tom sat on the floor, waiting for the storm to pass. After what seemed like hours, the rain finally began to ease. Tom decided to head back home before it got dark. He stepped out of the cabin and started walking back along the trail. But the storm had caused several landslides, blocking parts of the path. Tom had to carefully climb over rocks and fallen trees. As he was making his way, he heard a faint cry for help. It seemed to be coming from a nearby ravine (沟壑). Tom stopped and listened carefully. The cry came again, more desperate this time. He knew he had to find out where it was coming from. He tied a rope he had brought to a solid tree near the edge of the ravine and slowly started to go down to a lower level, using the flashlight to guide his way. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As he reached the bottom of the ravine, he saw a young girl hide under a rock. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, Tom picked up the girl and started to climb back up the ravine. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tom是一位热情的徒步爱好者，在一个晴朗的周六早晨独自进山徒步。当他深入山区时天气骤变，暴风雨来袭，他躲进一个废弃的小木屋避难。风雨稍歇后返程时发现山体滑坡阻塞了道路，并在沟壑中听到求救声，于是他绑好绳索准备展开救援。 1. 段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“当他到达峡谷底部时，他看到一个年轻女孩藏在一块岩石下面。”可知，第一段可描写女孩讲述遇险经过以及Tom对她的安慰。 ②由第二段首句内容“然后，汤姆抱起女孩，开始爬回峡谷。”可知，第二段Tom带着女孩爬上峡谷的顶部的过程以及最终成功救助女孩。 2. 续写线索：发现女孩——告知受伤经过——处理伤处——爬回峡谷——成功到达峡谷的顶部——获救——感谢 【参考范文】 As he reached the bottom of the ravine, he saw a young girl hide under a rock. She was wet and shivering, her clothes torn. Tom quickly approached her and asked if she was okay. The girl looked up at him with frightened eyes and said that she had slipped and fallen while trying to find shelter during the storm. She had twisted her ankle and couldn’t walk. Tom comforted her, telling her not to worry. He examined her ankle and found that it was swollen but not broken. He took off his jacket and wrapped it around the girl to keep her warm. Then, Tom picked up the girl and started to climb back up the ravine. The rope helped them, but it was still a tough task. The wet and slippery rocks made it a challenge. But he kept going. Finally, they reached the top of the ravine and got to the entrance of the mountain. Tom saw a car there and waved for help. The driver rushed over and took the girl to get medical attention. The girl thanked Tom before she left, and Tom felt a sense of relief and accomplishment. He knew this was an adventure he would never forget. Tom quickly approached her and asked if she was okay. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Tom quickly approached her and asked if she was okay.(if引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]The girl thanked Tom before she left, and Tom felt a sense of relief and accomplishment.(before引导的时间状语从句) 2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·兰州一模） Jameson Lobb, a 24-year-old investment banker from Toronto, had just started his new job on Wall Street. He was sharing a New York City apartment with his college friend, Raphael Jafri, an artificial intelligence engineer. One lunchtime, while working out on Pier (水上码头) 15, overlooking the East River, Lobb suddenly froze. “Someone’ s in the water,” he said. Without hesitation, he climbed over the rail and jumped into the cold, polluted river, still wearing his shoes. Jafri didn’t see the victim but trusted Lobb’s instincts. “Maybe he saw someone in trouble,” he thought. “Or maybe he needs my help.” Without delay, Jafri kicked off his shoes and dove in after his friend. Lobb reached the unconscious man first. He was middle-aged, well-dressed, and weighed about 200 pounds. The man was sinking fast, already three feet below the surface. Lobb dove down,grabbed him, and kicked upward until they both resurfaced. By then, Jafri had arrived. Together,they floated the man on his back, with Jafri supporting his shoulders and Lobb holding his hips and knees. The water was swirling (旋动), and their muscles burned as they struggled to pull the heavy,lifeless body toward the pier. The man’s skin was blue, and he wasn’t breathing. When they finally reached Pier 15, they faced another challenge: how to get out. The pier’s deck was 10 feet above them, and the water’s surface was covered in sharp shellfish. Jafri, barefoot, couldn’t climb without injuring himself. Suddenly, the man stirred (微动), breathing again. In his confusion, he lashed out, hitting Jafri in the face before slipping back into unconsciousness. The two friends, exhausted and struggling,now had to find a way to save themselves and the man they had risked everything to rescue. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the pier, a crowd had gathered. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lobb and Jafri remained in the water a few minutes more, until they were rescued by theCoast Guard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，文章主要讲述了来自多伦多的詹姆森·洛布与拉斐尔·贾弗里在水上码头健身时，发现一名中年男子落水。两人先后毫不犹豫地跳入寒冷且污染严重的河中，合力将昏迷的男子救起。尽管过程中面临重重困难，但他们始终不放弃，最终在岸上群众的协助下成功将男子救上岸。他们的英勇无私行为给所有目击者留下了深刻印象。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在码头上，人群聚集。”可知，第一段可描写人们聚集在码头上，对落水人进行救援，同时洛布和贾弗在码头虽然筋疲力尽，但是仍旧拼尽全力进行救援的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“洛布和贾弗在水中待了15分多钟，才被海岸警卫队救起。”可知，第二段可描写溺水者得到救助后，两人也被救起，现场人们的反应以及两人的心理感受。 2.续写线索：人们焦急——筋疲力竭但是仍坚持救援——成功救援——群众欢呼——感到自豪——留下印象 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: On the pier, a crowd had gathered. Some shouted for help, some scrambled to throw ropes and life jackets into the water, and even someone called the Coast Guard. The man remained unconscious, his body heavy and lifeless, but Lobb and Jafri refused to give up. Despite their exhaustion, they held onto him tightly, their arms and legs burning from the effort. With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man’s body slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier. Paragraph 2: Lobb and Jafri stayed in the water for over 15 minutes before being rescued by the Coast Guard. When they were safely brought to the pier, the crowd erupted in cheers. Exhausted and bleeding from shellfish cuts, the two men managed to smile with relief as they watched the nearly drowned man being loaded into an ambulance. Despite their fatigue, they felt a profound sense of pride, knowing they had done something extraordinary. Their courageous and selfless act of saving a life left a lasting impression on all who witnessed it. 【点睛】[高分句型1]. With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man’s body slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier.（运用了含有with的复合结构和until引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2]. Despite their fatigue, they felt a profound sense of pride, knowing they had done something extraordinary. （运用了介词短语作状语以及现在分词作状语的结构） 3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市月考） The Unexpected Help It was a cold, gloomy afternoon in early November. Mia, a 17-year-old high school student, was rushing to catch the last bus home after a long day at school. Her mind was preoccupied with a challenging math test she had just completed. The wind was biting, and the sky had been threatening rain all day. She had forgotten her umbrella at home, and now, as she stood at the bus stop, she could feel the first drops of rain falling, chilling her skin. Mia sighed, pulling her jacket tighter around her body. The cold made her shiver, and she wished she had remembered to bring the umbrella. Her parents were both working late, and she didn’t have enough money for a taxi. The thought of walking home in this weather made her feel miserable. The last thing she wanted was to get soaked and catch a cold. She glanced down at her phone, but the bus app showed no sign of the bus arriving anytime soon. As she waited, her mind wandered back to the pressures of school. She had been struggling with her grades recently, and the thought of facing another disappointed look from her parents made her stomach churn. Just as the rain began to fall more heavily, a car pulled up beside her. The window rolled down, and a man in his early thirties, dressed in a business suit, called out to her. “Excuse me, are you waiting for the bus?” Mia looked up, surprised by the sudden question. She hadn’t expected anyone to speak to her, especially not a stranger. She nodded cautiously. “Yes, I am.” The man smiled kindly, noticing her discomfort: “It looks like it’s going to rain heavily. I’m heading in the same direction. Would you like a ride to the next bus stop? It’s not safe to stand out here in this weather.” Mia hesitated. She had always been taught to be careful with strangers, but the man seemed genuinely concerned, and the rain was coming down harder. After a brief pause, she nodded. “Okay, thank you.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The man unlocked the passenger door, and Mia quickly climbed inside. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Before she knew it, they had reached the next bus stop. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了Mia在寒冷下雨的傍晚等车时，因忘记带伞且公交迟迟不来而陷入困境，这时一位陌生男子主动提出载她到下一个公交站的故事。 1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“那人打开了乘客门，米娅迅速爬了进去。”可知，第一段可描写Mia上车后的情况，包括车内的温暖让她放松，男子与她聊天，她逐渐放下戒备并分享自己的烦恼，男子给予鼓励等。 ②由第二段首句内容“不知不觉，他们已经到了下一个公交车站。”可知，第二段可描写到达公交站后Mia的感激之情，男子表示很高兴能帮到她，Mia受到鼓舞并决定传递这份善意。 续写线索：上车感受温暖——男子聊天——Mia分享烦恼——男子鼓励——到达公交站——Mia感激并决心传递善意 【参考范文】 The man unlocked the passenger door, and Mia quickly climbed inside. The warmth of the car hit her immediately, chasing away the cold. She thanked the man again, still a bit nervous. The man introduced himself as Mr. Johnson and started chatting casually, asking about her school day. Mia gradually relaxed, sharing her struggles with the math test. Mr. Johnson listened attentively, offering words of encouragement. His kind voice and friendly manner made her feel at ease. Before she knew it, they had reached the next bus stop. Mia was reluctant to leave. She thanked Mr. Johnson sincerely, her eyes shining with gratitude. Mr. Johnson smiled, saying he was glad he could help. As Mia got off the car, she felt a new sense of warmth. This unexpected kindness from a stranger had not only saved her from the rain but also lifted her spirits. She watched as the car drove away, determined to pass on this kindness someday. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As Mia got off the car, she felt a new sense of warmth.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】She watched as the car drove away, determined to pass on this kindness someday.（运用了as引导时间状语从句） 4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·江苏省南通市如皋市高三下上学期适应性考试(一)） At this festive time of the year when November turns to December and Christmas approaches, an incident from the past surfaces in my mind, a moment that inspired me to always seek out opportunities to lend a helping hand. It was nearly twenty years ago, a period when my children were still in their teenage years full of vitality and constantly evolving preferences. I had grown tired of attempting to predict their Christmas wishes, so each year, we took a long car trip to a Shopping Mall. There, I gave them each an envelope stuffed with cash, allowing them to choose exactly what their hearts desired: This specific year, I had thoughtfully saved an extra hundred dollars, intending to treat myself to a few gifts. However, as I walked the length of the Mall, I found myself unable to find anything that truly resonated (产生共鸣) with me. As we finally climbed into the car, ready to depart, I started the engine and began navigating towards the main road. It was then, amidst the hum of traffic and the glow of streetlights, that I caught sight of her — a homeless woman standing by the roadside. She looked much older than her age. She was dressed in a torn, threadbare coat. er gray hair was tangled (缠结) and clumped together in a messy mass. Her face was chapped (皲裂的) from the winter wind. But the thing that struck me most was her eyes. She had the saddest eyes that I had ever seen. “Mom, look at that lady,” one of my children said softly, her voice tinged with concern. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者二十年前的一个圣诞节购物经历，当时作者带着孩子们去购物中心，并打算用额外节省的一百美元为自己买些礼物。然而，在购物中心逛了一圈后，作者并未找到心仪的东西。在离开购物中心回家的路上，作者偶遇了一位流浪妇人，她的凄凉外貌和悲伤的眼神深深触动了作者。这一偶遇让作者意识到，在这个世界上，有些人比自己更需要帮助，从而激发了作者随时伸出援手的意愿。 1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容““我看到她了，”我回答着，慢慢把车停了下来。”可知，第一段可描写那位妇女看到作者后复杂的心情以及作者帮助那位妇女的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“那位妇女犹豫了一会儿，但最终还是同意了。”可知，第二段可描写妇女对作者的帮助表示感谢以及作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：心情复杂——提出帮忙——表示感谢——感悟 【参考范文】       “I see her,” I replied, slowing the car to a stop. I opened the car door and stepped outside. As I approached the homeless woman, she looked up, her sad eyes meeting mine with a mixture of hope and skepticism. I felt a pang of guilt wash over me as I realized how easily I had forgotten about the less fortunate during this festive season. “Excuse me,” I called out gently, “We have some money and some food in the car. Would you like some help?” My children, sensing the significance of the moment, hustled over in a rush as well, their faces alight with curiosity and compassion. The woman hesitated for a moment, but eventually agreed. Her voice trembled as she whispered, “Thank you, thank you so much.” My children quickly grabbed the bags of food and the envelope of money that I had prepared, handing them to her with genuine smiles. The woman clutched the gifts close to her chest, her eyes brimming with tears of appreciation. “God bless you,” she murmured, with heartfelt sincerity. In that brief encounter, I felt a profound sense of fulfillment, knowing that we had made a small but meaningful difference in someone’s life during the holiday season. 【点睛】[高分句型1]As I approached the homeless woman, she looked up, her sad eyes meeting mine with a mixture of hope and skepticism.（运用了as引导时间状语从句，现在分词的独立主格结构） [高分句型2]In that brief encounter, I felt a profound sense of fulfillment, knowing that we had made a small but meaningful difference in someone’s life during the holiday season.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句） 5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·山东省济南市高三下学期一模） “Hey, Isaac! ” Dayna said. There was a touch of awkwardness in her voice. “Feeling ready for this year’s baking competition? ” Dayna’s initiative greetings really surprised me. “Do I look worried? ” I forced a polite smile. To be honest, I had been hoping to fix our relationship but worried about being turned down and making things worse. Dayna and I used to be best friends. Our shared love for baking brought us together, leading us to join Mrs Cooper’s baking classes. We always supported each other during the lessons, which greatly enhanced our baking skills. Last year, I cheered for her to win the championship, but we were in such an embarrassing situation just because of an argument. “Prepare to be amazed, ” I said. She shot me a doubtful look. “We’ll see. ” Today was the day of this year’s competition, whose theme was “cupcakes”. We entered the kitchen at the Students’ Baking Club, where we attended baking classes every Saturday. Family and friends filled a makeshift seating area. After explaining the competition consisted of two rounds, Mrs. Cooper announced the official start of the competition. Immediately, all the contestants quickly dived into their work. As I was working on my creations, I couldn't help glancing (瞥见) at Dayna now and then because I was so used to checking on her when baking. Dayna, on the other hand, was completely focused. Her hands were moving skillfully as she measured, mixed, and poured. She didn’t seem to be affected by our current relationship at all, or maybe she was just better at hiding it. Everything went very well. Soon, Mrs. Cooper announced that Dayna, two other contestants, and I were advancing to the final round. In this round, I got right into my zone. But I quickly realized I hadn’t packed the chocolates that I used for decorating. It was my magic weapon for winning! Sweat rolling down my face, I didn’t know what to do. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dayna must have sensed my panic. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开。文章讲述了作者和Dayna之间的友谊以及他们在烘焙比赛中的经历。两人曾是好朋友，但因一次争吵而关系尴尬。在今年的烘焙比赛中，作者发现自己忘记带装饰用的巧克力，Dayna主动帮助了他，最终作者赢得了比赛。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Dayna一定感觉到了我的恐慌。”可知，第一段可描写Dayna如何察觉到作者的慌乱，并主动伸出援手，帮助他解决问题。 ②由第二段首句内容“多亏Dayna的巧克力，我赢了！”可知，第二段可描写作者如何利用Dayna的巧克力完成作品，并最终赢得比赛，同时表达对Dayna的感激之情。   2.续写线索： Dayna察觉慌乱——主动帮助——作者完成作品——赢得比赛——表达感激——感悟 【参考范文】 Dayna must have sensed my panic. She glanced over at me and quickly realized what had happened. Without hesitation, she walked over to my table and handed me a bag of chocolates. “Here, you can use these,” she said with a smile. “We’re friends, aren’t we?” Her words warmed my heart and made me realize how much I had missed our friendship. I quickly got back to work, using the chocolates to decorate my cupcakes. With renewed confidence, I focused on making the best cupcakes I could.   Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! When Mrs. Cooper announced my name as the winner, I felt a rush of emotions. I walked over to Dayna and gave her a hug. “Thank you so much,” I said sincerely. “You’re welcome,” she replied. “I’m just glad you won.” We both laughed and hugged again. As we walked out of the kitchen together, I knew that our shared love for baking had brought us back together. And this time, I was determined to never let anything come between us again. 【点睛】【高分句型1】She glanced over at me and quickly realized what had happened.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】As we walked out of the kitchen together, I knew that our shared love for baking had brought us back together.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 10 / 29 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$