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必修3 UNIT 4 课时作业(三) 读后续写讲评训练
精品课件·名师析题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1] The very first speech I had given changed my life more than I could ever have imagined. I was a thirdgrader when I chose Susan B.Anthony to be the topic. When I got the assignment, I went to the library and began researching the Women's Fight for the Right to Vote. I never really thought about a time when women had no voting rights and that their opinions didn't count. I learned that Susan B.Anthony led the fight to give women a say in our society. She overcame a lot of obstacles in order to do that.
[2] About a week after giving my school speech, my mom read a newspaper article about a statue honoring Susan B.Anthony. The problem was that few people ever got to see the statue. It was dedicated (落成) in 1921, but within twentyfour hours it was taken down to the basement and stored where it had remained for nearly eighty years.
[3] When I read that article, I was getting angry! This statue belonged in a place of honor. I felt that it should be in the round hall, along with the statues of Abraham Lincoln, Martin Luther King Jr, and George Washington.❶
[4] The article asked for donations because it would take $74,000 to move the thirteenton statue out of the basement. I decided to write a letter with a selfaddressed envelope asking my relatives and friends to send a Susan B.Anthony coin or a $1 bill to me to contribute to the Women's Voting Statue Campaign. Every day I ran to the mailbox after school. But a month later, my piggy bank was still far from full.❷
[5] So every night, after my homework, I wrote more letters at the kitchen table. Pretty soon the whole family got involved in the project. My sevenyearold brother, David, prepared stamps and envelopes. My mother and grandmother found addresses for people I wanted to contact and my dad drove me around and gave me tons of encouragement when I spoke to big groups.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I passed around a piggy bank for donations at the end of each speech.
I was interviewed on TV.
[写作构思指导]
一、读文路径(把握结构主旨)
二、思考路径
1.理清故事双线
2.关注伏笔照应
伏笔1(句①):暗示Susan B.Anthony的雕像会与亚伯拉罕·林肯等伟人的雕像放在一起。
伏笔2(句②):暗示作者在前期筹款困难的情况下不断努力,进而引发后续更广泛的社会支持。
3.构思续写内容(运用“5所”构思)
第一段:
①How did the audience react?(所做——接续首句)
②How about the piggy bank?(所见——推进情节)
③How did I think of the statues?(根据原文伏笔1提出问题:所想——推进情节)
④Was I noticed by the TV station?(所做——衔接下文)
第二段:
⑤Was the interview a success? (所感——接续首句)
⑥What happened after the interview? (所见——推进情节)
⑦Was enough money raised?(根据原文伏笔2提出问题:所做——推进情节)
⑧How did I feel? What lesson did I learn from this event?(所感——主旨升华)
[逻辑润色成文]
一、写好两个关键语段
1.请设计“我”接受电视台采访后出现的情形。
2.请设计一个合理的结尾。
二、衔接好,做到逻辑顺畅成文
I passed around a piggy bank for donations at the end of each speech.
I was interviewed on TV.
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