内容正文:
有关保护动物的海报
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
海报是一种招贴形式,向人们介绍某一物体、事件的特性,是广告的一种。注意事项:
1.理清与写作主题相关的活动类型、举行的时间地点、报名时间地点、参与人员及颁奖情况等。
2.明确文章结构:开头部分点出活动类型及举行的时间地点;然后说明报名的时间地点及参与人员;最后为奖项的安排。
3.找准时态与人称,理清写作顺序,将文章的要素有机地结合起来。
二、语言特点
海报内容包括语言和图片、海报的语言要旗帜鲜明,语言使用要具有强有力的说服力和感召力;图片要富有震撼力和吸引力,通常使用一些发人深省和思考的语言。
三、结构特点
此类文章一般分为三部分
1.标题或题目
标题或题目要醒目鲜明,具有较强的吸引力。
2.正文
正文思路明确,语言地道,且具有鲜明的观点。
3.结尾
结尾要引人深思,具有极强的感染力和触及读者心灵的感召力。
四、知识储备
常用表达句式
1.It shows the importance of... and I'd like to help as the WWF suggests.
2.It's difficult for... to survive in the wild.
3.If people keep destroying...,the wild animals will have nowhere to live.
4.I hope that laws can be made to...
5.They are being hunted for...
6.The reason why the number of...is decreasing is that...
7.More measures should be taken to protect...from disappearing or being hurt.
8.Only in this way can we....
9.So it is the high time that we....
10.The species is in danger of....
[典题指导]
◆[写作任务]
调查显示,白鳍豚因受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,目前总数不足1 000只。假设你是李华,请写一篇英文海报,并投稿给China Daily,希望引起全社会的关注。内容应包括:
1.简述白鳍豚现状;
2.分析造成这种现状的原因;
3.可采取的保护措施;
4.你有关保护白鳍豚的建议。
注意:词数80左右。
[审题谋篇]
本题要求我们写一篇海报,审题时要注意以下几点:
1.首先拟一个有吸引力的标题。
2.行文时,以一般现在时为主,主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.内容要点:
(1)第一段描述白鳍豚的栖息地、习性以及它的价值。
(2)第二段描述它濒临灭绝的现状与原因。
(3)第三段介绍已采取的措施和自己的建议。
[佳作展示]
Where Are “the Giant Panda Under Water”?
The Yangtze River dolphin is a species of small whale,which lives in the Yangtze River [1],wellknown as“the giant panda under water”.
Much to our sadness,on account of pollution and habitat loss,the population of the Yangtze River dolphin is on the sharp decrease,with only 1,000 left up to now [2].The species is in danger of dying out,which has become our great concern.
Though some measures have been taken [3],that's far from enough.We should make even greater efforts to protect them.That is to say,we should establish more safe and clean habitats for them and protect the river from being polluted. Let's take action now!Please remember:protecting animals means protecting ourselves!
[名师点评] 本文是一篇结构清晰、语言生动、情感真挚的动物保护海报。第一段简单介绍了这种动物;第二段描述了该物种所处的危险境地,激起读者的关爱之情;第三段呼吁大家行动起来,保护它们,并用一句俗语使主题得到了升华。
[1]此处是which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在从句中作主语。
[2]此处是“with+宾语+宾补”结构。
[3]此处是Though引导的让步状语从句。
[学以致用]
假如你是李华,你从一个电视纪录片中看到世界上8种熊中有6种面临灭绝的危险。你决定写一篇保护熊的海报,刊登在英语校报上。内容包括:
1.熊濒危的原因;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Bears Need Our Care
I've learned from a TV documentary program that six of eight bear species in the world are dying out as a result of human activities. One of the reasons why bears are often killed is that some parts of them can be used as medicine. In addition, many habitats of bears are being destroyed, so bears are losing their homes.
To save bears, I think more reserves for bears should be set up so that they can live freely there. Besides, laws should be passed to prevent people from killing bears.
Please give a hand to the endangered bears. They badly need our help!
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