2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---生日钱的温暖约定 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了记叙文续写专题，将情节逻辑、角色情感、线索分析、主题表达等核心考点按照文本要素（角色、时空线、线索）和续写要求构建知识网络，通过文本分析任务（角色提取、线索梳理、情节线推演）和问题驱动设计，引导学生自主提取关键信息，形成续写思路的整体认知框架。 亮点在于文本诊断工具和分层任务设计，如文本分析环节设置线索提取表（How/What/Why类问题），学生通过自主填写诊断续写薄弱环节，匹配到基础梳理型、情节构造型或主题升华型学习路径，培养学生的思维品质和学习能力。每个模块配有情节推演流程图和反思总结表，帮助学生建立个性化续写策略，教师可通过学情数据精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Laura’s birthday, she received a music box with $20 from her grandparents, who wanted Laura to get a very special doll (玩偶) chosen by herself. Excited, Laura wanted to buy two dolls — one for her and one for her best friend Becky. The only doll Becky had was the one her sister played with. Becky came to Laura’s home and looked at the music box and the other gifts. “Becky, I’m so excited! With my birthday money I’ll buy two dolls, one for you and one for me. Just think how special that will be,” Laura said. “Well, Laura, I think you should get just one doll, the prettiest one you can find. That’s your birthday money,” replied Becky. “Come on!” said Laura. “Let’s go to the store now.” They found a beautiful baby doll in the toy store. Laura picked up the doll which cost $15 and called it Baby Sue. They agreed that it was the most special of all. “I’m going to put you back in your corner, Baby Sue. But I’ll come back for you,” Laura said. “Why didn’t you buy it, Laura?” asked Becky. “I want to talk to my mom first,” said Laura, with a sparkle (闪耀的光) in her eyes. That night Laura and her mother talked a lot about Baby Sue and Becky. Laura said Becky was too kind to say she’d like a Baby Sue of her own. But she saw eagerness in Becky’s eyes. Becky would love to have a doll of her own. She wished she could give Becky a Baby Sue... but she would like a Baby Sue, too. Laura’s mother told her she would think about it and maybe there would be a solution to the situation. Then they went to bed. Laura could see that her mother had a special surprise sparkle in her eyes the next morning, but Mother didn’t tell her anything. “Let’s check the toy store today,” said Laura when Becky came over to play that afternoon. 注意 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Laura and Becky skipped to the store but found Baby Sue wasn’t there! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Laura’s mother was waiting for them at home with her eyes sparkling. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1．角色：___________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：from Laura's birthday------（续写） 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 How did Laura get the money to buy dolls?： What doll did Laura and Becky like?：___________ Why did Laura want to buy a doll for Becky?：___________ What was Laura's inner conflict?：___________ What did Laura's mother do?：___________ How did Becky react to Laura's plan?：___________ 5．情节线：Laura 生日收到祖父母的钱，想给自己和 Becky 各买一个玩偶。→______________________________→__________________________________→第二天下午 Laura 和 Becky 去玩具店。→（续写）___________ 6．情感线：Laura：兴奋（收到礼物时）→期待（想给 Becky 买玩偶时）→纠结（想给 Becky 买又想要自己的时）→（续写）___________ Becky：（对 Laura 的想法表示让她自己买时）→（续写）___________ Laura's mother：（认真倾听并想办法时）→（续写）___________ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文：___________ 英文：___________ 8. 句式： —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 9. 主题（本文属于人与他人）：___________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：Laura and Becky skipped to the store but found Baby Sue wasn’t there! 衔接句 1——— 对 “found Baby Sue wasn’t there” 提问 “Laura 和 Becky 当时的感受如何？”：How did Laura and Becky feel when they found Baby Sue wasn’t there? 过渡句推演：衔接 1→___________→衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “the result of looking for Baby Sue” 提问 “她们找到 Baby Sue 了吗？店员怎么说？”：Did they find Baby Sue? What did the clerk say? 第二段提示句：Laura’s mother was waiting for them at home with her eyes sparkling. 衔接句 3——— 对 “with her eyes sparkling” 提问 “妈妈为什么眼神闪亮？她准备了什么？”：Why were mother's eyes sparkling? What had she prepared? 过渡句推演：衔接 3→___________→主题 主题：___________ 段落构思 第一段：Laura and Becky skipped to the store but found Baby Sue wasn’t there! →①___________→②___________→③___________； 英文： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Laura’s mother was waiting for them at home with her eyes sparkling. →④___________→⑤___________→⑥___________。 英文： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析​ 1．角色：Laura、Becky、Laura's mother、Laura's grandparents​ 2．视角：第第三人称​ 3．时空线：from Laura's birthday---Laura and Becky going to the toy store---talking at night---the next afternoon---（续写）​ 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​ How did Laura get the money to buy dolls?：She received $20 from her grandparents on her birthday. Why did Laura want to buy a doll for Becky?：Because Becky only had a doll that her sister played with and Laura saw eagerness in Becky's eyes.​ What was Laura's inner conflict?：She wanted to give Becky a Baby Sue but also wanted one for herself, and the money might not be enough.​ What did Laura's mother do?：She said she would think about a solution and had a special surprise sparkle in her eyes the next morning.​ How did Becky react to Laura's plan?：She thought Laura should get just one doll for herself.​ 5．情节线：Laura 生日收到祖父母的钱，想给自己和 Becky 各买一个玩偶。→Laura 和 Becky 在玩具店看中 Baby Sue，Laura 没买想先和妈妈说。→Laura 和妈妈谈论此事，妈妈说会想办法。→第二天下午 Laura 和 Becky 去玩具店。→（续写）她们发现 Baby Sue 不见了，之后回家看到妈妈准备的惊喜。​ 6．情感线：Laura：兴奋（收到礼物时）→期待（想给 Becky 买玩偶时）→纠结（想给 Becky 买又想要自己的时）→（续写）失落（发现玩偶不见时）→惊喜（看到妈妈的安排时）​ Becky：（对 Laura 的想法表示让她自己买时）→（续写）失落（玩偶不见时）→开心（看到惊喜时）​ Laura's mother：（认真倾听并想办法时）→（续写）欣慰（看到孩子们的反应时）​ 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​ 中文：Laura 生日收到祖父母的 20 美元，想给自己和好友 Becky 各买一个名为 Baby Sue 的玩偶。她和 Becky 在玩具店看中了这个 15 美元的玩偶，Laura 没立刻买，想和妈妈商量。妈妈说会有解决办法，第二天下午 Laura 和 Becky 再去玩具店。​ 英文：Laura received received $20 from her grandparents on her birthday.They found the 15 doll in the toy store, but Laura didn't buy it immediately and wanted to talk to her mom. Her mom said there would be a solution, and Laura and Becky went to the store again the next afternoon.​ 8. 句式： It was on Laura's birthday that she came into possession of $20 from her grandparents, a sum earmarked for purchasing a doll of her choice.强调句型 The $20 that Laura obtained from her grandparents on her birthday served as the financial means to fulfill her wish of buying dolls.定语从句 What enabled Laura to have the money for dolls was the $20 gift from her grandparents on her special birthday.主语从句 It was through the $20 presented by her grandparents on her birthday that Laura acquired the funds to buy the dolls.强调句型 The $20 bestowed upon Laura by her grandparents on her birthday constituted the money she intended to use for purchasing the dolls.定语从句 9. 主题（本文属于人与他人）：友谊与分享​ 情节构造​ 第一段提示句：Laura and Becky skipped to the store but found Baby Sue wasn’t there!​ 衔接句 1——— 对 “found Baby Sue wasn’t there” 提问 “Laura 和 Becky 当时的感受如何？”：How did Laura and Becky feel when they found Baby Sue wasn’t there?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→她们寻找并询问店员→衔接 2​ 衔接句 2——— 对 “the result of looking for Baby Sue” 提问 “她们找到 Baby Sue 了吗？店员怎么说？”：Did they find Baby Sue? What did the clerk say?​ 第二段提示句：Laura’s mother was waiting for them at home with her eyes sparkling.​ 衔接句 3——— 对 “with her eyes sparkling” 提问 “妈妈为什么眼神闪亮？她准备了什么？”：Why were mother's eyes sparkling? What had she prepared?​ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→孩子们看到惊喜后的反应→主题​ 主题：真正的友谊在于分享，善意会带来温暖的回报​ 段落构思​ 第一段：Laura and Becky skipped to the store but found Baby Sue wasn’t there!​ →①Laura 和 Becky 感到失落和着急，四处寻找→②她们询问店员，得知 Baby Sue 被买走了→③两人失望地离开商店；​ 英文：Laura's face fell, and Becky's eyes dimmed. They searched every shelf, but there was no sign of Baby Sue. "Excuse me, did you sell the Baby Sue doll?" Laura asked the clerk. The clerk nodded, "A lady bought it this morning." Becky squeezed Laura's hand, "It's okay, Laura. You can still get a nice doll for yourself." Laura sighed, feeling sad that she couldn't give Becky the doll. They walked back home, their steps much slower.​ 第二段：Laura’s mother was waiting for them at home with her eyes sparkling.​ →④妈妈笑着拿出两个 Baby Sue 玩偶→⑤Laura 和 Becky 又惊又喜→⑥她们明白是妈妈买了玩偶，开心地拥抱妈妈；​ 英文："Look what I got," she said, holding up two Baby Sue dolls. Laura and Becky gasped, their eyes wide with surprise. "I bought them this morning when I knew your wish," mother explained. Laura hugged one doll and gave the other to Becky, "Now we both have Baby Sue!" Becky smiled brightly, "Thank you, Laura, and thank you, Mrs.!" The room was filled with their happy laughter, and the dolls became a symbol of their precious friendship.​ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$