内容正文:
感情与情绪
2025年真题
1.(2025·山东泰安·中考真题)良好的情绪管理有助于人的身心健康。学会正确处理负面情绪,可以更好地应对生活中的各种困难和挑战。某英语报刊正在以“Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions (负面情绪)”为题向广大中学生征文,请你结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文,谈谈正确处理负面情绪的方法及重要意义,向报刊投稿。提示如下:
写作要求:
1.要点齐全,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80—100。
Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
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2.(2025·山西·中考真题)生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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3.(2025·吉林长春·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们班正在制作最后一期英语手抄报,其中一个栏目为“Words Given to My Teacher”。请你用英文完成其中的一份留言,写出某位老师对你的影响并表达祝福。不少于40词。
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2024年真题
4.(2024·甘肃甘南·中考真题)作为一名初三的学生、你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中,你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。
1. 母校:校园非常美丽,是一个学习的好地方等;
2. 老师:关心学生,对我们有耐心等;
3. 同学:勤奋好学,互相帮助等;
4. 工作人员:工作努力,晚睡早起等;
5. 个人想法:……
要求:
1. 词数80~100 (首句已给出,不计入总词数) ;
2. 要点提示均需涉及,可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词语:patient, help each other, thanks for
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
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Thanks for listening.
2023年真题
5.(2023·江苏盐城·中考真题)在人生的旅程中,亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行,助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with?
2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?
(Give two or three reasons)
…
注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2023·黑龙江·中考真题)初中阶段的学习生活即将结束,假如你是李华,请给你的老师写一张感谢卡,表达感激之情和美好祝福!
Dear Miss Liu,
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Li Hua
7.(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2023·山东烟台·中考真题)假定你是李华,在外教Mr. Brown的指导下,你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Opera Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括:
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢;
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 须包含所有要点提示,并可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2023·四川凉山·中考真题)在成长的过程中,你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人,带你遨游知识海洋的老师,伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他(她)的感谢,请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题,根据下面思维导图提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,向校园广播站投稿。
要求:
1. 语言表达准确,文章连贯、通顺;
2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Thanks, ________
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2022年真题
10.(2022·四川宜宾·中考真题)亲爱的同学,三年的初中学习生活即将结束,你一定有很多感慨。在此之际,请你以“My Favorite Teacher”为题,用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括:
1. 最喜欢的老师;
2. 简单介绍该老师(外貌或性格);
3. 喜欢他(她)的理由(两个);
4. 最想对老师说的话。
注意:
1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名(只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓;学科);
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year junior middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers.
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11.(2022·江苏无锡·中考真题)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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12.(2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题)亲爱的同学,恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中,你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师,表达你对他(她)的感激之情。
内容包括:
1.你对这位老师的印象;
2.你感谢他(她)的原因;
3.你对他(她)的祝福。
注意:
1.词数在80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当举例或拓展;
3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名,师生名字等)。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(2022·重庆·中考真题)有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智,找回方向,解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,并分享你的感悟。
要求:
1. 80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇:anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事(起因、经过、结果)
2.你的感悟(保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……)
3. ……
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
14.(2018·吉林·中考真题)文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful” 为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括:1.你所参加的1---2项课外活动;
2.课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
写作要求:1.词数90词左右;
2.文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
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感情与情绪
2025年真题
1.(2025·山东泰安·中考真题)良好的情绪管理有助于人的身心健康。学会正确处理负面情绪,可以更好地应对生活中的各种困难和挑战。某英语报刊正在以“Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions (负面情绪)”为题向广大中学生征文,请你结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文,谈谈正确处理负面情绪的方法及重要意义,向报刊投稿。提示如下:
写作要求:
1.要点齐全,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80—100。
Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
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【满分优秀范文】
Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions
Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt really sad.
To deal with these negative emotions, first, I communicated with my teacher. She gave me useful advice on study methods. Then, I started taking exercise regularly, like jogging in the morning. It helped me relax and regain energy. Dealing with negative emotions properly is important. It helps solve problems. By talking to others, we can get solutions. Also, it avoids causing more trouble. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.
Let’s learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life.
【知识点】方法/策略、情绪、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍这次经历、处理负面情绪的方法和重要性;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理
②communicate with 和……沟通
③take exercise regularly 定期锻炼身体
④solve problems 解决问题
[高分句型]
①Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.(动名词作主语)
②If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.(条件状语从句)
2.(2025·山西·中考真题)生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括:
·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【满分优秀范文】
Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect.
Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me.
Love is about caring about others’ feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I’ll do the same for them
【知识点】家人和亲人、情感
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容完成写作,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你眼中的爱是什么;
第二步,讲述一个你被爱的故事;
第三步,分享这个故事对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②to my surprise令我惊讶的是
③filled with充满
[高分句型]
Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. (现在分词作状语,宾语从句)
3.(2025·吉林长春·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们班正在制作最后一期英语手抄报,其中一个栏目为“Words Given to My Teacher”。请你用英文完成其中的一份留言,写出某位老师对你的影响并表达祝福。不少于40词。
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【满分优秀范文】:
My dear teacher,
Your patience and kindness have deeply inspired me. When I struggled with English, you always encouraged me to keep trying and helped me practice speaking. Thanks to you, I’ve grown more confident and improved a lot.
Wishing you good health and happiness forever. May your days be filled with joy and success!
Li Hua
【知识点】情感
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇小作文。
②时态:时态以“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”为主。
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,需围绕“老师的影响”和“祝福”展开,可适当补充细节增强感染力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接点明对老师的感激之情,引出下文具体事例。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明老师的影响以及我的个人成长。
第三步,书写结语。表达对老师健康、幸福和成功的真挚祝福,情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①deeply inspired深受鼓舞
②struggled with与……作斗争
③encouraged me to keep trying鼓励我坚持
④grown more confident变得更自信
⑤filled with joy and success充满喜悦与成功
[高分句型]
①When I struggled with English, you always encouraged me to keep trying and helped me practice speaking. (When引导的时间状语从句)
2024年真题
4.(2024·甘肃甘南·中考真题)作为一名初三的学生、你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中,你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。
1. 母校:校园非常美丽,是一个学习的好地方等;
2. 老师:关心学生,对我们有耐心等;
3. 同学:勤奋好学,互相帮助等;
4. 工作人员:工作努力,晚睡早起等;
5. 个人想法:……
要求:
1. 词数80~100 (首句已给出,不计入总词数) ;
2. 要点提示均需涉及,可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词语:patient, help each other, thanks for
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
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Thanks for listening.
【满分优秀范文】
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
Our school is really beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. It’s a great place to study. The teachers care about us a lot. They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. My classmates are hard-working, too. We often help each other with our lessons. We share happiness and sadness together. The school workers are also great. They work hard, get up early and go to bed late.
I’m so thankful for my school, teachers, classmates and workers. I’ll never forget these three years.
Thanks for listening.
【知识点】学校人员、情感
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主旨;
第二步,结合要点提示,介绍学校环境,并向老师、同学、工作人员等表达感激之情;
第三步,谈谈个人的想法,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①care about 关心
②each other 互相
③get up early 早起
④go to bed late 晚睡
[高分句型]
①There are many trees and flowers. (there be句型)
②They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. (时间状语从句)
2023年真题
5.(2023·江苏盐城·中考真题)在人生的旅程中,亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行,助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with?
2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?
(Give two or three reasons)
…
注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don’t feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you forever.
【知识点】学校人员、情感、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品;
第二步,按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因,至少给出两、三个原因,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人
②thanks to多亏,由于
③not…any more不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
②I hope I’ll be with you forever.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
6.(2023·黑龙江·中考真题)初中阶段的学习生活即将结束,假如你是李华,请给你的老师写一张感谢卡,表达感激之情和美好祝福!
Dear Miss Liu,
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Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】:
Dear Miss Liu,
Thanks for teaching me so well. You make our class lively and interesting. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me to go over the problems. I hope you are in good health. And I wish you can keep young and beautiful forever. I am very grateful to you for what you have done for me. I will miss you forever.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【知识点】学校人员、情感
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇小作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求在初中即将结束之际写感谢卡表达对老师的感激之情和美好祝福。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表达感谢;
第二步,讲为何而感谢;
第三步,表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks for doing sth. 因做某事而感谢
②be in trouble 遇到麻烦
③encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me to go over the problems.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I am very grateful to you for what you have done for me.(what引导宾语从句)
7.(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】:
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend? Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】情感、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
8.(2023·山东烟台·中考真题)假定你是李华,在外教Mr. Brown的指导下,你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Opera Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括:
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢;
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 须包含所有要点提示,并可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】情感、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果;
第二步,详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步;
第三步,再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和某人交流
②full of充满
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句)
9.(2023·四川凉山·中考真题)在成长的过程中,你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人,带你遨游知识海洋的老师,伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他(她)的感谢,请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题,根据下面思维导图提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,向校园广播站投稿。
要求:
1. 语言表达准确,文章连贯、通顺;
2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Thanks, ________
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Thanks, Mom
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend. The person that I want to thank most is my mother.
She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me.
To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.
【知识点】家人和亲人、情感
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Thanks, ________”为标题,结合思维导图进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明想感谢的是谁;
第二步,感谢的人的个人信息,想感谢他/她的原因;
第三步,介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①works very hard工作很努力
②takes care of照顾
③all the time一直
④be thankful to对……表示感激
[高分句型]
①The person that I want to thank most is my mother.(that引导的定语从句)
②I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.(that引导的宾语从句)
2022年真题
10.(2022·四川宜宾·中考真题)亲爱的同学,三年的初中学习生活即将结束,你一定有很多感慨。在此之际,请你以“My Favorite Teacher”为题,用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括:
1. 最喜欢的老师;
2. 简单介绍该老师(外貌或性格);
3. 喜欢他(她)的理由(两个);
4. 最想对老师说的话。
注意:
1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名(只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓;学科);
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year junior middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers.
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【满分优秀范文】
My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year Middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers.
As for me, my favorite teacher is Ms. Li, our English teacher. She is a bit thin but very beautiful, with a pair of thick glasses. She is serious and strict. In fact, she often makes her classes so interesting and lively that we all enjoy her lessons. When we are tired in class, she often tells jokes to make us relaxed. With the help of her, we have made great progress in English.
Ms. Li, I only want to say to you: My dream—to be a good senior school student—will come true in the end. Thank you! (I wish you a happy life in your life long journey.)
【知识点】外貌与性格、情绪、学校人员
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,以“My Favorite Teacher”为题,介绍自己喜欢的老师。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。文章可分为三段式:第一段文章已给。第二段阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因。最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
11.(2022·江苏无锡·中考真题)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【满分优秀范文】
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感、学校人员
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容,写出最想感谢的人是谁;他/她的外表、性格;举例说明为何感谢他/她;以及对你的影响。
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容;叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时,叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性,保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
12.(2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题)亲爱的同学,恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中,你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师,表达你对他(她)的感激之情。
内容包括:
1.你对这位老师的印象;
2.你感谢他(她)的原因;
3.你对他(她)的祝福。
注意:
1.词数在80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当举例或拓展;
3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名,师生名字等)。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】:
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.
【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感、学校人员
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,本文开头已经给出,选择一位你想要感谢的老师,表达感激之情,根据提示要点进行写作,可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述,时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作,要求描述对老师的印象,感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
13.(2022·重庆·中考真题)有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智,找回方向,解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,并分享你的感悟。
要求:
1. 80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇:anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事(起因、经过、结果)
2.你的感悟(保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……)
3. ……
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
【满分优秀范文】
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
【知识点】叙事忆旧、情绪
【详解】1.题干解读:本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题,结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决一件小事,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题;第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事;第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
14.(2018·吉林·中考真题)文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful” 为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括:1.你所参加的1---2项课外活动;
2.课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
写作要求:1.词数90词左右;
2.文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
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【满分优秀范文】
After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.
In the volleyball club, I’ ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【知识点】周末活动、情感、情绪
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful为题,给学校的专栏写一篇文章,内容包括两个方面:首先介绍1到2个你参加的课外活动;然后总结课外活动给你带来的收获和感受。题目中只给出了写作的提纲,这里具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力,结合自己的实际情况来补充,并使用正确的英语表达出来。首先要仔细审题,确定写作的提纲和内容;然后确定短文中应使用的人称和时态,通过分析可知,这篇短文应主要以现在时态为主,第一人称来叙述。接下来列出文章中可能用到的词汇、短语和句型,把他们串联成句,为提升文章档次,在文章中要有几处亮点,使用高级词汇、复杂句式,如各类从句、非谓语动词等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章具有连贯性,表达更加流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,短文作者根据题目要求,介绍了自己喜欢的课外活动—打排球,并总结了自己从这项活动中的收获和感受。按照内容划分,短文分成了两段,中心突出,要点明确,有层次性。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般现在时态为主,第一人称I来叙述,合情合理,语言得体,语句通顺,符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子以简单句为主,简洁、明了,也穿插使用了一些复合句,如宾语从句、状语从句等。语句之间使用了恰当的连接成分,使过渡自然,表达流畅。文章中较好的短语和句型有:There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.、Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it.、I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.、All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.等。
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