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必修2 UNIT 1 课时作业(三) 读后续写讲评训练
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1] “Oh, no!” Jack shouted while looking at the likes and comments on his recent video.“Why aren't people reacting to my content as they used to?”
[2] Jack was a 19yearold strong and muscular man addicted to the gym.He loved recording exercise videos and posting them on his account.Initially, his video logs (vlogs) were popular, but his posts' reach soon decreased.
[3] Jack wondered why people had stopped sharing and liking his videos. “Maybe my audience is tired of watching me work out in the gym,” he thought, determined to change the location of his videos.
[4] The following day, Jack went to the neighborhood park and began filming while walking on the track.“Hi, guys! How about we shake things up a little? I'm to work out in the park today!” he said excitedly, looking into the camera lens (镜头).
[5] “Let's look for a good spot to warm up,” he said as he walked towards a bench, on which sat an elderly lady.Jack thought the bench was the perfect place to film his video because of the light.
[6] He put his tripod stand (三脚架) on the bench and set the camera, but he felt like he needed the full bench.He wanted to place his camera where the lady sat, so he gestured to her to move, but the woman didn't seem to understand.
[7] “Get out of my way!” he yelled.“Can't you see I'm filming a video?”❶
[8] Looking him up and down in surprise, the old lady didn't argue over his disrespectful attitude and quietly walked towards another bench.❷
[9] Jack set his camera up, pressed the record button and waved at his followers, ready to demonstrate exercises.❸ Suddenly, he tripped on a loose stone, lost balance and fell down, his head striking the bench and bleeding heavily.
[10] Crying in pain, Jack tried to get up, but he didn't have the strength to rise. He collapsed on the ground, screaming desperately for help.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
There was nobody around but the elderly lady.
To Jack's joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived.
[写作构思指导]
一、读文路径(把握结构主旨)
二、思考路径
1.理清故事双线
2.关注伏笔照应
伏笔1(句①):暗示Jack会改变态度,向老太太道歉。
伏笔2(句②):暗示老太太很善良,会不计前嫌地去帮助他。
伏笔3(句③):暗示相机会记录下发生的意外事件。
3.构思续写内容(运用“5所”构思)
第一段:
①What did the elderly lady do and say?(所做、所说——接续首句)
②How did the lady save Jack?(根据原文伏笔2提出问题:所做——推进情节)
③How did Jack feel and what did he do?(所感、所做——推进情节)
④How was the video liked by people?(所感——衔接下文)
第二段:
⑤What did Jack do?(所做——接续首句)
⑥How did the lady feel when seeing Jack?(所见、所感——推进情节)
⑦What did the lady do and say?(所做、所说——推进情节)
⑧How did Jack react and feel?(根据原文伏笔1提出问题:所想、所感——故事结局)
[逻辑润色成文]
一、写好两个关键语段
1.请设计老太太救助Jack的过程。
2.请设计Jack再次见到老太太时的有效对话。
二、衔接好,做到逻辑顺畅成文
There was nobody around but the elderly lady.
To Jack's joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived.
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