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景点介绍类文章 [素养提升] 一、文本特点 景点介绍属于说明文，使用生动的语言对某一地点或某一环境进行具体逼真的描述。 二、语言特点 1．具体：景点介绍文章要具体明确地介绍什么(what)，在何处(where) 等具体信息，传达给读者该景点名字和特征。 2．生动：景点介绍时，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感，且产生强烈的旅游欲望。 3．简洁：景点介绍类文章通常采用一般现在时，遣词造句要简洁，不可过分渲染或模棱两可。 三、结构特点 此类文章分为三部分。 1．首段：整体介绍景点。例如其基本的地理位置或人文环境。 2．主体：具体介绍其代表性的历史价值或突出的自然和人文特色等。 3．结尾：总结概括并鼓励或邀请读者前来旅游休闲度假。 四、知识储备 常用表达句式 1．表达“地理位置” It is located /situated ...with an area of ... 2．表达“历史背景” It has a long history of ...years. It is a(n) ... place/ country with ... history. It dates back to/ dates from... 3．表达“人口” It has a population of ... It is a beautiful city with a population of... 4．表达“时间” The opening time is from...to...on weekdays, and it works as usual on weekends. It's open from ...to ...on weekdays and closed on weekends. It is open all day. 5．表达“景点特点” It is rich in tourist attractions. It is well­known for its world­famous places of interest. The city, known as...，attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed. 6．表达“动作” go along; go straight ahead；turn left; turn right; walk down the street; keep going; cross the street ；take Bus No. 17; take the first turning on your left; go straight on to the traffic light 7．表达“方位” in the center of; to the left/right; at the foot of; on the top of; in the distance; close to; next to; beside; opposite; facing ...; two blocks away; at the crossing; on the other side of; It is just in front of you. 8．表示“成立；建立”的句子 The history museum was set up in 1966. The history museum opened 50 years ago. The history museum was founded 50 years ago. 9．表示“接待参观者”的句子 The history museum has had 10 million guests since it opened years ago. The history museum has received over 10 million visitors from all over the country. Millions of visitors from all over the country have paid a visit to the history museum since it opened years ago. 10．表示“洋溢着……”的句子 The park is always full of children's laughter. The park is always filled with children's laughter. All across the park you can hear the sound of children's laughter. [典题指导] ►[写作任务] 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友大卫写信说要来中国旅游，想参观游览著名的九寨沟风景区。请根据下列信息，写一封回信介绍九寨沟，并表示盼望他的到来。 内容要点： 1．位于四川省北部； 2．1992年被列入《世界遗产名录》； 3．有湖泊、瀑布、雪山、森林等景观。 注意：1.词数80 左右； 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：《世界遗产名录》The World Heritage List Dear David， I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua ►[审题谋篇] 本文要求以李华的口吻回信，内容是介绍旅游景点九寨沟。开头已经给出，可承接开头写一两句客套话后再引出九寨沟的话题，之后要把九寨沟的地理位置、天气、交通状况和其优点展示出来。写作时要确保要点齐全，尽量不要简单罗列要点，应适当发挥。 ►[佳作展示] Dear David， I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China. You've made a wise decision to pay a visit to Jiuzhaigou. Jiuzhaigou, surrounded by mountains with evergreen forests all year round　 [1], is an incredible place in the northern part of Sichuan Province, which is well­known for its beautiful lakes　 [2]. The lakes are so clear that you can almost see the bottoms　 [3]. It is also a national park and was listed on The World Heritage List in 1992. Jiuzhaigou has become a popular tourist attraction for both Chinese and foreign tourists. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable　[4]. I'm sure you will have a good time travelling there. Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua ►[名师点评] 本篇范文内容精炼、表达准确、思路清晰。先整体介绍了九寨沟，之后再从具体细节方面进一步介绍，突出了旅游景点的特色。文章句式结构多样，高级词语运用恰当、自如，彰显了作者的综合语言运用能力。 [1]此处为过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰Jiuzhaigou。 [2]此处为which 引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Jiuzhaigou。 [3]画线部分属于“so ...that...”结构，意为“如此……以至于……”。 [4]此处属于“make ＋宾语＋宾补”结构，your trip 作宾语，more enjoyable作宾补。 [学以致用] 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友戴维想利用暑期来承德避暑山庄 (Chengde Mountain Resort) 旅游，特发电子邮件向你询问该景点的情况。请你根据所给提示，给他回封邮件。 1．位于河北承德，中国四大名园之一； 2．始建于1703年，历时89年建成， 是清代皇帝夏天避暑和处理政务的地方； 3．景区有众多的宫殿、园林景观及寺庙建筑等。 注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David， I'm delighted to learn you've chosen Chengde Mountain Resort as your summer holiday destination. I'd like to give you a brief introduction of it. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Your trip to the Mountain Resort is sure to be enjoyable and worthwhile. I wish you a nice trip! [参考范文] 　Dear_David， I'm_delighted_to_learn_you've_chosen_Chengde_Mountain_Resort_as_your_summer_holiday_destination._I'd_like_to_give_you_a_brief_introduction_of_it.　 Situated in Chengde, Hebei Province, the Mountain Resort is regarded as one of China's four famous gardens. Its construction started in 1703 and lasted for 89 years. The Mountain Resort is a large complex of palaces and gardens, where Qing Emperors often spent their summers, handling state affairs and being engaged in important political activities. It features a rich collection of Chinese landscapes and architecture. When you arrive, you will be rewarded not only with the breathtaking view of its gardens, but also by the magnificent sight of its palaces and temples. Your_trip_to_the_Mountain_Resort_is_sure_to_be_enjoyable_and_worthwhile._I_wish_you_a_nice_trip！　 　Yours,_　 　Li_Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$