内容正文:
13.shoulder
①Itappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhim
tomove.我拍拍这个人的肩膀,叫他动一下.
②Myshouldersdroppedwithrelief.
我的肩膀松弛了下来.
③Heshoulderedopenthedoor.
他用肩膀顶开了门.
④Sheshoulderedherwaythroughthecrowd.
她用肩膀在人群中挤出一条路来.
⑤Helooked(back)overhisshoulder.他回头看.
14.heart
①MyheartacheswhenIthinkoftheirsorrow.
当我想到他们的悲痛时,我的心很痛.
②Inside,hisheartwasslowlybreaking.
他的心在慢慢地碎裂.
③Hesmiledandherheartmelted.
他笑了,她的心融化了.
④Herheartwaspoundingwithexcitement.
她的心激动地怦怦直跳.
⑤Hisheartthumpedwithfear.
他的心因为害怕而怦怦直跳.
15.back
①Heleanedhisbackagainstthebar.
他斜倚着这根棍子.
②Theytiedhishandsbehindhisback.
他们把他的双手绑在他的背后.
③Hewascarryingasmalchildonhisback.
他正背着一个小孩.
④Shewaslyingonherbackonthesofa.
她正躺在沙发上.
⑤Hebackedslowlyoutoftheroom.
他慢慢地退出了房间.
16.foot
①Shejumpedtoherfeet whensheheardthe
news.
当她听到这个消息时,她跳了起来.
②Shewastapping/stampingherfeetimpatiently.
她不耐烦地跺着脚,来回走动.
③Shedraggedherfeetasshereluctantlyfolowed
herparents.她 不 情 愿 地 跟 在 父 母 后 面,拖 着
脚步.
④MyfeetslippedasIwasabouttoshootandI
missedthebal.
当我 正 要 射 门 的 时 候 我 脚 下 滑 了 一 下,一 脚
踢空.
⑤Theycarriedhimoutoftheroom withhisfeet
kicking.他们把他拖出房间,他的脚在空中乱踢.
17.knee
①Suddenlyherkneesweakenedandshefeltothe
floor.突然她双膝一软,跪倒在地.
②Hehuggedhiskneestokeep warm.他 抱 膝
取暖.
③HegotdownonhiskneesandbeggedforforG
giveness.他双膝跪地,祈求原谅.
④Shesatonherfatherskneeswhilehereadhera
story.
爸爸 给 她 读 故 事 的 时 候,她 坐 在 她 爸 爸 的 膝
盖上.
⑤Hewasonhisknees,searchingforthemissing
ring.他跪在地上寻找丢失的戒指.
18.leg
①Shecrossedthefinishlineonhertiredlegs.
她用她那疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线.
②Herosetohisfeetonshakylegs.
他双腿颤抖地站了起来.
层级二 读后续写的读和写
No.1 读什么?
“读后续写”读什么? 首先读篇章结构,即点题-指向-进展-评议-结局-回应,逐层推进.其中结
局是续写的核心任务.读后续写的文本解读,应寻找点题,了解故事梗概;明确指向,把握故事基调;分析
进展,厘清情节走向;体会评议,体验人物思想.
No.2 如何续?
“读后续写”如何续? 要续写的两段,首段助推
进展走向高潮,尾段合理解决故事矛盾.因此,考
生须认真研读段落开头语,找出核心词句(伏笔),
确定扩展方向.
1.研读段落开头语,找出核心词汇(伏笔),确定扩
展方向.(两段首句信息)整合,确定第一段续写
的方向)
Para.1:AtlastSoapystoppedbeforeanold
churchwheretheorganistwasplayingaSunday
anthem(圣歌).
Q1.Whatdidthechurchandtheanthem
meantoSoapy?
Q2.Whydidthechurchandtheanthem
havesuchagoodinfluenceonSoapy?
Q3.Howdidhefeel?
ThesweetmusiccametoSoapysearsand
heldhimattheironfence.ThemoonwasshinG
ing.Thebirdstwitteredsleepilyundertheroof.
AndtheanthemthattheorganistplayedcemenG
tedSoapytotheironfence,forhehadknownit
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写作寻芳 专题二 读后续写
welinthedayswhenhislifecontainedsuch
thingsasmothersandrosesandambitionsand
friends.
2.情节确定之后,语言是实现续写“完整性和融洽
性”的主要途径,判断原文的语言风格(质朴、华
丽、欢快、忧伤、幽默)并进行模仿,使续写部
分与原文用词相仿,句式相近,语气相通.
AtlastSoapystoppedbeforeanoldchurch
wheretheorganistwasplayingaSundayanG
them.ThesweetmusiccametoSoapysearsand
heldhimattheironfence.ThemoonwasshinG
ing.Thebirdstwitteredsleepilyundertheroof.
AndtheanthemthattheorganistplayedcemenG
tedSoapytotheironfence,forhehadknownit
welinthedayswhenhislifecontainedsuch
thingsasmothersandrosesandambitionsand
friends.
Theinfluenceofthemusicandthechurch
producedasuddenand wonderfulchangein
Soapyssoul.Ina momentastrongimpulse
movedhimtobattlewithhisdesperatefate.He
wouldmakeamanoutofhimselfagain.Those
sweetnoteshadsetuparevolutioninhim.TomorG
rowhewouldbesomebodyintheworld!Sadly,it
begantorain.Soapywenttopickuptheumbrela
hehadthrownaway.“Isthatyourumbrela?”
askedapoliceman.“Eh...”Soapyhesitated.
“Thencomealongthief.”saidthepoliceman.
Finaly,Soapywassentencedto3monthsimG
prisonment.
3.续写首段助推进展走向高潮,续写尾段合理解决
故事矛盾.
结局是续写的核心任务,出人意料又合乎情理,
令人回味无穷的结局是续写最大的成功(隐含着
回应,体现作者的价值观).
No.3 如何评?
“读后续写”要求阅读后进行续写,考查理解文章内容、结构和上下文逻辑关
系,以及合理发挥想象力创造新内容并运用丰富的词汇和语法结构进行准确、连
贯表达的能力,落实了基础性、综合性和创新性的考查要求.针对读后续写,建
议把复习的重心放在语言上,在复习的过程中注意积累高级词汇和丰富的句式,
充实各种场景描写的素材.
No.4 写作步骤
第一步:提炼六个要素,获取主旨大意
读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文.所
以阅 读 文 本 时,要 提 炼 出 六 个 基 本 要 素:who,
where,when,what,why和how.考生在阅读文本
过程中只有把握好这六个要素,才能总结出文章大
意和故事情节,进而推断出作者的写作意图,轻松
获取故事的主旨大意.
第二步:理清故事脉络,把握情感变化
读后续写的文体以记叙文为主.线索是贯穿
整个故事的脉络,它把文本中的各个事件连起来,
所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开.记叙文一
般有两条故事发展线索:情节(plots)线索和情感
(emotion)线索.考生可以利用图表或思维导图理
清故事的发展脉络,把握作者的情感变化.这样,
在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和
语言.
第三步:分析段落首句,设计几个问题
分析续写部分所给的两个段首句对提高所写
内容和原文的融洽度至关重要.考生可以先分析
一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关
系、转折关系,还是因果关系等.然后,根据自己的
判断设计几个小问题:根据段首句得知什么? 续写
开始写什么? 接下来写什么? 续写第一段的段尾
如何衔接第二段的开头? 续写第二段的段尾如何
才能照应故事的主旨大意?
第四步:设计结尾情节,拔高价值取向
考生在做好前三步的基础上,必须紧紧围绕故
事的发展脉络,展开合理的想象,巧妙地设计所续
写的两段的结尾情节.设计结尾情节时,考生可以
借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题.比如:
人物接下来要做什么、如何做、为什么这么做、结果
会怎样等.考生在想好这些问题后,还要注意设计
好续写的第二段的结尾,让结尾处的情感得到升华
或拔高,把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体
现出来.
第五步:列出关键词汇,续写连贯句群
设计好要续写的两段的情节后,考生可以先在草
稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描
写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来,并按事件的发生顺
序逐一理清.最后,考生用关键词汇重构句子,写出
连贯一致的句群.
第六步:升格低级词句,誊写完善成文
考生在写好两段的内容后,可以根据语法知识
把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格.升格低
级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语
言风格,与原文在衔接上更加融洽.完成这一步
后,考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美
观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上.
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艺考生文化课百日冲关 英语(WY)
(2025全国一卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容
和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的
短文.
MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhome
withfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmalgatherG
ingintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsof
snacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardin
order.
Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorun
andplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadntcounG
tedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a
50Gpoundbal offire.Thoughfriendly,hecould
easilyknockovermyniecessmal boysand my
sixGmonthGoldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothG
ershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeep
himoutside.
Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywas
usinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthin
thebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.
Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.
Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.
Itwasanawkwardmoment.IdidntwantToG
bytoberunningaroundinthehouse,and my
brotherwasnthappy withdrivinghomewitha
wetdog.Eventualy,mybrotherdecidedtoleave
ratherthanforcetheissue.
Afewdayspassed,andIhadntheardanyG
thingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressed
wishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycame
asa surprise — a shock,actualy: “Not a
chance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyovertheway
wehadparted.Afteral,Ihadlefthim little
choice.Wel,helgetoverit,Ireasoned.
Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIget
intouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinking
heshouldcalfirst.However,myconscience(良
心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmy
brothersshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesand
hiswifeofthirtyGfiveyearshadpassedawayafew
monthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,
theonewhokepthimgoing.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrived
atmybrothersdoor.
技法领悟
主人公搬新家举办聚会庆祝,因担心弟弟的狗
Toby影响聚会,要求弟弟看好狗,后因天气变化导
致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂.两个月后作者意识
到自己的过错,主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉,
最终兄弟俩和解的故事,展现了亲情中理解与包容
的重要性.
[第一步] 提取六个要素,获取主旨大意
when
earlysummer,aseasonsuitableforoutG
doorgatherings
where
Thenewhomeoftheprotagonistandhis
wife,particularlythebackyard,whichis
themainvenueforthegathering.
who I,mybrother,mywife,otherfamilymembers
what
Theprotagonistandhis wife wantto
hostafamily gatheringintheir new
hometosharetheirjoy.However,the
brotherbringsTobytothegathering,
whichcausesaseriesofproblems.
why
Theweathersuddenlychanges,andthe
gatheringendsprematurely.ThequesG
tionofTobysstaybecomesanissue.
how
Aftertheweathersuddenlychanges,and
theprotagonistinsiststhatTobyremain
inthebackyard,leadingtothebrothers
dissatisfactionanddeparture.
theme
The relationship between brothersis
veryimportant.
[第二步] 理清故事脉络,把握情感变化
1.故事发展线
Introduction:主人公搬新家举办聚会庆祝,邀请
家人参加.
Incident:弟弟带着他的宠物狗 Toby来参加聚
会,这引发了一系列问题.
RisingAction:天气突然变了,天开始下雨,聚会
提前结束了,主人公坚持让 Toby留在后院,导
致弟弟不满并离开.
Climax:弟弟离开后,主人公反思自己的行为,意
识到自己处理不当.他决定主动向弟弟道歉,修
复他们的关系.
Solution:待续.
Conclusion:待续.
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写作寻芳 专题二 读后续写
2.情感发展线
开始,主人公担心弟弟的狗 Toby影响聚会,要
求弟弟看好狗→聚餐很顺利,高兴→天突然下
雨,主人公不想让狗进入室内,坚持让 Toby留
在后院,气氛很尴尬→弟弟不满,生气并离开
3.人物特征
I:负责准备后院,并担心他弟弟的狗 Toby.
Mybrother:妻子去世,与狗 Toby为伴.
Mywife:主人公的伴侣为聚会准备食物,后来建
议主人公与他的兄弟和解.
[第三步] 分析段落首句,设计几个问题
续写第一段首句“我意识到是我的错误”针对第
一段续写情节我们可以提出以下问题:
①作者意识到他的错误是什么?
②作者采取了什么补救措施?
③他弟弟对采取的措施反应是什么?
根据“解决问题原则”和续写第二段首句“拿着妻
子做的饼干,我来到弟弟家门口.”可知续写第一
段的情节可以是:
①我认为错误是什么
②我采取了什么措施
③弟弟接受了我的道歉
[第四步] 设计收尾情节,提高价值取向
根据“解决问题原则”、“正能量原则”和“符合文
章主题原则”,结局是兄弟俩恢复了亲情.再结
合续写第二段首句“拿着妻子做的饼干,我来到
弟弟家门口.”,针对第二段续写情节我们可以提
出以下问题:
①兄弟俩见面后的反应是什么?
②兄弟俩见面后做了什么?
③兄弟俩的关系会怎样?
回答问题可知续写第二段的情节可以是:
①弟弟开门后,兄弟俩见面后应该有些尴尬
②兄弟俩然后进行了愉快地交谈并且我递上带
来的饼干
③最后出现兄弟俩和 Toby和谐相处的一面,体
现了亲情,升华了主题
[第五步] 列出关键词语,续写连贯句群
Ⅰ.关键词
MywifeandI,holdaparty,mybrotherandToG
by,begintorain
Ⅱ.其他词汇(汉译英)
1.sharedournewhomewithfamilyandfriends
与家人和朋友分享我们的新家
2.mybrothershowedup我弟弟出现了
3.anawkwardmoment尴尬的时刻
4.decidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue
决定离开而不是强行解决这个问题
5.suggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother
建议我联系我弟弟
Ⅲ.续写句群
第一段续写句子
1.Ihadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyunder
controlthatIfailedtoconsiderhowimportant
Tobywasto mybrotherduringthisdifficult
time.
我一直专注于控制聚会,以至于在这段困难时
期,我没有考虑到托比对我弟弟有多重要.
2.Mypridehadkeptmefromreachingoutand
now monthshadpassedwithoutaproperconG
versation.
我的自尊心让我无法伸出缓解援手,现在几个月
过去了,没有进行过一次适当的交谈.
3.Tomyrelief,hecaledbackthenextday,and
weagreedtogettogethersoon.
令我欣慰的是,他第二天又打来电话,我们同意
很快再聚.
第二段翻译句子
4.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,andfora
moment,neitherofusspoke.
他惊讶地笑着打开它,一会儿,我们俩都没说话.
5.WesatontheporchwithTobyrestingbeside
us,andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits.
我们坐在门廊上,托比在我们旁边休息,我递给
他那盒饼干.
6.AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmy
brothersleg,Iknew wewerefinalyonthe
pathtohealing.
当我看着托比轻轻地把头靠在我弟弟的腿上时,
我知道我们终于走上了恢复关系的道路.
[第六步] 升格低级词汇,眷写完善成文
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ihad
beensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrol
thatIfailedtoconsiderhowimportantTobywas
tomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.Mypride
hadkeptmefromreachingout,andnow months
hadpassed withoutaproperconversation.One
evening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoice
message,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingif
wecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecaledbackthe
nextday,andweagreedtogettogethersoon.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,IarG
rivedatmybrothersdoor.Heopeneditwitha
surprisedsmile,andforamoment,neitherofus
spoke.Thenwehugged — somethingwehadnt
donesincebeforehiswifepassedaway.Wesaton
theporchwithTobyrestingbesideus,andIhandG
edhimtheboxofbiscuits.“Thankyou,”hesaid
quietly.Wetalkedforhours,laughing,remembeG
ringoldtimes,andslowlyrebuilding whathad
beenlost.AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthishead
onmybrothersleg,Iknewwewerefinalyonthe
pathtohealing.
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Pleaserefertotheattachmentforthevideo.Thisshort
filmisabout8minuteslong.Ifitstoolong,youcaneditit
byyourself.Ifyouhaveanyotherrequirements,Iwiltry
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ply.
Yours,
LiHua
2.通知
[参考范文]
Dearschoolmates,
AFirstAidTraining Workshopwilbeheldat2:00
pmnextTuesdayintheSchoolAuditorium.ThisworkG
shop,tobeconductedbyprofessionaltrainersfromtheRed
CrossSociety,aimstoequipstudentswithessentialfirst
aidskilsthatcanbeusedinemergencysituations.
Participantswillearnbasicfirstaidprocedures,how
torespondtocommoninjuries,andtheimportanceof
maintainingcomposureunderpressure.Additionaly,there
wilbehandsGonpracticesessions,providingstudentswith
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day.Dontmissthisvaluableopportunity!
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3.演讲稿
[参考范文]
TechnologyandLife
Today,Iam honoredtodeliveraspeech withthe
themeof“TechnologyandLife”.
Technologyhasgreatlyimprovedourdailylifeinmany
ways.First,smartphonesandtheInternetmakecommuniG
cationfaster— wecanvideocalanyoneworldwideinstantG
ly.Second,AItoolsliketranslationappshelpbreaklanG
guagebarriers.Third,smarthomedevicesfreeusfrom
chores.Mostimportantly,medicaltechnologysaveslives
throughadvancedtreatments.
However,technologyisadoubleGedgedsword.While
itbringsconvenience,overusecanleadtoaddictionorreG
ducefaceGtoGfaceinteraction.Inmyopinion,weshouldemG
bracetechnologywisely—usingittosolveproblemsbutnot
lettingitcontrolus.
Lets enjoy techs benefits while staying human!
Thankyou!
层级十 人物介绍、新闻报道、
叙事活动、倡议书和征文投稿
1.人物介绍
[参考范文]
DearRick,
Imdelightedtoknowthatyouaregoingtowritean
articleaboutChinesepoems.
MyfavoritepoetisDuFu,whoisregardedasoneof
thegreatestpoetsinChinesehistory.HeisquiteproducG
tive,havingleftabout1,500poemsbehind,mostofwhich
arestilpopulartoday.Ilovehimnotonlybecausehehas
writtenmanygreatpoems,butbecausehehasshowndeep
concernfortheordinarypeople.
IthinkDuFu:ChinasGreatestPoet,a58Gminute
documentaryproducedbyBBC,mightbeofgreathelp.It
hastracedDusstepsaloverChinaandtranslated15ofhis
poemsintoEnglish.Imsureyouwilenjoyit!
Bestwishes.
Yours,
LiHua
2.新闻报道
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LearnmoreaboutthelatestAI
Lastweek,ourschoolsuccessfulyhostedanevent
aimedatinformingstudentsofthelatestadvancementsin
AIandenhancingstudentsunderstandingofAItechnology
anditsimplicationsforfuturedevelopment.
Theeventfeaturedaseriesofengagingactivities.An
expertfromtheAIindustrydeliveredanimportantspeech,
presentingthelatesttrendsandinnovations.WorkshopsalG
lowedhandsGonexperiencewith AItoolsandplatforms,
whilemeetingsdiscussedthechalengesposedbyAI.AddiG
tionaly,therewasanexhibitionshowcasingvariousAIG
powereddevicesandprojectsundertakenbyourstudents.
TheresponsetotheeventwasoverwhelminglyposiG
tive.Studentshavesinceexpressedintentionstopursue
coursesorprojectsrelatedtoAI.
3.叙事活动
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VolunteeringattheAnimalShelter
Lastweekend,Iparticipatedinavolunteeractivityat
ananimalshelter,whichturnedouttobeanunforgettable
andmeaningfulexperience.
Duringmyservice,Itookonvariousimportanttasks.
First,Icarefulycleanedtheanimalslivingareas,remoG
vingdirtandreplacingoldbeddingtoensureatidyenvironG
mentforthem.Then,Ipreparedfoodfordifferentanimals,
givingcatstheirfavoritecannedfoodandofferingparrotsa
mixofseedsandchoppedfruits.Whatsmore,Ispentalot
oftimeplaying withthem,likethrowingbalsforthe
dogs,which madetheanimalsfeellesslonelyand much
happier.ThemosttouchingmomentcamewhenatimidresG
cueddogfinalyapproached meforpetting(抚 摸)after
hoursofpatientinteraction.Itwasincrediblyheartwarming
towitnessitstrustinmegradualybuildingupthroughour
interaction.
Thisvolunteeringexperiencenotonlymademerealize
thesignificanceofanimalprotection,butalsostrengthened
mydeterminationtocontinuouslyparticipateinvolunteer
activities.
4.倡议书
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Dearfelowstudents,
Ourschoolhaslaunchedthe“YearofWeightManageG
ment”activity.Thisactivityaimstoimprovethehealthof
alteachersandstudents.Managingweightiscrucialasit
helpspreventvariousdiseasesandboostsouroveral welG
being.
Tomanageweighteffectively,weshouldhaveabalG
anceddiet,reducingjunkfoodintakeandincreasingfruits,
vegetables,and wholegrains.Also,regularexerciselike
jogging,swimming,orcyclingisnecessary.
Letsaljointhismeaningfulactivity.Bymanagingour
weight,wecanembraceahealthierandmoreenergeticlife.
StudentUnion
5.征文投稿
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AHilGclimbingCompetition
Inordertoenhancethestudentsawarenessofbody
building,ahilGclimbingcompetition,withthethemeof
“HealthIsFirst”,washeldlastSundaybyourschool.
Itwasasunnyday.Alstudentswithjoygatheredon
theschoolgatefirst.Then,aftertheheadmasterdelivereda
speechaboutsafetyandrules,wesetoffexcitedlyat
7:30.Altheway,weenjoyedthebeautifulsceneryofnaG
tureandsharedinterestingstoriesbesidestryingourbestto
moveupward.Itwasatabout10:00thatwealreached
thetopofthehil.Thetopthreestudentscomefromclass
one,four,andnine.
Althoughnotreceivinganaward,IwasntdisappointG
edatal,forIhadreceivedbetterhealthandfriendship.
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