Unit 2 Success （单元应用文写作精练）英语北师大版2019选择性必修第一册

Unit 2 Success 成功 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：人与自我--成功的建议 写作框架： 第一段 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。 第二段 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。 第三段 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。 写作词汇短语： 1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议 2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来 5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用 6.take part in/participate in... 参加 7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议 8.take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内 9.with regard to 关于；就 10. put forward 提出 11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面 12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 13.with time going on  随着时间的推移 14. Be faced with 面临 15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 2. Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Beijing，I think it is a good choice to visit the Great Wall. 很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。 3. I have learned that you have some trouble in... and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。 4. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 5. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 6. I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 7. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 8. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 9. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 【中间句】 1. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits. 我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。 2. It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。 3. In the first place, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class. 首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 4. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons. 我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。 5. As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 6. I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you... 我认为如果……，将会受益。 7. Doing...is a good/great/better choice. 做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。 8. It is also a good idea/also helps to do..., which can... 做……也不错，这能…… 【结尾句】 1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。 4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。 写作模板： 【三段式满分作文模板一 】 Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, 【三段式满分作文模板二 】 Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 【三段式满分作文模板三 】 Dear classmates, Have you realized Mother's Day is ________________________________________即将到来? And what ideas have you_________________________________________ to celebrate it? In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be overwhelmingly aware of__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before. My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗? Yours, Li Hua 【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Dear Jim， Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 1．（24-25高二下·云南曲靖·期末）假定你是李华，你的外教Wilson正在征询英语课外活动的相关建议。请你给他发一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 说明原因。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr Wilson, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr Wilson, I am writing to offer some suggestions regarding our English extracurricular activities. I propose that we organize an English Speaking Club. This club could provide a platform for students to practice their spoken English in a relaxed and friendly environment. We could have weekly meetings where members can engage in free conversations, debate sessions, or even role-playing activities. The reason behind this suggestion is that many students, including myself, find it challenging to speak English fluently due to lack of practice. The English Speaking Club would not only help us improve our speaking skills but also boost our confidence in using the language. I believe this idea would be beneficial to all students and contribute to creating a more vibrant English learning atmosphere in our school. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Wilson发一封电子邮件，就英语课外活动提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→advice 由于：due to→because of 提高：improve→enhance 有益的：beneficial→helpful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This club could provide a platform for students to practice their spoken English in a relaxed and friendly environment. 拓展句：This club could provide a platform where students can practice their spoken English in a relaxed and friendly environment. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We could have weekly meetings where members can engage in free conversations, debate sessions, or even role-playing activities.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】The reason behind this suggestion is that many students, including myself, find it challenging to speak English fluently due to lack of practice.（运用了that引导表语从句） 2．（24-25高二下·北京丰台·期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动，你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 提出的建议； 2. 建议的理由。 提示词：倡议 proposal 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim,     I’m glad to hear you’re going to take part in the UN proposal collection. Here’s my suggestion: you could propose promoting global youth cooperation in environmental protection.     The reason is that environmental issues like climate change affect everyone, and young people have the passion and creativity to make a difference. By working together, we can share ideas, learn from each other’s experiences, and take joint actions. This not only helps solve problems but also builds friendship and understanding among youth worldwide.     Hope this is helpful. Good luck with your proposal! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友Jim回一封邮件，对于他打算参加联合国面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动的倡议内容给予建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：glad → happy 参加：take part in → participate in 影响：affect → influence 解决：solve → settle 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Here’s my suggestion: you could propose promoting global youth cooperation in environmental protection. 拓展句：Here’s my suggestion that you could propose promoting global youth cooperation in environmental protection. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason is that environmental issues like climate change affect everyone, and young people have the passion and creativity to make a difference.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】This not only helps solve problems but also builds friendship and understanding among youth worldwide.（运用了not only…but also…的固定句型） 3．（24-25高二下·四川绵阳·阶段练习）炎炎夏日，同学们很多时候都待在空调房里。英语课上，老师让你写一篇短文，给出一些建议，帮助大家在享受凉爽的同时能保持健康。内容包括： 1.一些做法； 2.说明理由。 注意：1.词数80左右，文章标题已给出，不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Stay Healthy in an Air-Conditioned Room in Summer ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                   How to Stay Healthy in an Air-Conditioned Room in Summer With summer heat arriving, more time is spent in air-conditioned rooms. To stay healthy, we should do as follows: first, set the air-conditioner at around 26℃, which can avoid the common fatigue in “air-conditioning sickness”. If staying in the classroom with many classmates, you can set the temperature lower, but not below 22 degrees. Second, never let cold air blow directly at you, which may cause discomfort or even illness. Third, open windows every 2-3 hours for 15 minutes to let fresh air in. Finally, drink enough water to prevent dryness. By following these tips, we can live and study healthily while enjoying the coolness in the sweltering summer. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文，给出一些建议，夏季如何正确使用空调。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：first→first of all 健康的：healthy→fit 导致：cause→result in 疾病：illness→disease 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Third, open windows every 2-3 hours for 15 minutes to let fresh air in. 拓展句：Third, open windows every 2-3 hours for 15 minutes to let fresh air in, which can ensure indoor air quality. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To stay healthy, we should do as follows: first, set the air-conditioner at around 26℃, which can avoid the common fatigue in “air-conditioning sickness”.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】 If staying in the classroom with many classmates, you can set the temperature lower, but not below 22 degrees.（运用了状语从句的省略） 4．（24-25高二下·福建莆田·期末）假定你是李华，学校即将举办“传统文化科技节”，需征集活动方案。请给活动负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件，提出你的建议。内容包括：推荐的传统文化项目（如书法、剪纸等） 1. 结合的科技手段（如 VR、AI 等）； 2. 预期效果及理由。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Mr. Smith, I’m Li Hua, writing to suggest an activity for the “Traditional Culture & Technology Festival.” I recommend combining calligraphy with VR technology. Participants can use VR headsets to “enter” ancient studios, watching 3D animations of masters practicing calligraphy. They can also “hold” a virtual brush to imitate strokes, with AI providing real-time feedback on posture and technique. This approach will attract students by making abstract art tangible. VR enhances immersion, while AI ensures personalized learning. It bridges tradition and innovation, helping young people appreciate calligraphy’s beauty. Looking forward to your reply! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给活动负责人Mr. Smith写邮件，为学校即将举办的“传统文化科技节”提出活动方案建议，内容需包含推荐的传统文化项目、结合的科技手段及预期效果与理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参与者：participant→attendee 模仿：imitate→copy 提高：enhance→improve 确保：ensure→guarantee 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I recommend combining calligraphy with VR technology. 拓展句：I recommend that we combine calligraphy with VR technology, which can bring a new experience to the participants. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Participants can use VR headsets to “enter” ancient studios, watching 3D animations of masters practicing calligraphy.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】They can also “hold” a virtual brush to imitate strokes, with AI providing real-time feedback on posture and technique.（运用了with的复合结构作状语） 5．（24-25高二下·广东深圳·期末）假定你是校英文报专栏Career Path学生编辑Jenny，收到学生李华的来信：他梦想成为摄影师，但父母坚持让他学医。请给李华写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 说明理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Li Hua, I really understand your struggle between pursuing dreams and fulfilling parental expectations. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jenny 【答案】 Dear Li Hua, I really understand your struggle between pursuing dreams and fulfilling parental expectations. First, have an honest conversation with your parents, detailing why photography ignites your passion and presenting a concrete career plan — maybe share how photographers blend art with commercial projects or document meaningful stories. You could also introduce renowned photographers who’ve built stable careers to ease their concerns. If they remain hesitant, consider a compromise: major in medicine as a backup while joining photography clubs or online courses. This way, you honor their worries while nurturing your talent. Balance doesn’t mean sacrifice — it’s a bridge to both worlds. Yours, Jenny 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以编辑身份给李华回信，提出解决梦想与父母期望冲突的建议及理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：first→to begin with 激发： ignite→inspire 热情：passion→enthusiasm 著名的：renowned→famous 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Balance doesn’t mean sacrifice — it’s a bridge to both worlds. 拓展句：Balance doesn’t mean sacrifice, which instead serves as a bridge to both worlds. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 You could also introduce renowned photographers who’ve built stable careers to ease their concerns.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】This way, you honor their worries while nurturing your talent. （运用了状语从句的省略） 6．（24-25高二下·湖北武汉·期末）假如你是某国际学校学生李华，鉴于学校大课间单一化的集体运动方式无法满足学生的需求，你给校长写一封英文书信，内容包括： 1．当前的问题； 2．你的想法与期待。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Principal, I’m Li Hua from Senior 2. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Principal, I am Li Hua from Senior 2. I am writing to present my thoughts about the collective physical activity during the morning break, which currently fails to meet students’ diverse needs. Currently, jogging and gymnastics are causing a decline in enthusiasm due to lack of engagement. I suggest offering varied options to boost motivation. We should encourage team sports like basketball and volleyball, which many students enjoy. Additionally, Tai-chi could be offered for those preferring gentle exercises, and dancing to lively music could be a fun release. This would improve fitness and make breaks more enjoyable. I would deeply appreciate it if our school could take these ideas into consideration and create a more vibrant and inclusive break-time environment. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以国际学校学生李华的身份给校长写信，指出学校大课间单一化集体运动方式无法满足学生需求这一问题，并表达自己的想法与期待。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 满足：meet → satisfy 多样化的：diverse → various 建议：suggest → advise 选择：option → choice 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Currently, jogging and gymnastics are causing a decline in enthusiasm due to lack of engagement. 拓展句：Currently, the enthusiasm is declining because jogging and gymnastics lack engagement. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to present my thoughts about the collective physical activity during the morning break, which currently fails to meet students’ diverse needs. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句) [高分句型2] We should encourage team sports like basketball and volleyball, which many students enjoy. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句) 7．（24-25高二下·贵州贵阳·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim来信询问你对学生使用AI工具（如ChatGPT、DeepSeek等）辅助学习的看法，请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1.学生使用AI工具辅助学习的优势； 2.学生使用AI工具可能带来的问题； 3.你的建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Thank you for your letter. I’m writing to share my ideas about students' using AI to assist learning with you. Regarding AI tools like ChatGPT and DeepSeek, I believe they can be beneficial for students. Firstly, they provide instant answers and explanations, helping us solve difficult problems efficiently. Besides, they offer abundant learning resources beyond textbooks.  However, overreliance may weaken independent thinking. Moreover, AI-generated content is not always accurate, and some students might use it to complete assignments without learning.   To make the best use of AI, I suggest that students should treat it as a study aid rather than a replacement. Always verify information with teachers and focus on developing critical thinking.                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写封回信，对于学生使用AI工具辅助学习发表一下看法，说明学生使用AI工具辅助学习的优势和可能带来的问题，并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 关于：regarding→as for 提供：provide→offer 立刻的：instant→immediate 解决：solve→tackle 准确的、精确的：accurate→precise 完成：complete→finish 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：Firstly, they provide instant answers and explanations, helping us solve difficult problems efficiently. 拓展句：Firstly, they provide instant answers and explanations, which helps us solve difficult problems efficiently. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Regarding AI tools like ChatGPT and DeepSeek, I believe they can be beneficial for students.（运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】To make the best use of AI, I suggest that students should treat it as a study aid rather than a replacement.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语和以连接词that引导的宾语从句及虚拟语气） 8．（24-25高二下·黑龙江双鸭山·期末）你校英文报Next Step专栏正举办题为Path to Success的职业规划征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.你的职业选择； 2.打算如何实现。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Path to Success ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                               Path to Success Looking to the future, I want to become a data scientist, which is based on my interest in mathematics. I am eager to prepare myself for this challenging career. Data science is becoming increasingly important in various industries. To reach my goal, I set a plan to build a stronger foundation in math now, after which I will pursue a degree in data science at university. Additionally, I’ll seek part-time opportunities to gain practical experience and sharpen my skills. With hard work, I’m confident I can achieve my dream. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿，要求考生写一篇以Path to Success为题的短文，向校英文报Next Step专栏投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 实现：achieve→realize 重要的：important→significant 各种各样的：various→a variety of 另外：additionally→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, I’ll seek part-time opportunities to gain practical experience and sharpen my skills. 拓展句：Additionally, I’ll seek part-time opportunities which can enable me to gain practical experience and sharpen my skills. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking to the future, I want to become a data scientist, which is based on my interest in mathematics. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] To reach my goal, I set a plan to build a stronger foundation in math now, after which I will pursue a degree in data science at university. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Success 成功 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：人与自我--成功的建议 写作框架： 第一段 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。 第二段 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。 第三段 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。 写作词汇短语： 1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议 2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来 5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用 6.take part in/participate in... 参加 7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议 8.take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内 9.with regard to 关于；就 10. put forward 提出 11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面 12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 13.with time going on  随着时间的推移 14. Be faced with 面临 15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待 写作句型： 【开头句】 1.I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 2. Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Beijing，I think it is a good choice to visit the Great Wall. 很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。 3. I have learned that you have some trouble in... and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。 4. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 5. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 6. I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 7. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 8. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 9. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 【中间句】 1. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits. 我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。 2. It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。 3. In the first place, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class. 首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 4. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons. 我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。 5. As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 6. I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you... 我认为如果……，将会受益。 7. Doing...is a good/great/better choice. 做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。 8. It is also a good idea/also helps to do..., which can... 做……也不错，这能…… 【结尾句】 1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。 4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。 写作模板： 【三段式满分作文模板一 】 Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, 【三段式满分作文模板二 】 Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 【三段式满分作文模板三 】 Dear classmates, Have you realized Mother's Day is ________________________________________即将到来? And what ideas have you_________________________________________ to celebrate it? In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be overwhelmingly aware of__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before. My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗? Yours, Li Hua 【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 1．（24-25高二下·云南曲靖·期末）假定你是李华，你的外教Wilson正在征询英语课外活动的相关建议。请你给他发一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 说明原因。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr Wilson, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2．（24-25高二下·北京丰台·期末）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动，你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 提出的建议； 2. 建议的理由。 提示词：倡议 proposal 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．（24-25高二下·四川绵阳·阶段练习）炎炎夏日，同学们很多时候都待在空调房里。英语课上，老师让你写一篇短文，给出一些建议，帮助大家在享受凉爽的同时能保持健康。内容包括： 1.一些做法； 2.说明理由。 注意：1.词数80左右，文章标题已给出，不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Stay Healthy in an Air-Conditioned Room in Summer ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25高二下·福建莆田·期末）假定你是李华，学校即将举办“传统文化科技节”，需征集活动方案。请给活动负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件，提出你的建议。内容包括：推荐的传统文化项目（如书法、剪纸等） 1. 结合的科技手段（如 VR、AI 等）； 2. 预期效果及理由。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25高二下·广东深圳·期末）假定你是校英文报专栏Career Path学生编辑Jenny，收到学生李华的来信：他梦想成为摄影师，但父母坚持让他学医。请给李华写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 说明理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Li Hua, I really understand your struggle between pursuing dreams and fulfilling parental expectations. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jenny 6．（24-25高二下·湖北武汉·期末）假如你是某国际学校学生李华，鉴于学校大课间单一化的集体运动方式无法满足学生的需求，你给校长写一封英文书信，内容包括： 1．当前的问题； 2．你的想法与期待。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Principal, I’m Li Hua from Senior 2. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 7．（24-25高二下·贵州贵阳·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim来信询问你对学生使用AI工具（如ChatGPT、DeepSeek等）辅助学习的看法，请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1.学生使用AI工具辅助学习的优势； 2.学生使用AI工具可能带来的问题； 3.你的建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（24-25高二下·黑龙江双鸭山·期末）你校英文报Next Step专栏正举办题为Path to Success的职业规划征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.你的职业选择； 2.打算如何实现。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Path to Success ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$