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高频话题04 居住环境
同步写作课讲义
居住环境 类书面表达围绕“人与自我”:主要介绍了你可以为家庭做些什么、如何让家变得更舒适以及家的意义,与此相关的写作主要涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己的家庭,表达家对你的意义;
②向朋友介绍自己家的空间特征,礼貌地请求朋友帮助你装饰房间。
③谈论家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由,讨论中学生是否应该做家务。
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题,并根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境。
1.要点:
1)你生活在什么样的环境。
2)你喜欢这个环境的什么。
3)你对这个环境有何期望。
2. 要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2)词数100左右。
What I like about where I live
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写作指导
Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一篇说明文,介绍自己生活的环境。
定时态:描写生活环境是客观事实,以一般现在时为主。
定人称:介绍的是自己的生活环境,需用第一人称。
定选材:①结合实际生活描述自己居住环境的特点。
②描述对居住环境的喜爱及原因。
③表达对这个居住环境的未来的期待。
写作框架
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:引出话题——你生活在什么样的环境中。
①I live in a peaceful country/a small village/a quiet city/a modern city.
②My house is located right in the center of the city. The streets around my house are usually noisy.
③I moved to…(a town/a city) with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house on Renmin Road now.
中间:提炼要点、组织语言,阐述你喜欢这个环境的原因。
①Different from other cities/villages/communities…, it is/it has…
②People enjoy a slow and peaceful life and that is what I like most about my city/village/community…
③Our city has all the modern conveniences. This is the reason why I like it.
④We can enjoy the pleasure and convenience of living in the city center.
⑤The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature.
结尾:提出问题,表达期待。
①I love the beautiful environment of our community though sometimes my parents find it difficult to park our cars.
②Even though our town has no high-speed trains/wide roads/…, it is still a perfect place for me to live.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city ①with a long history in Henan Province. ②Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. Trees, green grass and flowers can be seen everywhere in my city. People here are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.
However, my city has her problems. She has no highspeed trains. ③I hope she will soon have highspeed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily. People say the day will come soon!
①开头句使用with短语作定语,使句子表达更加精炼。
②形容词短语different from开头,将不同之处表现得更加强烈,将两个简单句衔接得更加紧密。
③结尾处使用连词so that引导从句,使主从句之间的关系更加明确。
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房屋与住所
1. bathroom n.浴室;洗手间
2. hall n.门厅;走廊;礼堂;大厅
3. bedroom n.卧室
4. building n.建筑物;楼房
5. door n.门;门口
6. field n.田野,田地;场地;视野;领域;行业
7. floor n.楼层;地板
8. garden n.花园;果园;菜园 v.做园艺工作;种植花卉
9. gate n.大门;登机口
10. home n.家;活动本部;栖息地;发祥地 adv.到家;回家
11. house n.房子;房屋;观众席
12. kitchen n.厨房
13. lift n.(英)电梯;免费搭车 v.举起;抬起
14. room n.房间;空间
15. place n.地方,处所;名次;入学名额
v.放置;安置;安排;发出(订单);登(广告)
家具、家电与家庭用品
1. desk n.书桌;写字台;服务台;(报社、电视台等的)办公室,处,部,室,组
2. diary n.日记;日记簿
3. fridge n.冰箱
4. glass n.玻璃;玻璃杯;(pl.)眼镜
5. glue n.胶;胶水 v.粘贴;粘合
6. handbag n.手提包;手袋
7. key n.钥匙;答案;键 adj.最重要的;关键的
8. line n.绳索;线;排;行;队伍;电话;线路
9. lock n.锁 v.锁,锁上
10. match n.火柴;比赛;竞赛;对手;(用单数形式)相配的人或物v.将……配对;适应
11. wallet n.钱包;皮夹
12. phone n.电话;电话机 v.(给……)打电话
13. photo n.照片
14. rope n.绳子 v.用绳子捆(或绑、系)
15. sofa n.(长)沙发
16. table n.桌子;表格
17. tape n.磁带;录音带
18. telephone n.电话 v.(给……)打电话
19. television n.电视
20. tool n.工具;用具;手段;方法
21. toy n.玩具;玩物;玩意儿 adj.玩具的;作玩具的
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家乡位置环境
1.My hometown stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. 我的家乡坐落在一条宽阔的河边,盛产鱼和大米。
2.Our city is beautiful and is famous for many places of interest.
我们的城市很漂亮,并以许多名胜古迹而闻名。
3.This is a city with a long history, and it attracts plenty of tourists every year.
这是一座历史悠久的城市,每年吸引大量游客。
4.Compared with the country, I prefer to live in the city because the city has beautiful scenery and convenient traffic.
比起乡村,我更喜欢住在城市,因为城市风景优美,交通便利。
过去现在环境对比
1.In the past, there were only narrow and dirty streets in the village. But now the streets are becoming wider, cleaner and tidier.
过去,村子街道狭窄、肮脏。但现在街道变得更宽阔、更干净、更整洁。
2.Another great change is that there are more high buildings on both sides of the streets in the town.
另一个巨大变化是城镇的街道两旁有更多的高楼大厦。
3.There used to be a dirty river where people threw rubbish. The government has taken action to deal with water pollution.
过去河水很脏,人们总往河里扔垃圾。政府已经采取行动治理水污染。
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1.East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。
2.Home is where the heart is. 家是心之所在。
3.A good neighbor is better than a brother far off. 远亲不如近邻。
4.A man’s home is his castle. 一个人的家就是他的城堡。
5.Clear waters and green mountains are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver.
绿水青山就是金山银山。
6.Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.
保护环境就是保护我们自己。
7.Prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。
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请你根据提示及要求,以Let’s help our parents do chores为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
要点提示:
(1)阐述分担家务的理由或益处(至少三点);
(2)列举我们可以做的家务:整理床铺、打扫房间,洗衣服,洗餐具、倒垃圾等并再次倡导大家帮父母做家务。
写作要求:
(1)包括所有要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)100词左右。
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.
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为促进中外学生间的学习和交流,你校与一所英国友好学校联合开展了题为“My Experience of Doing Housework”的征文活动。请根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求:1.80—100词; 2.包含所给提示要点,并适当进行拓展; 3.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
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哈佛大学的一项研究表明,爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。
提示:
Opinions
Pros:develop our independence; take care of ourselves;…
Cons: a waste of time; no need to;…
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I
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假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动,请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。
现存现象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生不愿做家务,原因如下:
1. 认为做家务是父母的工作;
2. 做家务占用学习的时间。
●整理床铺
●浇花
●打扫房间
●倒垃圾
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要求:1. 表达准确,语句通顺;
2. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右。
We Should Do Chores at Home
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假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生,上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务(Helping Parents Do Housework)的活动。请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英语短文,叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受。要求不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:(1)做家务的起因;
(2)做了哪些家务;
(3)父母的反应以及个人的感受。
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School.
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你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动,假如你是大明,请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件,聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点:
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息;
4. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going?
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Yours,
Daming
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根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”,更是成长的机会。通过承担家务,我们能提升责任心,学会平衡生活和尊重他人,并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处,请你根据提示及要求,以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语:care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题:
1. What chores can we do to help parents?
2. Why should we learn to help do chores?
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文,请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题:
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework?
2. What housework do you usually do at home?
3. Why do you think children should do housework?
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think
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在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动,请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。
内容要点提示如下:
1在家经常做的家务劳动:
◆ fold clothes ◆ wash the dishes
◆ look after pets ◆ take out the rubbish ◆ …
2.你做家务劳动后的收获:
◆ life skills (技能) ◆ take care of ourselves ◆ understand parents
要求:
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑,可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
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作为新时代的中学生,我们不仅要努力学习知识,还要培养独立、自理的生活能力。在一节英语课上,老师组织全班同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息,客观地介绍讨论结果并谈谈你的看法。
一些同学认为
其他学生认为
你的看法
1. 应该做家务
1. 没必要做家务
2. 培养学生的独特性
2. 应该把时间花在学业上
3. 了解公平的含义
3. 做家务是父母的职责
4. 每个家庭成员的责任
4. 做家务是浪费时间
要求: 1. 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名;
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Recently, my class have had a discussion about whether middle school students
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1. (2025·山东潍坊·中考真题)
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人发了一个关于“家务劳动”的帖子。假设你是李华,请阅读原帖后,结合自己的生活经历和体会,用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 不要出现考生本人信息;
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the WorldSubject: Chores
Hey, guys! We often do chores at home. Is there anything special you still remember? When did it happen? What did you do? And how did you feel? Please share with us one of your stories of doing chores. Looking forward to your replies.
Alice, Canada
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Li Hua, China
2. (2025·北京·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
提示词语:show, chores, spend, tidy up, helpful
内容提示:
●What can you learn from the results?
●Offer some advice to your classmates on doing housework.
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.
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3.(2025·甘肃兰州·中考真题)
据报道, 某小区花墙长势喜人, 吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区住户, 请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道, 向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
要求: 1. 报道应包括图示所有要点:
2. 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80词左右, 文章标题和开头已给出, 请抄写在答题卡上。(不计入词数)
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.
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3. (2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题)
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名,否则不给分)
2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年,请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文,宣传你的家乡。内容包括:地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。
要求:
1. 字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确;
2. 词数:30—50词。
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5.(2023·贵州·中考真题)
请结合下图内容及提示,以“My__________ Family Memory”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
describe the memoryWhat happened?
When did it happen?
Who was in the memory?
express your feelings or opinionsWhat do you think of it?
Why do you think so?
写作要求:
1. 结合实际,用适当的形容词补全标题。
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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高频话题04 居住环境
同步写作课讲义
居住环境 类书面表达围绕“人与自我”:主要介绍了你可以为家庭做些什么、如何让家变得更舒适以及家的意义,与此相关的写作主要涉及以下几个方面:
①介绍自己的家庭,表达家对你的意义;
②向朋友介绍自己家的空间特征,礼貌地请求朋友帮助你装饰房间。
③谈论家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由,讨论中学生是否应该做家务。
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题,并根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境。
1.要点:
1)你生活在什么样的环境。
2)你喜欢这个环境的什么。
3)你对这个环境有何期望。
2. 要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2)词数100左右。
What I like about where I live
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写作指导
Step 1 审好题,定方向
定体裁:本文是一篇说明文,介绍自己生活的环境。
定时态:描写生活环境是客观事实,以一般现在时为主。
定人称:介绍的是自己的生活环境,需用第一人称。
定选材:①结合实际生活描述自己居住环境的特点。
②描述对居住环境的喜爱及原因。
③表达对这个居住环境的未来的期待。
写作框架
Step 2 列框架,谋布局
运用三段式“开头—中间—结尾”写作模式,列出思维导图,形成初步写作框架。
开头:引出话题——你生活在什么样的环境中。
①I live in a peaceful country/a small village/a quiet city/a modern city.
②My house is located right in the center of the city. The streets around my house are usually noisy.
③I moved to…(a town/a city) with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house on Renmin Road now.
中间:提炼要点、组织语言,阐述你喜欢这个环境的原因。
①Different from other cities/villages/communities…, it is/it has…
②People enjoy a slow and peaceful life and that is what I like most about my city/village/community…
③Our city has all the modern conveniences. This is the reason why I like it.
④We can enjoy the pleasure and convenience of living in the city center.
⑤The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature.
结尾:提出问题,表达期待。
①I love the beautiful environment of our community though sometimes my parents find it difficult to park our cars.
②Even though our town has no high-speed trains/wide roads/…, it is still a perfect place for me to live.
Step 3 巧衔接,成篇章
What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city ①with a long history in Henan Province. ②Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. Trees, green grass and flowers can be seen everywhere in my city. People here are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.
However, my city has her problems. She has no highspeed trains. ③I hope she will soon have highspeed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily. People say the day will come soon!
①开头句使用with短语作定语,使句子表达更加精炼。
②形容词短语different from开头,将不同之处表现得更加强烈,将两个简单句衔接得更加紧密。
③结尾处使用连词so that引导从句,使主从句之间的关系更加明确。
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词汇积累
)
房屋与住所
1. bathroom n.浴室;洗手间
2. hall n.门厅;走廊;礼堂;大厅
3. bedroom n.卧室
4. building n.建筑物;楼房
5. door n.门;门口
6. field n.田野,田地;场地;视野;领域;行业
7. floor n.楼层;地板
8. garden n.花园;果园;菜园 v.做园艺工作;种植花卉
9. gate n.大门;登机口
10. home n.家;活动本部;栖息地;发祥地 adv.到家;回家
11. house n.房子;房屋;观众席
12. kitchen n.厨房
13. lift n.(英)电梯;免费搭车 v.举起;抬起
14. room n.房间;空间
15. place n.地方,处所;名次;入学名额
v.放置;安置;安排;发出(订单);登(广告)
家具、家电与家庭用品
1. desk n.书桌;写字台;服务台;(报社、电视台等的)办公室,处,部,室,组
2. diary n.日记;日记簿
3. fridge n.冰箱
4. glass n.玻璃;玻璃杯;(pl.)眼镜
5. glue n.胶;胶水 v.粘贴;粘合
6. handbag n.手提包;手袋
7. key n.钥匙;答案;键 adj.最重要的;关键的
8. line n.绳索;线;排;行;队伍;电话;线路
9. lock n.锁 v.锁,锁上
10. match n.火柴;比赛;竞赛;对手;(用单数形式)相配的人或物v.将……配对;适应
11. wallet n.钱包;皮夹
12. phone n.电话;电话机 v.(给……)打电话
13. photo n.照片
14. rope n.绳子 v.用绳子捆(或绑、系)
15. sofa n.(长)沙发
16. table n.桌子;表格
17. tape n.磁带;录音带
18. telephone n.电话 v.(给……)打电话
19. television n.电视
20. tool n.工具;用具;手段;方法
21. toy n.玩具;玩物;玩意儿 adj.玩具的;作玩具的
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句式积累
)
家乡位置环境
1.My hometown stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. 我的家乡坐落在一条宽阔的河边,盛产鱼和大米。
2.Our city is beautiful and is famous for many places of interest.
我们的城市很漂亮,并以许多名胜古迹而闻名。
3.This is a city with a long history, and it attracts plenty of tourists every year.
这是一座历史悠久的城市,每年吸引大量游客。
4.Compared with the country, I prefer to live in the city because the city has beautiful scenery and convenient traffic.
比起乡村,我更喜欢住在城市,因为城市风景优美,交通便利。
过去现在环境对比
1.In the past, there were only narrow and dirty streets in the village. But now the streets are becoming wider, cleaner and tidier.
过去,村子街道狭窄、肮脏。但现在街道变得更宽阔、更干净、更整洁。
2.Another great change is that there are more high buildings on both sides of the streets in the town.
另一个巨大变化是城镇的街道两旁有更多的高楼大厦。
3.There used to be a dirty river where people threw rubbish. The government has taken action to deal with water pollution.
过去河水很脏,人们总往河里扔垃圾。政府已经采取行动治理水污染。
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谚语积累
)
1.East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。
2.Home is where the heart is. 家是心之所在。
3.A good neighbor is better than a brother far off. 远亲不如近邻。
4.A man’s home is his castle. 一个人的家就是他的城堡。
5.Clear waters and green mountains are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver.
绿水青山就是金山银山。
6.Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.
保护环境就是保护我们自己。
7.Prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。
(
变式提升训练
)
(1)
请你根据提示及要求,以Let’s help our parents do chores为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
要点提示:
(1)阐述分担家务的理由或益处(至少三点);
(2)列举我们可以做的家务:整理床铺、打扫房间,洗衣服,洗餐具、倒垃圾等并再次倡导大家帮父母做家务。
写作要求:
(1)包括所有要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)100词左右。
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.
【答案】例文
Let’s help our parents do choresDear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. Firstly, doing chores can make our home cleaner and more comfortable. Secondly, it helps us learn life skills like responsibility and time management. Thirdly, sharing chores reduces parents’ stress and shows our love for them.
We can do many simple things, such as making the bed, cleaning rooms, washing clothes, doing the dishes, and taking out the trash. Even small actions can make a big difference!
Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述分担家务的理由或益处;
第二步,列举我们可以做的家务;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①comfortable舒适的
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③such as比如
④make a big difference产生大影响
[高分句型]
①Firstly, doing chores can make our home cleaner and more comfortable. (动名词作主语)
②We can do many simple things, such as making the bed, cleaning rooms, washing clothes, doing the dishes, and taking out the trash. (and连接并列结构)
(2)
为促进中外学生间的学习和交流,你校与一所英国友好学校联合开展了题为“My Experience of Doing Housework”的征文活动。请根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求:1.80—100词; 2.包含所给提示要点,并适当进行拓展; 3.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
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【答案】例文
My Experience of Doing Housework
Do you like doing housework? I like helping my parents do housework when I am free. I think parents are very tired after a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest. I often help clean our rooms, wash dishes, take away the rubbish and so on.
Last Saturday, I got up early to prepare breakfast for my parents. I cooked three eggs, one for each of us. My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another didn’t seem to be ripe. Then I washed our clothes. With the help of the washing machine, I completed the whole washing process by myself.
To be honest, doing housework made me very tired, but I felt happy and proud of myself, and I came to understand my parents’ deep love for me. I love doing housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己做的家务;
第二步,讲述自己做家务的经历;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good rest好好休息
②get up early早起
③with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①I like helping my parents do housework when I am free.(when引导时间状语从句)
②My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another didn’t seem to be ripe.(though引导让步状语从句)
(3)
哈佛大学的一项研究表明,爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。
提示:
Opinions
Pros:develop our independence; take care of ourselves;…
Cons: a waste of time; no need to;…
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I
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【答案】例文:
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I usually sweep the floor, take out the rubbish, wash my clothes and do the dishes at home.
Different people have different opinions about this. Some people say that there is no need to do housework. They think it’s a waste of time. In my opinion, it’s quite important for children to do some housework. Firstly, it can develop our independence. Children depend on their parents too much. If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. Secondly, it’s not just parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home. Everyone should play a part in doing housework.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意表明自己的观点,材料所给内容不得遗漏,可适当发挥,语意要通顺,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己平时做的家务活;
第二步,自己的看法;
[亮点词汇]
① a waste of time浪费时间
② In my opinion 以我的观点
[高分句型]
① If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. (条件状语从句)
(4)
假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动,请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。
现存现象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生不愿做家务,原因如下:
1. 认为做家务是父母的工作;
2. 做家务占用学习的时间。
●整理床铺
●浇花
●打扫房间
●倒垃圾
……
……
要求:1. 表达准确,语句通顺;
2. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数80左右。
We Should Do Chores at Home
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【答案】例文:
We Should Do Chores at Home
Now many students don’t like doing chores at home. There are mainly two reasons. One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home. The other is that they think doing chores takes up their time for study. But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed, watering the flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes. I think doing chores makes us relaxing. I also feel great to help my parents.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,写短文表达在家应该做家务这一看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍许多学生不愿做家务这一现象并分析原因;
第二步,介绍自己的观点并列举自己常做的家务;
第三步,谈谈自己的感受及看法。
[亮点词汇]
①do chores 做家务
②one ... the other ... 一个……另一个……
③take up 占据
④be busy with sth. 忙于某事
[高分句型]
①There are mainly two reasons.(There be句型)
②One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home.(that引导表语从句;省略that的宾语从句;it固定句式)
③But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work.(because引导的原因状语从句)
(5)
假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生,上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务(Helping Parents Do Housework)的活动。请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英语短文,叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受。要求不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:(1)做家务的起因;
(2)做了哪些家务;
(3)父母的反应以及个人的感受。
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School.
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【答案】例文:
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. Last week, our class held an activity called “Helping Parents Do Housework”. Everyone in my class took an active part in the activity.
As for me, I did a lot of chores because my parents were away last Saturday morning. First, I swept the floor, cleaned all the rooms and took out the rubbish. Then, I made the bed and folded the clothes. Finally, I watered the flowers in our garden. After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. From then on, I decided to help my parents do more housework in my spare time.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的三点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明做家务的起因。总体介绍该活动,如名称、活动范围、总体表现等;
第二步,具体叙述做了哪些家务。写作过程中需注意做家务的逻辑,要符合实际情况;
第三步,描写父母的反应和个人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① hold an activity called ... 开展了一个名叫……的活动
② take an active part in 积极参与
③ as for ... 关于……
④ be pleased with ... 对……感到开心和满意
⑤ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间
[高分句型]
① After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. (介词after后接动名词)
② When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. (when引导的时间状语从句;what引导的宾语从句)
(6)
你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动,假如你是大明,请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件,聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点:
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息;
4. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going?
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Yours,
Daming
【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
How is it going? My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. First, I’ll help with daily chores like sweeping floors and washing dishes every day. Second, I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills. Finally, I’ll cook simple meals twice a week to share the burden. Through these activities, I hope to become more responsible and independent. What’s your plan? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Daming
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:需包含所有图片要点(日常家务种类/做家务的频率/将要学的家庭劳动),不得透露个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步:明确邮件目的(响应劳动主题活动,分享计划);
第二步:分点展开(家务→种植→烹饪)+ 补充细节(频率/目的);
第三步:结尾(询问对方计划,保持互动性)。
[亮点词汇]
① promote labor education 推广劳动教育
② share the burden 分担责任
③ independent 独立
[高分句型]
① I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills.(不定式作目的状语)
② My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. (含有so的并列句)
(7)
根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”,更是成长的机会。通过承担家务,我们能提升责任心,学会平衡生活和尊重他人,并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处,请你根据提示及要求,以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语:care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题:
1. What chores can we do to help parents?
2. Why should we learn to help do chores?
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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【答案】例文
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. We can clean rooms, wash dishes, take out the trash and make beds. These small actions show our love. Why should we learn to do chores? First, parents are busy every day. Helping them relax makes the family happier. Second, doing chores improves our ability to be responsible. For example, managing time between study and chores teaches us balance. Finally, it prepares us for future independence.
Let’s start today! Even simple chores can make a big difference.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己可以在家做的家务,并解释为什么要学会帮忙做家务;
第三步,号召大家都参与,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take out带出去
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①Helping them relax makes the family happier.(动名词作主语)
②Let’s start today!(祈使句)
(8)
某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文,请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题:
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework?
2. What housework do you usually do at home?
3. Why do you think children should do housework?
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think
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【答案】例文
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think we should definitely help with housework. It’s not only a way to share the burden with our parents but also a chance to learn life skills.
I usually do chores like sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and folding clothes. Sometimes I cook simple meals on weekends, such as making noodles or fried eggs. These tasks make me feel independent.
Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. Cooking also helps me understand the effort behind each meal, making me more thankful. Moreover, doing housework together can strengthen family bonds. Last week, my mom and I baked cookies while chatting—it was fun and meaningful.
All in all, housework is more than just labor; it’s a lesson in growing up. Every chore we do brings us closer to being responsible and caring individuals.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括4个问题要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直接回应题目问题,为全文奠定基调;
第二步,列举自己常做的家务,体现“怎么做”;
第三步,从责任、感恩、家庭关系三方面论证做家务的意义;
第四步,总结全文,升华做家务的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②all in all 总之
[高分句型]
①Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. (when引导的时间状语从句)
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在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动,请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。
内容要点提示如下:
1在家经常做的家务劳动:
◆ fold clothes ◆ wash the dishes
◆ look after pets ◆ take out the rubbish ◆ …
2.你做家务劳动后的收获:
◆ life skills (技能) ◆ take care of ourselves ◆ understand parents
要求:
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑,可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
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【答案】例文:
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
I often help with housework at home. I usually fold clothes and take out the rubbish. I also enjoy looking after pets. I feed them and play with them. I often wash the dishes after dinner. When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.
I learn a lot from doing these chores. I learn some important life skills and I am able to take better care of myself. I also understand my parents more. They work hard every day and still manage to keep the house clean and comfortable. I am proud to help them with housework.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图(已给出);
第二步,介绍自己经常做的家务内容;
第三步,介绍从做家务中取得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①help with sth帮忙做某事
②learn a lot from从……中学到很多
③manage to do sth设法做成某事
④be proud do sth做某事很骄傲
[高分句型]
When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.(when引导时间状语从句)
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作为新时代的中学生,我们不仅要努力学习知识,还要培养独立、自理的生活能力。在一节英语课上,老师组织全班同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息,客观地介绍讨论结果并谈谈你的看法。
一些同学认为
其他学生认为
你的看法
1. 应该做家务
1. 没必要做家务
2. 培养学生的独特性
2. 应该把时间花在学业上
3. 了解公平的含义
3. 做家务是父母的职责
4. 每个家庭成员的责任
4. 做家务是浪费时间
要求: 1. 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名;
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Recently, my class have had a discussion about whether middle school students
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【答案】例文
Recently, my class have had a discussion about whether middle school students should do housework. Some students think we should do housework. Firstly, it helps develop independence. Secondly, it teaches us about fairness. Thirdly, it’s every family member’s duty. However, others believe it’s unnecessary. They say we should spend our time on our studies, because doing housework is the responsibility of our parents, not our students. For students, spending time on housework is a waste.
In my opinion, doing housework is important. It teaches responsibility and life skills. We can balance study and housework. Helping with chores makes family life happier.
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍班级开展了一次关于“做家务”的讨论;
第二步,根据提示内容介绍支持做家务和反对做家务的同学的观点及原因;
第三步,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① develop independence培养独立性
② spend time on sth在某事上花费时间
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
① Some students think we should do housework.(省略that的宾语从句)
② They say we should spend our time on our studies, because doing housework is the responsibility of our parents, not our students.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③ Helping with chores makes family life happier.(动名词作主语)
【中考真题链接】
1. (2025·山东潍坊·中考真题)
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人发了一个关于“家务劳动”的帖子。假设你是李华,请阅读原帖后,结合自己的生活经历和体会,用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 不要出现考生本人信息;
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the WorldSubject: Chores
Hey, guys! We often do chores at home. Is there anything special you still remember? When did it happen? What did you do? And how did you feel? Please share with us one of your stories of doing chores. Looking forward to your replies.
Alice, Canada
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Li Hua, China
【答案】例文
Hi Alice! I still remember the first time I cooked dinner for my family. It happened last year when my mom was sick. I decided to make fried rice—something simple but meaningful. Though I was nervous, I followed her instructions carefully. When my parents tasted it, they smiled and praised me. I felt proud and realized how much effort goes into daily chores.
Now, I help more often and appreciate my parents’ hard work. Doing chores isn’t just a duty; it’s a way to show love!
Li Hua, China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述自己曾经做家务的经历,介绍发生的事情,地点等;
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②feel proud感到骄傲
③do chores做家务
[高分句型]
①It happened last year when my mom was sick.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Though I was nervous, I followed her instructions carefully.(though引导的让步状语从句)
2. (2025·北京·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
提示词语:show, chores, spend, tidy up, helpful
内容提示:
●What can you learn from the results?
●Offer some advice to your classmates on doing housework.
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.
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【答案】One possible version:
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework. According to the results, 15% of them usually do housework, while 80% sometimes help with chores. Sadly, 5% seldom do any housework at all. This shows that most students are slow to take part in household tasks.
To improve this, I suggest my classmates spend some time every day doing simple chores, like tidying up their rooms or washing dishes. Housework is not only helpful for keeping our homes clean but also beneficial for teaching us responsibility. Let’s all try to do more to help our families
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:内容提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,结合饼状图,介绍统计结果;
第二步,提出一些有关于做家务的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① according to 根据
② help with sth. 帮助做某事
③ take part in 参加,参与
④ spend time doing 花费时间做某事
⑤ not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① According to the results, 15% of them usually do housework, while 80% sometimes help with chores. (while表对比)
② To improve this, I suggest my classmates spend some time every day doing simple chores, like tidying up their rooms or washing dishes. (动词不定式作目的状语)
3.(2025·甘肃兰州·中考真题)
据报道, 某小区花墙长势喜人, 吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区住户, 请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道, 向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
要求: 1. 报道应包括图示所有要点:
2. 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80词左右, 文章标题和开头已给出, 请抄写在答题卡上。(不计入词数)
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.
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【答案】例文:
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighborhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of friendly and polite people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are exciting sports games like volleyball tournaments and interesting art shows where people draw on stones. These activities make our life colorful.
In the coming days, we’ll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighborhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。文章开头直接描述了社区的美丽景象,以此引出下文对社区的详细介绍。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述社区环境并介绍社区活动。
第三步,书写结语。介绍未来环保计划的展望,传达了作者对社区的热爱和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①attract吸引
②various各种各样的
③eco-friendly环保的
[高分句型]
Our neighborhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of friendly and polite people. (which引导的定语从句)
3. (2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题)
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名,否则不给分)
2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年,请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文,宣传你的家乡。内容包括:地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。
要求:
1. 字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确;
2. 词数:30—50词。
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【答案】例文:
My hometown is Qiqihar. It lies in the west of Heilongjiang Province. The weather in my hometown is enjoyable. There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on. The most famous food is BBQ. The people here are friendly. Welcome to our hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:文章主题是介绍自己的家乡,写作要点已给出,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍自己的家乡是什么地方;
第二步,具体介绍自己的家乡,可从地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面介绍;
最后,欢迎大家来自己的家乡。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②such as例如
③friendly友好的
[高分句型]
There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on.(there be句型)
5.(2023·贵州·中考真题)
请结合下图内容及提示,以“My__________ Family Memory”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
describe the memoryWhat happened?
When did it happen?
Who was in the memory?
express your feelings or opinionsWhat do you think of it?
Why do you think so?
写作要求:
1. 结合实际,用适当的形容词补全标题。
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Funniest Family Memory
There are countless interesting memories in our family. Let me tell you one of them. It’s about eating.
I remember once, when I was at my grandma’s house, it’s time for dinner. I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food, feeling very spicy. I asked my mother, “Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot?” Mom ran over and tasted it. She said, “This is not vegetable pepper. It’s pepper!” “Ah?” I asked in confusion. This is chili. No wonder it’s so spicy. “Give me some water!” The family laughed when they heard it.
In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章标题以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“补全题目”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,根据要点讲述这一事件发生的时间、人物及经过,要列举具体的事例;
第三步,抒发你对这件事的评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①countless interesting memories无数的有趣回忆
②in confusion疑惑地
③no wonder难怪
[高分句型]
①I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
②As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
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