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建议信 [素养提升] 一、文体特点 建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。 二、语言特点 写建议信时，语言要诚恳、委婉，句型简短、明确。词汇和句型力求多变。祈使句是建议信常使用的句型。 三、结构特点 建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。多数写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。 体裁 建议信 话题 生活困扰 时态 一般现在时为主 人称 第二人称为主 结构 首段：引出问题。 中段：根据情况给对方提出具体建议。 尾段：表达自己的愿望。 四、知识储备 ★常用表达句式 (1)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 关于……你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。 (2)I'm sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing...at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。 (3)I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何……你向我征求意见。 (4)Here are some tips/advice/suggestions. 这里有一些建议。 (5)You may/might as well do... 你不妨做…… (6)I would like to suggest that... 我想建议…… (7)I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写信来是要表达有关……我的看法。 (8)If I were you，I would... 如果我是你，我会…… (9)It seems to me that you could... 我认为你可以…… (10)I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果你能……可能会更有利。 (11)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 (12)I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/有帮助。 (13)In my opinion/Personally/As far as I'm concerned，it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 [典题指导] ►[写作任务] 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n．脾气，情绪 Hi Worried， I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Jamie ►[审题谋篇] 就本篇习作而言，每个部分围绕以下内容组织语言。 1．第一部分：同情对方的遭遇，给予安慰，并说明写信目的。 普通表达 高级表达 Everyone may have such bad times，so don't worry too much. Everyone has their ups and downs，so when things go wrong，don't feel too bad. I'd like to offer you some advice. Here are some useful suggestions/advice/tips. I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 2.第二部分：提出合理的建议并说明理由。 普通表达 高级表达 Talk to others about your problems. Don't keep things to yourself；try to share your problems with others. Go out and play games with your friends.It can help you relax. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends，which is an effective(有效的)way to get rid of(摆脱)anger. Always believe that good things will happen in the future. Remain optimistic(乐观的)about your future. In this way，you may stay happy and be full of energy most of the time. Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 3.第三部分：表达美好祝愿。 普通表达 高级表达 I hope you will find my suggestions useful/helpful. I hope my suggestions will work well with you. I hope you will feel better soon. I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips. I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. ►[佳作展示] 　Hi_Worried，　 　I'm_sorry_to_know_that_you're_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment.　Everyone has their ups and downs【1】，so when things go wrong，don't feel too bad.You should learn to control your temper.I think you can make it【2】 if you follow the advice below. First，don''t keep things to yourself；try to share your problems with others.Second，going outdoors and playing team games with your friends is an effective way to get rid of anger【3】．Third，It is a positive attitude that you should remain optimistic about your future【4】 ，which can be helpful in lifting your spirits【5】． I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. 　Yours，　 　Jamie　 ►[名师点评] 本文要点全面、结构完整、层次清晰，词汇多变、句式多样，态度诚恳，语气委婉。 (1)ups and downs 使用地道、表达明了且确切。 (2)make it表示成功做到……。 (3)此处采用了动名词短语作主语，巧妙地改变了句型，使句式多样化。 (4)此句使用里名词性从句作主语，并使用it替代。彰显作者的语言水平。 (5)是定语从句，使句型结构紧凑、连贯，读起来朗朗上口。 [学以致用] 假设你叫李华，下面是你的美国朋友Tom给你写的一封信，请根据来信内容给他写一封建议信。 Dear Li Hua， I'm writing to ask you for some advice.I have a good friend with whom I quarreled the other day.I regret it and don't want to lose him.What should I do? Yours， Tom 要点提示： 1．不要太担心，争吵很正常； 2．主动道歉； 3．自己合理补充。 注意：词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。 [参考范文] 　DearTom，　 I'm sorry you have had a quarrel with your friend.Here are some tips for you.First，don't be too worried.Most friends have disagreements from time to time.Second，why not say sorry for what you did wrong？If you do this，your friend will know you value his/her friendship and want to make up with him/her.At the same time，he/she will surely realize he/she was at fault，too.Third，talk with your friend about your deepest feelings and thoughts.Only in this way can you understand each other better. 　I_hope_you_will_find_these_ideas_useful　. 　Yours，　 　Li_Hua　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$