11 对标2025年全国真题内容之学校设施与人员近年真题精选-2026中考英语作文通关宝典（通用版）

学校设施与人员 2025年真题 1．（2025·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校正在开展“书香校园”活动，英语社团公众号打算做一期以“Dream Library”为主题的推送，为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言，提出你的设想，并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。 提示词语：recommend, new, experience, explore, interest 内容提示： ●What is your dream library like? ●How can students benefit from your idea? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my dream will come true. Thanks. 2．（2025·广西·中考真题）你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My School Library”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍学校的图书馆或图书室（library）。内容包括： 1.基本情况介绍（位置、环境、图书种类等）； 2.对你的帮助； 3.你想为它做的事。 注意：1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇 floor（n.楼层），bright（adj.明亮的），kind（n.种类） My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2024年真题 3．（2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2023年真题 4．（2023·四川遂宁·中考真题）时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活期将开启。对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧，英语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的信息，结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school?”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，在下一堂课上进行分享。 Are you going to live in the school? Advantages: 1.节省时间，专注学习 2.学会独立，管理自我 3.…… Disadvantages: 1.缺乏私人空间，睡眠易受影响 2.没有家人照顾，生活可能不习惯 3.…… My options: 注意： 1.文章开头已给出。不计入总词数； 2.应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥； 3.要求语句通顺，行文连贯； 4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 参将词汇：dormitory（n.宿舍） independent （adj.独立的） private （adj.私人的） manage （v.管理） Are you going to live in the school? A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages and disadvantages.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2022年真题 5．（2022·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2022·河北·中考真题）假如你是学校英文网站的主编，准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏（column）. 请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。 提示：（1）Develop a good relationship（understand, become friends）. （2）Give some suggestions（on homework, after-school activities,…）. 注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2025·江苏扬州·中考真题）校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美” ，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动，请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。 提示： (1) What do you record? (choose one point: views/people/activities… ) (2) How do you record and share it? And why? (3) What do you expect to get from this group activity? (list at least two points) 要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·甘肃甘南·中考真题）作为一名初三的学生、你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中，你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。 1. 母校：校园非常美丽，是一个学习的好地方等； 2. 老师：关心学生，对我们有耐心等； 3. 同学：勤奋好学，互相帮助等； 4. 工作人员：工作努力，晚睡早起等； 5. 个人想法：…… 要求： 1. 词数80~100 (首句已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2. 要点提示均需涉及，可适当增加内容； 3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅； 4. 不用真实姓名、校名和地名。 参考词语：patient, help each other, thanks for Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 10．（2024·西藏·中考真题）教师是学生的良师益友，是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际，我校举办“最美教师”征文活动，请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1．词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．参考图示完成写作，可适当发挥： 4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2024·山东菏泽·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1. 描述该节目； 2. 表达你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。 A Surprise Brought Us Closer Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2024·青海·中考真题）假如你是某外国语学校的一名学生，你们班正在选举班级之星，请根据所给的两位候选人信息，结合自己的看法，任选一位写一篇推荐稿。 Candidates (候选人) Aspects (方面) Li Wei ☆ study hard and have good grades ☆ exercise every day and be good at sports ☆ be confident and optimistic (乐观的) Ma Li ☆ be always willing to help classmates ☆ organize art shows and be good at singing and dancing ☆ be kind and easy-going 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范； 2. 可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 词数80左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 I think ________ should be the star of the class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括： 1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)； 2. 他/她改变你的事件。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文标题已写好。 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2023·江苏盐城·中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. Who/What do you always like being with? 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it? (Give two or three reasons) … 注意事项： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（2023·辽宁抚顺·中考真题）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。 要求： （1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 （3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 16．（2023·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。 要求： 1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 至少含有两个复合句。 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（2023·黑龙江·中考真题）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，假如你是李华，请给你的老师写一张感谢卡，表达感激之情和美好祝福！ Dear Miss Liu, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 18．（2023·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。 （1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。 （2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。 （3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 （4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：蹲下     crouch down 救护车    ambulance 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 学校设施与人员 2025年真题 1．（2025·北京·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校正在开展“书香校园”活动，英语社团公众号打算做一期以“Dream Library”为主题的推送，为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言，提出你的设想，并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。 提示词语：recommend, new, experience, explore, interest 内容提示： ●What is your dream library like? ●How can students benefit from your idea? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my dream will come true. Thanks. 【满分优秀范文】 I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My dream library would be a modern, interactive space with cozy reading corners, e-books, and even VR stations to explore books in new ways. It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests. This kind of library would make reading more fun and engaging. Students could experience stories in different styles, discover new types, and develop a lifelong love for books. Let’s make reading an exciting adventure. I hope my dream will come true. Thanks. 【知识点】学校设施、畅想未来 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：表示设想，主要用虚拟语气，形式为“would/could do”； ③提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，直入主题，描述自己设想中的图书馆，包括其风格与设备； 第二步，介绍该图书馆的益处； 第三步，书写结语（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ① help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 ② this kind of 这种类型的 ③ let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事 [高分句型] ① It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests. (动词不定式作后置定语) ② Let’s make reading an exciting adventure. (祈使句) 2．（2025·广西·中考真题）你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My School Library”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍学校的图书馆或图书室（library）。内容包括： 1.基本情况介绍（位置、环境、图书种类等）； 2.对你的帮助； 3.你想为它做的事。 注意：1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇 floor（n.楼层），bright（adj.明亮的），kind（n.种类） My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. Our school library is on the second floor of the teaching building. It is bright and quiet, with shelves full of books of different kinds, such as storybooks, science books, and magazines. The library has helped me a lot. I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge. It is also a perfect place to study and do homework. To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean. I also plan to donate some interesting books to share with others. I love our school library and hope it becomes even better! 【知识点】学校设施 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍图书馆的基本情况，包括位置、环境、图书种类等； 第三步，介绍图书馆对自己的帮助以及想为它做的事。   [亮点词汇]   ①such as例如   ②give back回报   ③plan to do sth计划做某事   [高分句型]   ①I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge.（which引导的定语从句）   ②To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2024年真题 3．（2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 ① Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you. It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua ② Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice. It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】学校设施、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] （以①为例） ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向她推荐一个学校； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②and so on等等 [高分句型] Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句) 2023年真题 4．（2023·四川遂宁·中考真题）时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活期将开启。对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧，英语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的信息，结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school?”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，在下一堂课上进行分享。 Are you going to live in the school? Advantages: 1.节省时间，专注学习 2.学会独立，管理自我 3.…… Disadvantages: 1.缺乏私人空间，睡眠易受影响 2.没有家人照顾，生活可能不习惯 3.…… My options: 注意： 1.文章开头已给出。不计入总词数； 2.应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥； 3.要求语句通顺，行文连贯； 4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 参将词汇：dormitory（n.宿舍） independent （adj.独立的） private （adj.私人的） manage （v.管理） Are you going to live in the school? A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages and disadvantages.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Are you going to live in the school? A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages and disadvantages. First of all, it can help us save time and not waste time on the road. Living in the school dormitory at the same time can make us focus more on our studies. Secondly, living in the school dormitory can make us learn to be independent and manage ourselves better. At the same time, when we have questions, we can communicate with our teachers or classmates in time. However, the lack of private space in the school dormitory makes sleep easily affected. At the same time, there is no family to take care of. If you have something on your mind, you can’t communicate with your parents in time. I choose to live in the school dormitory, because it can not only cultivate my independence, but also increase the affection between me and my classmates. 【知识点】学校设施、青少年问题、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍住校的好处； 第二步，介绍住校的坏处； 第三步，介绍自己的选择。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with sb.和某人交流 ②the lack of...缺乏…… [高分句型] ①At the same time, when we have questions, we can communicate with our teachers or classmates in time.(when引导的时间状语从句。) ②I choose to in the school , because it can not only cultivate my independence, but also increase the affection between me and my classmates.(not only ...but also ……不仅……而且..) 2022年真题 5．（2022·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想： 读者之家（Reading corner）    劳技工坊（Mini workshop）  艺体天地（Arts and sports centre） 义卖集市（Charity market）    科创小屋（High-tech lab）    心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr Zhang,      I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.      For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one. Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.      Thank you for reading my e-mail.                                                                                                                                                                           Yours                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua 【知识点】学校设施、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想； 第二步，介绍喜欢的理由； 第三步，表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer to do更喜欢做某事 ②turn to求助于 ③suffer from遭受 [高分句型] ① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句） ②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句） 6．（2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside. 【知识点】学校设施 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 7．（2022·河北·中考真题）假如你是学校英文网站的主编，准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏（column）. 请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。 提示：（1）Develop a good relationship（understand, become friends）. （2）Give some suggestions（on homework, after-school activities,…）. 注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. We hope to help students and teachers understand each other and eventually become good friends through this column. If you have any questions, you can ask the teacher directly through the column, and the teacher will reply on time. At the same time, some teachers will put forward some suggestions on how to work efficiently and solve problems. Of course, we will also make suggestions for after-school activities. When the exam comes, some teachers will give some suggestions on homework and how to review. 【知识点】学校设施、学校人员、文体活动、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了发展良好的关系；第二段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了给一些建议 。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 8．（2025·江苏扬州·中考真题）校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美” ，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动，请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。 提示： (1) What do you record? (choose one point: views/people/activities… ) (2) How do you record and share it? And why? (3) What do you expect to get from this group activity? (list at least two points) 要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record the people. We will mainly focus on our teachers and classmates during their daily activities, like teaching, studying together, or helping each other. We plan to take photos and write short notes about these heartwarming moments. Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid. Then, we will share them on the school website or our club’s social media page. This way, more people inside and outside school can see the warm human spirit in our school. From this activity, we expect to understand our school community better and learn to appreciate the kindness around us. We also hope to work better as a team. 【知识点】学校信息、学校人员、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文属于材料作文写作； ② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需围绕“记录的内容、记录和分享的方式及原因、预期收获”展开叙述，注意使用第一人称，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，明确记录的对象（people），并简要说明具体内容（teachers and classmates）； 第二步，具体阐述记录方式（photos and short notes）和分享渠道（school website/social media），并解释原因（capture real expressions, spread warmth）； 第三步，总结预期收获（understand community better, appreciate kindness, teamwork），呼应主题。 [亮点词汇] ①heartwarming moments暖心时刻 ②capture real expressions捕捉真实表情 ③human spirit人文精神 ④appreciate the kindness感恩善意 [高分句型] ① Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid.（现在分词作状语） 9．（2024·甘肃甘南·中考真题）作为一名初三的学生、你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中，你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。 1. 母校：校园非常美丽，是一个学习的好地方等； 2. 老师：关心学生，对我们有耐心等； 3. 同学：勤奋好学，互相帮助等； 4. 工作人员：工作努力，晚睡早起等； 5. 个人想法：…… 要求： 1. 词数80~100 (首句已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2. 要点提示均需涉及，可适当增加内容； 3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅； 4. 不用真实姓名、校名和地名。 参考词语：patient, help each other, thanks for Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school. Our school is really beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. It’s a great place to study. The teachers care about us a lot. They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. My classmates are hard-working, too. We often help each other with our lessons. We share happiness and sadness together. The school workers are also great. They work hard, get up early and go to bed late. I’m so thankful for my school, teachers, classmates and workers. I’ll never forget these three years. Thanks for listening. 【知识点】情感、学校人员 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作主旨； 第二步，结合要点提示，介绍学校环境，并向老师、同学、工作人员等表达感激之情； 第三步，谈谈个人的想法，并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①care about 关心 ②each other 互相 ③get up early 早起 ④go to bed late 晚睡 [高分句型] ①There are many trees and flowers. （there be句型） ②They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. （时间状语从句） 10．（2024·西藏·中考真题）教师是学生的良师益友，是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际，我校举办“最美教师”征文活动，请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1．词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．参考图示完成写作，可适当发挥： 4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.     She is a tall and elegant woman with long black hair and bright eyes. Ms. Li is always kind and patient with her students. Ms. Li is very dedicated to her work. She prepares her lessons carefully and uses various methods to make her classes interesting. Her teaching style is both inspiring and effective. I admire Ms. Li not only for her teaching skills but also for her positive attitude and strong sense of responsibility. She treats every student with respect and fairness. Her passion for teaching and her genuine care for her students make her the most beautiful teacher in my heart. 【知识点】学校人员 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心中的最美教师是谁； 第二步，介绍这个老师的工作态度和方法； 第三步，介绍你这样认为的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① be patient with对……有耐心 ② be dedicated to致力于 ③ sense of responsibility责任感 [高分句型] I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.（宾语从句） 11．（2024·山东菏泽·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1. 描述该节目； 2. 表达你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。 A Surprise Brought Us Closer Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A Surprise Brought Us Closer Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school. At the beginning of the ceremony, our headmaster delivered a speech, expressing his praise, encouragement and expectations to us. The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates. Our teachers collected photos of all of the graduates and made a poster of us all, spelling out the words “Happy Graduation.” They also sang an original song for us, wishing us a bright and wonderful future. I was deeply moved by the teachers’ program. I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future. 【知识点】学校人员、毕业活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：要求以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出对毕业典礼的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①At the beginning of... 在……开始 ②deliver a speech 发表演讲 ③prepare for 准备 [高分句型] ①The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates.（表语从句和定语从句） ② I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.（并列句） 12．（2024·青海·中考真题）假如你是某外国语学校的一名学生，你们班正在选举班级之星，请根据所给的两位候选人信息，结合自己的看法，任选一位写一篇推荐稿。 Candidates (候选人) Aspects (方面) Li Wei ☆ study hard and have good grades ☆ exercise every day and be good at sports ☆ be confident and optimistic (乐观的) Ma Li ☆ be always willing to help classmates ☆ organize art shows and be good at singing and dancing ☆ be kind and easy-going 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范； 2. 可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 词数80左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 I think ________ should be the star of the class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Possible version A I think Li Wei should be the star of the class. Here are my reasons. First of all, Li Wei is a diligent boy. During the class, he always listens to the teachers very carefully. He often studies hard, so he can get good grades on his usual tests. Secondly, Li Wei is an athletic boy. He exercises every day. In his free time, he likes to play soccer and baseball. He joins the sports club. What’s more, he is the captain of the school soccer team. Thirdly, Li Wei is a very confident and optimistic boy. He is very active and outgoing. He likes to take part in all sorts of school activities, such as speech competition and science competition. All in all, I think he is the best candidate for the star of the class. Possible version B I think Ma Li should be the star of the class. Here are my reasons. First of all, Ma Li is a tidy girl who cleans the classroom very often and helps her parents do housework. Secondly, Ma Li is a warm-hearted classmate who is always willing to help her classmates. Whoever needs a hand, she is there to offer. Thirdly, Ma Li is a responsible organizer who is good at singing and dancing. She is in the school art club and she organizes art shows well. A star of the class should not be someone who only cares about himself or herself, but someone who can inspire others in many ways. Therefore, I vote for Ma Li. 【知识点】学校人员 【详解】以Possible version A为例 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己想推荐谁； 第二步，具体从给出的几个方面介绍这个人； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all 首先 ②get good grades 得高分 ③in his free time 在他的空闲时间 ④such as 例如 [高分句型] ①All in all, I think he is the best candidate for the star of the class.（省略that的宾语从句） 13．（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括： 1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)； 2. 他/她改变你的事件。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 短文标题已写好。 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A Person Who Changes Me a Lot In the past three years, my English teacher Mrs Xu has played an important role in my life. She changes me a lot. She is of medium height. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind to us. When I was a seventh-grade student, I was weak in English. I was afraid of speaking English in front of the classmates. Our school held an English speech competition. She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well. She gave me the strength to overcome the difficulty. With her help, I finished the speech successfully and won the third place. From then on, I became interested in English and made great progress. Thanks to her, I realize that I should face the difficulties bravely. As long as I work hard, I will succeed. 【知识点】学校人员、叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；   第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。   [亮点词汇]   ①play a role in在……中扮演角色   ②be of medium height中等身材 ③be weak in不擅长 ④be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事 ⑤take part in参加 [高分句型] ①She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well.（疑问词+动词不定式结构） ②As long as I work hard, I will succeed.（条件状语从句） 14．（2023·江苏盐城·中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. Who/What do you always like being with? 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it? (Give two or three reasons) … 注意事项： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Being with You You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class. Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don’t feel nervous any more. You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you forever. 【知识点】学校人员、情感、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品； 第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人 ②thanks to多亏，由于 ③not…any more不再 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） ②I hope I’ll be with you forever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） 15．（2023·辽宁抚顺·中考真题）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。 要求： （1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 （3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 【满分优秀范文】 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school. Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 【知识点】学校人员、叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受； 第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as也，又，和 ②fit in适应 ③feel at home感觉自在 [高分句型] ①I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） ③Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness.（现在分词短语作状语） 16．（2023·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。 要求： 1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 至少含有两个复合句。 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. Zhao Yu is 15 years old. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has some hobbies. He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is also good at playing the erhu. Zhao Yu is very creative and he has invented some small things. He even won two prizes for his inventions. Zhao Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community. Also, he is active. He often takes part in many meaningful activities. Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him. Zhao Yu is an excellent boy. Let’s learn from him. 【知识点】个人信息、学校人员 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“新时代好少年”赵宇同学的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点；注意文中要包含两个以上的复合句。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）； 第二步，具体介绍赵宇的个人信息和事迹； 第三步，做出评价，并呼吁大家一起向他学习。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②work as以……身份而工作 ③take part in参加 ④learn from sb向某人学习 [高分句型] ①He thinks it’s relaxing.  (宾语从句) ②When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community.(when引导的时间状语从句) ③Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) 17．（2023·黑龙江·中考真题）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，假如你是李华，请给你的老师写一张感谢卡，表达感激之情和美好祝福！ Dear Miss Liu, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Miss Liu, Thanks for teaching me so well. You make our class lively and interesting. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me to go over the problems. I hope you are in good health. And I wish you can keep young and beautiful forever. I am very grateful to you for what you have done for me. I will miss you forever. Best wishes! Li Hua 【知识点】学校人员、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：题目要求在初中即将结束之际写感谢卡表达对老师的感激之情和美好祝福。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表达感谢； 第二步，讲为何而感谢； 第三步，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①thanks for doing sth. 因做某事而感谢 ②be in trouble 遇到麻烦 ③encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me to go over the problems.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I am very grateful to you for what you have done for me.（what引导宾语从句） 18．（2023·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。 （1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。 （2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。 （3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。 （4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：蹲下     crouch down 救护车    ambulance 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang. On a rainy day, Wang Liang saw a group of people gathering on the road. He went over and saw an old woman lying on the ground. Knowing the situation, he crouched down to hold an umbrella for the old man. When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly. I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others. We should learn from him. Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】学校人员、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的五个要点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学王亮的感人故事。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事； 第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事； 第三步，发表自己的感想； 第四步，期望收到对方回复。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事 ②go over 走过去 ③see sb doing sth. 看到某人正在做某事 ④learn from sb. 向某人学习 [高分句型] ①When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others.（省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$