内容正文:
新闻报道
[素养提升]
一、文体特点
新闻报道是指用客观叙述的方法及时传递的新闻信息。在写作中,作者要客观、如实地叙事,且内容要简明、准确、及时。在体裁上,新闻报道属于应用文,但在写作中,考生可以适当添加说明、议论或抒情的成分。
二、语言特点
1.具体。新闻要用事实说话,五个W和一个H(When,Where,Who,What,Why和How)是构成一则完整消息不可缺少的要素,即记叙一则新闻具体的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果等。
2.准确。新闻中引用的数字、引语、以及其他背景材料都必须有据可依。新闻语言不能含糊其词、模棱两可,也不能夸大或缩小事实。
3.简练。新闻语言要简明扼要、直截了当。
三、结构特点
此类文章分为四部分
1.标题或题目
要设定一个概括文章主要内容、反映中心思想和行文结构、具有悬念而吸引读者的文章题目。
2.导语:简要地写出本消息中最有新闻价值的信息,主要是事件发生的时间、地点及其基本情况等。
3.主体:消息的主干部分,将导语中涉及的事件详细展开,使消息更加具体。
4.结尾:对整个消息进行总结、说明等,与标题和导语相呼应,或对事件进行总结和适当评价。
四、知识储备
常用表达句式
1.In order to raise the awareness of...,we held...
2.Cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization.
3.Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation.
4.The more they know about the importance of cultural protection,the stronger the support we can get from the public.
5.It is important/significant/one's duty to protect cultural heritage.
6.The protection of national and folk culture is of great significance.
7.We should take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage.
8.We are calling for people to take action to save the cultural relics.
9.A terrible storm/flood/earthquake hit/struck the south.
10.It was a cold winter night when the accident happened.
11.Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion/It seemed that...
12.In a word/To draw a conclusion/I believe...
[典题指导]
◆[写作任务]
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,某中学生英语报就“保护中国文化遗产”为主题举行新闻报道征文活动。请你根据身边熟悉的人或团体写一篇新闻报道,介绍他们保护文化遗产的事迹,给该报投稿,稿件内容包括:
1.人物或团体的名称;
2.保护中国文化遗产的事迹及影响;
3.评价。
注意:1.自拟标题;
2.词数80左右;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
题目要求写一篇新闻报道,介绍保护中国文化遗产的一个人或一个团体。从内容要点看,本文通篇宜用一般现在时,所举的事例要用一般过去时;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。从行文要点和结构上看,文章可以分为三段。第一段是新闻的导语部分,要点出人物、事件等信息。第二段是新闻的主体部分,要对第一段的内容进行详细叙述。第三段是新闻的结尾部分,应对全文内容进行概括总结。
在选择标题时,可根据所说内容进行概括归纳后再拟定,可以是名词短语或简化的句子等。
本文可以拟定俱乐部的名字为“Young Protectors”,“Heritage Preservation”等,并以此为标题。
[佳作展示]
Young Protectors
There are varieties of clubs in my school,of which the most popular is “Young Protectors”,a club which aims to preserve the excellent traditional Chinese culture [1].
Set up in 2016[2],the club has attracted 820 members until now,including me.Not only do we get together once a week to learn about the cultural heritage,but we pay visits to the local cultural relics regularly. [3]In order to raise people's awareness of preserving Chinese cultural relics,my club often gives lectures to let more people know that preservation of cultural heritage is of great significance [4].
As the organizer put it,“It's our duty to serve as protectors to keep up and carry forward the outstanding cultural heritage of our nation.”
[名师点评] 本文要点全面、叙事客观真实、结构完整、层次清晰,语言精准,句式多样,符合新闻报道的写作要求。
[1]of which the most popular is“Young Protectors”是“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰clubs;a club...culture是“Young Protectors”的同位语,其中又包含一个which引导的定语从句。[2]此处是过去分词短语作状语。
[3]此处是“not only...but(also)”句型,not only所在的分句是部分倒装语序。
[4]此处是“be of+名词”结构。
[学以致用]
假设你是光明中学高一学生李华,你校正在举办传统文化摄影展,以提高学生们传承中国优秀传统文化的意识。请你以“Protecting the Traditional Culture Is Our Duty”为题就此活动写一篇英文报道向校英语报投稿。
注意:词数80左右。
Protecting the Traditional Culture Is Our Duty
Our school is holding a photography exhibition with the theme of “Inheriting and Carrying forward our nation's outstanding traditional culture”,aiming to raise students' awareness of the importance and value of our brilliant civilization.
[参考范文]
Protecting the Traditional Culture Is Our Duty
Our school is holding a photography exhibition with the theme of “Inheriting and Carrying forward our nation's outstanding traditional culture”,aiming to raise students' awareness of the importance and value of our brilliant civilization.
So far, 426 copies have been collected from the students and are on exhibition in the school's library. Seeing the photos of different cultural heritage, the students can't help admiring the extraordinary wisdom of our ancestors, but some photos show that some of the cultural heritage is being damaged and some intangible cultural heritage is in danger of disappearing.Those photos have aroused our determination to preserve and carry forward our fine cultural heritage.
The photography exhibition is a great success. We should remember that it's everyone's duty to protect the traditional culture.
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