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必修1 UNIT 2 课时作业(三) 读后续写讲评训练
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1] It was cool and bright and just right for running.I was in the first few miles of a 10mile race through some hills.Birds were singing on the trees.The soft wind was brushing my cheeks.I felt rested and springy.Despite the hills, I thought it was going to be a fine run.❶
[2] Ahead was Blake, a student from Burke High School.He was running easily, too, moving along efficiently.The pace felt comfortable, so I decided to stay where he was; why bother concentrating on pace when Blake was such a nice pacesetter for me? I would overtake Blake later on when he used up energy.
[3] So I ran closely behind him.The course headed north for five miles, wandered west for a mile, and then turned south again.The race was getting tougher.With three miles to go, it was beginning to be real hard work.My lungs were on fire, and legs felt like stone.
[4] Blake overtook the boy in front of him.Apparently he knew the boy, for they exchanged a few words.Their brief communication worried me.Runners don't chat during a race unless they feel really good, and Blake plainly was.There was still a noticeable bounce in his steps, but the springiness I had once possessed was gone.
[5] Still, I was close enough to overtake Blake if he was tired, so I didn't give up hope completely.We were approaching a hill, a mile from the finish line, so whatever happened on the hill would almost certainly determine who crossed it first.❷
[6] As I moved up the hill, my attention wandered for a few minutes.When I looked up, Blake was moving away, first five yards, then ten, then more.There was no hope of catching Blake.❸
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground painfully.
A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online.
[写作构思指导]
一、读文路径(把握结构主旨)
二、思考路径
1.理清故事双线
2.关注伏笔照应
伏笔1(句①):暗示这次越野比赛会意义非凡。
伏笔2(句②):暗示在山上事情会发生转机。
伏笔3(句③):暗示下文作者会有超过Blake的机会。
3.构思续写内容(运用“5所”构思)
第一段:
①How did I help Blake? (所做——接续首句)
②Did Blake hope that I could get the first place? (根据原文伏笔2提出问题:所说——推进情节)
③Did I accompany Blake to the finish line?(所做——推进情节)
④How did we feel then?(所感——衔接下文)
第二段:
⑤Was the picture liked by people? (所感——接续首句)
⑥How did strangers respond? (所做——推进情节)
⑦How did I feel about helping others? (所感——推进情节)
⑧What lesson did this story tell us?(所感 ——主旨升华)
[逻辑润色成文]
一、写好两个关键语段
1.请设计作者选择帮助Blake之后的所做所想。
2.请设计作者受到人们表扬之后的所思所想。
二、衔接好,做到逻辑顺畅成文
Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground painfully.
A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online.
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