必修1 UNIT 4 课时作业(三) 读后续写讲评训练-【新高考方案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习（译林版）

必修1　UNIT 4　课时作业(三)　读后续写讲评训练 精品课件·名师析题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1] It was time for the annual Potato­Salad Contest in Russet Park. After trying for the third time, Alexis shook her head sadly. There was no way she would win the Golden Potato again because Grandpa wasn't here this year. [2] Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato rose in her mind. She sighed and missed Grandpa so much. [3] Alexis cut the potatoes and mixed the boiled potatoes, some sauces and a little salt and peppers in a bowl. But it didn't taste right. Alexis tried a bite of the salad mixture, wondering what was missing. Seeing her frown, Mom suggested, “What about something spicy? Your Grandpa loved spicy things.”❶ [4] “You're right! Maybe he put a jalapeno pepper in it，” Alexis said, cutting up a bright green jalapeno and adding it to the bowl. [5] It was closer, but it still didn't taste right. Alexis was lowering her head, disappointed. “Should we look in a cookbook？” [6] “Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe，” Dad entered the kitchen and said. [7] It was true. People loved Grandpa's potato salad because it was unique. Alexis remembered posing with Grandpa for a photo while they were making the salad. [8] Photo! That gave her an idea. Alexis hurried to the bookcase and found an old photo album. She immediately flipped it open, expecting to find clues in the photos there. Lots of photos showed Grandpa and Grandma cooking together. Dad laughed, “He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey.” [9] “Do you think he put honey in the potato salad？” Mum asked. [10] “It is worth a try，” said Alexis. She stirred some honey into the bowl. [11] But it still wasn't quite right. Alexis's heart sank, on the point of giving up. Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.❷ 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.　 　 With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.　 　 [写作构思指导] 一、读文路径(把握结构主旨) 二、思考路径 1．理清故事双线 2．关注伏笔照应 伏笔1(句①)：暗示续写部分会提到爷爷做沙拉可能会用到辣的食材。 伏笔2(句②)：暗示续写部分会有Alexis最终找到爷爷做沙拉的秘诀。 3．构思续写内容(运用“5所”构思) 第一段： ①Why was Grandpa crying? (根据原文伏笔1提出问题：所感——接续首句) ②How did Grandpa explain the secret? (所说——推进情节) ③How did Alexis feel and what did she do？(所感、所做——推进情节) ④How did Alexis prepare the salad for her family? (所做——推进情节) 第二段： ⑤How did the family comment the salad? (所说——接续首句) ⑥Did they find out Grandpa's recipe? (根据原文伏笔2提出问题：所做——推进情节) ⑦Did Alexis take part in the contest？(所做——推进情节) ⑧ What was the result of the contest and how did Alexis think about the result？(所感——主旨升华) [逻辑润色成文] 一、写好两个关键语段 1．请设计Alexis在发现秘密食材后做沙拉的一个微场景。 　 　 　 　 2．请设计一个合理的结尾。 　 　 　 二、衔接好，做到逻辑顺畅成文 It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. 　 　 With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. 　 　 　 　 　 3 / 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$