Unit 3 单元写作研读 主题写作——家庭回忆-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册五维课堂同步Word教案（外研版2019）

主题写作——家庭回忆 [写作指导] ◎文体感知 　家庭回忆属于记叙文范畴。主要是描述某一个具体事物引发的个人对过去家庭中所发生的一件小事的美好回忆。整篇文章以复述故事为主。基本写作结构如下： 1．引入话题：是什么唤醒了自己的记忆； 2．讲述故事内容：时间、地点、人物、事件； 3．联系现实：表述个人感受或对自己产生的启迪。 ◎增分佳句 1．Last Christmas.../Three years ago.../When I was.../This morning... 2．It was a lovely Sunday/Sunday morning/..., and I was wandering on the street when... 3．I was cleaning my study/bookshelf...when I saw/noticed a toy/picture... 4．I was listening to the radio...when a familiar song/...came into my ear/mind/... 5．It called back my lovely memory that... 6．It reminded me of my brother, Tony/ my last visit to my grandma/... 7．Looking at the...a wonderful/...memory came back to me/my mind. 8．It made me feel so warm/proud/happy...that... 9．I will never forget it. 10．It will stay in my mind forever. 11．It was so lovely/interesting/exciting...that I will never forget it. 12．It taught me that.../I learned (a lesson) that... 13．I learnt a lot/so much...from that experience. 14．Every time I think of...I feel... 15．Although/Though/While it is a long time away, it is still clear in my mind/it seems as if happening just now. [典题示例] 写作要求 假如你是 Tony，有一件东西让你回忆起了家庭中发生的一件事。请你写一篇80词左右的文章，叙述该故事。 审题谋篇 项目 结论 体裁 记叙文 话题 叙述家庭故事 时态 一般过去时 人称 第一人称、第三人称 词句推敲 1．词汇 ①进入脑海　　　　　　come into one's mind　 ②花时间做…… 　spend time in doing...　 ③用严肃的语气 　in a serious tone　 ④管理时间 　manage your time　 ⑤一眼就喜欢上某物 　fall in love with sth. 　 　at first sight　 ⑥充分利用 　make good use of　 ⑦很强的时间意识 　a strong sense of time　 ⑧按……的话去做 　follow one's words　 ⑨从……中收益 　benefit from...　 ⑩感谢某人 　be thankful to sb.　 2．句式 ①三年前，我刚上初中。我花了大量时间去玩，学习上很懒。 普通表达：Three years ago, I just attended junior school. I spent much time playing and I was rather lazy in my study. 高级表达：　Three years ago when I just attended junior school, I spent much time playing and was rather lazy in my study.　(定语从句) ②你是一名中学生了，你应该知道如何管理时间。 普通表达：You are a junior student. You should know how to manage your time. 高级表达：　As a junior student, you should know how to manage your time.　(介词短语) ③我迫不及待地接过了它，我第一眼就喜欢上了它。 普通表达：I took it over eagerly. I fell in love with it at first sight. 高级表达：　I took it over eagerly, falling in love with it at first sight.　(v.ing作结果状语) 妙笔成篇 　________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Every time I look at the watch on my wrist, a lovely memory will come into my mind. Three years ago when I just attended junior school, I spent much time playing and was rather lazy in my study. One day, Father came back home and called me into his room. He talked to me in a serious tone，“Tony, you are now a junior student. As a junior student, you should know how to manage your time.”And then he took out a nice watch and handed it to me. I took it eagerly, falling in love with it at first sight. Father told me to make good use of the watch and try to become a student with a strong sense of time. I have been following Father's words and have benefited a lot from it. I am thankful to my father. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$