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Unit 1 Friendship
单元话题(友谊)写作满分范文15篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1.假设Sally是你最好的朋友。请根据以下表格的内容提示,写一篇题为“My best friend”的英文短文,介绍一下Sally。
外貌
又高又瘦,短头发,大眼睛
最喜欢的科目
数学
兴趣爱好
旅游,做美食,看电影
评价
对别人友好、有耐心;常常帮助朋友解决困难;……
要求:
1. 短文应包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:70左右。
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【答案】例文
My best friend
Sally is my best friend. She is tall and thin with short hair and big eyes. Her favourite subject is maths. Sally likes travelling and is good at making delicious food as well. And she often watches movies in her free time.
Sally is friendly and patient with others. She often helps friends with their trouble. She tries her best to make people around her happy. I am glad to have such a good friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:为“一般现在时”;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,表明Sally是最好的朋友,并介绍其外貌特征、最喜欢的科目与兴趣爱好;
第二步,讲述其性格特征,并分享自己对她的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at 擅长
② as well 也
③ in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
④ be patient with 对……有耐心
⑤ help sb. with 帮某人做某事
⑥ try one’s best to do 尽力做某事
[高分句型]
① She is tall and thin with short hair and big eyes. (介词短语作伴随状语)
2.友谊就像花朵,在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像船帆,在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契,是一种温暖,是迷茫时的明灯,是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华,你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊 (Value Our Friendship)”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请结合提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。
参考信息:
(1)Who is your best friend?
(2)What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have?
(3)What do you do to value your friendship?
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【答案】例文
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.
My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in maths. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other. Although we have some differences, we are good friends.
When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he’s a true friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据写作要点以及提示问题,来介绍一下你的好朋友,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明友谊的重要性,引出下文;
第二步,介绍自己最好的朋友是谁,具体阐述你与他/她之间的异同;
第三步,总结怎样珍惜友谊。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②do well in 在……某方面干得好
③learn from 向……学习
④be in trouble 有麻烦
[高分句型]
①Although we have some differences, we are good friends. (although引导让步状语从句)
②When we are in trouble, we care about each other. (when引导时间状语从句)
③I think he’s a true friend. (that省略的宾语从句)
3.假如你是Fu Xing,最近你认识了一位新朋友Dave,你觉得他符合你的择友标准,你准备发邮件和你的笔友Teng Fei分享此事。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语介绍你的新朋友以及你们之间的异同。
(1)What is your new friend like?
(2)Are you the same or different? How?
(3)What do you think a true friend should be like?
(4)Say more about both of you.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;已给出的部分不计入总词数。
Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
【答案】例文:
Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going?
I can’t wait to tell you that I have made a new friend, Dave. We are the same age. He is of medium build. He is funny and always makes me laugh.
He is similar to me in some ways. We both like basketball, but he plays it better than me. He is really kind and often helps me with basketball. So I’m getting better at basketball. Also, we like reading in our free time. However, we are a little different. I always get better grades than he does. Maybe I should give him more help with his schoolwork.
In my opinion, a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点围绕新朋友的外貌性格、与自己的异同、对真正朋友的看法以及更多关于两人的信息展开,需确保涵盖所有要点,使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信目的,即迫不及待分享新认识的朋友;
第二步,介绍新朋友的外貌和性格特点,阐述与新朋友的异同,包括爱好、成绩等方面;
第三步,说明自己对真正朋友的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②get along well with与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
I can’t wait to tell you that I have made a new friend, Dave. (that引导的宾语从句)
4.在你的成长过程中,和朋友一起度过的时光总会让你感到开心快乐,经久难忘。你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“A sweet memory with friends”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向广播站投稿,内容包括:
1.朋友的重要性;
2.你的亲身经历;
3.表达希望或心愿。
要求:
1.词数80-100,开头已为你写好,不计入字数;
2.短文需包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
A sweet memory with friends
Life is a blank sheet of paper written by moments, and it is these sweet moments with friends that give it color. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A sweet memory with friends
Life is a blank sheet of paper written by moments, and it is these sweet moments with friends that give it color.
Friends are very important in our life. They can share our happiness and sadness. They can support us when we are in need. I have a friend like this. We have known each other since we were very young. We often play together. She showed me that there’s always someone who has my back. I remember one time, I was very sad because I failed an exam. She was there for me. She comforted me and encouraged me to study harder. I will never forget that moment.
I hope we can be friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:讲述朋友的重要性以及和朋友一起度过的快乐时光,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明朋友的重要性,引出下文;
第二步,详细讲述朋友的重要性以及自己的亲身经历,注意细节充分,信息覆盖全面,三观正确;
第三步,表达希望和心愿,总结全文。
亮点词汇]
①in need 需要帮助的
②have one’s back 支持某人
③encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①She showed me that there’s always someone who has my back.(宾语从句)
②I was very sad because I failed an exam.(原因状语从句)
5.朋友是一种默契,是一种温暖,是迷茫时的明灯,是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华,你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊(Value Our Friendship)”为题的英语演讲比赛,请按照以下要求用英语写一篇演讲稿。
参考词汇:be good at,learn from,encourage,care about,respect (尊重),…
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, we must value our friendship.
【答案】 Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life. Friendship is very important in our life. My best friend is Tom. We both like sports, and basketball is our favorite. Playing basketball together makes us really happy.
Although we both love sports, we are different in many ways. Tom is very lively and funny, and he can always make people laugh. I’m a bit shy, but I do well in schoolwork. We help each other a lot. He helps me become more confident, and I help him with his study.
To keep our friendship strong, we always care about each other. When one of us has problems, the other is always there to help. We also respect each other’s thoughts and hobbies. By doing these things, our friendship gets better and better.
All in all, we must value our friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,引出友谊话题并介绍朋友;
第二步:具体阐述朋友间的异同点及互助表现;
第三步:书写结语,总结维系友谊的方法及其带来的美好结果。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in擅长
②each other互相
③care about关心、在意
[高分句型]
①Although we both love sports, we are different in many ways.(让步状语从句)
②When one of us has problems, the other is always there to help.(时间状语从句)
进阶拓展训练5篇
6.友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助,共同进步;也能相互陪伴,令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
参考词汇:friendly, encourage, share, help, make progress, realize (意识到), …
要求:1.可使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Friendship is important to everyone. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Friendship is important to everyone. My best friend is Lucy. She is outgoing and always ready to help others. Last term, I failed a math test and felt very sad. Lucy noticed my mood and came to comfort me. She spent her free time helping me review difficult problems and encouraged me not to give up. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
From this experience, I realized that true friends support each other through thick and thin. Friendship is not just about having fun but also about growing together. I’m lucky to have Lucy, and I’ll always cherish our friendship!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的好朋友及她的性格;
第二步,介绍自己和好朋友之间最难忘的经历;
第三步,介绍自己从这次经历中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
① give up放弃
② make great progress取得巨大进步
③ through thick and thin同甘共苦
④ have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
From this experience, I realized that true friends support each other through thick and thin.(that引导的宾语从句)
7.在我们的生活中,友谊是非常重要的,那么我们该如何去维系我们的友谊呢?请以“How to Keep a Friendship”为题,并根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 保持联系;
2. 互相尊重,诚实以待;
3. 互帮互助;
4. ……
要求:
1. 书写规范,字迹工整,条理清晰;
2. 包括全部提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important.
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【答案】例文
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important. If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try our best to keep a friendship. My tips are as follows.
Firstly, we should always keep in touch with our friends by sending e-mails, writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly, we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
In a word, if we want to keep a friendship, we’d better treat our friends as we want to be treated. And we should treasure friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,注意要点齐全,条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题。通过讲述友谊的重要性引出保持友谊的建议;
第二步,具体介绍如何保持友谊;
第三步,书写结语,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①make a great difference to对……产生重大影响
②take ... seriously认真对待
③keep in touch with保持联系
[高分句型]
①If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. (if引导条件状语从句;which引导定语从句)
②Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try our best to keep a friendship. (since引导原因状语从句)
8.学校英语广播站正在开展以“The Story Between My Best Friend and Me”为题的征文活动。请你根据参考信息,简单描述你最好的朋友的一些显著特质(适当运用比较级或最高级),并说说你们之间的故事,尤其是难忘的或者触动你内心的故事。
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥;文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。
参考信息:
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【答案】例文
The Story Between My Best Friend and Me
My best friend is Lily. She has bigger eyes and longer hair than me. She is also more outgoing. We both like game shows and sports. We often play badminton together. And neither of us likes watching TV.
We have a lot of warm stories. Once, I failed an important exam. I was so sad that I didn’t want to talk to anyone. But Lily was there to listen. She cared about my feelings and helped me with my study. She told me that failure is the mother of success.
That’s the story between my best friend and me. It’s full of love and warmth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己和好朋友的故事,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯并适当运用比较级或最高级。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍好朋友的外貌特征和兴趣爱好;
第二步,介绍自己与好朋友之间的故事;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to sb和某人交谈
②care about关心
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I was so sad that I didn’t want to talk to anyone. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②She told me that failure is the mother of success. (that引导的宾语从句)
9.在我们的生活中,友谊是非常重要的,那么我们该如何去维系我们的友谊呢?请以“How to Keep a Friendship”为题,并根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 互帮互助;
2. 真诚相待;
3. 乐于分享;
4. 珍视友谊。
要求:
1. 书写规范,字迹工整,条理清晰;
2. 包括全部提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important. If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try our best to keep a friendship. My tips are as follows.
Firstly, we should always keep in touch with our friends by sending e-mails, writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly, we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
In a word, if we want to keep a friendship, we’d better treat our friends as we want to be treated. And we should treasure friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点题,提出友谊这个话题;
第二步,具体阐述怎样维持一段友谊;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a great difference产生重大影响
②In addition此外
③each other彼此
④In a word总之
[高分句型]
①If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life. (if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的定语从句)
②In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10.什么样的人才是大家眼中的好朋友呢?八班的同学就此在全班做了一个调查,请根据调查结果为话题写一篇调查报告。
提示词:topic话题 in my opinion依我看来 good-looking好看的 in fashion时尚
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 用到所给的提示词,可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
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【答案】例文
Recently, we made a survey report. The topic is “What kind of person is considered a good friend?”
According to the survey conducted in Class 8, we found that most students think a good friend should be friendly and helpful. They believe that good friends are the ones who help each other with their studies and personal problems. Some students also think that being loyal and honest is very important.
In my opinion, a person who is good-looking and in fashion can be attractive, but it’s the inner qualities that make a true friend. A good friend should always be supportive and understanding. That’s the kind of friend we all need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明调查的主题;
第二步,描述调查的结果,多数学生认为好朋友应该友好和乐于助人;
第三步,表达个人观点,真正的朋友最重要的是内在品质。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人
②loyal and honest忠诚且诚实
③supportive and understanding支持且理解
④each other彼此
⑤In one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①According to the survey conducted in Class 8, we found that most students think a good friend should be friendly and helpful. (that引导的宾语从句)
②In my opinion, a person who is good-looking and in fashion can be attractive, but it’s the inner qualities that make a true friend. (who引导的定语从句)
能力综合实践5篇
11.上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动,下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果,请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。
内容包括以下几点:
1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点;
2. 介绍一位你的好朋友,并描述你和好朋友在外貌,性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处;
3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康,为什么?(至少两条理由)
要求:字数 80-100字,文中不得出现真实的人名。
开头已给出,不计入字数。
Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文:
Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying High school asked this question among 500 students. Here are the results.
35% of the students thought friends should be the same, while 30% said friends should be different and the rest 35% didn’t care if friends are the same or different. For me, I also don’t mind the differences between friends. But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart.
My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. We both like talking with others, but Lily is more outgoing and friendlier than me. We both like sports, but I only like watching sports on TV. Lily likes to play it every day, because she says it is healthy for the body and the mind. She also likes to eat healthy food while I enjoy fast food, so I think Lily is much healthier than me. I should learn from her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体说明图表内容以及你和好朋友之间的相同与不同之处并做出评价;
第三步,表达你和好朋友谁的生活方式哪个更健康以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①reach for one’s hand帮助某人
②touch one’s heart打动某人
③as ... as和……一样……
④talk with和……交谈
[高分句型]
①But I think a true friend should reach for your hand and touch your heart. (宾语从句)
②My best friend Lily is as tall as me but I am heavier than her. (并列句)
12.遇到好朋友是缘分,古有彼此信任的管鲍之交也有彼此欣赏的知音之交,你和你的朋友是什么样的友谊呢?请用英文从友谊内涵理解,相貌性格异同,难忘经历分享等方面向王林介绍你的好朋友Mike,讲讲你们之间的故事。
What do you think of friendship?
What are the differences and similarities between you and Mike?
Share a story between you.
Something more about your friend.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Lin,
I’m happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
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【答案】例文
Dear Wang Lin,
I’m happy to tell you something about my friend Mike. Friendship, to me, is about trust, understanding, and mutual growth. Mike and I share a love for sports, especially basketball, but we differ in our personalities. Mike is adventurous and spontaneous, while I am more cautious and planned. Despite these differences, we complement each other well.
One unforgettable moment was during a charity run. I was struggling to keep up, but Mike slowed down to match my pace and encouraged me throughout. Thanks to his support, we finished the race together, feeling a great sense of achievement.
Mike is always there for me, offering advice and making me laugh. He has a way of lifting my spirits, even on tough days. Our friendship shows that true friends accept and support each other, helping us become better versions of ourselves.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息,写信介绍自己的好朋友,分享你们之间的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,谈谈自己的友谊的看法并介绍自己与好朋友的异同;
第二步,分享难忘时刻;
第三步,谈谈朋友及友谊。
[亮点词汇]
①slow down 慢下来
②thanks to 多亏了
③on tough days 在艰难的日子里
[高分句型]
①Mike is adventurous and spontaneous, while I am more cautious and planned.(while连接并列句)
②Our friendship shows that true friends accept and support each other, helping us become better versions of ourselves.(that引导宾语从句)
13. 天下快意之事莫若友,快友之事莫若谈。
某英文网站正在举办以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你与好友之间发生的一件事,并谈谈你对友谊的看法。
提示词语:stressed, share, advice, support, cheer...up
内容提示:
What happened between you and your friend?
What do you think of friendship?
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【答案】例文
Last term, I was stressed about my math exam and couldn’t sleep well. My friend Lucy noticed that and spent two evenings helping me review. She shared useful learning methods and encouraged me not to give up. With her support, I got a good grade.
I think friendship is like a warm light. It gives you courage when you’re down and makes happy moments more special. True friends always stand by you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般过去时为主;
③提示:文章围绕“友谊”展开,包含具体事例和对友谊的感悟,内容完整,情感真挚,逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇交代背景:上学期因数学考试压力大睡不好,引出朋友Lucy的帮助;
第二步,具体描述她花两个晚上帮忙复习、分享学习方法、鼓励自己不放弃,以及在其支持下取得好成绩的过程,用事例支撑友谊的意义;
第三步,由事例升华到对友谊的感悟。将友谊比作温暖的光,说明它在人低落时给予勇气、让快乐时刻更特别,最后点明真正的朋友总会支持自己,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①stressed有压力的
②review复习
③learning methods学习方法
④encouraged鼓励
⑤support支持
[高分句型]
It gives you courage when you’re down and makes happy moments more special.(when引导时间状语从句)
14.假设你是Leo,你的美国朋友Simon想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件,把你最好的朋友Daniel介绍给他。Daniel情况见下表:
姓名
Daniel
外貌和个性
很高,戴着一副眼镜,有幽默感,乐于助人
爱好
喜欢大自然,是观鸟俱乐部成员;对DIY着迷,……(举例)
喜欢的动物及理由
1、熊猫;2、理由:(1)圆圆胖胖,很可爱 (2)是中国的象征(symbol)
喜欢的季节及理由
1、……;2、理由:……(至少给出两点理由)
寒假计划
去哈尔滨旅游,滑雪(skiing),看漂亮的冰灯,品尝美食
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
Dear Simon,
How are you? I am writing to introduce my best friend to you.
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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Look forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Leo
【答案】例文
Dear Simon,
How are you? I am writing to introduce my best friend to you.
His name is Daniel. He is tall and often wears a pair of glasses. He has a sense of humor. He is always ready to help others.
As for his hobbies, he loves nature. He is a member of the Birdwatching Club. When he is free, he likes to watch the birds. He is also crazy about DIY. He is good at making fruit salad and cakes. He often makes things with recycled materials and decorates his house. He is smart and creative.
He likes pandas best. He thinks pandas are fat and lovely. The panda is a symbol of China. What about his favorite season? It’s winter. He likes snow. He can make a snowman with his friends. Besides, he can skate and ski. He is good at skiing.
During this winter vacation, Daniel plans to visit Harbin with his parents. He will go skiing, enjoy beautiful ice lanterns and taste the delicious food there. He is sure he will have a good time there.
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Leo
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写电子邮件的目的——介绍最好的朋友,从而引出话题;
第二步,介绍朋友的姓名、外貌和个性;
第三步,介绍朋友的爱好;
第四步,介绍朋友最喜欢的动物和季节及其原因;
第五步,介绍朋友的寒假计划;
第六步,书写总结并期待对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
① have a sense of humor 有幽默感
② be crazy about 着迷于
③ make a snowman 堆雪人
[高分句型]
① When he is free, he likes to watch the birds. (when引导时间状语从句)
② He is sure he will have a good time there. (宾语从句)
15.“A friend is one that knows you as you are, understands where you have been, accepts who you have become, and still, gently allows you to know. ” —William Shakspeare
俗话说,同道为朋,同志为友。在茫茫人海中,能够遇到好朋友,是一种缘分,也是一种幸运。请以“My ________ friend”为题,写一篇英文短文,分享你们之间的故事。
注意事项:
1.补全题目,如“true, best, kind, warm-hearted, helpful, patient, hard-working, generous”等;
2.分享你们之间的故事,文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My ________ friend
Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My best friend
Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.
My best friend is someone who has always been by my side. My best friend is Linda. She is much quieter and taller than me. She has long brown hair and bright blue eyes. She is very kind and always ready to help others. We met in primary school and have been inseparable since then. We like to do our homework together after school and we always help each other. We both like playing tennis, too.
We share many happy memories together, and I am grateful to have her in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据文章已给出的开头,引出“我”的朋友;
第二步,具体阐述朋友的外貌及“我们”之间的故事;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①by one’s side在某人身边
②inseparable形影不离
③each other彼此
④be grateful to感激
[高分句型]
①Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. (whether引导的让步状语从句)
②My best friend is someone who has always been by my side. (who引导的定语从句)
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Unit 1 Friendship
单元话题(友谊)写作满分范文15篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1.假设Sally是你最好的朋友。请根据以下表格的内容提示,写一篇题为“My best friend”的英文短文,介绍一下Sally。
外貌
又高又瘦,短头发,大眼睛
最喜欢的科目
数学
兴趣爱好
旅游,做美食,看电影
评价
对别人友好、有耐心;常常帮助朋友解决困难;……
要求:
1. 短文应包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:70左右。
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2.友谊就像花朵,在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像船帆,在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契,是一种温暖,是迷茫时的明灯,是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华,你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊 (Value Our Friendship)”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请结合提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。
参考信息:
(1)Who is your best friend?
(2)What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have?
(3)What do you do to value your friendship?
要求:
(1)80—120词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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3.假如你是Fu Xing,最近你认识了一位新朋友Dave,你觉得他符合你的择友标准,你准备发邮件和你的笔友Teng Fei分享此事。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语介绍你的新朋友以及你们之间的异同。
(1)What is your new friend like?
(2)Are you the same or different? How?
(3)What do you think a true friend should be like?
(4)Say more about both of you.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;已给出的部分不计入总词数。
Dear Teng Fei,
How is everything going?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Fu Xing
4.在你的成长过程中,和朋友一起度过的时光总会让你感到开心快乐,经久难忘。你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“A sweet memory with friends”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向广播站投稿,内容包括:
1.朋友的重要性;
2.你的亲身经历;
3.表达希望或心愿。
要求:
1.词数80-100,开头已为你写好,不计入字数;
2.短文需包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
A sweet memory with friends
Life is a blank sheet of paper written by moments, and it is these sweet moments with friends that give it color. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.朋友是一种默契,是一种温暖,是迷茫时的明灯,是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华,你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊(Value Our Friendship)”为题的英语演讲比赛,请按照以下要求用英语写一篇演讲稿。
参考词汇:be good at,learn from,encourage,care about,respect (尊重),…
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, we must value our friendship.
进阶拓展训练5篇
6.友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助,共同进步;也能相互陪伴,令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
参考词汇:friendly, encourage, share, help, make progress, realize (意识到), …
要求:1.可使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Friendship is important to everyone. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.在我们的生活中,友谊是非常重要的,那么我们该如何去维系我们的友谊呢?请以“How to Keep a Friendship”为题,并根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 保持联系;
2. 互相尊重,诚实以待;
3. 互帮互助;
4. ……
要求:
1. 书写规范,字迹工整,条理清晰;
2. 包括全部提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important.
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8.学校英语广播站正在开展以“The Story Between My Best Friend and Me”为题的征文活动。请你根据参考信息,简单描述你最好的朋友的一些显著特质(适当运用比较级或最高级),并说说你们之间的故事,尤其是难忘的或者触动你内心的故事。
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥;文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。
参考信息:
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.在我们的生活中,友谊是非常重要的,那么我们该如何去维系我们的友谊呢?请以“How to Keep a Friendship”为题,并根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 互帮互助;
2. 真诚相待;
3. 乐于分享;
4. 珍视友谊。
要求:
1. 书写规范,字迹工整,条理清晰;
2. 包括全部提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Friendship
For us, friendship is very important. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.什么样的人才是大家眼中的好朋友呢?八班的同学就此在全班做了一个调查,请根据调查结果为话题写一篇调查报告。
提示词:topic话题 in my opinion依我看来 good-looking好看的 in fashion时尚
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 用到所给的提示词,可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
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能力综合实践5篇
11.上周育英中学开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动,下面是他们对全校 500 个学生的调查结果,请你根据调查表格和下面信息写一篇短文。
内容包括以下几点:
1. 简要描述表格内容以及你对交友的观点;
2. 介绍一位你的好朋友,并描述你和好朋友在外貌,性格和爱好方面的相同和不同之处;
3. 你和好朋友谁的生活方式更健康,为什么?(至少两条理由)
要求:字数 80-100字,文中不得出现真实的人名。
开头已给出,不计入字数。
Should friends be different or the same? Last week Yuying high school asked this questionamong 500 students. Here are the results.
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12.遇到好朋友是缘分,古有彼此信任的管鲍之交也有彼此欣赏的知音之交,你和你的朋友是什么样的友谊呢?请用英文从友谊内涵理解,相貌性格异同,难忘经历分享等方面向王林介绍你的好朋友Mike,讲讲你们之间的故事。
What do you think of friendship?
What are the differences and similarities between you and Mike?
Share a story between you.
Something more about your friend.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Lin,
I’m happy to tell you something about my friend Mike.
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13. 天下快意之事莫若友,快友之事莫若谈。
某英文网站正在举办以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你与好友之间发生的一件事,并谈谈你对友谊的看法。
提示词语:stressed, share, advice, support, cheer...up
内容提示:
What happened between you and your friend?
What do you think of friendship?
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14.假设你是Leo,你的美国朋友Simon想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件,把你最好的朋友Daniel介绍给他。Daniel情况见下表:
姓名
Daniel
外貌和个性
很高,戴着一副眼镜,有幽默感,乐于助人
爱好
喜欢大自然,是观鸟俱乐部成员;对DIY着迷,……(举例)
喜欢的动物及理由
1、熊猫;2、理由:(1)圆圆胖胖,很可爱 (2)是中国的象征(symbol)
喜欢的季节及理由
1、……;2、理由:……(至少给出两点理由)
寒假计划
去哈尔滨旅游,滑雪(skiing),看漂亮的冰灯,品尝美食
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
Dear Simon,
How are you? I am writing to introduce my best friend to you.
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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Look forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Leo
15.“A friend is one that knows you as you are, understands where you have been, accepts who you have become, and still, gently allows you to know. ” —William Shakspeare
俗话说,同道为朋,同志为友。在茫茫人海中,能够遇到好朋友,是一种缘分,也是一种幸运。请以“My ________ friend”为题,写一篇英文短文,分享你们之间的故事。
注意事项:
1.补全题目,如“true, best, kind, warm-hearted, helpful, patient, hard-working, generous”等;
2.分享你们之间的故事,文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My ________ friend
Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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