内容正文:
网络博客
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
互联网早已成为日常生活的重要部分并深刻影响着人们的社交、自我表现、心理状况等诸多方面,因此,人们更应该重视个人信息保护等网络安全问题。本单元通过对互联网利弊的探究,针对网络安全的相关内容以博客的形式提出建议。这些建议包括人们在使用互联网时应注意的事项,并就不明智举动给予劝勉或告诫。
以相关主题写作时,要先介绍存在的问题及其不良影响,然后阐述个人观点并给出建议。在提建议时,要做到条理清楚、逻辑严密,所提建议应有较大的实际价值。另外要注意语气委婉、中肯,切忌粗鲁、生硬。
二、语言特点
博客的写作涉及的范围较为广阔,兼日记、议论、说明等文体于一体,在写作中要根据具体文体形式采用不同的语言形式。但其宗旨要做到语言上的精准、地道、连贯、语气委婉、中背、切忌粗鲁、生碍。
三、结构特点
此类文章分为三部分
1.引言:提出话题。
①日记文体——简要叙述要介绍的重要事件或事情。
②议论文体——简要提出要议论的问题。
③说明文体——简要说明要介绍的人、物等的功能、特点。
2.主体:展开事件叙述、问题背景或人或物的特点。
3.结尾:介绍对事件的感受,问题的看法观点或人或物的评论。
四、知识储备
1.Today,we went to the...and helped...on the farm.
2.We took part in a meaningful activity organized by...
3.Nowadays,...has become a serious problem.
4.Recently,the problem of...has aroused people's concern.
5.It is quite obvious that...
6.It is said that...
7.Would you like to save time...?
8.Mr.×××,a great scientist in...,has just been awarded...
9.To make life easier,the company has just in troduced a new machine/robot to the market.
10.The activity drew great attention from...
11.The race began at 8:00 in the morning...
12.During the activity,we students communicated with each other,talking and laughing...
13.As students,we are supposed to make wise use of the Internet...
14.This...will become popular among...and make our lives more...
[典题指导]
◆[写作任务]
随着社会的发展和互联网的普及,许多不文明用语也在网上流传开来。假定你是李华,最近学校网站正在征集英文建议,请你就”网络不文明用语”话题写一篇英文博客,内容要点如下:
1.现状:
2.危害(损害网络环境,影响身心健康等);
3.提出建议(远离不文明用语,共创网络文明环境等)。
注意:词数100左右。
参考词汇:网络环境the Internet environment不文明的uncivilized
[审题谋篇]
本篇属于应用文,要求学生用英语写一篇博客。
第一步:根据提示确定内容要点。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(词组)。
第三步:根据提示要点以及关键词进行遣词造句,注意时态、语态、人称。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的过渡词、连接词,使文章衔接自然,注意书写规范。
[佳作展示]
With the development of society, more and more people become lost in the Internet and like chatting online. [1]As a result,lots of uncivilized words come into being,which does great harm to our society[2].On one hand [3] , they damage the Internet environment.On the other hand [3],they influence teenagers' physical and mental health, which will have a bad effect on their development.
As high school students, we need to take measures to solve the problem.Firstly [4] , we should call for our classmates and friends to keep away from uncivilized words and express our ideas politely. Secondly [4]we should report this problem to the government to ask for some help.Let's work together to create a better network atmosphere. [5]
[名师点评] 本篇作文包含了所有的要点,结构清晰,语句连贯,点出了问题的严重性并提出了合理建议。
[1]交代问题产生的背景。
[2]非限制性定语从句的运用强调了网络不文明现象的恶劣影响。
[3]加强了文章的逻辑性与连贯性。
[4]分条陈述建议,使得文章结构更加清晰、内容更加完整。
[5]以祈使句表达对未来的美好愿景及倡议。
[学以致用]
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience。本期话题是如何为考试做准备。请你以“How to prepare for tests?”为题,用英语写一篇博客。
提示:
1.复习计划;
2.锻炼;
3.诚信考试。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
I'd like to share my ideas of how to prepare for tests. Naturally, all students desire to perform well in the tests. Then what should we do to reach our goal?
Firstly, we'd better make a plan in advance, for it is never too early to prepare for your test.At the same time, review what we have learnt carefully to find out where it's weak and pay more attention to the important points.In addition, taking some exercise every day may keep us energetic and make us feel less stressed before tests.While taking the exams, just be calm and maintain honesty. Of course, honesty is the best policy.
I wish all of us great success in the following tests.
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